Hello Guyz..Thnks for the Wonderful Responses i got for My Previous Part ,ur suggestions are really awesome i will add one by one as per situation , i will post my part-11 of tu meri mannat by 2mmrow mrg as i completed only half till now
spoiler;
swara; dont take adavantage of situation
sanskar;(got angry moved her t-shirt a side nd bited her neck)
swara;(in pain shouts ) ouchhhhh sanskarrrrrrrrrr
raglak sees this nd shocked
ragini;(closes lucky eyes with her hand ) swara is right sanskar is dangerous when she is in sense
lucky; (removes her hand ) his brother is more then him(he kisses he cheeks)
swara; (pushes him ) wt ur doing its paining
sanskar; i had warned u not to use word of advantage that result is this
sorry this is a part of scn on my part-11 ,nd u guys wanna raglak scns or shall i concentrate on swasan only ?
nd guys i was also thinking wt rules should be added for swara as she ishould work under sanskar i want 7rules but i got only 3
so frnds plz help me in this also yar give me ur ideas about the rules to be made swara follow as u all know swaras attitude in my ff ☻
the rules should be irritating to swara nd advantages to sanskar, did u got it nd may be romantic also
nd i promise the upcoming parts would have lot of fun ,romance nd nhok jhoks nd i will try to post daily also
keep reading
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seems interesting but dont add raglak ,there are lot of raglak ffs
gr8 ur 2 cool…..m just luving it
its amazing yaar
u can only concentrate on swasan….
I need swasan scene…. nd rules i wil tel u @nite
awsome just loved it……………………
one rule could be whenever swara screams on sanskar or blames him unesceraly her pushiment would be she should go for date with sanskar she can never say no to anything she as to do what sanskar says
wow nice rule yar
Plz concentrate more on swasan….and I suggest a rule should be that ka…
1.sanskar should order swara to come with him in a forest(where they could romance) or in a White House where no one will be there..
plz give imp to both d pairs
Add only swasan scenes…
Rules is lyk if swara didnt follows the orfer as a penality she shud work 1 more day for each mistake…..
She shud be available for him 24 7…
I dond u lyk te rules…. tes r jst sugestions…
I luv ur ff a lot…. n i dond wnt ter romance soon.. ilyk ter silly nhok jhok n sanskaar prank…..
mehra ur suggestion is unique one ha i will do so
pls do concentrate on swasan, their are plenty of ff based only on ragini …..
plz only swasan…
n omg this sanskar…okay rules can be…
not to use word advantage…. do whatever sanskar says…not call him Mr. maheswari…meet him whenever he says…accompany him everywhere…
nice rules .aditi
for each mistake swara should kiss Sanskar.
sorry if anyone do not like this rule
swara will slap him u know if he ask so
Plz make swasan only…
Rules can b… never say a no… Every mistake add a day more to punishment….. work in his cabin….24/7 available for him…. do all 3 meals With him ( as she can esCape while lunch )….. no talking to any other colleagues (as if she tries to make him jealous )….. n thn u c… I can thnk of only 6…
complete day yar☻ omg how sad swara
Plz make swasan only…
Rules can b… never say a no… Every mistake add a day more to punishment….. work in his cabin….24/7 available for him…. do all 3 meals With him ( as she can esCape while lunch )….. no talking to any other colleagues (as if she tries to make him jealous )….. n thn u c… I can thnk of only 6… n plz upload nxt ASAP
plz concentrate only on swasan ..
1. Be with him always.. and perform all work wt he ask to do..
2. Accept wt he tells her nd not to defend him
But i have doubt bhanu wil u show swara going to kerala…..
ya off course u guys asking forest na i will try u have to wait its secret
Only SWASAN scene..nd pls update soon
no raglak …only swasan
One rule could be that swara will feed him all the meals of the day by her hand
we r waiting plz post asap
posted by mrg only yar
there is no part 11 posted dear
Rule 1.. Whatever he say she can’t oppose it … Not to say no…
2.. She should not shout on him as he is her boss now ( I know its too much swara will never follow but one week should be sanskar week he has at least one week to make her listen his words ..it may useful … Maybe she gain somewhat trust on him …)
If she fail to follow rule extra one day..
nice idea meghs
It is not yet updated yaar post it in fb. I am waiting for it eagerly
Yar tweety we have slots problem in fb so I was updating in telly updates 1st