Let’s begin….
“Rejected!!!!”
Tears rolls down her cheeks.but she immediately wipes it so that no one notices it.
But her brother noticed it, to whom she can’t hide anything.
But he was helpless.
She wore her specs and moved to her room heart broken.
Flashback
A girl got ready in a simple white salwar and tied her hair into a pony tail
She looks herself in a mirror and she is revealed to be Ragini
And she was disappointed about herself.she felt she isn’t looking pretty
At the time a guy and lady enters, they are revealed to be Sidhant (Ragini’s elder brother) and janki (Ragini’s mother)
Sidhant:my sister is looking so pretty
Janki:Ragini let’s go, they have reached.
And when she brought down.
Her father shekar:my daughter Ragini
He points to Ragini to the groom/guy family
Guy looks at Ragini from top to bottom
Ragini looks at him with a small smile, but within seconds her smile vanished as she felt he would definitely Reject her.
Guy pokes his mom, nodding in no
His mom smiled weakly:oh.. Hmm
She sees Ragini with a forced smile
Ragini looks at sidhant, he tried hard to smile at her but couldn’t as he himself felt they will reject her but still he hoped for positive.
His mom:um.. We.. We will leave now.
Once after they left
Ragini goes in
Shekhar:i am tired janki, this time too…
Janki:keep trust on God
He gets call and the marriage broker informs him that they have rejected Ragini.
Shekhar felt bad
Janki asks for what happened?
And Shekhar nods in no.
Shekhar:i don’t know what to do? I don’t know! Everytime, everytime she gets rejected.
Sidhant sees Ragini who was standing at the door
Flashback ends
Ragini runs to her room..
Sidhant follows her
Ragini was silently crying sitting on the bed.
Sidhant:today i am feeling my little sister have grown up!
She looks at him with tear filled eyes
Sidhant :today i am feeling my little sister started hide her feelings from her brother
Ragini nods in no
Sidhant:today i am feeling, i am worst brother in the world am not deserving to be called as brother
Ragini immediately cries hugging him.
Ragini:you are the best brother in the world
He frees her from him and makes her sit on the bed and he kneels down to her.
Sidhant :this is just the small thing and there is some special guy, who will love my sister a lot lot lot and woh aise thodi na aayega he will take time to come. Until he comes such things would happen, see Princess only gets Prince not any random person.
Ragini sobbing:i have become burden to you all!!
He raises his hand to hit her:you will face the worst if you say this again.
She bends her head and cries:but papa is tensed because…
Shekhar entering the room:not because of you. And today i am promising you i will search for that special person when you will yourself permit me to search.
Sidhant wipes her tears and makes her wear her specs.
Sidhant:happy?
She smiles sadly
Sidhant:now come, don’t you have to go to school?
Ragini:no today i am….
Janki:you are going and that’s final.
She brings her bag and gives to her
Sidhant:come i will drop you.
They goes out.
Shekhar and janki smiles overwhelmed thinking they have the best kids.
Later
Sidhant drops Ragini to the school where Ragini is a teacher.
Ragini silently moves to school
Sidhant:Ragu..
She turns to him
Sidhant:smile!
She smiles weakly and enters her school.
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Ragini’s friend Surbhi:Ragini, what happened?
She was asking about the proposal
Ragini:no, he rejected me
Surbhi:no problem Ragini, he don’t deserve you.
Ragini smiles :he don’t deserve me or i don’t deserve anyone?
Surbhi:Ragini it’s not like that, God has sent all of us paired. And some get their soul mate early but some get lately.
Ragini smiles :may be i was been sent single
Surbhi:i am not joking Ragini, even i didn’t get avinash early, even though it’s love marriage. And i am sure you will get an understanding and stylish husband who will recognise your inner beauty with outer beauty whom others are blind to see it
Ragini:i don’t know that but if i get just a husband may be my family would be happy, i don’t have any other expectations
Surbhi:mark my words, it’s going to be the reality
Ragini:i am having class surbhi
She goes
Surbhi :God, please send him soon to Ragini, i don’t want her to be disappointed with herself, let him beautify the relation and prove Ragini wrong.
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A guy comes out of the airport, who has wore a shiny black shoes (a cat shoe) and a blue jeans with white tee and a black blazer(it was a Louis Phillips brand) and He looks at the watch.. (It was a black Rolex watch) and he removes the goggles(it is of Rayban). He hand the bag on his shoulder (it’s from American tourist)
He was undoubtedly a branded and a stylish personality.
