TUM BIN JIYA JAYE KAISE(Episode 2)
Recap:Kanchi’s wedding
First of all, a biiiiiig waala thanks to all my friends who commented on my first part……hope u keep showering ur love on me in the upcoming episodes…….I tried my level best to reply to each & every comments, & sorry if I left anyone by mistake….u may go through this link for the replies…
One thing I forgot to mention in my 1st one(there’s no Gayatri in my plot, Priya(the elder one),Veer & Riya(twins), they 3 r Anand & Savitri’s children & as Savitri is Jaya’s childhood friend, so her children refer Jaya as Maasi ma…. as far as Pragya & Isha r concerned, they lost their mother in their early age, so being Sanchi’s best buddy, they too refer Jaya as Maasi ma)
Some twist in my plot….hey, don’t worry, happy waala, not sad…..Bidaai part is not so soon, so just enjoy…..
Riya(comes to the front):Ok Ok guys plz settle down, we’ve got some surprise for all of u…hope u all enjoy this….
Pragya:Sahi boli tum….Itne jaldi hum apni Sanchi ko Jiju ke saath nahi jaane dene waale…pehle kuch masti hojaye????(u r right, we won’t let sanchi go so easily with jiju)
Isha:Yes guys….what do u all have to say about this??????
All the guests present agree with the idea….
Sanchi: Par secret kya hai…kuch toh bolo kya karne waale ho(give a hint atleast what u r going to do)
Pragya:Abeo, batadia toh suspense kahaan rahega….(It won’t remain a suspense if we’ll reveal it) Isha,Riya come here……Abeo Dulhan ke dewar(Veer,Parth)…..ab kya tum logon ko invitation dena padega yahaan aane ke liye……bahut khaatirdaari karwa chuke, ab kuch kaam bhi karlo…(now,do u guys want to send me an invitation to make u come here….u have already been pampered a lot…now some time for work) (Isha,Riya start giggling with such comments of Pragya)…
Veer: Ok, Dulhe ki saaliyaan…jaise aap kahen(ok,as u say)hum toh pehle se hi aapke ghulam hai..kyun??(Veer winks at Isha)(Isha starts blushing)…
Riya:thik hai thik hai…let the celebration begin….
(some time passes, abt 15-20mins approx.)
Parth:So guys….today’s a special day for my friend Kabir & Sanchi(Veer,IshPraRiya give death glares to him…)oh sorry sorry, OUR FRIEND’S special day………(all start laughing)…so don’t u all(all guests present there)want to know kaise ye do ajnabee itne kareeb aagaye ki baat aaj in donan ki shaadi tak aa pahunchi…..(how 2 different individuals came together to land up in marriage)
Everyone:Of course yes……….
Riya:So lets start “Kanchi’s journey of love”………..(all start clapping including Kusum, Jaya,Anand,Savitri & of course our beloved Kanchi(who were lovingly smiling looking at each other)…)
Flashback(they were showing some videos on projector)
SanIshPraRiya….all were sitting in a café(having their coffee & chatting)…..
After some time, a black colored Skoda Octavia stopped at the café, and 3 handsome guys came out of it(no points for guessing, it Veer,Parth & of course Kabir)
Pragya:abe Riya…ye Veer ke saath baaki do Bandar kaun hai??????(who r the 2 monkies with ur bro)(Sanchi & Riya start laughing)
Riya:Actually woh…(she’s interrupted by Isha)
Isha:Stop it Pragya…dekh na kitne handsome hain, teenon ke teenon….(Riya starts to stare Isha)…I mean Veer bhi kuch kum nahi lag raha hai….(stop pragya, they r so handsome)
Seeing Riya, Veer comes to their table..
Veer:If u beautiful ladies don’t mind, can we guys join u(without waiting for their reply, he sits down)
Pragya:abeo, when did we allow u to sit….
