TUM BIN JIYA JAAYE KAISE(Episode 7)
Though miles may lie between us, we are never far apart….For FRIENDSHIP never counts miles, its measured by the HEART……….
Guys, a very warm welcome to all of u………Actually I didn’t have any idea regarding u’ll like my previous update or not, in fact I was really nervous, thnx a lot………Thank u soooooo much for liking it…….A big waala thnx to Jo, Priyanshi, Mitu, Anonymousaa, Abhilasha, Dhruti, Divya, Anuradha, Anu, Ashu(Ashnita), Prema, Niyati, Anee, Ruwani, Niyaa
Link to prev episode: (Episode 6
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Recap:Pragya’s wedding with Parth & Veer’s with Isha………
Just hope I don’t at all disappoint u this time……so lets get started……….
Guys, one thing I forgot in my previous episode which I’m going to include here in this episode…….Since Sanchi’s pregnancy wasn’t a confirmed news, Priya decided to do some tests of Sanchi so that they can get confirmed abt Sanchi’s pregnancy……..So, Sanchi’s UPT & blood test,ultrasound were done …..(actually I’m not medical student, so I don’t know abt the tests………)& since the reports will take time so, lets move to other scenes……….
A child was playing in the corridor of the hospital premises……suddenly while playing, he collided with Kabir………& Kabir as u know, apne aadat se majboor, he starts scolding the child……..
Kabir(looking at the kid & saying angrily): What do u feel this place is a playground for u…….why r u roaming here & there????????
The child started crying….
Kabir:uff……not again……stop crying & say where r ur parents????
Sanchi was passing by & when she saw Kabir scolding a child & the child crying, she immediately ran to the child & got on her knees & hugged the child……..
Sanchi:Beta don’t cry……..(& she wiped his tears)…..& after consoling the child & getting to know abt his parents, she took him to his parents………(kabir by that time had already left for his cabin)
Sanchi(goes to Kabir’s cabin & that too in an angry mood):What was that Kabir?????
Kabir:What r u saying?????? I don’t get anything…………
Sanchi: Oh plz……stop behaving like an innocent kid……………Why did u scold that child??????do u know how……
Kabir: Now plz don’t try to defend that kid………
Sanchi:Stop behaving like a KK……..
Kabir:Why do I need to behave………My name is Kabir Kapoor(KK) after all…….
Sanchi:haha….so funny, I meant Kadwa Karela(Kabir glares her)….what???don’t think I’ll get scared by ur glares……..after all I’m Mrs.Sanchi Kabir Kapoor….samjhe Pran nath????(& she smiles)
Kabir: Acha ji…..ghar chaliye, phir dekhte hain aap kya cheez hain…Nath ke praan..…& Kabir smirks…(Sanchi leaves)
Some time skip….Kanchi leave for Kapoor Mansion……..
Kanchi reach home, they freshen up & then they have their dinner with the whole family, only one person missing there was Ruhi, who had slept coz Kanchi reached home late……..
Sanchi:no yaar…….today I couldn’t play with my Ruhi, my rockstar………I wish kuch waqt pehle aapaati toh uske saath thoda time spend kar paati……….
Priya:Don’t worry Sanchi……..if not today, tomorrow u can play with her……
Sanchi:Of course diii…….anything for my rockstar…………..
Every one have their dinner & head towards their rooms………(lets see what happens in Kanchi’s room)
After Sanchi enters room, Kabir closes the door from behind….& he slowly moves towards Sanchi…
Sanchi:Kabir…..whats cooking up in ur mind????….(she becomes nervous)……..with every step Kabir is moving forward, makes Sanchi to move backwards…….& finally Kabir pins her to the wall….Kabir leans forward…& then Sanchi closes her eyes…..Kabir moves backward…..Sanchi opens her eyes to find Kabir standing at a distance, smiling at her……..
Kabir:Omg….just look at u……Somebody was showing a lot of tadi in the morning & behaving like a daredevil……what was her name…..yeah…….Sanchi…..Sanchi Kabir Kapoor right????….just take a look at urself……u’ve already turned red………(Sanchi gives death glares to Kabir)
Sanchi:Kabir, now u r gone……& she runs around Kabir to get hold of him & during this running, Kabir stumbles & both of them fall on the bed……they share an intense eye lock…….(& guys I can’t describe what would have happened, u guys r wise enough to understand…I mean their romance…hehe..)
