*****#TU_MERI_MANNAT PART-76 last maha episode *********
~~~~~~~~~#BHANU
sry for late guys but i wrote an os on that two day here is link
fb link; https://www.facebook.com/SwaSan.FanFictions.OS/posts/1082916735096919:0
if you want read it no force to comment or ;like as its just a trail i am happy by this
nd nextly for previous part ur response is amzing but ur concentration is on precap more then episode π
recap; sathvik reentry nd swasan suhgraat in jail
**********episode starts ***********
jail, VIP cell
Swara waken up in mrg 5.30 am
She tried to get up but she could not bcoz sanskar is sleeping by hugging her hard
Swara removed his hands from her waist ND grabbed his shirt ND wored it ND collected her clothes which are fallen on floor she weared her jeans ND tshirt ND came out
She about to grab her shirt which is under sanskar head but in meanwhile he waken up ND pulled swara she just landed on his chest
Sanskar while tucking her hair ” gud mrg love ”
Swara: Gud mrg sanskar give my shirt
Sanskar : Y so hurry ha you know wt its like dream for me
Swara: Ohh its true only not a dream ok
Sanskar rolled her on bed nd he came on top of her
In husy tone” shall I try once again
Swara was shocked but she dont wanna say noo
Swara: Arey sanskar someone may come
Sanskar: Oh wt happened this fear yesterday ngt ah
Swara is speechless ” woh woh
Sanskar claimed her lips with his its a slow only but later its passionate even swara is reciprocating that with dual passion
But there are mixed thoughts in her mind
Sanskar pulled her close by holding her his hands are caressing her back inside the shirt
Swara dont wanna stop him
Sanskar kissed her collar bone nd wrapped him self around her neck sensually
Sanskar looked at swara who is closing her eyes
Sanskar: I love you swara we will do continuation in our dreamland now wear your shirt by saying this he gave her shirt ND left
Swara dressed up nd she gave sanskar shirt
Sanskar wore it
7.30am inspector came back
He opened the cell to get swara out
Swara: Got up I need to leave sanskar you Pl take care ah
Sanskar: Ok swara you too only one day I can get bail by tomorrow
Swara : Ha you will be out tomorrow
Sanskar waved a bye ND swara about to goo but she know it may be her last chance to meet her love
Swara runned towards sanskar ND hugged him tears ” I love you sanskar I love you more
Sanskar is shocked to see her so emotional she is crying like a kid by hugging him
Sanskar by carressing her hair ” swara clam down I am happy my love
swara you can go just one day na from tommrow we will be together forever
swara; forever ahh
sanskar; ha forever nd ever
Swara left his hand in teary eyes
Swara left to maheswari mansion
All are waiting for her its a Sunday unlike all happy Sundays its very sad οΏ½
Rags: Swara u came where are you from ngt
Swara: Woh
Rags: Its ok get ready we will go to meet sanskar
Swara: Noo u all go
Everyone are shocked
Rags: Wt you dont wanna come
Swara: Haa I dont want to come I had some important work
Shekhar: Wt work its more then ur husband ah
Swara: I had lot of things to do plz you go I am feeling sleepy
She left to her room in tears
All are confused by swara behaviour
They went to meet sanskar ND came back after lunch
Swara is in room only
Sumi knocked the door swara came opened the door
Sumi : Swara dont you wanna have lunch
Swara: No I am not angry
Sumi : Noo u don’t know how much cone I will feed
Swara: Ha
Sumi feed swara with her hand
Swara is having tears in her eyes
Sunday: Swara y ur crying
Swara: Maa woh ntg I love you maa ( she hugged sumi in tears)
Sumi: Placed the plate a side I love you too beta
Swara sleep on her lap ” maa you will do anything for dad
Sumi: Ha swara its a duty if wife to take care of husband
Swara really will you do anything for dad
Sumi: Ha anything
Swara: Even its wrong you will ah
Sumi: Swara y ur asking such questions
Swara: Plz answerr na maa
Sumi: Haa if the wrong won’t harm anyone rather then mee I will doo
Swara felt she is right now
Sanskar could feel
Swara seen the shirt of sanskar which is lying besid her on couch the same shirt wt sanskaer weared on day first ngt
Swara hugged the shirt in tears by feeling it as sanskar
She opened his laptop ND did an selfie video ( will show it later in epilouge i will add it )
Swara cried hard nd its 5.30 she left to meet sathvik
She left as the way she is she did not even took shower after coming from jail
Swara left down
Raglak: Where ur going now
Swara: ( avoided) eye contact woh I had work
Rags: Look at nee and answer swara where ur goinggg ( she asked in straight
Swara: Hugged rags ) I dont wanna answer you di but I wanna goo now bye ND take care of our family ND my sanskar too
Rags: Confused wt
Swara left out by saying ” bye tc ”
Raglak stood confused οΏ½
swara left to hotel key
hotel key , room num 201
sathvik is waiting for swara nd swara entered in fear
sathvik; (excited) wow you came wth a punctuality
swara; (tears she did not utter a word she stood like statue
sathvik; y ur so dull don’t worry ur husband is safe (swara stood numb )
