Hii frndz….i am sreenandana back with my ff….tnq 4 the response in last part….i hope i would b able 2 meet ur expectations…
I am adding 2 new characters….
Nikhil Sharma and Piyali Sharma :- Parents of Mitali….
so lets start with recap….
Recap: Avneil lands in lucrknow…..
So the present part:
In Mitali’s house:
Piyali – mitali…where does ali and family stay???
Mitali – in xyz hotel mom….i had already told u ry8….
Piyali – nikhil….do u think its ry8???
Nikhil – what???
Piyali – we r having such a big house and they r staying in a hotel….
Nikhi – so u think we should invite them to stay here right???
Piyali nods….
Nikhil – so…i will go there 2day itself…..okay?
Piyali nods…..mitali jumps in happiness…..
Mitali – dad..even i will accompany u….
Piyali – no…u just stay here…even neil needs a company….
Mitali – but mom….
Piyali – no more discussions….
In xyz hotel:
Fathima – avni…my bacha….
Avni – nanno….
Fathima – its been years since i saw ur smile….plz smile bacha….
Avni – nanno….i know my fake smile will never bring u happiness….
Fathima hugs her…..avni goes inside…..
Fathima – my bachi….how much lively she was!!!!
Ali – god is seeing her plight nanno….he will some way…….
Nikhil arrives there….
Ali – nikhil uncle…
Nikhil – i came here 2 take u all 2 our house….
Ali – but uncle….
Nikhil – no excuses ali…..
Ali agrees and they leaves 2 sharma house….
In Sharma House:
Neil was standing outside the house….he walks around and sees a butterfly….
THE PAST MEMORIES STARTS 2 HAUNT HIM….
Flashback Starts:
Avni was standing near her garden…she sees a butterfly flying and tries 2 catch it..the butterfly flies away and lands in a flower…..somebody suddenly catches the butterfly….
Avni who was trying 2 catch the butterfly sees it…she looks straightly only 2 find neil standing there with the beautiful butterfly in his hand…
Avni was about 2 say something but neil keeps the butterfly on her nose…..he comes closer 2 her…..
Neil – butterflys usually lands on beautiful flowers…..and i just kept it on a beaufifulllll flower…..
Avni – what???
As she moves her face, the butterfly flies away….
Avni – oh…it flew away….
Neil – first u should learn 2 say things normally rather than shouting….
Avni – i will….but first say what u mean???
Neil – what??
Avni – by that statement….
Neil – which???
Avni – that ‘i kept it on a beautiful flower’???
Neil – i meant…
Avni – haan u meant….
Neil(softly) – i meant that i kept the butterfly on…
Avni – on…
Neil – a girl with an ugly flower-like face….
Avni – u idiot…stupid…i will kill u…
Neela, asish and riya comes down….riya gets happy 2 see neil…neela gets surprised 2 see neil…
Neela – you r that doll wala boy ry8….
Neil smiles….riya goes and hugs neil….neela notices a change in avni’s expression and signs asiah….avni senses ashLa’s stare and signs what….and.as a reply they shows a ‘nothing-wala’ look….
Riya – neil….this is neela chachi and asish chachu….they r avni’s parents….and mine too haan….
Neil shakes hands with ashLa and takes their blessings….both ashLa seem 2 b impressed with neil….
Neil – arey yaar…will noone take me inside???
Neela – uff…sorry….come neil…
Avni(to herself) – does we need 2 carry u inside….
Neil hears her….
Neil – no thanks madam….i will walk by myself….btw if u wish i can take u haan….no formalities….
Avni – u….
Neil – come inside yaar….
Avni stams her foot in her so-called anger….
Neil – uncle…aunty…riya…its mom and dad’s 25th wedding anniversary on this monday…so..there is a small celebration…and i came here 2 invite u 4 that….
Asish – we will surely come…
Neela – beta…i will bring u something 2 drink….
Neil sees avni going outside….he senses something….
Neil – uncle….i will come just now….i want 2 take a walk through ur garden….
Asish – sure….
Avni goes 2wards neil’s car and punctures its tyre…..neil sees it…he goes back and sits with nothing happened look…avni comes back….she controls her laughter….
Riya – neil…chachu…i have an imp work…i an taking the car….
Later neil turns 2 leave….he acted as of he was shocked 2 see his car tyre punctured…..
Neil – omg….the tyre is punctured….
Asish – beta…riya took the car….and other one is in workshop….
Neil – uff…
Asish – do one thing….take avni’s scooter….
Avni – what???
Neela – avni….
Neil – but uncle…how can i take urs…then lets do one thing…can u come with me???
Asish – beta..i cant…u can take avni with u…
Avni – but papa….
Neela – avni…
Avni – okay….
Avni takes her scooter…..
Later they both goes 2 invite the rest of the guests….
In the way:
Neil – plz stop….
Avni stops the scooter….
Avni – what….
Neil – avni….function is on this monday…i have 2 invite them 2day and not on next week…..move…
Avni – what??
Neil – i said move….
Avni moves and neil occupies the front seat….he starts 2 drive the car in heavu speed….avni keeps hiting him since she was not holding him…..finally she keeps her hands on his shoulder…..
In Neil’s Frnd’s House:
He invites him….
Neil’s Frnd – neil…i guess she is ur gf…
Neil tries 2 say something….his frnd cuts him….
Frnd – u both r a gr8 jodi….made 4 each other….
Neil – yaar…she is not my gf…
Frnd – then make her yaar….avni…neil…u both make a perfect jodi….
Neil – shut up….
Later they both goes 2 khanna house…shwetha takes avni inside and treats her like own daughter….later avni leaves 2 her house…..
Precap: Will Avneil meet???
Tnq 4 reading….
By sreenandana….
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Amazing one…loved it….???
Tnq….