Hey guys ….
Back after a long time ….
Well i m here to give u an os nd my last piece of writing….
Last piece because i m fed up…fed up of this low comments…..guys dont feel bad but bura lagta h…bahut zyada…it hurts…but no worties i m strong never to show that i m hurt or something….but u know everything has a limit ….nd now this has reached its limit…..u know earlier i dont use to see the number of cmmnts but know i cant take it any more….many writers want cmmnt but they cant cmmnt…..akku , pavvu, roshini, sidhant, ananya , nd many more…inn loggon ne low cmmnts ki wajah se TU choda h…nothing else…nd now i m also gonna join them…i m leaving TU forever nd ever….nd would only visit for my loved ones…sammu di, nishu di, ammu nd many more….i support u guys..u had always encouraged me…..
Nd sorry Aamna tujhe jo samjhaya wahi nahi kr pa rahi khud….i stoped u from leaving na but see today i m leaving bcoz everyone here has forced me……
Sorry for being rude nd giving u such a big lecture….
BUT TODAY I REQUEST U ALL PLEASE DONT COMMENT ON MY OS…..PLEASE…
I DONT WANT U ALL TO COMMENT ON MY OS….
Plz i m sorry for being rude but a person is valued only after he leaves nd people realize his value…..so need to make u reakize a worth of a writer…..so one of them that is me…is leaving today to nevar come back…but i will be coming here for my loved once…who have supported me……
Byee guys…
FOREVER ND EVER…..BYEEEEE?????????
Lets move to the os…..
Its from supriya di collection….
Hii guys….
Hw r u all….
Well here i present u a OS on twinj…
Lets begin…
So U r ready for #OS of TwiNj
#Tu_Hai_To_Main_Hu
Scene 1 (At clg Campus)
Group of Boys were chilling & busy in flirting vid girls….. who where passing frm there……
Boy 1:- WoW !!!! what a figure…..
Boy2:- Ha Bhai Sahi bola…. ek dum Tota h…..
Then A boys cms there….
Boy 3:- Abe Rahul….mere bina hi start hogya ….
Rahul:- ..Dekh le. Varun….aagya apna Flirt King
Varun:- kaha tha tu #Kunj…….kitni hot chick ko miss kr diya tune….
(so guys Kunj ki entry ho gai)
Kunj:- sry Yaar….traffic me fas gya tha…..
Rahul sees a girl was cmng there…..
R- Kunj vo dekh….
K-ye kon h phele nai dekha kbhi….
V-. lgta h new h clg me….
K-hmmm
Rahul – Bhai maat dekh use tere type ki nai h…..
V- sahi bola Rahul…. Kunj uske Dress to dekh….lgta h pure Amritsar k kapde ko lapet liya ho……
K- kya yaar har waqt majak…. dekh use lgta h pareshan h vo …..ruk main aata hu…..
V-Oye …kaha chla…. ruk jaa
Kunj didn’t listen and go to the girl…..
Girl was wearing Long Kruti… leggings…. stole wrapped in her neck…. pony tail….. Specs….(total bhartiya nari)??
Kunj goes near to him….
K-Are U New in this College….
Girl :- Yes…..
K- Y r U looking so tensed…. u need any help….
Girl – Actually , I’m searching my class room…..
K- Oh…. R u in first year….
Girl- yes…
K- 2nd floor….left se 3rd room….
Girl-thank uh….
K-wlcm….by the way….I’m Kunj…… Kunj Sarna
Girl:-Twinkle……. Twinkle Taneja…..
(Twinkle bhi mil gai)
K- nice name…..
Tw- thank u…..
“Baby”….a voice cms from back…
TwiNj turned back…..
K- Ishika…. tm yaha…..
(Ishika Kunj’s so called GF…chipku type ki h….)
Is- Kyo tmhe achha nai lga….
K- Nai…aesa nai h….
Is-BTW ….tm yaha kya kr rahe ho….vo aese behanjii k saath…..
K- Ishikaaa…..
Tears cms in Twinkle eyes …..she go frm there….
Is- What happened Y R U screaming….
K- ntng…. Okk biee…See u later…..
Scene2 (Class Room)
Twinkle was stting in class….she see Kunj cmng in class…..
K- hey!!! I’m sorry aaj Jo bhi hua uske liye …..
Tw- It’s okkk….I’m fine…..
K-ty
Day over
★★★★★★
few day later
The Professor cms & announced about clg weekly magazine….
Pro:- So, students R U excited for show ur writing skills….
All student get excited…..they screamed “Yes Sir”
Twinkle (in her mind) wow ye to bilcul achha idea h….main apne feeling ko share kr skti hu…..
