Entry or not?
I’m back with my second episode. Thank you for all the comments in the previous update. Let me know how you find it in the comments section. From now there might be quite a few flashback scenes. I will also be posting daily so hope i get lots of comments from you! ❤ @Unnamed, @Gabriela, @Anoyinguser, did guess it right. 👏 We start with the episode.
A beautiful lady opened the door. She was all stylish, wearing a trendy outfit with light make up on. She was curious to know who these teenagers were. Riva went in to her thoughts
Riva: (thinking) isn’t she the lady Mom wrote about in her diary, on the second page….
Flashback
Rivan and Riva are seen in a room, with two twin beds. They’re both seated on one of the beds and they’re holding a dairy. Riddhima’s diary.
Rivan: The first page (reading what’s written)
My Perfect Family!
Riva: (turning the page and reading)
Dear diary,
My perfect family starts with this girl! We always lived like sisters, our bonding was better than her and her brother’s bond, my husband was her brother. Her name is Ishani. We used to hang out many at times together making my hubby jealous (laughs) He always whined about our bond but it never broke us apart, we were like marshmallows, sticking around together!
She’s a designer, a successful one! She had started off with her own company called Isha Designs, and now it’s soaring high up in the sky! I’m very proud of her!! When I read about her in newspapers and magazines, I always want to congratulate her and celebrate with her but I can’t. (sad) Whenever we had to dress up, she would be our designer, and God, how she used to ready us! We all looked so beautiful but she went ranting about that she was always the best (laughs) I miss all those lively and lovely moments together. Dear diary, I also have a pic with her, after seeing her you’ll definitely agree with me, that she was indeed very pretty!
Riva: Isha designs…… so dad’s sister is a designer. Mmm interesting, very interesting!
Flashback Ends
Riva: You’re Ishani right? The famous designer??
By the time she was about to answer her a husky voice stopped her and took it upon him. He was a middle-aged man wearing a Royal blue velvet suit. His hair set clean. A black beard bordering his lower part of his face while his eyes, deep brown. Full of attitude as he descended the stairs.
Unknown man: Ishani! Hold on…who are you both? (Descending the stairs from the first floor)
Ishani: Exactly who are? Never seen you here. You seem like you’re twins?
Riva: Hello! We’re are new here and yes, we are twins. And… (Was cut short by the husky voice)
Unknown man: And your names? (He reached them at the door, and they were looking at each other)
Rivan: (interfered) we will tell you ours, but would you please introduce yourselves so that we can familiarize!
Ishani: You’ve come here but you don’t know anything about the owner! Wow! Well, he’s the…
Angre: (interrupted and walked to Ishani) May you please give your introduction first, we don’t allow intruders! (Stern)
Rivan: Excuse me Mr muscular man… (Riva glared at him and he replied) What? They didn’t introduce themselves so what do you expect me to call them? (Back to Angre) Ya so Mr Muscular man, we are not intruders! We are normal kids.
Ishani: Please don’t mind but these are our house rules… you have to introduce first, then only you’ll be allowed here.
Riva: This is insane (surprised) house with rules!! A house with rules isn’t called a house Ms. It’s more of a jail!! (She taunted)
Angre: Can’t you two answer our questions with ease? Do you need to be so stubborn? (Getting pissed after all you know they’re stubborn like…..)
Riva: We asked you all a simple question too! (Sarcastic) We asked this handsome and tall man, wearing a royal blue suit his name too, but he didn’t reply! (Pointing to the man) But anyway I am Riva (smiled)
Rivan: I am Rivan! Expected our first meeting will go well but I guess it didn’t happen so I’ll just stick to nice meeting you! (Smiling) And you sir?
Angre: I’m Angre and she’s Ishani as you had said (pointing to her)
Unknown man: Did you call yourselves Riva and Rivan??
Rivan and Riva: Duhh! I don’t think we called our rucksacks that? (They let out a sarcastic giggle while Ishani had a smile on her face) Who are you??
