**************#TU_MERI_MANNAT PART-35*******
~~~~~~~#BHANU
RECAP; sathvik creating more misunderstandings b/w swasan nd swara sudden decision to leave for London
************episode starts*******
scence1, 10pm
lucky is searching for sanskar to say about swara sudden london trip
he gets a call from an unknown number
person ; hello a car belong to s nd s group had meet with an accident the person in car is seriously injured
lucky ; (shocked ) wt where nd when
person ; said the address (lucky rushed )
scene2, swara room
swara is packing her bag nd ragini came in hurry to stop swara
ragini; swara plz y ur leaving to london all of sudden
swara; no i had decided earlier only but now i got huge opportunity now so its urgent to leave
ragini; (seen her tears ) are u fine swara ?
swara; (cleared her tears) ha i am fine plz don’t ask any questions let me goo
ragini;no answer me swara even from mrg i not found sanskar too its ur bday but u both are on there own worlds ,now this shock
swara; y ur asking me about him i dont know anything ,nothing happened b/w as
ragini; (understood that they had clash) am i asked you that “wt happened b/w u nd sanskar ?”
swara; took the bag nd about to leave
ragini; (stood in middle ) it means you both fought again
swara; see rags i was not interested in stupid conversations its my flight time so let me go
ragini; (held her shoulders) look at me swara
swara; (downed her eyes ) rags plz i can’t answer you plz let me go plz don’t make it more hard to mee
ragini ;(hugged her ) swara u know “ur the best one for sanskar you both are born to be one ”
“u never shared ur pain with mee u always hidded it
remember one thing i was here to help you nd support you always” .
swara;(hugged her back nd cried)( in mind ) i know you love me so much di so i can’t show my pain to anyone bcoz it hurts you all too ,so i was running away
ragini; swaraaaa say me na plz
swara; (hidded her tears nd broken the hug ) no di ntg like that takecare of mom nd dad
ragini; swara plz come back soon
swara ; gave a smile nd left to hall where sumi ,shekhar,dp nd ap are waiting she took blessing from everyone
dp ; swara shall we to come to drop you to airport
swara; no uncle i will manage
scene3,airport 11.30pm
swara nd Shekhar left to airport swara is restless her heart is saying don’t go but her brain had fixed to go , she is hanging in thoughts nd she is feeling pain of losing sanskar on that second
otherside lucky reached sanskar ,
sanskar is full on blood on road his car had been crushed into pics he had fallen unconscious nd blood is flowing like river from his head
lucky checked the pulse rate of his heart nd did necessary first aid by stopping blood flow before reaching hospital
11.45pm ,they reached hospital
ICU ,lucky is very nervous he did lot of surgeries but now his hands are shivering he called ragini nd informed the matter nd ragini in shock rushed to raglak hospital
both families too rushed to hospital
12.00am ,airport sathvik arrived to meet swara nd shekhar
shekhar is speaking in ph with someone from last 20
sathvik; hi swara do u really wanna goo
swara; hi yes i need to go
sathvik ; ok its late go get ur boardibg pass
swara; (shocked to see his hurry ) ha dad is coming i will go
shekhar ; beta i made ur arrangements in london too here is number feed in ur phone
swara; (she broken her phone na in mrg) oh no dad i lost my ph
shekhar ; wt y cant you say before how u will manage without ph u better have my ph
sathvik; uncle its ok i brought new ph for her (he gave a b=gift box to swara)
shekhar ; call me as you reach london ( kissed her on forhead )
swara;(hugged shekhar ) takecare papa love you
sathvik; bye swara comeback soon ( he gave a side hug )
swara; bye sathvik nd i am sorry if i had hurted you from sanskar too
sanskar is really gud but he has short temper plz takecare of him too
sathvik; ha ha i know ,happy journey (swara left )
sathvik; uncle plz give ur ph i need to do an urgent call (shekhar handled his ph )
sathvik took the phone nd switched it off nd with an evil smile ‘ bye swara i will meet you soon nd ur sanskar i took more care now so he is in icu ”
otherside raglak hospital ,12.20am
sanskar lost in coma after surgery ,ragini is repeatedly calling to swara nd shekhar but both phones are switched off
ragini ;swara plz stop ur sanskar need you plz Bhagwan Ji plz make swara realise it
12.30am ,swara flight
swara is restless flight is gonna take off
swara; (in mind ) y i was feeling that its my wrong decision ?
why i was feeling that something is wrong ?
why i was feeling that my life is gonna end ?
why swara why ?
