Hello Guys! I am back with another OS…thank you for Everyone who commented in my previous OS…..
Siya, QVZRQE3M, Neha, Riya, Trisha, Palak, Ashnita, Nkh, Suzana, Mayoori, Anee, Niyaa, Amnaa, Premamohan, Alia, Dhruti, Khamoshi, Priyanshi, Divya, Annie, Jessica….. Thank you so much guys….
Author’s note = This is not good like the other ones
Let’s start…..
The scene opens on a man…who is doing some work on his laptop..…Engrossed in work…Suddenly the phone rings….”Yes Mr.kabir Kapoor here..yes i have checked the reports u can approve it saying this he kept the phone” …
Kabir’s pov…
Yes..i changed from the careless Kabir …to a self made and independent Kabir ..but Whats the point..you left me…yes you did…I loved you still love you and will always love you..I know i was at fault but the fault was not fully mine too..U knew my circumstances but I was there for you ..still you left me…I loved you from bottom of my heart but you betrayed me…….
The scene changed to a house..a boy is seen running from here and there…
“Sabir ..Sabir wait beta you have to go to school..the school bus will be here any moment..”
Yes mom…Sabir said…
“Waise..mom why are you so stressed the competition is tomorrow not today so take a chill pill”…
“Yes I knw my Prince ..but”…Beeep Beeep..the school bus’s horn rang..
” Oh the bus is here and all the best for your campaign”…the woman said and kissed on his cheeks…Sabir left ….
After a while the maid comes saying..” Sanchi Bhabhi…when are you going to tell him the truth”…(Yes she is our Sanchi).
“Never”..Sanchi said in a stern voice and proceeded towards her room..
She starts crying and sits on the bed…
Sanchi’s Pov..
Yes…the fault was mine..to make you a friend and then to love u…It was my fault…I knew your situation still i couldn’t resist your touch…Because I loved you …I had no choice …when i knew u were hers…then too i loved u…I didnt have the courage to face u…to see u becoming hers completely…
The scene changes to Kabir..
Kabir’s Pov…
No Sanchi …how could u leave me…when u and i both knew that we loved each other…I knew i was engaged…to Pragya …but I have always loved u…but still you had to leave me…why Sanchi…why?
Sanchi’s pov…
I did not leave u.. the situation made me leave u…I knew u cannot refuse your mom for your marriage with Pragya …i knew u can’t go against her…I loved you truely and will always love…It was my fault..i knew u were engaged but still…i loved u…and let u love me…I could not break my best friend’s heart ..for my love…
The scene shifts to Kabir
Kabir’s pov…
How could you think..that i wont stand for our love..i proved my love that day..when i made u mine forever…but still u didn’t trust our love..…That day…My wedding Day…i refused…for marriage and made everyone accept the fact that i love u and cannot marry Pragya ….Somewhere god was with me…when i got to know Pragya loved Veer ..my brother..and not me…everyone agreed for their marriage that moment only…and i ran and came to your house…to make u Mrs. Kapoor …but…u left me..your aunt told me u are married….and left the town…my whole world became upside down..it just got over…with few seconds..i realised i lost u…forever…
Scene shifts to Sanchi.
Sanchi’s pov…
I had to leave..i told my aunt to lie..so that u can start a new and fresh life with Pragya ..and forget me..I changed my name..From Sanchi Mishra TO Sanchi Mehta …so that u cannot find me..and i was right…after Few months..i got to know..i was carrying a part of yours in me..the symbol of our love…Our SON..Sabir….I wanted to share this beautiful feeling with u but could not…i was bound..by the chains..of…..But I still love u and will continue to love u till my last breath…
Scene shifts…
Kabir’s pov..
BETRAYAL…u betrayed me but i couldn’t stop loving u infact i fell in love with u all over again..I love u Mishri ..pls come..back..but i know u cannot..you are married..u might be living u life with ur HUSBAND..and maybe your kid…A tear of drop flows out
Suddenly someone knocks on the door
Kabir -=”Come in”..
A boy comes..
