Students:you both look amazing and sizzling pair..it would have been nice if this pair was bf gf instead of that head weight girl.
Ranveer gets suprised while prathana gets shocked and mahek feels jealous who was hearing it standing nearby and fumes..
Mahek:to heck with this students..iam the hot girl and the sizzling pair with handsome hunk of this college. How dare they eye prathana..the old stuff women. I feel like thrashing prathana for interfering me and ranveer..
Suddenly prathana notices her parents coming along with anmol from far and gets excited..
Prathana:wow..my family is coming..i feel lucky.
Ranveer:where?
Prathana shows the direction towards pratha rishabh and anmol and gets stunned while the students too sees them and gets stunned..
Ranveer: what a ditto Xerox..you are exactly like your mother. Iam seeing this miracle first time after movie..
Prathana smiles while students starts gossiping turning towards pratha and rishabh..
Students gossip:wow..that girl’s mother is exactly like her. And the guy near him is really hotter than ranveer of our college..
Other student:yes..i feel like dancing with him. He is so so handsome and hot. I think he is this girl’s brother..
Ranveer hears this and feels jealous..
Ranveer:hey prathana..why your brother is so handsome? I feel jealous..i never thought anyone would be more handsome than me.
Prathana laughs while Ranveer gets shocked..
Ranveer:why are you laughing like mad?
Prathana: because i don’t have brother. He is my father rishabh gujral..
Ranveer gets hell shocked..
Ranveer:what? It’s unbelievable..he is looking so young and handsome. I feel more jealous now..see how students are looking at him.
Pratha rishabh and anmol comes near prathana and ranveer and students start taking photos of rishabh and they flirt with him..
Student jia: wow..you look handsome mister. Can I take selfie with you?
Rishabh smiles..
Rishabh:why not?
They take selfie while pratha fumes seeing it..
Anmol:maa..i think my papa is going to get blasted for sure.
Anmol giggles and rishabh notices pratham’s anger and comes to her and murmers..
Rishabh:so you are same pratha before 25 years..my jealous queen.
Pratha: ofcourse..how can a wife tolerate when her husband is wooed by girls?
Rishabh:cool pratha. Iam middle aged man and these are students..so no need to feel insecure like in our college days.
Pratha:shut up. In recent days…girls even fall in love with middle aged man. And you are handsome too..so i won’t believe those girls.
Rishabh:haha..funny. i just did for fun..so don’t worry. Iam yours and always yours.
Pratha:oho..you showed your fun here. I will show my fun in home wait..
Prathana:mom dad..are you both fighting? You dint even congratulate me for my dance performance.
The students gets stunned knowing rishabh is prathana’s daughter..
Students gossip: what a shock we got?? I never thought he is aged man..he is so hot and young..
Other student:yeah..i thought to woo him..but got a thunder shock. I never expected this..
Pratha and rishabh comes to prathana and hugs her..
Pratha:sorry..i fought with dad as he was enjoying with flirting girls. But you dance performance was incredible..we were so proud of you.
Rishabh:yes..iam sure you and your partner will surely win. And your partner was so handsome..
Prathana shows ranveer to her parents..
Prathana:mumma..papa..he is ranveer. The one who danced with me..
Ranveer touches their feet..
Ranveer:please bless me uncle..aunty..
Rishabh and pratha smiles and blesses him..
Pratha:such a valued boy in this century..may god always be there with you beta. And your dance performance was amazing.
Ranveer:thank you aunty.
Rishabh: hey..you look so handsome. Are you this college’s handsome hunk?
Ranveer gets amazed..
Ranvee:yeah..how did you find out uncle?
Rishabh:i saw how female students were taking your pictures and got to know about it. Because even i was handsome hunk in my college days..
Ranveer:that’s cool uncle.
Rishabh: i used to enjoy girls attraction in my college days..it will be fun.
Ranveer:ohh..wow..uncle you are same like me.