(cries ) swara how worthless your , you lost ur love ,”sanskar don’t love you just go away from his life too ”
flight takenoff swara left to london
shekhar is waiting in car for sathvik
sathvik switched on ph nd gave to shekhar innocently
as soon as the ph got on ragini called him nd said about sanskar
shekhar; (shocked ) wt how ,swara had left already
ragini; wt (ragini dropped the ph )
shekhar nd sathvik rushed to hospital
1.30am ,raglak hospital
sanskar in coma raglak are observing him
both the families are crying all are confused by this all things just in one day two shocks
scene 4, london 8pm
swara flight got landed nd she reached her flat
BG SONG; JUDAII SONG
Ranjhan dhoondhan main chaleya
Ranjhan mileya naa ye…
Jigraan vichon agan laga ke Rabba
Laqeeran vich likh di judaai
(AND REMBERED SANSKAR ND CRIED BADLY BY SEEING HIS PHOTO )
Kho gaya, gum ho gaya
Waqt se churaya tha jo
Apna banaya tha..
Ho tera, woh mera
Saath nibhaaya tha jo
Apna banaya tha..
(OTHER SIDE SANSKAR IN COMA THE TEARS ARE STILL ALIVE )
Chadariya jheeni re jheeni
Chadariya jheeni re jheeni
Aankhein bheeni ye bheeni ye bheeni
Yaadein jheeni re jheeni re jheeni (x2)
she is tried of crying so fallen a sleep without opening the phone
otherside ,sathvik in his room
nd sathvik moved towards sanskar nd swara photo with a evil smile he sat beside him
sathvik; (took the bracelet from his pocket its sanskars which is gifted by swara ) sanskar ur everything is mine now you lost swara
***********flash back ******
8.30pm night
sanskar in club full on durken he got a call from unknown
unknown; hello mr. Maheshwari ur love is gonna leave this country
sanskar; wt does it mean
unknown ; come to my place u will know (he said a address )
sanskar rushed to said address he is driving rash he about to reach the address but suddenly a huge truck hitted his car his car bounced nd hitted a tree nd fallen out of car unconscious
a person in red shirt blue jeans got down from other door of truck nd came towards sanskar
sanskar maheswari i am sorry to kill you but plz die once for sathvik varma plz (shock -6)
yes its sathvik who called sanskar nd tried to kill him
sathvik with a evil smile checked his pulse ” oh no ur strong ur still alive let me finish you (he dragged his bracelet of swars nd took the revolver to shhot but he heard a sound of car so he lets him nd runned away innocently towards airport
*******flashback ends *****
sathvik ; ( to sanskar photo with a evil smile ) you love swara and i want swara but she loves you ,
so she said she gonna leave too London
how can i let her go so i decided to kill you atleast ur death will stop her but ur alive my bad luck
‘if she know about ur accident she will forget everything nd come running to you ,but i won’t let u be one so i well-planned nd gave a send off to her
now you see sanskar how i will create a rift b/w you nd swara
gud ngt sweet heart i will come to London soon ‘u nd me ‘
screen freezes
************ to be continued ********
precap; shock no ;7 sathvik plan nd 10months leap
(sry to inform but plz bear me i increased no of shocks 7 to 11 but trust me i will trun it a unique one )
#BHANU
55 Comments
Was waiting for ur ff frm mrng… one full day.. cha… nw nly im seeing it…
okiee coming to story.. it ws too emotional… judaai song made me cry… bt nly few drops :p
superb awesome chapie….
really gonna kill sathvik… hate him…
nw waiting for nxt part… too excited.
Hi bhanu…hw ru??
Tc dr… no worries..bye dr
sry navi dear i made you wait
thankyou so much i was very happy that ur loving my writings
coming to sathvik he will pay back soon
Ya at its feeding worse I didn’t expect this from u it’s not good
sry if i had hurted you by this update can you say me reason why u felt bad
You now you are shock Queen kitne shock Do gi
thankyou dear nd few more shocks but trust me u will like it
oh no swasan alag hogaye plz unhe jldi mila do
one more part you will know your answer
I think Ur are in love with the idea shocks dear….
But it’s good way to keep us entertain us….once again requesting you don’t leave this sathvik go easily with all he has done with swasan.
