Me: Its lovely lady…….
Thnx guys fr cmmntng…. ya there were a ltl bit lss cmmnts bt its ok … i kn it is a new ff n wll take tym to make its place in your heart guys……….
All slnt readers plz plz cmmnt bcoz cmmnts r stress boosters……
Love u a lot my readers, supporters n frns……
Till now we hv had seen that Suman hv a daughter named Sanju…..
Sanju saw a gft in her wardrobe in nght……
Sanju- mumma see papa hv sent a gft fr me….. i kn it wll be the bst gft like last year…. mere papa wrld k bstest papa h…..
Suman smiles seeing her excitemnt….
Suman – chalo ab bate mt banao aur papa ka gft kholo…….
Sanju unwraps gft n fnd a vry beautyful princess typ dress n a barby set……….
Sanju is extremely happy……….
She slpt tht nght keepng tht gft beside her pillow……..
Sanju smiled seeing all this…..
Sanju k sote hi ghr me ek ajib si shanti cha gyi….. ye shanti Suman ko bilkul psnd ni tha….. kyuki is shanti me wo atit k panne palatne pr majbur ho jati thi…. is baar bhi wahi hua…………. ..
Those were her college life…..
Like everyone she was also excited fr her frst day of college………
She wore a blue coloured kurti with colorful stoll n a white slakes……..
Looking stunning………
On the gare only she banged wd a guy….. a tall …guy….
” Oops sry..” she said n wdout seeng his face she mived on ……
Bt……… she felt stuck n standed lyk a statue……..
She looked behind…
Her stoll was stuck in the guy’s watch……
the phn of a boy passing there rings..n ringtone was…….
Dil aaj kl meri sunta ni…
Dil aaj kl pass rhta ni
She gets shy n moves that guy ……
(The guy is sooo hndsm)
This is our hero Shravan………
“Mai kr deta hu” Shtavan asks smilingly………
Suman – are ni mai krti hu….
She try to free her stoll ….. in that way hr hand touches Shravan’ s hand…..
Shravan too tries to free that stall…
In that way both hands touches ….
Shravan is mesmerized by her beauty……..
Me: Shravan frees her dupatta…..
She thanks him n goes away………
Shravan stands stunned………..
Are shravan tu yaha kya kr raha h…….
Chal na aj freshers aa rhe h chal sabka intro lete h….. i mean ragging ……wooowww bahut maja ayega…. chal na jldi…..
Harsh a frn of shravan cms there………
Shravan is still statue………..
Then another frn of their gang sid shakes shravan…..
“Oo ya ya ya kya kh rhe the tum log…….. aur chalo frsheres ka intro ni lena…???” Shravan says….
“Ni ni hm log to arjit singh ka gana ga rhe the tere samne”
Harsh says angrily…….
Both of them went in the college cmps……..
All the guys were bz in taking intros were shravan was bz on his mobile phn playing games………
“Guys u carry on i m gng inside as i m not feeling good”
Shravan said n moved toward the class……… actually he was in search of that preetty grl………..
Whn he moved a ltl…. he heard guys asking a grl abt hr relatnship status….
She was feeling uncmfrtabl by their ques…..
Shrvan heard hr voice n wnt toward her……….
She saw him……..
” hey guys not ask sch ques.. to make other uncmfrtbl…..
Plz guys n lets go frm here…….
All guys went frm thre as shravan hv an imp place in their heart………………
Suman was happy to fnd smone diff frm all……….
Then only …………
“Mumma aap soi ni.??????
So jao na plz mere sath……..
Mujhe neend ni aa rhi h…
Ya mera bacha cm on beta sleep now
She sings….
Chandaniya chup jana re…
Pl bhr ko luk jana re….
Neendiya dhimi aye
Bitiya meri so jaye……..
……
So jati hu mai bhi ….,kl kitna saara kam h……..
Ni to ye purani yaade……
Dono so jate h ek ni subah k sath ni ummid le kr k………….
I kn again it is not much long…… bt plz guys read n cmmnt…….