sathvik; did you said this to ur sanskar
swara; (in tears ) no he cant bear this
sathvik; (evil smile ) i love it i like his downfall let me enjoy
(he grabbed his ph nd dailed inspector nd inspector gave ph to sanskar its an video call
sanskar is surprised that who will call him in such a position that to inspector is hearing
sathvik; (dangerous tone ) hi sanskar how is ur jail
sanskar; (shocked to see sathvik ) ur out
sathvik; yes i am out nd ur inn
sanskar; (shocked )how its possible who gave you bail
sathvik; everything is possible for mee
you know wt ur wife is in my arms today
sanskar; (double shocked) wtttt hold ur words or else
sathvik; orelse wt ahh (he dragged sw2ara nd hugged her from back by placing his hand around her waist nd other he held ph )
sanskar is shocked he raged in angry ” how dare you to touch my swara
sathvik; arey y ur angry for this only ha
“she herself came to mee nd i gonna spend a night with ur love with ur wife
sanskar blood boiled in seconds he wanna hit sathvik he twisted his fist in angry
sathvik ; true sanskar if you wanna know ask ur wife
swara ; is speechless tears of helplessness are flooing down from her cheecks
sathvik; (moved his hand on her waist sensouly ) answer na baby ur husband want ur answer
swara ; nodded nooo
sathvik; (gritted his teeth in angry)say ur doing this naa orelse you know wts next
swara; ha yess(she shouted in tears )
sanskar;(all shocked tears are rolled out its like the earth had collapsed ) noo how can you do this swara
noo my swara can’t do this i know you cant
sathvik; (evil smile ) she will do anything i say
sanskar now ur wife is mine so finally i won everything
sanskar is fully blank “say na swara its not true plz swara y ur hurting urself swara plz come back
i am reAdy to leave in jail for rest of my life but plz dont agree to that stupid plz swara plz
inspector is starting sanskar helplessly he wanna help him but he is also trapped
swara; i am sry sanskar plz forgive mee
sathvik; now its my time sanskar i destroyed ur life completely ntg left to you (he ended the call by kissing swara on cheecks )
sanskar ; (fallen on kness in tears his only life his everything is in dangerous nd he is blocked in jail
sathvik to swara; wow i happy today
you know wt i am waiting for this day from long time
swara ; (pushed him with a force) i hate you you bl**dy vamp i hate youu
sathvik; are cool darling you can hate mee tomorrow
swara; y ur hurting as plz leave as
sathvik; ha i will leave you but after completing my revenge
even my bhai is trapped
swara; wt
sathvik; ha o that day you seen me in jail na yesterday its my bhai Santhosh
********flashback******
on the day swasan marriage
when shekhar said no to rp Santhosh left to meet sathvik in jail
sathvik; in tears bhai plz get me out i cant leave i will die plz
sonthosh; no plz wait for a weak you can be out
sathvik; oh i wanna get out for two days at least bhai plz
sonthosh (innocent) how
satyhvik; we are both alike na soo we will get exchange plz
sonthosh due to love towards his bhai he did as sathvik says amar helped them so sathvik is out
swara is shocked to see his cruelty he trapped his own brother
sathvik; kya hua baby ur shocked ah
swara; ten how the flyover collapsed
sathvik; ohh its not my plan its all amar plan he placed a bomb nd blasted the flyover on right time he only provoked ppl to blame sanskar nd public are fools they believed wtever he said
swara; shocked ) you internally hurted that many innocent ppl
sathvik; i am sry for that i thought noone should get hurt but that stupid amar changed plan so only he got arrested
swara; (gave a tight slap to sathvik) how can you both step so loww how can you hurt inncent ppl
sathvik; stood blank)
swara; you know wt sathvik u never loved anyone nd i never hated you i always treated you as gud frnd but you never been truthful
i came to you when sanskar hurted mee i thought you will understand my pain on that time i just wannted a person to listen nd understand my pain but i never realized that ur the reason for all that pain
my sanskar is always right about you but i am a fool who trusted you blindly
even now i am doing same by trusting you noww just to save my love
nd now you won bcoz i am ready to lose myself so you wont
you never won anything you can grabbed other happiness nd thinking that you won’t
u such a cheap person if your mom knows this even she feel shamed to say that ur her son
sathvik slapped her with a force she had fallen on bed blood ozed out from her corner of lips
sathvik; i dont wanna listen your stupid conversation don’t you try to give lecture to mee
swara is speechless she is waiting for the reaction of posion
sathvik; come on top of her to seek his revenge but his mind is thinking swara
swara tried to push him back but he is storng he brushed his thoughts nd pinned her hands on the top nd kissed her neck
he culd clearly see marks of sanskar on her neck
he took a step back he turned to other side of her neck but he stooded when he seen swara manglsutra