K- kya soch rai ho ….tm bhi likho gi kya….
Tw- Nai….mujhe ye sb nai aata
K- Oh….okk biee kal milte h ….mujhe abhi Club Jana h…..
Tw- Bieee……
Scene 3 (At Club)
Kunj Rahul Varun….. all were dancing…..Ishika cm there…. and hug Kunj from backside….
Is- Aww….Kunj Baby….I missed U so much…..
itne din kaha the dikhe nai…..
Kunj pulls her near….. move his hand sensually on Ishika waist….. she was wearing Crop top….showing her Naval& shorts…..
K- Miss u to…..
Is- really ….awww My Baby…..Luv Uh….
Ishika kiss Kunj…..
K- tmne call kyo nai kiya mujhe….
Is- Mujhe lga ki tm gussa ho ge mujhse us behnjii k chlte…..
K- Kon Behan jii…. vo Twinkle…. are vo bahut sweet bndii h aese maat bolo uske baare me….
Is- oh….vo sweet bhi ho gai….
K- Ohoo…. Ishu just leave it yaar…..don’t spoil my mood…
Is- I’m going live with ur mood….. bieee
K- Ishu…. wait ….Ishu…
Ishika left frm there…..
K-ye Ishika ka kuch nai ho skta…. ab ese manaa padega…..
Scene 4 (Clg Cafeteria)
Rahul- Kunj tune Clg magazine me #Tara ka column dekha…..
K- Tara kon Tara….jaha tk mera record h Ladkiyo k naam yaad rkhne ka….hmare clg me koi Tara nai h….
V- ha Kunj sahi bol raha….. shyd koi ho Jo apni identity chhipa raha ho…..
K- may be….Achha ye to bta likha kya h….
R-Okk….
#Love_Is_Life
Love means Pyaar…..Ek khoobsurat tohfa ….jo hme jeena sikhata h….aur mrna bhi….Ek Rishta deta h aur use nibhane ka taqat bhi…..Ye hme kamjoor bhi bnata h aur jarurt ho to Majboot bhi bnata h….Pyaar ka koi roop nai hota…vo to kabhi bhi kisi ko kahi bhi ho jata h…..Pyaar Ek Umeed h….Pyaar ek Vishwas h…..Pyaar Ek Rashta h …Pyaar hi Zindgi h……
#Tara (Actually It’s my real thinking…. Besides FF & OS I write Poem Cloumns)
Kunj was just listening what Rahul was saying…..
Varun- Kya likha h bhai…bilcul mere dimag se pare h ???
K- Rahul pta kr ki ye #Tara kon h ….akhir kon h jiske baato ne #Kunj_Sarna k dil ko chho liya….
Kunj was on mission searching #Tara …….
He didn’t find her……After 1 week again #Love_Is_Life column was published……Kunj was egerally waiting for this…..Day by Day Kunj thought about luv was changed by reading column……..
1month later
Kunj was totally fall for Tara ….he didn’t filrt with any girl and never tease…..he start attending his classes……whole clg was in surprized…….
Kunj was also in Twinkle class…..One day in class test Kunj got low marks……Twinkle scores good marks…….. Prof. Scold him……he get sad
After class
K-hey! Twinkle
Tw-hmm…..bolo
K-can u help me
Tw- what me & help
K-yup ,can u help me in study….plz don’t say no,…pls
After thinking Twinkle nods yes
Kunj hugs her and say thank u Twinkle
Tw-ok….. But tmhe mere ghar aana hoga studies k liye……
K- Ok….main aajunga…….
Kunj goes daily at her home…….they bcm frnd after smtym……
One day he asked
K- Twinkle tm Tara ko janti ho kya
Tw -Nai kyo kuch kaam tha kya
K-ab tmse kya chhipau ;yaar I like Tara
Tw-tm to use janta bhi nai ho phir
K-vo sb main nai janta ….bs itna pta h ki I like her
TwiNj spend many tym with echothr
Kunj started feeling for Twinkle
Kunj(pov) har din mujhe kuch naya dikhta h Twinkle me…..iski smile iski baate …..bilcul us Tara jaise lgte h…pta nai vo mujhe kb milegi…..kabhi milegi to use thanks jarur bolunga,….usne mujhe pyaar ki sahi pehchan krvai h
He started falling for her but he didn’t tell for the sake of frndshp….
TwiNj were very close to echothr….they loved their company…..
Whole clg were gossiping about them…..
