Hello Guyz..sorry for late as i had heard two bad news in one day which broked me completely one is i have to leave india nd other is my one nd only frnd is in critical condition in hospital from 1month due to accident i was feeling completely alone in her absence ,she the reason for this ff also now none are in my life to have silly conversation so i wanted to share it withyou frnds oka let it be guys nd Thnks for the Wonderful Responses i got for My Previous Part its really awesome ,here we go on part -11 of tu meri mannat
recap;swara resigns nd sanskar challenges swara that he will make takeback her resignation
************episode starts*****
sanskar; okay i will see i challenge u ms,swara i will make u realise my love in this month itself nd in this week u will be under mee mind it nd 3days enough to make u take back ur resignation
swara; i will see how u will ( she left)
evg6pm,swaras room,
swara went to her room nd removed the cover on tv as its not been used from last 2yrs nd she started watching tom nd jerry cartoon
after a hour ragini came to swaras room nd shock to see her
ragini; swara are u 5n ur watching tv that to cartoons again is it true
swara; (surprised) y i should not watch tv or cartoon ha
ragini; not like that u can but now ur 21 u can watch all movies also na y ur still left in cartoon its boring
swara; this sanskar is showing all kind of movies to mee in office i don’t want them in home also
ragini ;(laughs)wt sanskar, wt he did again ha say mee, nd y u resigned
swara; he made mee to loose my tender rags i lost its my lifes 1st failure that too without my mistake nd dad shouted on mee without understanding so i left the job
ragini;(shocked) wt u had failed no way how its possible nd wt sanskar did
swara; (about to say but stopped) no rags i cant say it, let it bee but, u know he is so dangerous for girls
ragini; wt he did that much dangerously say mee na
swara; he is always trying to take advantage di i dont know wt he did on that ngt nd how can u leave me with him whole ngt
ragini; u really want my answer
swara; ha
ragini;(she got up )wait a mintue
swara; where ur leaving
ragini;(brought a pen drive ) this is video of that ngt in ur room
swara; (shocked) wttt u kept camera in that room y
*******flashback******
party ngt while sanskar in wash room laksy had placed a camera in swasans room nd left later sanskar came nd raglak as per there plan they went out to very next room
12am
lakshya;ragini u kept a camera in there room dont u trust my brother
ragini:(cups his face) no lucky i trust him alot but our target is to prove this to swara so we did it
lakshya; really are u sure it will work
ragini ;ha it will u sleep first 2mmrow we have to wokeup 1st nd should go to mm nd get them clothes
lakshya;(teasingly) y waste of time we can plan some thing na
ragini; acha i had a shoe with mee now, so sleep its better to u
mrg by 8 they left to mm nd by 9.40am they returned to farm house innocently
********flashback end*****
ragini; i trust sanskar alot but i wanna prove u so, i had not watched this before only just for u
swara; i dont want any proof let it be what ever i dont care nd (she thrown the pendrive on floor)
ragini; as ur wish i dont force u
they both kept on watching spiderman serious meanwhile ragini got a call its lucky
lucky; rags come to pool side now
ragini; are u mad its 10 nd ur calling to poolside if anyone sees what they think i wont
lucky; rags plz come na do one thing i will bring sanskar u get swara then noone feel anything nd anyway our families are busy in Siva Ra tri pooja
ragini; (thinked awhile) ha oka done (cuts the call)
sanskars room,
lucky; bhai will u help mee now plz
sanskar; wt help
lucky; woh actually i wanna meet rags u should come with mee
sanskar;(hesitatingly) no i had work u goo yar
lucky ; plz come na our family may get doute if we meet alone if u nd swara are with as they will think we are just passing time
sanskar:(excited) swara is coming haaa then i will come let go
lucky:(teasingly) for swara ur coming ha not for mee
sanskar; no lucky come we will go they may be waiting come fast
(both left to poolside by hiding from family but ap found it but kept quite)
swaras room,
ragini; swara plz come with mee na i wanna meet lucky
swara; no yar u go i had work
ragini; wt work u had just watching spiderman come na plz for ur diii plzzzzzzz
swaragini went to pool side found sanlak
lucky took ragini nd sat on the bench nd swara nd sanskar had placed there legs in poolwater nd sat on edge there is awkward silence b/w them
sanskar; wt u decided are u coming to office 2mmrow its ur 1st day under mee
swara; (nervous but confidently) ha
sanskar;(gives a chocolate) take it i had brought this for u
swara; (takes it nd remembers her childhood when she used to kiss him for giving a choclate) sanskarrrrrrrr
sanskar; (surprised to hear his name such lovely) ha swaraaa
swara; can i ask u something u should say truth only
sanskar; i always told truth to u but u only not trusting it
swara; acha sanskar nd in mrg u played a prank with mee na all the things u told at that time are lies only na
sanskar; noo really its beautiful ngt u did alot
swara;(shocked) if means u really saw every thing ha
sanskar; ur asking that ahh ,ha i saw
swara; (shoutd)wt u saw sanskar wt nd when
sanskar;(smile)i had seen when u born swara i was 2yrs old nd holded ur litte hand nd kissed u