swara lost the grip on sathvik she stopped resisting him which made sathvik shock he seen swara
swara is semi-conscious blood is flowing out from her corner of lips
sathvik got up in shock”swara swara ”
but in meanwhile someone rushed into room in full on fire with a force
a girl in blue jeans nd red t-shirt entered nd she dragged sathvik out from swara nd gave a tight slap
sathvik; (blank ) kavithaa
kavitha; yes (she removed her sandle nd gave a slap to him by which he had fallen on floor
“how cheap ur are sathvik how can you do this to swara
sathvik; (shocked a tear drop falls out ) kavitha woh
kavitha; stop uttering my name from ur bl**dy mouth
sathvik; i am sry kavitha i did wrong only
kavitha; stop ur acting again i am not ready to trust you i know wt you used to do if i am late for a sec
sathvik; noo i..(it stopped by a hard punch from a strong hand
its our hero sanskar “how dare you too think about my swara “he punched his face in angry
sathvik; he fallen on floor again he ids trying to prevent but
sanskar is hell angry “today ur died i will kill you nd i will get back to jail
sathvik; plz stop sanskar plz
police came nd holded sathvik nd sanskar
commissioner ; we will take care of him mr. sanskar
poilce caught amar nd saved inspector family too
*******flashh back **********
At the time while sanskar is crying helplessly inspector felt bad he took the keys ND dropped inside the cell secretly
Sanskar seen the keys nd gave a look at inspector
Inspector signed him to run away from side window beside the cell path
Sanskar came out from window ND rushed to mansion ND jumped the pool side wall ND rushed to room ND grabbed his laptop
As swara watch has GPS so he can trace her fast
sanskar rushed to hall nd said “sathvik is out he traped my swara we need to save her
all famly is shocked
shekhar; wt
sanskar; (crying ) i dont have time to explain all i wanna save my swara
i am going you follow mee fast
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On the day sanskar got arrested swara left to office
Kavitha: Wt ur doing swara
Swara: Ntg I saving my love
kavitha; how swara
swara; sathvik is out of jail
kavitha; no i meet him yesterday only
swara; you won’t believe let it be i dont have timre to prove soo stay away its better i can’t hurt anyone
kavitha; seen pain in swara she may be true soo tried to know tryth but swara ignored Kavita in fear
kavitha kept eye on swara but she lost way while following towards hotel
at the time while sathvik is saying truth swara dialed kavitha nd all the truth is recorded
kavitha called commissioner nd sanskar came as in search of swara by tracing GPS
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sanskar shocked to see swara
Sanskar moved swara with a jerk she gained consciousness
Swara spitted out blood which made sanskar shock
Sanskar made her get up she is on his laps ) swara swara wt happened to you wts this blood
Swara is happy to see sanskar by cupping his face sanskar ur came ur fine ur fine. She hugged him in tears
Sanskar: Ha I am fine but wts this swara
Swara:( blood is oozed out from he mouth) woh I took poison
Sanskar shocked panic “poison y swara y
Swara: I love you sanskar I can’t let anyone to be on ur place soo I took this decision i wanna die as ur wife
Sanskar crying badly “noo swara
Inspector take her to hospital first
Raglak rushed die ND got the car sanskar lifted swara in his arms ND placed her in car
Swara is on his laps
Lucky is driving ND rags sat beside him
Rags: Sanskar don’t let her faint make her wakeup
If she fainth it will be hard to save her
Sanskar:( shocked) swara is semi-conscious her eyes are closing
Swara plz don’t leave me
Swara grabbed his collar in pain she is breathing heavily) sanskar pz don’t cry
I love you more even I die I am happy
Tu meri mannat Ho sanskar meri eki mannat tum ho woh Puri hogaya
In now I gonna die in ur arms
I am the luckiest wife in this world
U full filed my every dream sanskar
Sanskar: Noo how can you leave nee swara you promised tht you wont leave me naaa
i need you swara i cant leave without you my love
swara; no yu have too nd plz dont waste your life in revenge nd all its all my mistake to trust that sathvik soo i am paying back
sanskar;(tears) i dont need anything i only want you swara
swara; (tears about to faint ) i am all urs sanskar
u made may every second so beautiful with ur love
Swara: ( breathing heavily) i wanna see ur smile
sanskarrr. Plz give a smile maa
Sanskar is broken down
Swara: Plz one smile sanskar plz pa….. pa patidevvv
Sanskar gave a smile fadely
Swara smiled in tears I love you sanskarrr I love you she lost the grip on his shirt
Swara dropped her hand her pulse fallen ND she dropped to coma
Screen freezes on unconscious swara n crying sanskar
Precap: Epilogue
Its the last part of my ff meri mannat Puri hogaya
So don’t bother about end ND say me how is episode its really close to my heart
I want everyone of you to speak out with long long comment plz
Keep smiling οΏ½
#Bhanu
24 Comments
Awesome
I never commented in your ‘ re ff.