Next morning Sanchi gets up to find herself in Kabir’s arms….she gives a peck on his cheeks…& then Kabir opens his eyes…..Good morning hubby…said Sanchi….Good morning wifey…said Kabir…
They freshen up, have their breakfast & reach the hospital…..i.e.Kanchi,Priya & Sanket….
Kabir: Bhabhi….Sanchi’s pregnancy reports???????
Priya:Don’t worry Kabir, I’m going to collect that only…..u may go on ur duty…..I’ll surely inform u the results…..
Kabir:Pakka?????
Priya:Haan baba, pakka……….then Kabir leaves…….
Sanchi goes with Priya to check her test results…… On seeing that the test results r positive, both r so so happy……but after some time it was as if Priya ke chehre ka rang utargaya…..
Sanchi: Diiiii…….what happened?????Why u look so tensed???????
Priya:Actually Sanchi, there r some complications in ur case……..(she describes Sanchi the complications)… so basically, if u keep the child, it will be a big risk towards ur life….
Sanchi was really shattered on listening this…she hugged Priya & cried a lot…..after some time,she composes herself …..
Sanchi: Dii, don’t tell about this to Kabir, Maa or anyone else…..aapko meri kasam…..
Priya: But bachha, its risky for ur life…….
Sanchi:I know dii, but I want my child……….mein apne bachhe ko iss duniya mein lana chahti hoon… So plz dii, don’t tell abt my pregnancy complications to anyone, especially Kabir…..Priya nods….
When Sanchi was leaving Priya’s cabin, she was shocked to see Kabir standing there (like a statue)… He had heard their conversations……Sanchi tries to explain Kabir, but he wasn’t in any way listening to her….Sanchi goes after Kabir to his cabir to clear the misunderstandings….Sanchi saw Kabir standing near his table facing the opposite directions(he was in tears…..& it was the first time Sanchi saw him like this) (bg music….Jo bheji thi duaa from Shanghai movie)….she came near him & hugged him tightly…..Kabir tries to release himself, but he can’t as she held him tightly…finally he gave up….after some time Sanchi breaks the hug & makes him sit on a chair…
Sanchi :I know what I was trying to do, u’ll never agree with it…but u know Kabir, after I saw Priya dii as a mother, alwz I used to think how it feels like when u r going to become a mother….& kaise ek nanhi si jaan aapke andar palti hai…..& I always wanted to experience this feeling….. I knew, if u gets to know about this, u would surely say me to abort the child….but Kabir, I wanted to experience motherhood…..
Kabir(with a sad tone): I can understand….I too want to become a father, but not at the cost of ur life…
Sanchi: plz Kabir……I assure u, I’ll take complete care of myself, & nothing will happen to me & our Golu…trust me….plz……..(after a long time of convincing, finally Kabir agrees)…….
Finally they reach Kapoor Mansion & they reveal Sanchi’s condition to Kusum….even though reluctant initially, but finally Kusum also agrees……..
Now, after all this, everyone is taking extra care of Sanchi….Family, their bff group, everyone try to keep Sanchi happy always & stressfree……..even Anand, after knowing Sanchi’s conditions, has ordered Sanchi to take less stress & focus more on herself…..
One fine morning Jaya visited Kapoor Mansion & she was really very glad to see how everyone took care of Sanchi…..she was in tears(khushi waale) on seeing this……
Jaya: Ganpati bappa, plz hamesha meri bachhi pe aise hi apni meher banaye rakhiyega……& then she smiles……Sanchi saw Jaya….she came & hugged her……
So friends, like it is often said Nothing is permanent in this world….neither happiness, nor sorrow….So guys wait for the biggest twist of my plot in my next episode…..with this I’m ending this episode here itself…..Eagerly waiting for ur responses, positive or negative……
With Lots & Lots of LOVE,
Priyanka(Riya)
50 Comments
This was amazing episode sis.
Yeh hui na baat maza aa gya .kaanchi scenes were fab .luv u so so so so so much. ?
Nd I totally agree with your lines “nothing is permanent in this world “. Amazing thought.
Nd ya one more thing pls update soon.
Priyanshi dear thnku soooooooooooooooooooo much dear……….a big teddy hug from my side to u………..I’m very very glad that u liked this………..I’ll surely try my best to post nxt one asap……..luv u shona……………
amazing , super se bhi uper wala ff update next one soon
haha………thnku so much Dhruti dear………thnx for liking this dear & I’ll surely try to post asap…….. luv u sweetie………
Kadwa karela????Nice name actually.