“Hello Uncle i m Sabir ..Sabir Mehta.”.
Kabir wipes off his tears and goes to the boy..
“Hello beta..I m Kabir” ..
Sabir= “Uncle actually i am from Oceanview international school and we have a programme tomorrow ..our school has organised a campaign in which we students will go to different business men..and request them to come to watch the play…Uncle will u come plzz”..he looks into kabir’s eyes wid lots of innocence…Kabir feels..a special bond..
Kabir-Ofcourse..
Kabir’s pov..
What happened Kabir …you said yes …your the one who hates..these things..the one who is now only engrossed in work…but yeah..i fell for his innocence i could not refuse…why was i getting a feeling that he is me…a part of me…but that cannot be true…never..
I smiled and looked at himm..he was seeing my cabin which had plenty of paintings….He told me that his mom..also liked paintings..I felt happy as i remembered my Sanchi..she loved to decorate houses with paintings..
I called Ramu and told him to bring two juices…
Pov ends…
Ramu entered and bought 2 glasses of juice and gave it to them..
Kabir = “Sabir beta have this juice”..Kabir is going to take a sip but…Sabir “kaka pls take this juice” ..
Kabir-“What happened?Do u want something else”…
Sabir-“No uncle its that it is an orange juice and i have an allergy from orange juice..”
Kabir sees the juice and realises that what he was going to do..
Kabir’s pov
Oh god i was going to drink the juice..in spite of knowing that i am allergic to this juice..thank god Sabir told me otherwise i would …
Kabir -“Thank u Sabir.”.
Sabir -“why uncle”..
“Actually i a m also allergic to orange juice”..said Kabir to which Sabir retorted “we both have lots of things in common”..Kabir started thinking about this..but Sabir diverted his mind by his talks..Sabir left the office and reminded Kabir to be on time tomorrow ..kabir smiled and waved him good bye…
The next day…In Sabir’s School…
Sabir met Kabir and told him that he will make him meet his mother ..
Sabir goes to call Sanchi and she comes along with him…kabir’s back is facing Sanchi..
Sanchi= “Sir..Thank u so much for coming…My son has been telling about u since yesterday”…
Kabir felt something ..he felt a part of him….He turned..and was shocked no happy no blessed to see his love his Sanchi in front of him…here Sanchi was also shocked to see him..in her heart she was thanking god..because she was able to see her love once again…
Kabir’s pov…
She did not change even a bit..her long hair…adorning her face..her smile…which changed into a shocked reaction seeing me…her eyes…still had the same innocence..her hands…that used to hug…me like i was completely hers..was the same…and her lips..that kissed mine…showing the love she had for me…was same..she was the same…my love…my Sanchi ..but…The long chain…the mangalsutra that she had on her neck…and her hairline adorned by the sindoor pierced my heart…it hurt very badly..It indicated she was someone else’s…not mine…the kid…Sabir..was her son..indicting she had become…completely someone else’s…My eyes..were searching for a reason in her eyes..but couldn’t find it..a layer of tear had already filled her eyes..and i couldn’t see her like this..I knew SHE WAS MINE..BUT..
Sanchi’s pov….
…He was in front of me standing shocked just like me…He did not change he was the same laksh whom I loved…or i should say whom i love…Everything about him was same…his eyes had the same truthfulness and pureness……his hands..which used to pull me into a bone crushing hug..it was the safest place for me..and his lips..it was the same lips which used to kiss mine..to show the love he had for me..but all these were of no use now…He was not mine anymore…All these things were just memories of our love..i couldn’t meet his eyes..i was scared that i might reveal the love i had for him…all over again…But i wanted to tell him..I WAS HIS AND ONLY HIS….BUT…
Suddenly Sabir interupted…
“Ma he is kabir uncle..he is very good …he talked with me yesterday..and we drank juice also”…
Sanchi smiled at Sabir ..and decided to greet kabir for the sake of Sabir as she did not want her son to get to know about her PAST..