But I seriously loved it .
*No comments Bhanuu..!!!!
waiting for next..
one more thing * I trust u..
thnk u…
I told u not to end rite….atleast u can give 100 episodes……but todays episode was realling touching….plz dnt kill swara I request u…….
Awesome….mindblowing. Plz say that she won’t die please…..its so emotional. Restless for epilogue
omg!! Not any word to describe this part…it was marvellous…loved it…
Oh gosh u scared me like hell with that precap
I am happy that vamp got arrested and sanskar is free
I know swara will be fine so waiting for epilogue
Thank u loads for writing such an amazing ff
Awesome dear..
Awesome sooo emotional
we r indian audience…..sad endings dont go well with us…..happy ending plz…..and for the ff….it was really beautiful….i loved sanskar’s romeo type love, swara’s mature love….their growing up in love and lastly santhvik’s transformation we saw juz glimps but its good to know…..sanskar’s pranks…amazing…and kavita..she is darling….so many times she saved the day with rocking entry and dialogues…
Aap aisa kaise jar sakte ho swara ke sath
Ab behara sanskar ka kya hoga
Awesome epi
Plz ab epilogue asap post kardo
And start another story of swasan if u like
Cuz ur ffs and os r fab
And i don’t have fb account so i can’t read your stories there
Bye
Tc
I think i dont cmnt regurlarly hw r cn i not cmnt watching this chapter i ws crying reading yaar plzzzz dont kill swara i will be broken like sanky plzzzzzz update soon will be waiting
Its superb dear…loved it….m just speelbound ut waz amzing……. bt hemw cn uh end it ….plz dun end…..n swara’s selfles love oh gosh……waiting fo epilogue…..vl miss ua ff….
Please bring Swara back in the epilogue. I loved it
It’s painful..
Can’t write more.
We know whatever u’ll write will b good..
Take care..n
Come back soon with a New story.
wow dr.
i lv it so much.
nt nly dis epi i lv all the epis.
i rly like swasan lv thier pranks , raglaks lv.
all da things r soo sweet and cute apart 4m vamps. π
i read ur ff 4m da beggining bt ddnt cmnt u earlier.
bt when i started 2 cmnt u end dis ff na. π dis is nt fare.im soo sad nw.
cmng 2 dis epi it ws awsome. thank u 4 save swara 4m dat idiot. waiting 4da nxt part. hope swara ddnt die. i dnt like sad endings. and i trust bhanu! she ll also dnt like sad endings i think π π
thank u 4 entartain us dr. i enjoy ur ff soo much.
keep writing
be happy always
lv ya
all the best for ur future.
Pls punish sathvik heavily but i dont like he will get easy punish like any no of year i want give worst punishment which make him remember all his mistake and active
I want give sathvik punishment is like most worst punishment but it is more worst than dead. For his lust he doing this much y cant we punish him manhood
Pls unite swasan
Speechless… No words r coming from my mouth
; ( π ———‘————————–I can’t describe my feeling
Bhanuuuuu…..!!!!!! no comment huhuhuhu
I just hsve NOOOOOOOOO words to describe my feelings for this ff. How can a person write so beautifully!!!?????? I can feel swara’s emotions her pain her situation right now after reading this episode…. I just hope that swara is saved….plzzz godd. And the last scene was mindblowing…..[β β β β THE BEST SCENE OF THIS FFβ β β β ]……
Wow bhanu…. thank you soo much for giving such a beautiful ff for us…. We really have no words for it. It is actually a don task to comment on this episode
Cud you plzz post the epilogue today… plzzzzzz dear. And it shud be a long one plzzz. Thanks
NAHIIIIIIIIIIIIIIII! WHY DID THIS HAVE TO HAPPEN TO SWARA! IK ITLL BE CLICHE BUT PLS BRING SWARA BACK ALIVE. PLSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS. IN THE EPILOGUE, CAN U PWEASEEEE BRING HER BACK PWEASEEEEEEEE.
THE EPISODE WAS AMAZING. U WRITE VERY CREATIVELY. I LOVED EVERY MOMENT OF UR FF BUT PWEASEEEE BRING SWARA BACK. SWASAN SHUD BE TOGETHER!
awesome..i dnt knw what else to say..thank u for saving swara from dat beast..
waiting for d nxt one..tc..
Waiting for epilogue!!! This is what I can say now!!!! I am soo eagerly waiting!!!