Ishikaa get angry
One day she goes to Kunj
Is-Kunj what is this
K- what
Is-whole clg is talking about u & that bhen ji Twinkle
K-stop this Ishikaa ,maine kitni baar bola h Twinkle k baare me kbhi glt nai bolo
Is-kyo
K-cuz I l…..(he stopped)she is my frnd., that’s all
Is-Oh u & u r so called frnd…… I don’t know kya jaadu kiya h us Twinkle ne…..
K-dekho mere pass tym nai h tmhari bekar k baato k liye…..
Kunj goes frm there
Ishikaa :- is Twinkle ka kuch to krna hoga
at night
Kunj was thinking about Twinkle……he think to meet with her….he goes to her house
Twinkle was in washroom …..Kunj silently in her room….frm window…..
Books ¬e book were on bed
K(pov) lgata h ye padhai kr rai …..dekhta hu kya padh rai thi
He picks a note book and open it he get shocked cuz in it #Love_Is_Life was written……
He smiles and ki$s the notebook
K(pov) iska mtlb Twinkle hi Tara….lekin jb maine usse puchha to usne bataya kyo nai….
Then Twinkle cm out …she was shocked
Tw-are Kunj tm yaha itni raat koi problm h kya
Kunj smiles and says ha,prblm thi but ab slove ho gai …..bie kal milte hai…
Next day
Ishikaa scold Twinkle and say Why she snatch Kunj frm her…..tmne khud ko dekha h kbhi…..Kunj k baare me kabhi sochna bhi maat
Twinkle was crying leave the place ……reached home….she was mentally distrubed .
Tw(pov)hw I luv Kunj …..he allways considerd me as frnd……he never love me…..he luv #Tara …..but how i tell him ki Tara to koi h hi nai…..agr use pta chla ki main hi Tara hu to use bahut hi bura lagega….kahi vo hmari frndshp na tod de…..nai main aisa nai hone dungi…..main kya kru ….kabhi na kbhi use pta chlega hi…..pta nai vo kaisa react krega…..
She was depressed so she eat high dose of sleeping pills….and fainted
Here Kunj was cmng to confess his feeling….
K(pov) I’m cmng Tara opps Twinkle….bs kuch der aur….
He reached @ her home ….he see Twinkle was laying unconcious on floor ….he screamed
K- twinkle wake up what happed to u
he see sleeping pills he shocked….fastly he went to hospital
Twinkle was in ICU….Kunj was crying for her…..after smtym Doctor cm and said she is out of danger he can meet her
Kunj go to her …..he was crying…Tw was also crying
K(fake angry mood) ye siyapaa krne ko kisne bola tha…..tmhe pta h na ki main tmhare bina nai reh skta… #Tara
Tw get shocked tmhe sb pta h …I’m sorry Kunj mujhe lga ki tm mujh se dur chle jao ge agr maine tmhe btaya ki main hi #Tara hu
K-tu bilcul pgl h kya …..agr tujhe kuch ho jata to mera kya hota…. Twinkle k bina Kunj adhura h….. Main tujhe kabhi khone k baare me soch bhi nai skta hu…..kyoki
#Tu_Hai_To_Main_Hu
I love u Twinkle….she also reply luv u 2 Kunj
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They share a sweet hug…they promised that they never leave eachother.
Happy Ending
Screen Freezes
Thats all…
Here it ends…..
Hope u like it….
Byeee….
Love u….
Urs….
Preshuuu?????
Aaj dil ko puri taraf chot de kr yaha sabhi se nata chod kr jaa rahi hun..kabhi wapas na aane k liye …..BYEEE
PLZ DON’T COMMENT…IT’S A REQUEST….
SORRY ONCE AGAIN FOR BEING RUDE…BUT AB HADD PAR HO CHUKI THI…..
BYEEEEE…
BE HAPOY…
KEEP SMILING…
ALL THE BEST TO EVERYONE….
31 Comments
Sooooo sweeet os prisha
I love it
Pls don’t stop writing
I m real y sryy for not commenting
Plssssss maf kardo
thanks
Nice os presha ?❤️?
Di
What you are saying
Please don’t leave TU
I will not be able to comment as I said in my ff
I was hell busy with my studies
But today I was free and thought to open TU to post my ff But what you said made floor slipped beneath my foot
So,sorry for not commenting on your writings
Please don’t do this
You also know that all are busy with their studies and are not able to give time on commenting as well as reading
You better know about this
And I was also busy with my studies
A big SORRY for that
But it’s your decision and I will always give my opinion that don’t leave TU
Old writers are living TU and because of this we are loosing interest in writing and reading.
Anyways
I appreciate your writing skills?????