Sanchi” -Good Morning Mr Kabir Thank u for coming..For My son”
The word MY SON..pierced his heart even more..he had no words the way Sanchi became a stranger..was the biggest shock of his life..after gaining lots of courage he said…
” Hi Sanchi”.
Suddenly Sanchi was called by one of the teachers and she went…
“Uncle uncle..i want to have an ice cream can u take me there..there is an ice cream parlour there”
Kabir had no choice he had to take her love’s son….beacuse of the innocence and love Sabir had…while going laksh asked..
” Sabir where is ur father..? Is he not here?”
he got sad ” actually uncle i have never seen him” …
Kabir = -“Why?”..
Sabir = ” Actually mom saidhe died…when i was going to be born..but i know the truth”..
Kabir = “What truth” ..
Sabir-” Actually i heard from my neighbour saying that my father left my mom when she was pregnant.” .
Kabir felt bad..about what his Sanchi went through…
They soon reached the ice cream parlour…kabir ordered 42 chocolate ice cream which was his and Sabir’s favorite…as Kabir was busy in paying the money..Sabir saw a ballon in the opposite lane..he started running but dhoom..a car hit him..and Kabir saw a boy surrounded by a pool of blood…
The scene changes to hospital…Kabir is sitting outside the operation theatre ..he donated the blood for Sabir as they both shared the same blood group..
The doctor came and said “he is out of danger and absolutely fine..he has gained consciousness”..
Kabir ran inside the room and hugged Sabir …”are you fine ..who told u to run on the road”..
“Yes uncle i m fine and sorry” ..Sabir retorted..
Suddenly the nurse came and asked kabir to complete the formalities..kabir went out but forgot his mobile..while Sabir was laying down..Sanchi’s mob rang..He saw the caller id. And.it showed Sanchi !..the phone soon got disconnected…
Sabir’s pov…
How come Kabir uncle has my mom’s no..he just met her today only…..wait i will see his phone..but mom says it’s bad to see others phone..but he is my uncle na..then its ok..he opes the phone and sees kabirs and Sanchi’s pic together as the home and lock screen…How is this possible they know each other..?..he thinks..i shoud check his notes..i will get some information ..he thought this because Sanchi also writes her sorrows or any happy moments in the notes so that it can be with her always..he opens the notes and reads it about all their past…their love for each other…”so kabir uncle..ooops papa is my papa..now i will bring them back together”..
Kabir and Sanchi both entered the room at the same time..Sanchi runs to Sabir and kisses him all over his face..
Sabir -“Ma u sit on the stool..and uncle u sit on the bed”..
They both ask why but..have to finally agree..
Sabir -“Uncle do u love ma?” ..
Both Kabir and Sanchi were shocked..
Kabir= -” What are u asking beta”..though he wanted to scream yes..but he didn’t want to break Sacchi’s relation with her son..he said “why”?
Sanchi was shocked..though she wanted a yes as an answer but she didn’t want to break kabir’s martial life…
Sabir -” Just answer truely..mummy ki kasam”..
Now Kabir had no other choice “yes!” He said…and Sabir smiled…
Sanchi was happy but didn’t show it..
Sabir -” Now ma…do u love him?…aapko meri kasam..”
Sanchi -“It does not matter Sabir…we have already have moved on in life”..
Sabir- ” Answer ma!”
Sanchi -“Hmm” ..
Kabir was happy so was Sabir.
Sabir ” -U both are so buddhu na..because of this misunderstanding i had to stay away from my papa..and ma u from ur love! ”
Sanchi and kabir were stunned hearing the word papa!lkabir saw Sanchi …asking was it true?…she had no ans..
Sabir said..” my mom thought you have married Pragya Aunty and u thought she married someone else..but the truth was…you both were waiting for eachother” …Sanchi and kabir were on cloud nine hearing this..their happiness had no bounds..❤❤..They were looking at eachother..when a cute innocent question came from Sabir..
