Hi i am Sakash.Love u all.Thanks for ur support.A warm welcome to TSMSPJ FF dear ones…
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Thank u…
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Neha,Maan,Shreya,Ashwinee,Avanti,
Bhaana and CoffeeGreen…
Keep supporting me friends,i will give my best…
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The story starts :
It’s morning :
Uma,Kanak and Shiv started their journey to KERALA…
Train started,
Uma,Kanak and Shiv sat together…
Kanak and Uma sat beside window.Shiv sat beside Uma…
Kanak enjoying the fresh air coming from outside…
Shiv feels sleepy.So he slept on Uma’s lap…
Kanak smiles,seeing their bond.He recalls her beautiful moments with her brothers,
VED & VANSH…
Uma : Why r u smiling?
Kanak : Uma seeing ur bond with ur brother Shiv recalls me my brothers,
VED & VANSH…
Uma smiles.And says nice names…
Kanak : Thank u.They loves me a lot…
Uma smiles…
Kanak : May i ask u one question?
Uma : Yes u can…
Kanak : What’s the reason behind ur journey to Kerala?Only say if u r comfort able,no force…
Shiv woke up and says,
We r going there for “SHUDI VIDHI”.And our family too there…
Kanak : Ok…
Shiv : Ok.Why r u going to Kerala?
Uma stops Shiv.But Kanak says,
Kanak : Uma don’t stop him.I will give answer to my “CHOTTA FRIEND”…
Uma,Shiv : Friend means?
Kanak : See now,both big and small buddha asking me another doubt?
Kanak says,It means “DOSTH”…
Uma,Shiv : Ok…
Uma,Shiv at a time says,”For the First time u used right word…
Kanak laughs…
Trio laughs again…
Kanak : I am going there for “My Maa & Papa’s shradda”…
Uma says sorry…
Kanak : No need of it…I am ok Uma…
Uma went to main door…And seeing outside and he is in his own thoughts…
Just then,Kanak came…Uma turned to go…But Kanak about to fall out…She screams loudly and says “UMA”… Uma holds her by waist…
Both lost in each other eyes…
(Tu Sooraj Main Saanjh Piyaji plays as background music…)
Shiv came and calls…”DHADOOSA”…
Both apart from each other…
Finally,they reached KERALA…
A beautiful boat shown…
Kanak struggling to get inside boat…
Kanak about to fall.Uma holded her hand.
And pulled her inside…
Kanak enjoying the greenary…
Boat stopped finally…
Kanak bid bye to Uma..And went to temple…
Uma and Shiv too bid bye to Kanak and went back to their own families…
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Temple :
Kanak went inside the temple…
Bhabo,Ved,Vansh surprised her…
Kanak about to touch Bhabo’s feet,
But Bhabo stops her and says,
Bhabo : Ur place is in my heart.Kanak no need of all this?And hugs her…
Just then,
Ved,Vansh comes and joins the hug…
All eyes becomes wet…
To chill their mood,
Kanak says now “RATHIS” selfie…
All laughs…
Precap : Bhabo bring marriage proposal to Kanak,Ved and Vansh.Kanak meets Uma again but in his Dharam style…
Now we must see whether Uma again meets Kanak or not?And how they will become Kanum and
“DIYA AUR BAATHI”…
Sorry for short update.I will try to update long one…
Keep reading.U will get to read good updates friends…
I hope u all liked it…Please give ur valuable comments…
Keep smiling have a good day…
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14 Comments
Woah!!!! First suspense update loved shiv-uma-kanak conversation…waiting for the next one..
Hi Ashu.I am glad u liked it nanna.Thank u so much.I am glad u liked their conversation.I will post soon nanna…???
Gud n8,TC…☺☺☺
Hey Sakash ?.. your story is so peaceful.. hmmm Kanak got a marriage proposal ? is it that skinny guy Jay??
Hi Neha.Thank u.Yes i like to write peace stories.Kanak got Marriage Proposal.U will get to know it in upcoming updates dear…Thank u so much dear…???
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Hi Sakash, I’ve not had chance to read parts 2-4, but just caught up on all the parts I had missed now – great short updates, with the story developing really well! I particularly liked the part where Kanak was scared of the dark & held on to Uma ❤️… looking forward to the next instalment.
Hi Meera1.I am so glad u read all parts.Thank u so much dear.I am glad u like power cut scene.U will get next installment soon dear.
Thank u for giving ur valuable time and reading it…???
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Hi sakash,wonderful story,love it.keep writing dear.waiting for kanum marriage.please, dont make me to wait so long.
Hi Melati.Thank u so much for commenting first time.A warm welcome to my FF dear.I am so glad u liked it dear.I will keep on writing for all of u.U will get to read their marriage part soon dear.Of course i won’t disappoint u.Will definately try to post soon…
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Hello Dosth……
What a magical moment of kanum….in their journey in train….!!
Warmful emotional hug of granny with her children….after that senti moment kanak’s selfie…..i think and laughed if kanak take selfie in train or in boat and uma asked her what is she doing???
Kanak : ”khudkhenchu” le rahi hu…..haha……
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Hello Maan my dear dosth.Yes magical and emotional moment in Train.Yes bhabo’s sweet hug.Selfie???.Yes u r 100% right dear uma will definately ask this question?What selfie means?
Dear i didn’t get last line dear…???
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Hi sakash, nice update…story is so sweet?
Chota n bada budha?
Waiting for kanum marriage…
Hi Bhaana.Thank u so much dear.Chota n bada buddha???.U will get to read their marriage part soon dear…???
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Hi sakash good going ?
Hi Shreya.Thank u so much dear.I am glad u liked it dear…???
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