Love u a lot
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It was beautiful..!! I loved the way you potray the mother-daughter bonding… I feel that’s so cute..!! Waiting for more flashbacks.. Maybe shravan died.. Something like that.. Overall, it was beautiful.. Simple yet beautiful..
thnx shraman…..
keep readng dear…….
So sweet and lovelly…. Superb bonding btween khushi and sumo… Shravan pheli nazar me pyaar ho gaya ?.. awesome…..?
thnx fr liking dear…….
bt it is sanju not khushi dear
love u a lot……..
oppsss….. sryy… short term memory loss ????
its ok dear…. love u….
😉
love u tooo ??
its sweet! cute daughter n beautiful mum..✌
thnx sumo fr liking……..
sry dear i read your ff silently n donot cmmnt mch…. i wll surely try to cmmnt frm nxt epis
no prob! just tell me wat browser did u use!? m really dying to register but some capcha problem is dere 🙁 🙁
Nice one
thnx dear…. keep readng 🙂
Oh I loved it… It’s very beautiful….. Either shravan died or misunderstanding happened between them…..so they separated….
thnx fr liking, cmmntng n supporting……….
hahahaha u cnt say now what had hppnd bcoz i hv alao not decided yet…..
now i cn only say that this ff wll have happy endng unlike my last ff………
cn we becm frns lily……????????
ya sure it will be a pleasure………..
hiiii lovelylady….nice nd lovely story….srryy…maine episode 1st miss kr diya….but aage se sare episode pdhugi…thank you… 🙂
thnx a lot anku….. sry if u dont like anku……
u hvnt missed epi 1 …. u cn read it now also……..
frm now anku di if u dont mind?????
Anku…waooo cool name….i like it….thanks dear… 🙂
agr tum anku bhi bologi to bhi chlega…. 🙂
ni di aa p mujhse kaafi bri h…
bt agar apko di ni psnd to mai anku bol skti hu
Hi..lovleylady..i feel its unique way to start a new ff..ur thought..to intro the charectors with story..is nice..
I read your first episode too..after reading this one..
I liked it..keep it on..my support will be with you..??
All the best☺
hi
thanx fr liking the cncpt……. plz keep reading…n thnx fr :supportng me….
🙂
Hi lovely lady I am silent reader 🙂 🙂
but u write it so nicely that I can’t stop myself commenting on ur ff it is brilliant love it!! Love it !!! And just love it..!!!!!! 🙂 🙂 🙂
aaawwwww thank u soooo mch…….
keep cmmntng……
love u a lot
Hey dear ur ff is too good loved the story loved the bond the mother-daughter shared I wonder what happened to Shravan?
thnk u fatarajo fr liking my story……
i m too thinking ki apne shravu ko kya kru
….
kyuki msine khud abhi decide ni kiya h 😉
i jst read your cmmnt on my ques on your ff intro ….. intense story of our love
it was really considerable…. n now i wll set a while story in my mind n then wrt epi 3…
i hope your vaccatns have started… thn u cn be regular on my page… yipeeeeeeeee
hey lovelylady….mujhe aapki story ka episode 1st nhi mil raha….konse no. page pr h episode 1st
phle pr hi h
http://www.tellyupdates.com/together-forever-edkw-epi-1/
link fr epi 1
tysm 🙂
lovy…wooooowww awesome episode….amazing….I am eager to read next epic….what may be happened to that shravan…..I loved it babes….keep reading…love you…take care
thnk u afa di…. lovr u too di….
plz keep readng n supportng….
Of course dea…Insha Allah I am always with you
thnk u di 😮
Guys I want your HELP actually I want to write a fanfiction also but don’t know how can I so plzzz help me …..
I am inspired by all of u who write amazing fan fictions…! 🙂 plzz plzz help me
i wll surely hlp u maria…. wht hlp u want????
any tym i m ready…
That’s soooo sweet of u..! 🙂 I don’t know how to write a fan fiction on telly updates 🙁 can u plzzzzz help me with this 🙂 …??