Biggest twist?Is Sanchi going to die?
Well as your ff title suggests,perhaps yeah but plz don’t kill her.
Waiting for non-tragical epi.Plz post asap.
thnk u Anonymousaa dear for commenting………can I call u Anaa?????? btw dear, thnx for understanding….& as far as plot is concerned, I can assure u that u can surely say at the end All’s well that ends well…. luv u a lot shona……
Yes sure you can call me Anaa. I would love that.
I am more than glad that u have assured that all’s well that ends well.
So I am expecting happy ending.
I can understand that life doesn’t always give happy ending still I am always scared of tragedy. There’s something to be done regarding this I think.
Love u loads dear Ri(I suppose you wouldn’t mind me calling u Ri) Lots of huggs and kisses from my part.
u can call me anything sweetie & I’ll never mind at all……..& thnx for a new nick name…….luv u loads………..
Awesome super fabulous fantastic waiting for the next episode the twist
Divya dear, itne saare tareef, kahin mein khushi ke maare paagal na ho jaun………haha………thnx for liking & commenting dear…….& I’ll try to post it asap…..luv u a lot sweetieeeeeeeeeee………..
Priyanka… no words dear… u made me speechless.. i was got so involved in your story that i forgot to watch KBC ?? .. really dear..u r a gr8 writer … keep smiling and make Kanchi also smile little bit ….itna to chalta hai naa boss ?
Haha
Lots of love to u and ur ff dear..
haha………I’m already on cloud9 after reading ur comments Mitu dear………..& ya as far as KBC is concerned, I too watch it on a regular basis…..& yesterday episode was also nice…..sorry mere wajah se tumne episode miss kiya………………did u think main aisa kuch kahungi………then u r absolutely………..wrong……….haha………just kidding dear……….btw dear, to be honest, ur comments alwz brings a big smile on my face….hamesha…………luv u a lot Shona…………
Same Here dear. U also bring a biggggggg wala smile on my face dear.. and lots of love to u too dear.
Hey prinku awsome mindblowing twist superb…. Lovv the way u describe a women wish to became a mother nd want to experience motherhood period….lovely yaar and lotsssssssssssss of love and kisses u too post nxt asap
hehe………..kya main koi sapna dekh rahi hoon……..koi mujhe plz pinch karo……………….omg Niyaa dear, itna tareef…………even if I think main itne tareef ke kaabil nahi hoon, phir bhi dear, I’m really really glad ki tumhe ye pasand aaya…………..I’ll try to post nxt one asap………..&&& luv u Shona………..
Please riya sanchi and unki bachar ko sahi salamat ranga please riya…….today episode is Awesome,amazing and totally wonderful yaar……????
thank u so so much Anu dear, actually kuch hint toh mein pehle episode se de chuki hoon, its inspired from movie Saaya……….phir bhi, I’ll surely try to avoid a lot of tragic scenes, just for u…………..now happy??? btw dear, thnx for commenting & luv u dher saara………..
sweetie sweetie wat to say iam again speechless it’s beyond beyond beyond everything sabse upar wowwww. u killed me or I iam die die heart fan of ur writing. a great great great great grand grand grand salute to u and lots of huggs and kisses to u and luv u loads
Ashnita dear, am I day dreaming……….haha………actually I’m a jabra fan of ur writing & getting appreciation from a great writer like u……I mean, what to say….bas yehi ki I’m already on cloud9………. thnk u sooooooooooooooooooooooo much for liking it & a big waala jaadu ki jhappi from my side & luv u a lot Shona……….
??? amazing epi dear btw kadwa karela was an awesome nickname for Kabir ???
Thnku Ruwani dear………..haha……….actually I wanted to say, karela upar se neem chadha, but I felt as his name was KK so I changed it into kadwa karela……….haha………….I’m glad u liked this one……….thnx for commenting dear & luv u dher saara…………
Best ever priyanka
U did best
Sorry for not cmntng on ur pri.. epis but trust me i was so bzy in my work so cdnt hope u understand but i read all of ur ffs part
And again it was mindblowing
Keep it up dear
Sanju dear, its fine…….absolutely fine……….kya hua agar pehle comment nahi kar paayi, iss baar toh kiya na, that matters the most………….& I totally understand dear……..even my exams r as if doing tandav on my head………hehe………..btw, thnx for commenting & luv u a lot Shona………
Luv u too priyu (hope u dont mind if i call u by this name ) and best of luck for ur exams and thnx for understanding me
Yaar I always liked ur surprises and twist BT this I just want a big and happy kanchi together pls update next soon…
Prema dear……….thnku sooooooooo much for being so supportive……….btw dear, one thing I can assure u, ending will be a happy waala………..rest u can read in my nxt episodes………….luv u a lot sweetie……..
