The Queen?
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Rivan: (thinking) Switch on your spy mode, what deal is dad talking about? I have to find about it. Riva just get well soon, I need my partner!
Vansh: Rivan you take care of her, I’ll be back right away! (trying to remove his hand from her grasp)
Rivan: I’ll help (he does and he leaves) I’m so sorry Riva, I wasn’t able to help you that night. If I had not left you alone with Mom I could have helped you and her. You wouldn’t have to go through what you’re going through now. (caressing her hair) I’m not leaving you anymore now!!
Ishani: Really then how will you leave her when she gets married? (smiling she entered the room)
Rivan: I’ve made up my mind, she’s not going to marry whatsoever!! (cutely)
Ishani: How cute are you!! (pulling his cheeks) You pretend to fight with her and on the other hand you’re so caring and concerned for her. I think all brothers do that, pretend.
Vansh: Really…, and when have I done that??
Ishani: A million times, and I don’t think I need to remind you right!
Vansh: I guess I do need to remember so just do the honors.
Ishani: Sure, remember when Angre had proposed to me?? We had a fight right before and then when he proposed you turned that protective and concerned brother!!
Vansh: That.. was umm just
Ishani: (cutting him) Stop It bhai, come on we know all brothers are like that!
Dadi: (coming in) That’s true Ishani! Is she fine? (asking Rivan)
Rivan: Yes dadi, she is so far, but we need to know how she will behave after she wakes up.
Dadi: Make sure she doesn’t work or do anything! She needs complete rest, she shouldn’t exhaust herself, and also DON’T disturb her (smiling)
Rivan: Dadi when do I disturb her??
Vansh: Well I’ve seen that, you do.
Rivan: Huh? Uncle now you’re taking her side!
Vansh: Well for now she’s the queen of VR mansion!! (laughing)
(There’s no new entry😜)
Ishani: Right! She’s queen, she’s got all rights to command you and you’d have to everything for her!
Rivan: but… (to himself) she’s a princess
Dadi: No Vut but! You’ve got to take care of her.
Rivan: That I will do, definitely. She’s precious to me more than my life. (sighing) And if you all have said to follow all her commands then fine I will do that too.
Ishani: She’s gone through a lot, and it’s visible. I’m not going to ask you what had happened, I don’t want to refresh your wounds too but hasn’t your mum done anything??
Rivan: It was all destiny. I was saved and Mom and she were…. (sighed) Never mind ma’am. We’ve done everything possible for her but it doesn’t seem to work. (to himself) She’ll be fine when she gets her family and when she punishes her culprits
Ishani: Don’t call me Ma’am.
Rivan: Then aunty?
Ishani: No! That’s so old fashioned. (made a face)
Ishani: Call me Ish!
Rivan: Alright Ish.
Vansh: okay I think we should let them rest. And (to Rivan) about the interview, we’ll continue later on.
Rivan: Thank you but…
Vansh: Leave all that now, you too take some rest. If you two need anything then tell us. Shayne and Anisha have gone to school so they’re not here. (they leave)
All this commotion and the worry had exhausted Rivan too. Riva was sleeping quietly, she looked very innocent as if she had received heaven while she was hugging Rivan. He too fell asleep, hugging her.
Riva: Rivan go get me the soup dadi made for me!
Rivan: Sure (brings it for her) Here
Riva: Mmmm this is yumm!! Go get my medicines.
Rivan: Sure madam! (brings) here
Riva: Riv I want my hair brush, get it from the dressing table. Riv do my bed for me. Riv clean the floor, it has water dropped on it, I will slip and even you will.
Rivan: NOOOOOOO!!!! (wakes up) It was a dream (realizing)
Vansh: (quickly came hearing his scream) What happened!
Rivan: That was fast… (laughing) I saw a dream
Vansh: A dream? And you shout so loudly!!
Rivan: Of course how would you react when you see your sister ordering you around the whole day!
Riva: But when did I order you around?
Rivan: You’re awake?
Vansh and Riva: Is that a question to ask. Anyone will wake up if you scream so loudly in their ears! (at the same time, they saw each other in shock)
Rivan: Sorry but dadi had said to accept everything you say as you’re not feeling well so that way you would take my advantage!
Vansh: Seriously! (laughing) Riva are you fine?
Riva: (sitting up) Yes I’m fine, finally I’m at peace!
Vansh: Don’t worry about your interviews. I’ve talked to your college institution, they won’t penalize you for a few days.
Rivan: Thank you!
Vansh: Take care of her.
