Me: Its lovely lady…….
Thnx guys fr cmmntng…. ya there were a ltl bit lss cmmnts bt its ok … i kn it is a new ff n wll take tym to make its place in your heart guys……….
All slnt readers plz plz cmmnt bcoz cmmnts r stress boosters……
Love u a lot my readers, supporters n frns……
Till now we hv had seen that Suman hv a daughter named Sanju…..
Sanju saw a gft in her wardrobe in nght……
Sanju- mumma see papa hv sent a gft fr me….. i kn it wll be the bst gft like last year…. mere papa wrld k bstest papa h…..
Suman smiles seeing her excitemnt….
Suman – chalo ab bate mt banao aur papa ka gft kholo…….
Sanju unwraps gft n fnd a vry beautyful princess typ dress n a barby set……….
Sanju is extremely happy……….
She slpt tht nght keepng tht gft beside her pillow……..
Sanju smiled seeing all this…..
Sanju k sote hi ghr me ek ajib si shanti cha gyi….. ye shanti Suman ko bilkul psnd ni tha….. kyuki is shanti me wo atit k panne palatne pr majbur ho jati thi…. is baar bhi wahi hua…………. ..
Those were her college life…..
Like everyone she was also excited fr her frst day of college………
She wore a blue coloured kurti with colorful stoll n a white slakes……..
Looking stunning………
On the gare only she banged wd a guy….. a tall …guy….
” Oops sry..” she said n wdout seeng his face she mived on ……
Bt……… she felt stuck n standed lyk a statue……..
She looked behind…
Her stoll was stuck in the guy’s watch……
the phn of a boy passing there rings..n ringtone was…….
Dil aaj kl meri sunta ni…
Dil aaj kl pass rhta ni
She gets shy n moves that guy ……
(The guy is sooo hndsm)
This is our hero Shravan………
“Mai kr deta hu” Shtavan asks smilingly………
Suman – are ni mai krti hu….
She try to free her stoll ….. in that way hr hand touches Shravan’ s hand…..
Shravan too tries to free that stall…
In that way both hands touches ….
Shravan is mesmerized by her beauty……..
Me: Shravan frees her dupatta…..
She thanks him n goes away………
Shravan stands stunned………..
Are shravan tu yaha kya kr raha h…….
Chal na aj freshers aa rhe h chal sabka intro lete h….. i mean ragging ……wooowww bahut maja ayega…. chal na jldi…..
Harsh a frn of shravan cms there………
Shravan is still statue………..
Then another frn of their gang sid shakes shravan…..
“Oo ya ya ya kya kh rhe the tum log…….. aur chalo frsheres ka intro ni lena…???” Shravan says….
“Ni ni hm log to arjit singh ka gana ga rhe the tere samne”
Harsh says angrily…….
Both of them went in the college cmps……..
All the guys were bz in taking intros were shravan was bz on his mobile phn playing games………
“Guys u carry on i m gng inside as i m not feeling good”
Shravan said n moved toward the class……… actually he was in search of that preetty grl………..
Whn he moved a ltl…. he heard guys asking a grl abt hr relatnship status….
She was feeling uncmfrtabl by their ques…..
Shrvan heard hr voice n wnt toward her……….
She saw him……..
” hey guys not ask sch ques.. to make other uncmfrtbl…..
Plz guys n lets go frm here…….
All guys went frm thre as shravan hv an imp place in their heart………………
Suman was happy to fnd smone diff frm all……….
Then only …………
“Mumma aap soi ni.??????
So jao na plz mere sath……..
Mujhe neend ni aa rhi h…
Ya mera bacha cm on beta sleep now
She sings….
Chandaniya chup jana re…
Pl bhr ko luk jana re….
Neendiya dhimi aye
Bitiya meri so jaye……..
……
So jati hu mai bhi ….,kl kitna saara kam h……..
Ni to ye purani yaade……
Dono so jate h ek ni subah k sath ni ummid le kr k………….
I kn again it is not much long…… bt plz guys read n cmmnt…….