“Ma papa but how did i come.?” …Both Sanchi and kabir were embarrassed and remembered the night when they both Surrended themselves to eachother and broke all their bounds and became one..they both were blushing and thinking how to answer him..but then the nurse entered and took Sabir for check up..Now they were alone..they both started moving towards eachother…They were close…kabkr pulled Sanchi into a bone crushing hug! They both hugged eachother passionately to ..make up for the years they were apart from eachother..They broke the hug..
Kabir-I have always regarded u as my Sanchi ..and will always you are my son’s mother but ..
He goes and searches for a pointed object and sees a knife kept there..he cuts his thumb and with the blood fills Sanchi’s hairline..and removes the mangalsutra which she had worn and makes her wear it again..now you are legally Mrs. Sanchi Kapoor and now no one can separate us…no one..
Sanchi hugs Kabir …and says I LOVE U Kabir !
Kabir -I LOVE U TOO MISHRI!
Saying this he whisphers..into sanchi’s ears..”waise Sanchi” …
Sanchi -“Hmm”…
Kabir -“I’m thinking to gift Sabir a little bro or sis?…Will u help me..?”..
Sanchi= Innocently…”how”?.
Kabir winks at her and Sanchi understands…and she tries to leave blushingly but Kabir stops by holding her hand and pulls her…she lands over his chest…our Sabir will be feeling lonely na…saying this he moves closer amd eyes her lips…Sanchi understands and closes her eyes in approval…and their lips finally meet..they kiss very passionately…wanting to make up for all these years of separation…
The scene changes…
After 4 years…
Its morning…
Kabir wakes up and finds Sanchi wearing saree…He gets up and goes towards her…and hugs her from behind…
“Sanchi why are you so beautiful…I am falling in love with u once again”…Sanchi blushes…
Kabir-“Vaise Sanchi what about 1 more child” and winks at her…
Sanchi -Fakes anger ” Kabir i m very happy witd my Sabir and kanchi.and u…whose just like a child…i cannot handle u all” …
Kabir -” What did u call me a child!” …
Sanchi -” Yes!you are my cute bacha” !and kisses him on his cheeks..kabir hold his cheeks and smiles..and he looses his grip on Sanchi and she tries running..but Kabir stops her…by pulling her hand..and pins her to the wall..
Kabir- ” U called me a child right!Now this child wants a morning kiss!..and now!” ..
Sanchi-” Kabir voh voh you are not a child okay happy..pls let me go..u know na they will come to the room..anytime” …
Kabir= “Morning Kiss!”
Sanchi surrenders..and agrees..
Kabir comes closer…their lips are just about to meet when…
“Ma papa..ma papa..ma pappa” ..they get separate and pretend doing some work…
Sabir and kanchi enter…
” Mom dad. VEER chachu and Pragya chachi..have come..they are calling u both down” …saying this they leave.. Kabir and Sanchi smile at eachother and remember the moments they had together..and will have together..and go down…..
And they lived happily ever after…
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Hope you liked it ! ?
Best wishes ,
Moonlight Tania
50 Comments
Amazing tania spell bound u r amazing and as well your writings ! Seriously I thought the ending but u made sabir know the truth first was the best part not as like “Kasam” serial like they dragged the whole serial to a 50 inches rubber band ! Whtever coming back to the episode u nailed it ! Keep going sweetie
Loads of love to u
Aww thank you so much Trisha dear…i am so happy you liked…i agree with you….love you too sweetie ??
It’s esoteric as usual moon u nailed it dear
No need to say that it was not intresting as other Os it was definitely the best one dear
Nd yes dear sorry for not commenting on ur previous writing u know I was really busy with my college exams as they are nearing so I m little busy with my study work anyways whenever I get time I read the ff nd Os bt m not able to comment soooooooooooo sorrry for that dear hope u wouldn’t mind
Plzz write something soon dear ur writingsuprb.
Love u ?????
Oh sorry it’s amazing.
It doesn’t matter
Thank you so much QR..no need to say Sorry….i totally understand….thank you so much for commenting….love you too dear….
Suoerbbbbb yaar u just nailed it … It was really fabulous … Great Job yarr .. Loved it
Thank you so much Jessie…i am so glad you like it
It was super,awesome, adorable and cute .