Isha:mana bhi toh nahi kiya hai(we even didn’t deny)Let it be na….(Isha smiles looking at Veer & so does Veer)
Veer:So guys, let me introduce u to my 2 best buddies from my school time, who will also be a part of our hospital soon, working with us…this one’s Parth, doing specialization in Psychiatrics & that one’s..
Kabir: Kabir..Kabir Kapoor,doing specialization in neurology..nice to meet u all(he was constantly looking at Sanchi from the time he arrived on the table…he moved his hands towards Sanchi for a handshake)…good to meet u miss…
Sanchi:Sorry guys, but I think we’re really running late…It was very nice to meet u all…Riya, plz yaar try to understand, we can’t skip our lectures like ur brother(looking at Veer & Veer glaring at Sanchi)…so we have to go…
Riya:(smiling)Its completely ok dear….bye…
SanIshPra:See u soon in the evening Riya at Sanchi’s place…….bye………
Scene shifts to SDCH(10-15 days have passed since then)
The same car black Skoda Octavia came in front of the gate of SDCH & out of it,2 handsome guys came out…Parth & Kabir……everyone was looking or a kind of staring those 2(bg music oh munda kukkad kamala da of Student of the Year movie)….when SanIshPra were coming from the opposite sides….without noticing each other, Sanchi & Kabir collided with each other…
Both at the same time:Can’t u see…..omg Kabir…Parth…u 2 r here…how come(asked Sanchi)
Parth:yes we’ve joined SDCH today itself….
Pragya:Abeo, has Veer left u two over here & went away???
Kabir:No, we haven’t seen him yet…do u guys have any idea where’s Veer????
Isha:He might be in the cafeteria right now…(muted..she’s giving them directions for it)….ok we’re leaving…bye
Parth & Kabir:thnk u so much & bye…
Now I’ll not go on elaborating….I’m skipping the scene to the first time Kabir felt like….Dekha jo tujhe yaar, dil mein baji guitar…waala feel for Sanchi…….
While passing on the road in his car….when he was in a traffic….while moving his eyes…at a distance not so far he saw Sanchi who was helping an old woman, (who was a blind lady), in crossing the road…the old woman blessed Sanchi…seeing this Kabir started smiling…not a long time skip…he saw her playing with street kids…giving them balloon & chocolates….this didn’t stop here, Sanchi’s simplicity & concern for others made a special place for her in Kabir’s heart(Locha-e-ulfat song playing in his mind)…….(he couldn’t realize when he fell for Sanchi….like his single day didn’t pass without getting a single glance of his beloved Sanchi)
Some time skip…
Kabir:Omg Omg….I’m in love…..Kabir Kapoor is in love…..(he was saying this in front of Veer & Parth…)plz guys now u both tell me how I can confess my love to Sanchi….& will she agree to my proposal……..plz guys tell na…..
Veer:Relax bhai…thoda saans le le…I’ll talk to Riya regarding this….she can give better ideas on this…
Kabir:Thnx bro(he hugs veer)…plz make it fast….
(veer & parth were surprised to see kabir in this manner)
Riya,Isha & Pragya after discussing with Sanchi regarding Kabir came to know that she also likes Kabir..but being a girl she’s adamant it should be the boy(kabir) to propose her first …& she won’t initiate on this…
Riya said all this to Veer & Veer informed this to Kabir…Kabir was on cloud9 on knowing Sanchi too loves him…
Time skip to the proposing day….(plz pardon me in this regard…I’m a biiiiiiiig zero when it comes to romance)
It was a beautiful place, decorated with orchids & lilies(coz the 2 r Sanchi’s fav)….In the centre was a table which had the setup exactly like that of a dinner date….Kabir made Sanchi sit….
Sanchi:Whats all this Kabir???
Kabir:U just relax….(he clapped his hands)…rose petals started to fall on sanchi….(he again clapped)….all the lights went off….he pointed Sanchi to look towards a direction….it was a place where with the help of lights was written “SANCHI, I LOVE YOU, WILL YOU MARRY ME”….Sanchi couldn’t stop smiling…..