Awesome awesome awesome…… It’s amazing…. Lovely lady u r such a wonderful writer…. I loved ur ff….it’s so unique and I love the way u portrait the characters…??
Sorry I know I m late…really sorry for that
its ok fr being late…..
thnk u sooooo mch fr cmmntng
your cmmnt inspires me lot……….
love u :*
It’s too good lovely lady. I read ur previous ff also.its just amazing. Very nice.
thnkx a lot bhagyashree keep cmmntng……
i hope u wll be a regular reader now
Awwww sorrryyyyy sorrrryyyy I was busy episode was a super duper hit I liked the staller part awesome and sweets to HM kha k rahen ge di hahaha take care love u stay blessedd
thnk u soooooo mchh….
god bless u toooo…..
Di what is the advantage of being a registered member????
reg membr hone pr aap dusre reg membt ko drct msg kr skte h… usme moderatn tym ni lgta h…
pics post kr skye ho….apne ff pr rply krne pr moderatin tym ni lgta h… clck krte hi post ho jata h…. kusi bhi reg member k nam pr clck kr k uske sare post ff pta kr skte ho….
btw hw was the epi dear. 😉
i m sry… i got your cmmnt on my ff later…….
if u use lappy thn frst of all wrt the epi in wrd or if u use mobile thn frst of all wrt the whole epi in message or in notes any whr….
thn go on menu optn shwn abv in the page n then clck on submit articl….
fll the the name, email id, title…( title me bracket dal kr jis serial k page pr post krna h uska nam jarur likhna)
then copy paste the story in respctv place…. thn select fan fivtion in d drop box….
there wll be a cptcha … wrt 5 there….. clk on submit…n it will be posted wthn 24 hrs…….
n after ff is posted last n most imp step… tell your frns abt that ……. 😉
@maria aur kuch puchna ho thn plz go fr it
thank u sooooo sooooo much di seriously u r a life saver…!! 🙂 i want to ask that i am using a mobile u said write in a msg or notes something what does that mean …??? 🙂 in the comments u mean..???
sorry sorry sorry
i,m late
nyccccc superb epi i,m loving mother and daughter bond i read both epi,s today its good yar keep it up
post next one soon 😉
miss u all guyzzzz
i was waiting fr your cmmnt frm a looonnng tym….
bt its ok i cn understn ur study…. thnx fr cmmntbg dear..
missing u a loooooootttt
ohhhhh no i,m late @ufaq ff also 🙁
ooopssss
ohhhhh sorry for thaat actually mujhe pata nh tha that u hv start it 🙂
i,ll try to b regular paka
thats lyk a good grl hahahaha
thank u sooooo much dii !!!! i want to hug u !!!! i did it u helped me soooo much di really thank u thank u thank u i am just praying that it will published on the page but i didnt write the page name 😮 i didnt know where to write it..
i use to wrt in bracket after title of my ff
So will my fan fiction post on this page ?? 😮
and yeah dii i am writing a fanfiction on shraman hate to love and i am writing it in hindi so i can express the emotions 😀
wow it is great…….
all d bst dear
Thank u so much di btw where r u from??
i m frm india n u? ??
lovy did ufaq posted her next cappy….did you posted please sent me the link….don’t know what happened to my phone
ya it has been posted
http://www.tellyupdates.com/love-brought-season-spring-chapter-14/
i am from pakistan di i have a question do u know how many times i will take to post an article??
maria….I don’t know hindi….but I can understand hindi….I will comment on your page…
Where r u from Afa I mean u r a muslim me too but where r u from??
No problem Afa I will write some sentence u know to express the emotions 😀 in hindi otherwise I fully try to write in English …!
Maria ya I am Muslim…from kerala….your ff link is not getting if you don’t mind can you give link please…and from where you’re
your so sweet yaar thank you soo much…yaar I can understand hindi….so no worries
ya me too i am from pakistan yrr i dont know what happened to my ff… :O
are yar it has been posted dear…..
tumne serial ka naam ni diya tha na isliye is page pr post ni hua h ..
Asalamu alikum…why epic didn’t updated or what…don’t worry it will update soon