He takes a cab
And reaches a mansion
He gets down the cab and pulls all his bags and enters
He rings the bell
A girl opens the door, she sees him:kaun ho bhaai saab aap?
He:oh is it?
He enters ignoring her
When a lady sees him and ignores
He smiles
A guy comes there:bhaiyya!
He:at least you identified me. See all of you said come soon come soon come soon,see i came and when i am here in front of you all then none are looking at me!
Lady:it’s been one year for come soon.
And she is revealed to be sujatha
And the girl is uthra:then what are you expecting bro? A warm welcome
He smiles :just a smile
They smiles
Sujatha hugs him:finally you are here
Uthra:aise achanak surprise kyu
He:kyunki, now i am staying here permanently
All happily:what?
He:if you don’t want then i will go back
He turns to go
All:no no no
He smiles and he is obviously revealed to be Sanskar
Sanskar:mom, i am hungry and i want to have your handmade food
Sujatha:wait.. I will bring now
He removes his blazer
And his little brother Ruhaan wears his goggles and was clicking selfies
He smiles and he goes and washes his face.
And he comes back and sees uthra who has sat in dining
He rubs his wet hand on uthra’s face
Uthra:eeeww.. Bhaiyya
He laughs
Sujatha :aate hi shuru..?
She serves him the food
Sanskar sees the servants peeping and looking at him
Sanskar fake anger:why are you seeing me like that? Mom fire these people
Servant:we are sorry.
They were scared
While all laughs including sanskar
Sanskar:arey come here accompany me in having food.
Servants were scared
Sanskar:so you are not coming?
Servant:but how can we sir?
Sanskar looks around:Ruhaan, can you see any sir here?
Ruhaan shrugs his shoulders nodding in no
Sanskar fake anger:so you are coming or not
They immediately comes near him
Sanskar:sit
They were about to sit on floor
Sanskar:not there.
He pulls the chair for them
Servant:no sir, we are comfortable here
Sanskar demanding :who is boss?
They points to him
Sanskar:then do as i say!
They immediately sits
Sanskar smiles:good
He serves them food
And to himself
Sanskar fake anger:and one more thing if you call me sir…
They gets scared
He smiles :just call me sanskar that’s enough!
They looks at him like alien
Sanskar:am i looking like a ghost?
They nods in no
Sanskar smiles warmly at them:then have food.
He haves the food. And they looks at him overwhelmed.
They thought him to be a rude kind of personality and was scared of him.
But they were wrong
He looks at them and also sees that their food in untouched
Sanskar smiles :arey, again you are looking at me.. Don’t tell me you want to eat me(jokes)
But soon his smile vanishes seeing one of the old servant having tears in his eyes
Sanskar:uncle what happened?
Old servant immediately wipes his tears and nods in no
Sanskar smiles:have food
Later
Old servant to sujatha:i have worked in many places and such love and care i got for the first time.
Sujatha smiles
Old servant:aapka beta bohoth accha hai!
Sujatha smiles being proud of her son
While sanskar gives the gifts he brought to his siblings
And he was drinking water
When sujatha:it’s time, you should get married now!
The water gets struck on his throat and he coughs badly.
While uthra and Ruhaan pats his back
Sanskar:me?
Suji:yes
Sanskar shocked:now?
Suji:arey now means, you should select a girl for you. And then you should marry and i have already spoke to your dad and he agreed with me.
And if you permit then we can go to see my friends daughter tomorrow.
Sanskar:as you wish, mom!
Sujatha smiles
Ruhaan:this is called luck, you came just few hours ago and marriage too
Sanskar:so what? Do you want to get married?
Ruhaan:i have no problem with it.
Suji:what? Go and prepare for your exams, shaadi karni hai
While Ruhaan runs inside.
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So how was the first chapter?
30 Comments
Looking forward to it…
Interesting start…. feeling bad for Ragu ? .. But no fear when sanskar is there … looking forward to next update…. Update soon
Awesome dr
Awesome. Poor ragini.
Superb
Quite interesting. Do update soon.
Nice FF , touching waiting for Kaiser yeh ishq hair ff
Great beginning and very realistic…I personally know many girls who feels like Ragini….
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Awesome amazing concept.
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Awesome mindblowing plot.
Superb
Awesome one
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Awesome dear, loved it
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Amazing dear.
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Awesomeee interesting.
Nice story
Hey Aliya.. can u tel me hw to post story in Tu?
I wanna write .
First you have to register yourself then go to submit articles!
Thanks dear. I submitted my first article. It published. Tere ishq me jana