The os was mind blowing……outstanding…….speechless……marvellous……amazing. ……fabulous…..awesome ❤
U nailed it❤
Loved it to the core ❤
Love u
Keep smiling
And please don’t leave us
Take care
Nice and hope u will don’t quit tu as ur the one of my fav writer. Sorry I can’t help myself from commenting here as u said not to. Hope u will came back. Miss u and at least write for your regular comenter
Bujji kya hua tuje plzzzz aisa mat karo plzzzz bujji
U can’t do like that my baby plzzzz for me yar
Btw os was just superb awesome amazing
Just loved it
Plzzzz na bujji do continue ur journey see i was also decided to leave tu due to low comments for ur sake iam continuing here
Hope u change ur decision
Loads of love
Urs
Nishu di ???????
thanks
Omg..!?????
Ye kya kar diya preshuuuu..!
I agreee…k cmnts nai milte..muje b nai milte..but pls dont do like this yaaar..
Pls dont leave..????..
Plsss yaaar..
Achcha ek baat bolu..
Ham likhte hai to hamare shok se likhte hai right..?
Haan..!! We expect support encouragement from those who read…
But jo cmnt nai karta uske liye TU chodna thik nahi hai yaaar…
Bas cmnts ki wajah se tu tera shok…ur love for writing..kaise chid sakti hai..?
Plss dont..
Cmnts sab ke ff par hi kam aati hai preshu..
U,me..n every1..
For once i had thought too..
But kisine muje bola…(my reader) ki muje un ko dekhna chahiye…jo mere writing ko like/love karte hai..!
Jo mere ff k liye wait karte hai..
Bas kuch 2-3 jo cmnt nai karte uskeliye itne sab jo support karte hai..unhe hurt nahi karna chahiye…
M i right..?
N u knowww..mene isiliye cntinue kiya hai..
N presha..see upar ke cmnts…evry1 is sad..
Sab ko rula kar jaayegi kya..???
Pls mat jaa yaaar…plssss…
U write amazing..!!.n i m sure every1 loved it…but if they dont respond that doesnt mean ,they dont like it..!.pls meri baat par sochna…
Those who dont cmnt..unhe koi fark nai padega..but those who do..?
Unka kyaa..???
Plsss aisa na karrr…!!
Love u jaaaann…
N plsss think about it..??
yrrr preshu kya bol rahi ……..tu itni tension kyu le rahi h meri sweety ?????. maanti hu me cmt. kam h dear aur pata nahi aesa kyo ho raha h ???
pr my cute sis. hum to tere regular reader h aur regular cmt. ke saath apna pyaar bhi bhejte h to plzzzz to aesa mat kr na plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzxzzzzzzzzzzxzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
tu mujhe ager apni sis. friend ya tune mujhe thoda sa bhi apna maana ho to plzz aesa mat krna OK……..
aur ab Teri marzi h????
os was fabulous amazing awesome??????
dekhti hu tu mujhe kitna apna maanti h dekhti hu aaj??????
luv u
thanks
Loved the os di. …….plz don’t stop writing. …l really love ur writing. ..sorry for not comment. ..but plz don’t leave. ..If you leave then one good writter will lost like others. …plz di. ..agar ayasa hota raha too tei apna har writter kho dega. …plz don’t leave. …
Thanks
preshu……iye kya baat hain…..!!!!
hasn manti pichle epi me maine cmmnt nahi kiya par maine reason bataya tha. . . . . . . . . ?????
tu aisa kaise kar sakti hain jaan
tu hum sab ko chod kar chali jayegi. ….
tu mujhe dekh mujhe 10 se jyada cmmnts kabhi nahi mila
haaaan sach me bohot dukh hota hain jab koi humare hard work ko encourage nahi karta……!!!!
but tere regular readers…..!!!
unka kya hoga yaar……!!!!
wo sab to bikhar jayenge na…..
I’m hell angry with u….??????
tu aisa decision kaise le sakti hain yaar preshu. ……???
tujhe hume dukh dene ka bohot shok hain na…..!!!!!
achha Q na dogi dukh…..hum apke lagte kaun….ek bin bulaya mehmaan hi na….
mat sun humari baat…..sirf apni manmani kar…..par yaad rakh …..tu chali jayegi to main bhi TU se rishta tod dungi….!!!!?????
mujhe aye hue 3 mahine bhi nahi hue……….!!!!
agar aap aisa karenge to hum sab rishta tod denge TU se
aur fir kya SIDMIN ke yaade bhi mar jayenge….!!!!?????
sab bhul jayenge ki sidmin aka twinj naamke koi couple bhi tha…..!!!
jo kabhi humari jaan bhi hua karti thi…
Aap mujhse insta pe miliye….dikhati hun main aapko….TU chirne ka anjaam…..bhugatne ke liye taiyaar rahiye madam prashansha aggrawal …?????????????
sun agar tune kabhi mujhe thoda bhi friend ki jagah diya hain to tu aisa kabhi nahi karegi……!!!