Loved it!!!!!!
Thanks a lot Siya
Woooowww chandni I loved this so so so perfect sabir woooowww kitna pyaara bachaa tha am sanveer lover but tdy u made me fall in love wd kanchi
Amazing write up
♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥ 🙂 🙂 🙂
Thank you so much Rushi dear…i am so glad you commented and really happy you liked it..and thank you for reading it…love you loads
You are a liar !!!!Why did you lie that this OS is not good.Do you think we are fool???
Excuse me we know how to take stand for ourself.I can give 100% guarantee and confirmation that this OS was not super but was super se upar.
Mindblowing yaar.
Thank you so much dear…sorry for lying…….love you
Tania dear, I was just speechless after reading this cute story……rather I can say it was one of my fav os till date…………..just loved the way sabir cleared the misunderstandings between kabir & sanchi……..I simply enjoyed each & every scene in this plot………u r such an amazing writer dear…….. tc & luv u a lot dear………..
Thank you so much Riya dear….i always live your comments..you comments always bring a smile to my face…love you too dear ??
wowwww it’s amazing mindblowing outstanding awesome superb fantastic and many more
Thank you so much Ashnita
Tania… u are amazing writer. Such a cute story i ever read. Keep writing more
Thank you so much Khamoshi ( mitali)…i am so glad you liked it
My dear you this is one of th
My dear you this is one of the best os I have ever read and now I must say you are the os diva…… Love uh and ur ff sooo muchhh!!!
This story was marvelous!! It was an epitome of perfection!!
Thank you so much Abhi dear …i am on cloud 9 by reading your comment…it really means a lot….love you loads ???
My dear you this is one of the best os I have ever read and now I must say you are the os diva…… Love uh and ur os sooo muchhh!!!
This story was marvelous!! It was an epitome of perfection!!
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It is Awesome moon.i can’t express my feelings…………..????????
Thanks a lot Anu
It was amaz super se uper wala tania u nailed it dear …lovv u loads nd lovv u used sabir and kanchi name as their childs name …lots of kisses for u update nxt ff and more os..
Thanks a lot Niyaaa dear…you çomment means a lot to me…a big hug to you and lots of kisses…love you so much ??
Wow awesome sabir kitna pyaraa he aur uska question aww soo cute aur funny .
Thanks a lot Divya
super
Thanks Tarasm
Are you mad Tania? This os is one of the most amazing and mind blowing os’ I’ve ever read ??? why would you think it’s not good? Seriously yaar if you were near me I would’ve hit your head hard for typing that line ??? (not joking but don’t feel bad)
Thanks a lot Ruwani dear….your çomment made my day….love you dear and a big hug to you
tani dear, this was so good…loved it,,,,,,,it was amazing dear I love you for this,,,,,,,,,,,you are talented……………………………love you,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,muahhhhhhhhhhhh,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,keep writing more and more …………..
Thanks Suzana dear…love you dear
it was superb and sweet and sabir was cute child
keep writing…
Thanks Dhruti…glad you liked it
It was such a sweet os…… Loved it very much
Thanks Amnaa
Dear it was super cool awesome a very big hug to u…
Thanks Premamohan a big to you too
Aaawwwwwww…..it was awwwwsm yr….mind blowing…
Thanks a lot Sanjukta….love you
Ohhhhhh God It was amazing
Thanks Alia
That was a really well thought out and awesome storyline. It was really cute to watch Sabir’s antics and also Kaanchi’s love for each other. It was really sweet and cute. Awesome one moon!!! Keep posting more. Reading such beautiful OS’s from u definitely refreshes my mind..love u loads ?. Keep writing and we will keep reading.. And u are near a quarter century of posts. Just 3 more and u will have 25!!
Thanks a lot Annie dear…thank you for telling me..i didn’t notice that it will be almost 25 …i am so glad you you liked it….love you loads and loads and a big teddy bear hug to you ?????
And plz post apartment mates soon..am eagerly waiting