Riva got better day by day. The whole family took care of her, they took turns in sitting with her, while they fed her with different soups that would give her energy. They had liked the brave and bold Riva and not this tired and weak Riva. The family and the twins had gotten quite attached to each other. Dadi saw Riddhima’s reflection in both of them, the way they handled things was as if Riddhima was doing so. For the Rai Singhania’s it was a tragic scene to watch Riva like that. They had never expected such to happen, so they took extra care of her. She got completely fine the next day. Riva had told them this was a very small matter, it had happened to her many times.
Vansh had distanced himself from the family and the twins in those two days. He was extremely engrossed in the deal that was approaching him in the next two days. He was stressed. It was an important deal, it consisted of an investment worth half of his income in his whole life. He had more than 500 crores (you can imagine how big this deal must have been) Rivan soon told Riva about the deal and decided to follow Vansh when he would go to finalize the deal.
Vansh: (receives a call) What??? (anger) Why!
Precap: The deal and a fight
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Question: So what do you think will happen in the fight and between whom?
Let me know in the comments section about this question.
❤Parita❤
49 Comments
Maybe they will mistook me… Anyways… Queen was Riva.. btw rivan said right she is princess.. queen is Riddhu baby🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣 amazing episode ad usual dear .. pls post soon.. am waiting eagerly for it.
Yes it was her only, ofc Riddhu is the Queen while she’s the princess😂😂❤Thank you!!❤❤I will soon post dear
What is changu baba going to do parita?? Awesome post soon
Changu😂😂😂 You keep on guessing and stay tuned to know what he will do. Thank you!!❤❤
Awesome…. So riva is the queen… Loved it… Please post soon
Thank you!!❤❤ Yes she’s the queen for now but otherwise toh Princess!😂 I will soon post dear
awesome
Thank you!!❤❤
Amazing episode love it waiting for next part
Thank you!!❤❤ I will soon post
6th🙄
🥳😂 It’s okay next top 3 mein ayegi
Amazing one madam jii. Queen was riva😂😂madam ji ne to 440 ka volt de di😂😂plz post soon mam. Love the bond of riva and rivan. Shadi bhi nhi krne dega🤣🤣🤣🤣
Thank you!!❤❤ 😂😂 Plan toh jhatka dene hi ka tha, aur successful rahi mein!!🥳 I will soon do.
Of course, abhi Vansh ko nahi pata hena, jab pata chalega uska kya haal hoga?? 😂😂😂
Awesome 😁❤️😍! Queen was riva.. you fooled us😶😂😂🤣! Happy mother’s day parita mam 😂😂😂❤️
Thank you!!❤❤ Ha ullu banaya bada maza aaya!!😂😂
Happy mother’s day you too Gauri❤
Amazing episode dear.
Keep up the hard work.
Thank you!!❤❤di.
Amazing epi..
Thank you!!❤❤
Awesome episode Pari I really enjoyed it very much eagerly waiting for next update
Thank you!!❤❤di. I’m glad you enjoyed it, will post soon
ahem ahem late phir bhi will comment after reading at last I am your student and marked my present
Pragya
di today’s episode is amazing I was thinking there will be new entry but mere sapno me pani phir gaya
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sorry parita ma’am use karna tha meine di use kiya punishment mat dena bachi hu me age-11
Yes very good Pragya!!🥳👏👏 Good student😂
Thank you!!❤❤ I was meant to put water over your dreams😂😂it was to only confuse you. Punishment nahi dungi, aaj sunday hai to thik hai
THANK YOU MA’AM
You’re welcome Pragya😂😂😂
Amazing..what a twist..waiting for the next one..❤
Thank you!!❤❤ Will post soon
Amazing episode….post soon
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Awesome 👍👏
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So nice updates 😊😍❤️
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It’s really super and awesome 💖😊😊
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Excellent episode 👌😍
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Wow fabulous 😍❤️😍❤️😍
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Awesome episode dear. But u pranked us right “queen of VR mansion”… No problem i forgave u. But aisa kabhi mat karo yar😔. I think vansh is fighting with Karyan.
Thank you!!❤❤ Yess it was just meant to confuse you all😂😂 Ok nahi karungi-attack toh nahi aaya tha na?? Maybe we’ll see
The atmosphere is so familiar, warm, full of harmony that you create is extraordinary. The dialogues are full of warmth, even when the characters are teased, the love between them is felt. ❤❤❤
I think there will be a fight between Vansh and Kabir-Aryan
Thank you!!❤❤di. Maybe let’s see 😁