swara; (took a breath) y u always make me irritate nd shocked
sanskar; bcoz i love you
swara;(left quite ) stop the topic
meanwhile swasan nd raglak hear a door sound all the 4hides
in a corner its ap sanskar hugs swara in process of covering her ap left
swara; dont take advantage of situation
sanskar;(got angry moved her t-shirt a side nd bited her neck)
swara;(in pain shouts ) ouchhhhh sanskarrrrrrrrrr
raglak sees this nd shocked
ragini;(closes lucky eyes with her hand ) swara is right sanskar is dangerous when she is in sense
lucky; (removes her hand ) his brother is more then him(he kisses he cheeks)
swara; (pushes him ) wt ur doing its paining
sanskar; i had warned u not to use word of advantage that result is this
swara;(got angry nd she bitted his shoulder) now u got i too have teeth i can also bite
sanskar;(holded her both hands nd folded back nd once again bitted her near her nape by pulling her towards him where as swara is trying hard to get free
swara get the grip nd pushes him
sanskar; now u say what u will do this time I had left ur mouth to shout if u repate same word again I will lock u mouth in same way I did now
swara;(got angry nd pushed him into pool ) now u got my answer mr.sanskar
sanskar;( holds her leg nd pulled her into the pool)
swara; sanskar plz leave mee its soo cold stop it dont u dare to pull me in that cold water
sanskar; no way (he pulls her in pool swara had fallen on him)
recap; swasan romance in pool nd raglak teasing them infront of family
plz leave ur valuable likes nd comments below nd all the silent readers plz comment naa
40 Comments
Ha very awesome I loved it!! Waiting for the rules
Do get tensed vyour friend will be OK and don’t think that u r alone . by the which country r u going?
kuwait or london i wanna go london but my dad wanna throw me kuwait i dont know who will win
amazingly awesone
Loved it nd dont worry ur friend will recover fast .. best wishes for her dear..
I know guys its not upto the mark as I had not concentrated much but I promise I will try to make the next part interesting
All will be okay so don’t take tension
Ff was awesome
Good wishes for u and ur bestiee
From my side
don’t worry, ur friend will alright in no time…..we all there for her to pray……
ur ff is awesome but y does sanskar always pushes swara to the edge of believing he just uses girl for his advantage….
No yar its just situation makes
First bhanu y r u leavibg india? And hw is ur friend condition nw.. dont worry i wil pray for ur frnd yo recover soon… nd god vil surely help us..
And btwn tody epi ws superb…. swara should watch dat video in pendrive.. nd lolz precap… waiting for it
Thank you Navi
Yar Navi my frnd is in coma she undergone 2surgerys from last 40days but no change yar I was trying to find best doctors but there no use everyone are saying she is brain dead she will never be 5n let her die ? its paining to hear them but I have hopes she will come back for me nd my dad is worried about my future nd health I had donated my blood twice out of requirement for surgery’s which made me join in same hospital so he decided to sent mee out of country to further studies of international laws but I cant leave her alone the ranks which I got from my childhood never gave me happiness the time I spended with her is best time I got now I realised the truth after missing her
Dont worry bhanu…. lets hope for good… nd god wil surely answr d prayers nd u too take care of ur health too….. im may not b good @ comforting bt im sorry bhanu… 🙁
Nice and awesome
Oh awesome hw can I nw sleep after reading the precap plzzzzzzzz update next chapter too plzzZZzzzz
aditi ☻ dont worry i will post asap
Ohh wow swasan was best..pls make it long nd update nxt soon
Nicebut i would like to see swathik moments
2more part s u will find only swasan nd romance nd nhokjhoks later I will do it stay cool nd enjoy it?
Awesome can’t wait for their pool romance
Awsm part
Too good
Nice specially Ragini closes the laksh eyes
Ur too much sincere to ur works i must say … Even if busy schedule n ur frnd too in hospital still u posted ur ff . Great yaar ….
Its amazing … But plz let swara see pendrive wt must in there to trust sankar after one week working under him …
Nice….
Ur too much sincere to ur works i must say … Even if busy schedule n ur frnd too in hospital still u posted ur ff . Great yaar ….
Its amazing … But plz let swara see pendrive wt must in there to trust sankar after one week working under him … In this one week we want to see knock jok .. Care between them …
This ff is her wish yar as she loves to read ffs so i turned as a writer nd Ya sure u will see a lot in this week
Hope your friend will get well soon & this episode is awsome as always.Are u going to update tomorrow?
Thanks ND i will post next part 2mmrow asap
Don’t worry everything will be fine.
amazing dear…………i will pray for ur frnd
Woooo…so nyc..
guys thankyou so much for ur consent towards my frnd i hope the same as she is part of my life i will post next part asap one again thankyou so much
nice
nice ff,dont worry we all are going to pray for ur friend.
hey don’t worry if friend will lead a happy long life
I will pray 4 her speedy recovery
feeling sad 4 u n ur frnd pls post d next part m just luving it
hi loved ur ff and best wishex for u i’ll pray for frnd he will recover soon………..,……….
Bhanu don’t wory ur frnd will get well soon..