I’M HELL ANGRY WITH U ???
DON’T TALK WITH ME. …..
LOVE U BUT TEMPORARILY HATE U ….???
bat na kar mujhse…..dont ever talk to me……bad girl…????
tu kha h yrrr …….kab post karegi apne ff??????. me bahut din se soch rahi hu lekin bhul jati thi ………kab aa rahi h tu dear wapis???
aur kya bola tune tu bhi tu chod degi are yrrr meri ek sis. to Mann nahi rahi h(jiska ab pta chalega ki vo mujhe sis. maanti bhi h ya nahi) ab meri dusri sis. MATLAB tu bhi Jane ki baat krne lagi ab tu bhi mujhe apna nahi maanti kya?????
yrr koi bhi ye tu chodkar Jane ki baat krta h na to mujhe hurt hota h dear ???
plzzzz come back soon dear
luv u
luv u all of u
Nice
Pls don’t discontinue
? awesome. Os luv it soo much.
Plz dont leave TU it needs a good writer like u i am fan of ur writing. Di plz mat jao it’s a request. Plz we all luv ur writing. So much
thanks
Very good bahut accha kiya!! Well done ???…..Yeh sunna chahati ho??? Bilkul galat kiya Hai ????….Main toh kuch hu hi khaahan….I have also got less Comments , I feel fed up but still I love writing and also for the regular commentators…But you have proved that New commenters value nothing…Only some handful people whom you love!….Bye Preshu aka Prashansa di….
Hope you change your decision soon ??
Love you forever ??
It was very nice yaar n I want force I for anything but just one that is agar sabh Log a see karnge ok kaam comments to we will leave you kaise chale ga . I know I give ideas to ppl about stories as I can’t write but I r such a brilliant writer I know dheere dheere ham are twinj ka vm’ s, is, ff sab kaam ho rahe Hain haamre twinj khatma ho karnge I won’t force but think about i.e. decision
ty dear
I seriously don’t know preshu what to sayyy ????????????????????????????…
.
U know when u have DM on Instagram to read the os I was shocked n thinking about it only why u said that and yesss my guess was correct …u decided to leave writing ..
??????????????????????????…
Just tell me why u have started writing haan ….coz u loved do it right ?????? …I know for a writer appreciation needs the most and I am not saying you are wrong but your decision to leave writing is wrong yaar completely wrong ..what if me and others also stopped ????? ..would you like it …no right sooooooooooooooo we are here who love your writings the most….
Now the decision is completely upon you I won’t force you for anything .
Well lovely os loveddddddd it was a amazinggggg …
✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌
ty Sam
Amazing…n plzzzz don’t discontinue
Pagal ladki puri ki puri pagal hai
Don’t ever say like this
Varna tujhe pata had I won’t leave you
Dare you leave tu
Love you keep smiling
Sorrrrrrrrryyyyyyyy???????????? Persha plzzzzzz don’t leave TU …. plzźzźzzzzzzzzzzzzzzźzzzz????????? …. os was awsm…. superb…. just Luvd it….
Byeeee….
ty for liking my work
I know Preshu It’s hard to leave TU…but ab decision le liya h to I won’t stop u…
BTW thanks for posting my OS…and giving me credit…luv u…n Miss u…
Hi confidential speaking…Haad hae yaar….not fair…jab maine TU nahi choda tum kese chod sakti ho…Matlb like seriously what was that…don’t cmt…sry I am rude…yesssss u were rude…tu chodna is this the solution…okk if it was then come on I will also leave TU…come let’s leave together…is it ok….ans me…mujhe bhi bahat Kaam cmt mile hae…jab se aayi hu tab se kaam cmt but may aise quit nahi kiya…tei memories alive…u r an awesome writer….no doubt u r…..but I am very dissappointed…when u ended ur ff I was so sad n I even…(complete it urself otherelse u will know who I am n I don’t want that to happen) but u came up with a new one…now it’s upto u…I have nothing to say…leaving TU COZ of less cmt…okk I know I hurt u very badly with my words…but it hurting me as well
..leaving TU…….all in ur hand….
Are i m not leaving TU…
I had posted my ff mending of broken heart…
Nd i had even apolozised too…
Sorry yaar…
But haa one thing…
I really want to know who r u…
So tell me naa…??
Plz plz plz…
Love u..
Yeh baat ne dil khush kardiya…I wanted toi tell who I am but but I don’t know who I am…I lost my memory…
osm os ♥
loved it ♥