Kabir:So what….Yes or No??????
Sanchi:Of course…..Yes buddhu………
Kabir was really excited with her reply…..he couldn’t stop himself from getting emotional….he kissed Sanchi’s forehead & hugged her tightly…(bg song….Tum hi ho from Aashiqui2)….
Sanchi:Now, its time that we convince our mothers for marriage….
Kabir:They already agreed….
Sanchi:What!!!!!!!
Kabir:Yes………b4 proposing u, I decided to talk to my mom in this regard & she’ll in turn talk to ur mother regarding our marriage….& ya, she agreed….donon ne apni razamandi de di hai…….so now I’m standing right in front of u & proposing u……….
Sanchi:Thanks a lot Kabir….I luv u…..
Kabir:What!!! I couldn’t listen….
Sanchi:I love u…….
Kabir:Still I can’t hear……(he was smiling sarcastically)plz be a bit louder….
Sanchi(at the top of her voice):I LOOOOOVE U KABIIIIIIR………….
Kabir:I Love U more……….
(both hugged each other)
Present scenario:
Pragya:So guys ye thi hamaare pyaar ke panchiyon ki kahaani…..(so this was the story of our two love birds)
Everyone start clapping……but there was someone who was really emotional during all this time…..Emotional that her cute little princess is now going away from her….its Jaya….when Sanchi saw Jaya, she came running & hugged her(bg music…Yeh ladkiyaan toh maaon ki raaniyaan hai, meethi meethi pyaari pyaari yeh kahaniyaan hai…of Na tum jaano na hum movie)….Jaya,Sanchi’s dadi,Isha,Riya, everyone got emotional…
Pragya:Maasi ma…aur aap sab log rona band karo or else I’ll also start crying which won’t suit my personality…..do u want that sab mujhe tease karne lage ki sabki watt lagane waali pragya aaj khud ro rahi hai???????bolo bolo…..(do u want everyone to call me a crybaby)
Jaya: No one can tease my daughters….they r the best…..koi nahi roega, understood(no one will cry)……
Sanchi’s bidaai rasam is done…..sanchi hugs her maa & dadi, takes blessings from Anand & Savitri…….she turns next towards her friends…..they have a group hug(SanIshPraRiya)…..
Kusum:Don’t worry Jaya ji,Sanchi’s like my daughter, u don’t need to worry for her…..
Jaya:I know, Sanchi ko aap aur Kabir beta ek pal ke liye bhi maike ki kami mehsoos nahi hone denge….koi bhul chuk ho gayi ho toh maaf kardijiyega(plz forgive for any kind of flaws in the wedding preparations)
Kusum:Don’t worry Jaya ji, preparations were way ahead of our imaginations….now we should leave…its already late…Namaste..
Jaya:Namaste….
Sanchi sits in the car along with Kabir & waves her hand (as a sign of good bye)for everyone….all others say bye & tc & wave their hand….Kabir is consoling Sanchi…..
Precap:Honeymoon plans
I know guys, u gonna kill me coz of such a loooooooooong update, but I really needed to end their love story in 1 episode, so guys, I’m eagerly waiting for ur comments…..Plz forgive me if I was unable to meet ur expectations…..but somewhere I hope I’m able to do so…fingers crossed….luv u all
With lots of Love,
Priyanka(or Riya)
33 Comments
It was awesome and mindblowing ! I liked the episode ..and in love with your writings …although I’m a bad writer but still I can say it is just amazing episode …
helo kya next episodes men yeh sb hona h yan yeh ek alag story h
Neha dear, I’m really annoyed with this comment of urs……how can u call urself a bad writer huh??????not done….. infact u r an amazing writer & I’m really glad that I could somehow be able to meet ur expectations…..thnx for liking this…..luv u a lot sweetie……..
kya aisa hona h serial men jo colors per lagta h yan yeh apki apni kahani h
hehe, Sadia dear,I think u r new here…….& dear, ye serial ka hissa nahi hai…..yeh toh bas humlogon ka imaginatory(I mean…..kalpanik) story hai jiska actual show se koi lena dena nahi hai…anywz, thnx for commenting…luv u sweetie……..
