The sixth Episode of my fan-fiction The Mysterious Forest and the Revengeful Ghost is here
The episiode starts with,
Bela: Brinda, I feel that I am well now. Shall I remove these leaves? If nani see this, she will ask questions that we could not answer.
(Brinda blinks)
Shreya: Please keep that leaves with you for some more time.
Shivanya: Wait, Bela. Let me call Jagmohan Pandit. (After call completion) Pandit asked us not to remove this leaves until 12AM.
Manyata takes dinner to the girls,
Manyata: Here is your favourite dishes, sweethearts.
Brinda: So sweet of you grandma.
Manyata: What are these leaves in your hands, Bela?
Bela: I like tying some cool leaves in my hands so that my hands are moisturized.
Manyata: What rubbish is this, Bela!
Manyata removes some leaves from her hands. Bela’s eye colour changes. Manyata gets shocked. Bela starts to dance for the song Jai Shankar Jai Jai Shankar (Hindi). Shreya, Shivanya and Brinda are shocked. Brinda and Manyata controls Bela and managed to tie that leaves in her hands. She faints and eyes get normal.
Manyata: Brinda, narrate the truth. What happened to Bela? Why do you all have wounds? Where did you go?
Shreya and Shivanya hesitate to look Manyata. Manyata compells Brinda to confess the truth
Brinda: Grandma, actually Jagmohan Pandit visited us and we discussed about supernatural powers in that forest. We like to venture into that forest so we ask some magical things that would help us to defend ourselves. He too gave some leaves. Before entering the forest, Bela took more leaves so she got pain. So, we stayed somewhere near forest. Usually Bela would dance if she got more pain or happy. Pandit asked us not to remove the leaves from her hands.
Manyata: Don’t even think of going to that forest. You have many places here to play. Don’t play with magics and those things. After removing all leaves, give all the leaves to me. I know how to dispose them. Its my warning.
Manyata left the room. Shreya thanked Brinda for not revealing the real truth.
Brinda: Like Bela, I too should need to find the mystery of the forest.
Shivanya: We should find the mystery. Before that, there is a problem with our cycle.
Bela: I think I could not use my cycle as it damaged more than anything.
Shreya: Its not a problem. We can setup a backseat tomorrow at shop.
The girls: Let us find the mystery of the forest.
After sometime, The girls removed leafs from Bela’s hand and handover it to Manyata.
The next day,
Shivanya, Shreya, Brinda and Bela are in cycle shop.
Mechanic: What’s the problem, daughter?
Shreya: This cycle is damaged. Could it be repaired?
Mechanic: Sorry. Not even possible.
Shreya: No problem, uncle. Can you please set back seat in my cycle?
Mechanic: Yes, sure. No, daughter. Backseat is not possible in your cycle. But it is possible in that cycle(pointing towards Brinda’s cycle)
Shreya: Yeah, no problem. Set the
back seat in Brinda’s cycle itself.
Shivanya saw a boy who is running from the some men. Shivanya stops him and the men.
Shivanya: What happened, here?
The men: He hasn’t sweep our room well. He has to survive his punishment now.
Boy: Mam, sorry. I don’t have any meal for three days. Just for the sake of college fees, I am working with them. But they are treating me like a machine.
Shivanya: Please, gel lost.
The men try to slap her. Shreya and Shivanya fights with them and send them away. Shivanya saw the boy. He is handsome looking like a young gentleman but his leg is fractured.
The boy: Thanks friends for saving me. I never forget your help. Bye.
Shivanya: Excuse me, boy. Don’t leave. I know that you haven’t eat anything for the past three days. Eat some breakfast, please.
Bela and Shivanya take some food from their bags and give it to him.
Bela: What is your name? Who are you?
The boy: I am Rithik, a farmer’s son. My father’s land is bought by a cunning landlord and he asks for money from us. I am working there for my college completion fees. Don’t know whether I live for some more days or not.
Shivanya: Rithik, please don’t say anything negative. All is well and God knows the best.
Shivanya and Rithik shares an eyelock.
Shreya: Rithik, Do you know anything about the forest and the revengeful ghost?
Rithik: Yes.
Precap: Rithik says, “The revenge is not only one. It has a series of revenges for many reasons. It has some hidden temple with some treasure.”
8 Comments
oh no.before the time got over itself manyata removed bela’s leaves n she became abnormal.what was happening with bela?so confusing.oh still manyata wasn’t told the real truth.that day you told me that there will not be boys in this ff. but now you introduced ritik. I am really surprised n happy.will mahir n dev also enter?Shivanya n even shreya saved ritik from those cruel people which was nice.will a triangular love story take place?rivanya eye lock was romantic. shocking that ritik knows the secret of the forest
Your banner was so good that I couldn’t stop my curiosity to read all the episodes of your ff . The story is nice.. The characters mouni,adaa ,rhitik are my favourite too.??… waiting for the mystery to unveil..rhitik in shivanya’s place as in naagin and tortured by his owner and shivanya saving him … waiting for the next epi ?
Thanks Sonakshi for commenting. Stay tuned for the next episode. Stay safe and sound
Wish you the same
Thanks for commenting, Jasminerahul. Actually I thought of bringing Nayantara in the place of Rithik. Suddenly I changed it as to bring a male character. His role will be a cameo. Mahir and Dev too will enter as a cameo.
try to bring naintara also.but u included all naagin heroines excluding naintara.sad that male characters r only cameo
Yeah. Ok
Yeah.