Ru di…you are amazing as well as your epi…i like the way you put eveturning together…that is really excellent and I hope you don’t make Sanchi die…or else I will stop reading your ff haha just kidding…of course I will read it no matter what…..love you loads and keep rocking
ha Tania dear………u really scared me initially & then I was relieved later on……..hehe………u r a great writer & getting appreciation from u is a very big thing for me………….thnx for commenting dear & …. luv u a lot sweetie……….
AMazing fab dear
Thnx for commenting Cutie pie…….I’m really glad u liked it………luv u a lot sweetieeeeee……….
Ohhh Ri twist haan….Ok i’m curious to know plz update fast….ok…and my dear…you are always amaz me with your writings….luv u dear….this updates was superrrr se uperrr wala updates…..keep rocking..bye bye tc…and good morning.
Anee dear, ur sweet comments brought a big waala smile on my face, 100 watt waali smile……….hehe…… itne ache comments paane ke baad now I’m feeling, ki main bhi kuch likhne ke kaabil ban paayi hoon………thnx dear………ur comments means a lot to me………….luv u a lot Shona & a big waala teddy hug from my side to u…………hv a good day…………
Pehli barrr…jab Maine tumhara ff padha tha…sunlo na ke Maine kya socha tha ke ye toh mindblowing hai…aur outstanding bhi Maine socha!!( it is a song pehli bar from dil dhadk be do…..hehe !!!) Actually I don’t know the whole song or else I would have written the whole song!! As it was matching my emotions!!! Riu sis its really superb episode! Really eagerly waiting for next twist!!! Please post next part asap dear..
And again one thing…r u from Delhi?
Nahi….but kyun????????
Vrushti dear, first of all I want to know how’s ur health now??????I mean ur fever………I hope u would hv recovered by now…..btw dear…..I was on cloud9 after reading ur soooooooooo sweet comments……….u just made my day…….& I’ll try to post nxt episode asap…..luv u a lot Shona……..
Thanku soooo soooo much my dear sissy…actually that night I was having 103 degree fever!!! It was very horrible but now I m good…I m very lucky to have a caring sis like u…love u too and more than u di…
Actually because of ur writing language I thought so!
103!!!!!!!!! mere toh 101 mein hi bura haal hojata hai………plz dear take care of urself…… & agar apna ache se khayal nahi rakha, toh thappad padjaega….ok……..hehe………luv u sweetieeeeee…
Wowww sweetie episode was mind blowing and I think as the title is story is going to take a very big twist….. Loved it!!! Post soon!!
First of all Abhi dear, kaan pakadke sorry for this late reply, actually mera laptop kharap hogaya tha thats why I’m late…..btw sweetie…..I keep looking for ur comments hamesha….I feel as if my mentor is giving me comments on my performance…hehe….luv u Shona………
Its so sweet of you dear and being called as ur mentor is really a huge honour dear……luv uh my sweetipie…I glad to have u!!
Amazing
Thnk u soooooooo much Alia dear for liking it………luv u sweetie….
Wowwee ???? amazing ?? loved it❤
Thnks Jessi dear for being a regular reader & kaan pakadke sorry for my late reply…..luv u Shona…….
I m so sorry Riya for not giving comments… I was busy in developing a software plus students exam… My head was spinning yaar…
Riya, ek baat puchu? Kya khati ho matlab kya dimag paya hai yaar…. Mujhe toh lagta hai ki Main koi serial dekh rahi hu…. Itna badhiya script..what to say.. Mind-blowing… Keep it up
Anu dear, u r a fabulous writer & getting appreciation from such an amazing writer, its a big honor for me………thnx for liking it dear…….& luv u a lot Shona………..
Thanks once again yaar… Mujhe Coconut ke pedh par mat chadhao.. I will fall… (here just kidding dear)… Love u too dear
hehe…..u deserve this honor dear…..luv u loads……..