Hi i am Sakash.Love u all.Thanks for ur support.A warm welcome to TSMSPJ FF dear ones…
Thanks for comments,
Bhaana,Meera1,Mavis,Ashwinee,Shreya,
Neha,Avanti and Maan…
I am happy that u all supported me and shared ur views.Thank u so much friends.
Keep supporting me.I will give my best..
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The story starts :
Uma lifted Kanak into his arms and reached Home…
All Ladno people shocked seeing Uma while taking Kanak…
But no one dare to question him?Because they trust him.And treat him as God…
Shiv : Dhadoosa who is she?
Uma : Shiv i will tell u everything later?For now go and bring that leaves which i brought just few minutes ago…
Shiv brought those leaves and gave them to Uma…
Uma pasted that leaves finely.And applied that paste on Kanak’s forehead.
While applying them,kanak holded Uma’s hand…
Uma felt a magical touch…And attractive chandan smell from Kanak…
It’s morning :
Kanak woke up with a beautiful smile…
But she shocked seeing new place and the person who slept down…
Kanak screams loudly…
Uma and Shiv wake up with jerk…
Kanak : Who r u?When i came here? What’s going on?
Uma came forward and said,Listen…
Kanak : Hey Man!Don’t come closer?Stay away from me!Wait there…Other wise u will see,
“Kanak’s hand Punch Ka Munch Maaja”
Uma went near her.And closed her mouth and said,
I didn’t understand whatever u said?
I don’t know ur name?Actually yesterday u fainted in station.There u talk to Niranjan sa.I am Ayurveda doctor here.So i bring u here to my home.And gave u medicine……
That’s what had happened?I know u r a Woman.I respect u.U no need to fear.We r not harmful to u.U can trust us…
Uma : But,i want “SHANTI” in my home…
So don’t shout?
Kanak : “SHANTI” Where is she?I didn’t saw her?
Shiv Laughs…And says Dhadoosa?
Uma too smiles for a second and says..,
Uma : “SHANTHI” means “PEACE”…
Not a woman!
Kanak : Ok…
Uma : What’s ur name?
Kanak : Always
… “LADIES COMES FIRST” …
Why???
…………….Phenomena changed……………..
Uma : Means what?
Kanak : Mr.Dharma Buddha…?I am asking u to tell me ur name?
Uma : I am “UMA SHANKAR”…
Kanak laughs and says..,
UMA…UMA…
Uma : Why r u laughing?
Kanak : Because Uma is a girl’s name…
But nice and meaningful name…
Uma : Thank u.Now tell me,what’s ur name?
Kanak : I am Kanak…
Uma : Nice name.It has several meanings
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Kanak : Thanks…Tell me my name meaning?
Uma : Kanak means “GOLD”…
Kanak : Ok Thank u…
Uma left the place…
Shiv smiles seeing Kanak…
Kanak too smiles and kisses him on his cheek…
Precap : Suddenly lights went off.In fear Kanak hugs Uma.
“TU SOORAJ MAIN SAANJH PIYAJI SONG”plays as background music…
Both gets current shock.Uma,Kanak,Shiv went to kerala for their seperate purposes
Soon i will bring their marriage twist……
I hope u all liked it…Please give ur valuable comments…
Do u like dialogues like..,
“Kanak’s hand Punch Ka Munch Maaja”
& Shanti…
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keep smiling have a good day………………….
19 Comments
Interesting update.
Hi Ashu.Thank u so much nanna.Thanks for ur support dear…Glad u like it…☺??
Superb part??,shanti? loved this part fully,oh my god precap is too good☺☺,very nice going sakash??
Hi Avanti.I am so glad u liked it dear.Yes Shanti
???Yes precap will bring new twist.Thank u Avanthi.I means a lot to me.Thanks for ur support.
Sorry dear…It means a lot to me…
Hey…Hi….
Kanak is so innocent…
Wow…well written dioolouges..
I read 3-4 times that ”kanak’s hand punch ka munch mazaa”
Kanak shouted and gave high-fi diolouges but uma only says-i don’t understand anything. So funny..
Pls…pls if you also think to write forced marriage as in serial …pls if you can change it and bring some new idea…..pls…and if can’t than it’s ok…
And byyy…..
Actually i want to ask this line” kanak’s hand punch ka munch mazaa”..meaning as i don’t hindi,if anyone help me by translating it,I will be happy,thanks in advance☺
Dear Avanti,
Kanak hand punch ka munch maaza means kanak says she will give one punch??? to Uma,if he comes closer.Munch maaza means U know munch chocolate?
She said she will feel eating munch chocolate while giving one punch on his face.???
Hope u understand dialogue meaning…
Bye dear…???
Hi Maan…
I am so glad dear that u liked dialogues…
3 to 4 times…I am glad dear…
“Kanak hand Punch ka Munch Maaza”…
Yes he didn’t understand her dialogue???
Dear Maan,
I won’t write marriage as per serial.I will change it.And will definately bring some new idea.U no need to please me.Just order me dear.Give suggestions like this?Will definately
follow.U will enjoy…
Bye dear…???
you are really talented sakash, love it
Hi Mavis.I am glad u liked it dear.Thank u so much…I am glad…???
Thanks for giving explanation of that line sakash,i understood,its so funny super?,yeah I like munch ?,waiting eagerly for next part,bye☺
Ok That’s fine dear.I will update next part today.Enjoy reading dear.Bye for now…???
Hi Sakash.. Glad you updated the 2nd part of the story so soon.. This story is really interesting.. I really laughed somuch when she called him Mr.Dharma Buddha.. hehe..and Uma is innocent when it comes to kanak’s filmy dialogues like “HAND PUNCH KA MUNCH” & “LADIES FIRST” and Kanak when it comes to Uma’s pure hindi bhaari-bharkam words..
All in all its very well written:) Thank you for keeping us entertained:):)
Hi Neha.Yaa dear i updated soon.I want u all to enjoy this FF.So i updated.Thank u so much dear.I am glad this dialogue bring a beautiful smile on ur face.Yes Dharma Buddha & kanak’s filmy dialogue & Uma’s pure hindi…???
I am glad that u liked it.U welcome dear.Will try to entertain more…☺☺☺
Hi Sakash, great going?
Who is shanti??
I like your way of giving precap which increases the eagerness for ur next update.
This is sweet and hilarious.
Thanks for the update dear
Hi Bhaana.Thank u so much dear.I am glad u liked it…Shanti???.Yes by giving precap it increases eagerness to read next one.
U welcome dear.☺☺☺
Lovely sakash just wish we could see the further story in real as kerela is really beautiful? uspe kanum is like sone pe suhaga
Hi Shreya.I am glad u liked it dear.Thank u so much.Yes i too like greenary more.Yes u will get good moments in Kerala.It’s a very beautiful place.Of course dear u will good kanum moments…?☺?