Amazing Priyanka.. waiting for the PRECAP sequence ??
Muaaahhhhh ?? toooo cute moments
Mitali dear, I was so so happy on reading ur comments……….thnx for liking it dear……currently I’m working on the nxt episode(mmmm….thinking actually for the scenes)….I’ll try to post it asap….& luv u a lot sweetie……..
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luv u too dear…….. keep writing……….
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Anee dear, its a great achievement for me that I could meet ur expectations to some level….thnx for liking it dear……luv u a lot sweetie………..
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Niyaa dear….thnk u soooooooooooooo much for such lovely comments….what can I say, u just left me speechless with ur comments………..a superrrrrr se uparrrrrrr waala comment for me..hehe…luv u a lot sweetie……….
& dear, I think hum ek hi thaali ke chhate batte hain…..main bhi apne nonstop baaton se sabko pareshaan kardeti hoon………hehe…..so, comments bade ho toh mujhe aur jyada motivation milti hai…& dosti mein no sorry, no thank u…haha…
For this lovely episode I want to give you a big hug.
It was fantastic episode.
Pls update next one asap pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls.
Luv u dear.
thnx a lot Priyanshi dear for liking it………..it means a lot……….luv u sweetie………& I’ll try to post the nxt one asap…….
Omg Priyanka riya awesome ! Literally a happy story nd I enjoyed each nd every part ! Perfect fabulous superb yr ! I never knew u write so well I am already one of ur fan sweetie ! Yakult piti ho kya ? Hehe ? sorry a bkwaas line !
Luv uh
omg Trisha……..I’m on cloud9 after reading ur comments………appreciation, that too from such a great writer….it really means a lot……….thnks dear for liking this……….luv u a lot my cutie pie……..
Wowww yr you are superbbb…. So my opinion was right when I first saw Ur comment I guessed that u r a good author and told you to do so…. Took long time but it was worth and episode was mind blowing!!
Thnx a lot dear for commenting……..I was really waiting for ur comments………..I’m glad that I’m able to meet ur expectation to some level……luv u a lot sweetie………
Awesome faduu tha yaar….. Waise bhi aaj serial mein kanchi scenes dekhkar majaa aa gayaa…. U have written so nicely that I fell in love with your writing skills… Amazing ??great job
awwwww……thats so sweet of u Tiya dear………I’m so so happy that u liked this episode…..thnx for ur appreciation & luv u a lot sweetie………
Riya dear i am speechless after reading this…it was superb…i loved it…you are too good…you just nailed it…love you sweetie…and post ASAP …love you loads ??
Tania dear, everytime u leave us speechless with ur amazing updates, this time I’ve made an attempt for giving u (of course not as amazing as urs), somewhat an ok ok type update from my side…..thnx a lot dear for appreciating it…..luv u loads sweetie……..
Its amazing
Thnx a lot Amnaa dear for liking this…….luv u sweetie……..
Wwooww this is fab Riya ??? so happy to see my favourite commenter’s ff ??? sorry for not commenting on your previous episodes dear ??? I wasn’t well. And you’re doing a great job writing this ff ???
omg Ruwani, u’ve left me speechless with such cute comments……….I’m soooooooooooo glad that u liked this………………dear, this comments of urs acts as a power booster for me….& dear what happened??? u said u’re not feeling well!!!!! plz take care of urself & don’t at all feel sorry for not commenting previously…I totally understand…….tc of urself & luv u sweetie……….
OMG prinku di it is awesome mindblowing. Why u not starting writing before . You are really great writer didu. Waiting for ur next one. Update soon.
thnx a lot Niyati dear….I’m glad u liked it…it means a lot……& nxt episode already posted…..hope u like it too…fingers crossed…….