NO ABSOULTLY BUT SOME FAR FOR THRILL I ADDED THIS SHOCKS
I TOO HATE SATHVIK MUCH HE WILL PAY MORE
ohh bhanu.. I cant take this heart attacks more
HA HA FEW MORE AHH PLZ
awesowe yaar
THANKS KAVYA
Plz dear no more shock…plzz expose dis sathvik soon..he is just a bl***y creep…btw nice epi itz very emotional
HE WILL GET EXPOSED SOON
KEEP READING
What Yarr u r literally giving me heart attacks I am still crying while writing this plz dear now plz end this shocks soon
HO SRY NIKITA TO MAKE YOU CRY
UPCOMING SHOCKS WILL CHANGE UR MOOD
m fan of ur writing yaar. hats off
superb writing
THANKYOU SO MUCH TANI IT MEAN ALOT TO MEE
soo emotional n don’t separate swasan
SEPARATION NEVER HAPPENS ITS JUST A SHORT SPAN DEAR
No yarrrr……plz don’t make them 11 plz..
While reading episode I felt…omg I need bear one more……but you gave another shock …11…
I Dont want that idiot sathvik……plz make him die……I can’t see swara n sanskar…I want them as season…plz… If you don’t want compromise then post asap so..that this tract ends fastly…….sry for very long comment
DONT WORRY DEAR SHOCK SEVEN ONLY HAS SATHVIK
I WAS ALSO TRYING TO END FASTER BUT MY SCHEDULE IS NOT LETTING MEE
PLZ BEAR MEE ND SRY FOR INCONVIENCE
Bhanu…..I didn’t mean that….. I just want you to update fast ..so that this sathvik will get his punishment…..
N you Dont even try end your ff….k.?
How is your hand pain dear…???
Ok dear i will make my track fast
Any story should end na so i got this thought
My hand is fine 10 more days my bandage will be removed too
please unite swasan soon…
thanks for commenting it will be in unusual way soon
u r too gud i was a silent reader but i ll tell u to please book a room in hospital for me 😉 no more shocks plz 😉
n plz try updating fast
thanks so much sr nd i wont let my readers hospitalize
i will entertain you much
Nice
thanks alia
swasan judaai??? First, u give us these many shocks and now leap…..god knows how will i manage through this. Upload soon dear.
😉 vyshu dear trust me u will enjoy it
so many huge things gonna happen so keep reading
nd thanks for commenting
awesome…..hope ur shocks unite swasan soon
thanks shan
Oh god…. My hrt beat stop for a moment… N that blo*dy sathvik…huh sanskar ll kill him…
oh sry to make you scare nd thanks for commenting
so bad for swara and sanskar………awesome epi…….
thanks dear
Hi Bhanu di .
Ur an awesome writer di .
I read your ff in one go .
It’s an awesome ff I have ever read di.
Btw the swasan separation track is very sad di .
Plz di unite swasan soon.
Bye di
Wow thanks alot hanya it mean alot
Just u ppl are making me write
They will unite asap
Thank u di then it would great
Please upload it soon I will be waiting
And thank u for responding to comment
Awesome dear …BT too emotional
Thanks Anu dear
nyc..
Thanks ?
extremely shocking ..
but u were wonderful as always..
try to update d next one soon.:-)
extremely shocking ..
but u were wonderful as always..
how can u write so well bhanu??
but ya awesome nd emotional one ..
try to update d next one soon.:-)
Thanks alot Riya tomorrow I will update?
Khaan pakadke sorry for the late comment…….
Whether u expect my comment or not…I love to comment and this chappy is the shockest of all shock to me…???
Loved it….sanky get up!!!!
swara come back!!!
Waiting for next eagerly….
I always wait for comment of my regular readers mainly you dharsha
I am so happy ? that ur liking my updates
Thank you so much dear?
Omg omg u want me to die at
One tym( just kidding) only after soo many days i read all epi in one go becoz my phone was not supporting but it shocking yaar means you just nailed it all epi were fab but i can’t bear shockz till 11 plzz just till 8 isz okay but 11 …………….. . And PLZZZ DAILY UPDATE AND YOU ARE JUST AMAZING DEAR AND PLZZ KILL THAT b*****SATHVIK AND plzz unite them soon means asap plzzz plZzzzzz its a BIG REQUEST PLZZZ 🙂
Thank you so much ishu
It mean alot for mee
I will try to reduce shocks
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