Helllllllllllllllllllllloooooooooooooooooo all my dear swasanians… this is your dear, sweet, cute, innocent lovely Neptune back with yet another story……
I know I know that I have started soooooooooooooooooo many stories and I have to handle all of them first but what to do this story has been playing in my mind for sooooooooooooooooooooooooo long and I had to pen it down as I couldn’t control my urge to write this story anymore.
I really don’t know if it’s something new or a story is written on it before too but I wanted to write on it……..
The story starts with Sanskaar acting as a mad. Here raglak engagement is yet to be done and laksh realises his love for swara.
Scene 1 :
Sanskaar : I have to take my revenge at any cost…… I don’t care whatever happens but I have to complete it any cost. And my first target is ms SWARA BOSE.
Scene 2:
Swara is seen getting married to someone. The boy’s face is covered with a sehera. And tears are flowing down her eyes.
Scene 3:
Sanskaar is shouting and crying his heart out at an isolated place : swaraaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa please, please I beg you please forgive me, forgive your best friend, your Sanskaar please forgive your LOVE……….
So guys this is the prologue of my new story. I am soooooooo sorry if this is boring.
Please guys do read and tell me if you want me to continue it. I will only continue it if you guys will tell me your reviews otherwise I will not continue this story.
Meet you all in the next part till then bubbyeeeeee…….
58 Comments
Awesome continue soon
thanks mannu….
will continue soon…..
Waiting for it…
Seems interesting…
Post next part soon!!
thanks kashu……
will post the next part soon….
Nice plot dear… continue it… I will surely read it… the boy in the sehera would be our villain … take your time …. I will wait for chap1
thanks sanskrirti…
and cholly but i can’t reveal anything now……
keep guessing dear….
Interesting..plz continue it..
thanks kumu….
Awsm Dr
thanks rachna…..
Hayeeeeee new story on swasan loveee u nepuuu and prologue is super se upar don’t u dare to say it boring. It is dammm interesting.
Abb jaldi post karna mere se control nahi hota…. impatient me.
Continue soon
Thanks
Take care
thanks marsuuuuuuuuuuuuu……
don’t worry dear will try to post it asap…..
interesting..
thanks kat….
it is interesting..i’m busy in personal life..so not coming to tu…from now i hopefully active..have to read ur other works too☺
thanks veena…
and don’t worry dear you can take your own time to read them…..
continue
will surely continue adishu…..
Awesome dear plz continue
thanks priya…..
Nice…
thanks soujanya…..
Interesting
thanks dear SWASAN…..
Awesome
thanks suma
Seems interesting
Please continue and it’s not at all boring
thanks soumya….
interesting dear
thanks neha….
nice story dear.
thanks phoenix…….
hi neptune u are also msdian??
nice dp
hey KIANA glad to meet another MSDIAN like me……
welll am a bigggggggggggggggg crazy fan of MSD…
btw your dp is also awesome….
Aree…Neptuu even me n Marssuu also MSDians dear…..
Yup even I love msdhoni
aww cho chweet….
i am the craziest fan of my dhonu….
nyc
thanks swasan….
neptune di another of your mind blowing stories
i just cant wait for the episode to start
you are an amzing writer and i do love the stories you write
so pls do update soon!!
waiting for the next part
take care
keep writing and smiling
lots of love
iquuuuu you can call me nepuuu like all my friends do…
thanks for the comment kiddo…
am glad you like my stories….
i will post the next part soon dear….
love you too dear and keep smiling….
ok nepuu di !!<3 <3
Interesting dear
thanks anuuu…..
It was interesting continue soon
thanks dear….
Awssome !!!! Neptune!! Plz dont include nagin nd cavity between swasan.. cant tolerate them!! Btw i guess groom in sehra is sanskar onlyy!
aww don’t worry dear no one can come between SWASAN no matter what. and about the groom lets see whether your guess is right or not…..
thanks for commenting dear….
loved itdear
thanks anju
nice
thanks anu….
It’s nice..continue it.
tahnks shifa….
Neptuuu….good starting yaar! Its not at all boring….ok! Is that groom is Sanskaar?
thamks gayu….
umm about the groom its suspense so i can’t reveal sorry
nice
thanks dear