Hello people . I saw Meher write many ffs of one shot.So I am inspired n maybe cannot write the next whole weeks since I have the stupid exams so here stopping my bak bak I go
Scene starts in a room .
Swara gets up
S: life kitni boring hai kal mera bday hai par phir bhi yeh khadoos nahi aaya
SWara goes to office
Kavita :hey swara
S: hello kavu.i missed u so much
K: I too missed u but now I am back na dpnt worry
S: kavu u know I don’t worry but u have to worry
K: more than u I suffered with her (points to ragini)
S: who is she
K: my new friend more talkative than u
Ragini tells hi and starts talking so much that suddenly swara says
S: baap re baap kitni baat karti hai
Kavita And Ragini laugh
sir gives swara some work
They all go to home but before going
S: kavu aaj ajaa na
K: nahi yaar aaj thoda kaam hai
S: sach sach bata kya chal raha hai
R : (intervenes ) nothing swara.i had some doubts to clear that’s the reason
S: ok ragini
Swara goes
K: thank god ragini tune u saved me
R : what happened
K: a very long story
R: tell na
K: accha ok baba rukh toh sahi (ok wait na )
R: you know me na..
K: ok don’t start now so tomorrow is swaras bday
R: really
K: will u listen otherwise I will not tell
R: ok
K: so she has a friend laksh . they were married but it broke as some misunderstanding got created but even thoughthey dint divorce and since I was laksh friend n somehow managed to make them both talk on phone n it sorted but swara thinks that laksh doesn’t love her and only as a friend . so laksh has a surprise that today night he will go give her a surprise + propose her n some secret romance
R: wow
K: I know
R; but her parents
K: no swara lives alone so no problem
R: wow ..i just cant believe it I mean she is lucky
K: very very lucky
At Night
11:56
Someone is scene climbing the pipe which goes through swara’s room and something in his mouth ( like a plastic he is holding)
L: what all I have to do (checks his watch) shit dudesirf 2minuite .He first goes through the terrace where there is something beautiful and special . he then goes back to swara’s room slowly opening the window comes inside
L: aww no need of disturbing princess cause 1 min is still there
HE takes a chair n sits near swara’s bed where she is sleeping.That innocent face.those eyes and that smile
L: chalo 5 seconds only
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Happy BDay Swara (he screams)
S: laksh you here . she hugs him
L: my baby how is the suprise
S: u are the best
L: I know
S: hehe
L: very happy bday baby
S: thank u babu
They laugh
L: ok now there is a big surprise in the terrace which I have been arranging from morning
S: oh I dint go to the terrace
L: very gud
Laksh gives her a dress and tells her to get ready
This dress :
S: laksh wow . my favourite pink .bas panch minuite
L: kitna time chahiye lele baby ( how much time u want take that much time baby)
S: ok babu
Swara comes wearing this dress with this awesome puff
Laksh gets mesmerized seeing her
S: laksh kaisi lag rahi hun
L: awesome baby
Laksh blindfolds her and takes her to the terrace.He opens her blindfold Swara gets shocked to see full red and white balloons
Kind of like this :
S: laksh this all
L: of course you are so important for me
S: laksh but that
LAksh places his hand on her lips
L: today no speaking only I wil speak .He takes her to table and moves the chair back and makes her sit
Swara sits
L: brings the cake .The feed each other.Laksh takes a lot of selfies
Then laksh goes and on the
Projector which starts playing showing all their childhood fight all the hugs all thoe friendship wala moments and that one holding hand in hand and walking at the end of the slide it comes with even luksh saying WILL U MAKE THIS BABU YOUR BOYFRIEND
S: (Starts crying )
L: what happenewd u dint like the surprise .sorry I will go no problem
Swara stops him
S: ullu ke phatte apna jawab nahi mangoge
L: (smiles) toh meri baby ka kya reply hai
S: nods her head in yes (shyly) turns
Laksh holds her hand and says uss din jo nahi hua aaj hoga swara. .She blushes .He pulls her towards him Song starts
Bheegi bheegi sadkon pe main
Tera intezaar karun
Dheere dheere dil ki zameen ko
Tere hi naam karun
Khudko main yoon kho doon
Ke phir na kabhi paaun
Haule haule zindagi ko
Ab tere hawaale karun
Sanam re, sanam re
Tu mera sanam hua re
Sanam re, sanam re
Tu mera sanam hua re
Karam re, karam re
Tera mujhpe karam hua re
Sanam re, sanam re
Tu mera sanam hua re
O ho…
Tere kareeb jo hone laga hoon
To toote saare bharam re
Sanam re, sanam re
Tu mera sanam hua re
Sanam re, sanam re
Tu mera sanam hua re
O ho…
Baadalon ki tarah hi toh
Tune mujhpe saaya kiya hai
Baarishon ki tarah hi toh
Tune khushiyon se bhigaya hai
Aandhiyon ki tarah hi toh
Tune hosh ko udaaya hai
Mera muqaddar sanwara hai yoon
Naya savera jo laaya hai tu
Tere sang hi bitaane hain mujhko
Mere saare janam re
Sanam re, sanam re (sanam re..)
Tu mera sanam hua re
Sanam re, sanam re (sanam re..)
Tu mera sanam hua re
Karam re, karam re (karam re..)
Tera mujhpe karam hua re
Sanam re, sanam re (sanam re..)
Tu mera sanam hua re
He puts her hair forward and kisses her.Swara turns and hugs him in shyness Laksh smiles (laksh wala smile)
HE lifts her head and kiss her on her forehead .She looks up at him .He looks at her.She understand and closes her eyes giving him permission .LAksh smiles and brings him closer to her.He holds her waist.He brings him more closer to her n they have a tight lip kiss.LAksh kisses her more pationetely .N she too kisses him .He then carries her and go to her room .
S: I love u laksh
L: I love u 2 mera shone
S ( crys) hearing those words after a long time
They again kiss each other.Laksh takes her to the bed. He kisses her on her neck face everywhere and they finally cossumate their marriage.She was sleeping on his chest under one blanket n they both were holding hands and hugging each oother comfortable in each others arms
<< It was Swara’s best bday .She got him back.She got her lucky back.That person who she missed like hell and she knew they no more were going to get separated .she knew they will be one.She knew he was and will always be there for her because>>
“TRUE LOVE NEVER DIES”
Hope u liked it friend.first time I wrote something like this .Comments mostly appreciated.if ay point was confusing ask me cause I have written this in a hurry
Love
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Credit to: Smiley
13 Comments
Its gud….especially ragini being more talkative than swara
Thank u so much do u want one more
Lv it…how did post pics and how much is ur age
agree ayesha
Super..SWALAK best os
awesome………. how did u add the epics??????????????????????????????
superb
Itz my pleasure that my writings can inspire anyone to write….ur os is very cute n sweet dear…keep writing 🙂
Welcome
superbb dear …
Oyy.. Ye tho mera naam hai yaar…. Can u tell ur name plzzzzzz
Wow…a veryy cute os…seriously loved it…thnk u
luvd ur os dear….
i also luv meher’s os..they r too good……
nd i really likd those pics which u added in ur os as they made it more attractive…
thanks fr such a cute story..