Love u a lot
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ye lo apka ff
Thank you soo much babes…and who your not good write… really yaar you inspire everyone…when you’re going to post next chappy
thnx a lot di…………
i wll post nxt epi on monday
Thank a lot lovely di seriously u helped me sooo much I have no words to express my feelings 😀 I am soooo happy but don’t worry this time I gave serial name while posting epi 1 according to ur instructions ! Thanks again diii just praying that this time it will post on the correct page 🙂 🙂
hey lovey whats upppp
jst good yaar…..
missing all my frnsss
hmmmm to kahn h sb???
Pta ni yaar…..
Abhu ka kuch pta hi ni h…. ufaq ka tab gir gya… hospitalised h….
Aaj kl hm kuch jyada hi free h ……
So akele akele bore hote h
Monday se lagatar ff post krenge
Iam not angry at u…hehe…the episode was awesome…??as usual??
how r u?
abhi mujhe bhul gyi ho kya…….
koi cntacr hi ni h…..
missed u yaar
aur tum ho ki mujhe yaad bhi ni krti ho ;(
looo lovy…
Hey abhi angel di and api and ya maria welcome to telly updates swety I m also Muslim and from Pakistan even angel is from pak and ya best of luck for or ff swety
hi ufaq…….
i m really glad to see this mch strong bond betwn us……
it is vry insprng.. that being frm two diff country wch doesnt hv that mch bonding….. we lv each other this mch……
our love fr each other n your love fr an indian serial vanishes d boundry line…..
i met my frn two days ago … i told her too abt my new frns….
one thngs is also prived frnshp hv no linits…..
I do remember you guys….but iam little busy with studies…?
How r you????
its ok yaar ……. study cms frst…………..
hey guys….your right lovy….really yaar friendship is a awesome relation yaar…I am glad to get amazing friends here….guys I have imagination you guys
about you guys….I will start from ufaq chull bulli…very fair,slim, short and very cute…
lovy…slim, hight, not too fair but fair…and very pretty…
almost every thng is wrt bss i m not pretty
afa di plz get registered naa
thn we cn message eachother….. it takes no tym fr moderatn
i shd say ufaq, angel, ahi all shd get registered……….
really ohh god…If all most same of course you may be pretty….really yaar…then I will try…
plz dear
And lovely..even you also didn’t post ur next ff article..and u r commenting in our friends ff☺?
Pls..do post ur ff..too fast..I wana read it..?☺
actually i m completely free bt i wnt to spnd tym wd my family .. in my family veryone works and there vacatns are abt to end….. soooo i wll post frm tmmrw. i hope u dont mnd……….
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Hi everyone afa api every I..agination is r8 bt I m not shoort yar and ya we have strong bonds Yar I don’t knw how to get registered sorry I miss u guys love u
telly updates k menu e dekho optn hoga registration ka
Then..its OK..no problem..☺?
lovy baby can I ask you one think…I don’t know what happened to my phone…I don’t know it can you can try…can you register me…I Don’t know it possible or not
Ya sure dear
Tell me email id n user name
Afa…[email protected]…pin code Basmana…Thank you so much dea…I love you…
Ok i wll do it
apna email id chk kariye… telly updates k taraf se ek activatn lnk aaya hoga… clk on that……
i hv set passwrd – bachiafa10
user name – afa
fatafat dekh lijiye….
lovy I didn’t get
yaar sorry for disturbances…[email protected]
aapne phle jo mail id diya tha na.. usse maine register kiya h…… aap wo email id open kro.. n see is there any mail frm telly updates???
Thank you so much babes for helping me like a sis thank you so much….you wasted your time on me….I don’t know what happened to this phone really yaar I am fedup with it…love babes
I have better option change it gum krdo usse then u will get a new one
hahaha … everyone is not lcky….. i lost my phn in train as i hv told u…. bt got the same phn… a good man got it n retrnd it…… 🙁
sry di u r elder bt i hv to say it that u r wrmg this tym… i dont wasted my tym…. it was my love fr u…….
btw it happnd or not????
hahaha chull buli…I will sent one link please read it…. http://www.tellyupdates.com/being-a-dad/comment-page-1/#comment-1424084