Unknown man: I am the….. (Proudly)
Precap: realization and introduction.
So this was the second episode, I hope you enjoyed reading this. The more the response the earlier I will post 😜 Please let me know how you found it in the comments section. Thank you.
I have a question for you:
Who do you think the man is?? And will they be able to enter the house?
Do let me know in the comments section.
❤Parita❤
54 Comments
Amazing….
@R.N thanks!
I think vansh
Fabulous episode
@Yashi, yes you’re right!! Thanks dear
Awesome episode
@Akirti, thanks!
Nice episode
@Ayesha, thanks!
Nice episode
Thanks! @Ravneet
Fabulous 😁
Thank you❤ @Tanvi_5117
Amazing.,…..update soon
@Maanvika, thanks! will do soon!
Fab
Thank you!
That’s our vansh am I right or am I right 😜
@Subu23, Absolutely right!😊
Amazing episode dear he is none other than our Vansh and yeah they will enter into the house eagerly waiting for next update
@Priyanka Thakur, Thank you di!❤ Yes you’re right! Will update soon
Amazing episode pari. I think he is vansh. This is going to be very interesting.waiting for next❤❤❤
@Rukaiya, di thank you!❤ Yess you’re right. Sure will upload soon
After they will finish their interrogation then only they will enter na!! 😂😂😂.. amazing Episode.. loved the childish attitude of Riva and Rivan!! They both r so cute yaar.. I think the man is either Aryan or Vansh.. most probably Aryan.. let’s see.. post soon dear
@AarushiSoni, Exactly, interrogation first then entry😂😂 VR ka style. Thank you, you’ll see more of them
You’re close dear but not Aryan! I will soon❤
So Ishani and Angre love each other and are married.
Twins are stubborn like Rid.
I think the man is Van.
@Unnamed, di yes they’re married and love each other.
Ofc infact stubborn like both parents😂
Yes di you’re right!❤
Unknown man was vansh he say I am your dad I think and post soon please🙏🙏🙏🙏
@Mahira, Yes you’re right, he’s Vansh, but dear the other part,you’ll have to wait to know if that part is true or not. Will post soon
Amazing post soon
@Aisha08, Thanks, will do so
Awesome 😍😍😍.. I guess he is vansh and he recognised their names❤️
@Attractiveuser, Thanks!❤ Yes you’re right he’s Vansh, Not really for that part, you’ll have to wait to know if that’s right or not
Plz next upload karo fast
@Jashanpreet Kaur, Will do so
Interesting very interesting episode
@Mennahussein55, Thanks dear! Hope you’re doing well
Fantastic episode… That’s Vansh Raisinghnia or Aryan… May be let’s see waiting for next one
@Niyati12, Thank you! Yes it’s Vansh not Aryan, Will post soon
Wow amazing 😍😍❤️😍❤️😍❤️. I think Vansh
Thank you @Jayashree! ❤🥰You’re right
So nice updates 😊😍❤️😍
Thank you!❤@Priyadharshini
It’s really super and awesome 💖😊
@J J, Thanks!💕
Wow fabulous 😍❤️😍❤️
@VKjhp, Thank you!😊💕
Parita your story is so beautiful. I know you write for all of us, but I will consider you to write especially for me. I just ador your story. And Riva and Rivan are absolutly divine, and they resemble both mother and father. I can’t wait for the next chapter ❤❤❤ Excuse me Mr muscular Man 😂😂😂 – The answer is Vansh
@Gabriela di, Thank you!❤❤ Means a lot me, you encourage me to do more and more. Yes they have the same traits and you will get to see more of that😂 Yess you’re right, he’s Vansh
Thank you will post soon!
Awesome episode🥰❤…
Thanks @Shivangi❤❤
Okay the man must be vr nice episode
@Annoyinguser, right it’s VR. Thanks!
yrr itna suspense. post asap and fab epi.
@Akshiiii, Thank you! Will do