Rishabh:wow..we are ditto.
Ranveer:did you find your love in college uncle?
Rishabh:if you hear my love story..you will laugh. I had a hot girlfriend but later i realised she wasn’t my true love. I met pratha in college..she is the first one to not getting attracted towards me..she avoided me and went. I was really furious on her as why this girl alone not getting attracted..but slowly we fell in love later due to some circumstances..
Ranveer and prathana gets stunned hearing it and they both look each other..
Ranveer in mind:the same thing happened with me and prathana..will i fall in love with prathana like rishabh uncle?
Pratha: what happened? Why you both are shocked? Is our Love story boring?
Ranveer:no aunty.. infact it’s interesting. But what’s the twist is the same thing happened with me and prathana. Prathana is the first one to avoid me..and I was really furious.
They get suprised and laugh and rishabh pats prathana’s cheeks..
Rishabh:like mother like daughter..
They all have good laugh..
Anmol: ji..you look really handsome. I wonder how my sister dint get attracted..she is really behenji.
Ranveer:you are exactly right.
Prathana frowns..
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19 Comments
Shocking that ranveer mahek are lovers .Ranveer asking his friends to misbehave with prarthana so that he can save her and impress her was funny.even after ranveer saved her prarthana showing attitude towards ranveer was funny.prarthana ranveer dancing and they getting selected as the pair was nice.ranveer feeding prarthana was cute.now ranveer is losing interest in mahek and mahek is jealous of ranveer prarthana.what will she do?ranveer prarthana praising each other’s looks and dancing together was romantic.
Glad that ranveer prarthana won the trophy.it was so funny that the girls mistook rishab for a young boy and went after him and pratha became jealous.prarish conversation and anmol’s comments were funny.ranveer thinking that rishab is prarthana’s brother was funny.surprising that prarish’s story was similar to ranveer prarthana’s. ranveer missing prarthana was nice.shocking that prarthana had a bf named ritvik before who left her for a stylish girl.sad that he is still taunting her.ranveer consoling prarthana was lovely.nice to see ranveer prarthana becoming friends.superb pics
Thank you so much for brief comment..💖😊
Will you be posting rang today?
No.. today I am going to upload Mera pyaar. Either tomorrow or Wednesday only i will upload rang because I have submitted on my project.
Hey…when will you restart lost love?
You are jasminerahul? Because your tag changes..
I will post next week. Because this week i have to post Mera pyaar, Tejran FF, rabel FF, premar FF. From next week i will upload both lost love and surbhi dheeraj ff
Yes.actually I am not able to login.so I am commenting here without logging in.Have you finished writing dheerbhi os?
Actually you just log in..it will come as error but it’s getting logged in. Iam also logging in like that only whenever I get logged out. Yeah..i finished it..i just need to search pictures.
I dont know why.they showed many times that the pw is wrong.
I am so excited that the dheerbhi os is over.cant wait to read it.
After the dheerbhi os which os will you write?
Actually after dheerbhi..i thought about a story myself.. it will star mohsin shivangi and shaheer tejaswi.
That’s cool.is it a ff or an os?
I even thought of a story of gaathanjali (Malayalam ghost movie) and in tamil it is named as charulatha. But i don’t know which pair will suit this story..can you please tell some matching pair for this story. Did you see this movie?
Actually short FF..like 6 or 7 shots for mohsin shivangi shaheer tejaswi.
Yes.i have seen both geetanjali and charulatha.in these movies one twin wears specs.so now I am reminded of prarthana(prarthana a used to wear specs in the initial days of naagin6).then nayantara used to wear specs in yeh hai chahtein.sejal used to wear specs in spy bahu.drashti Dhani used to wear specs in madhubala
Ohh..thank you so much. I know prathana and nayantara. I don’t know Sejal and drashti dhani..i will see them and decide.
Plz post premar shraddha ts
I will post tonight or by tomorrow
You did not post premar shraddha yet?