TUM BIN JIYA JAYE KAISE(Episode 8)
First of all, a very very big waala thanks to all my friends….I hope we’re friends until we die…..Then I hope, we stay Ghost friends & walk through walls & scare the shit out of people……hehe……First of all a big SORRY(kaan pakadke) for being late….actually mera laptop kharap hogaya tha so I got late…..btw, A big waala jaadu ki jhappi to Priyanshi, Dhruti, Anaa, Divya, Mitu, Niyaa, Anu, Ashnita, Ruwani, Sanju, Prema, Tania, Trisha, Anee, Vrushti, Abhilasha, Alia, Jessi………luv u a lot guys…thnx for being by my side throughout my updates…..(bahut senti dialogue than na….hehe…anyways, lets begin….)
Link to prev. episode:- (Episode 7 here)
We all owe life a death, an inevitable death which we can meet. But the unnecessary death that wastes life denies all consolation……Death leaves a heartache that no one can heal, but Love leaves a Memory which no one can steal…………With these lines, I start my episode……(guys I hope, u remembered, in my very 1st episode, I said my plot is inspired from the movie Saaya)…rest u can understand what I meant to say by the above lines when u will read this plot……So without wasting any more time, lets get started…..
Recap:Sanchi’s pregnancy complications & everyone taking utmost care of her…..
Timeskip……Its almost towards the end of 6 months of pregnancy of Sanchi…..& what to tell about everyone’s condition at present, especially Kabir, Sanchi sabko apne pregnancy ke mood swings ke chalte din mein taare dikha chuki thi……haha……During her initial days of pregnancy, sometimes she wakes up Kabir in the midnight(bg music Emotional Atyachar from Dev D…..this used to play on Kabir’s mind) & Sanchi starts demanding golgappa, sometimes ice-creams, sometimes she gets emotional while watching comedy movies & at the same time starts laughing while watching a horror movie…….. like who does that???? & of course, its none other than our beloved Sanchi…….. but now since everyone has become habitual with her mood swings, so Kabir doesn’t have that much problem now, that he used to face initially….& & & during this time, even if the baby isn’t born, still Sanchi used to sing a lullaby for the baby & this was also recorded by Kabir..
One fine morning when Kanchi reach SDCH, they get to hear about a news of Influenza attack in Indo-Myanmar border…..There was a great need of Pediatricians at that place…..Anand was in a great stress bcz her 2 pediatric doctors couldn’t be able to go there… On one side, Sanchi was pregnant, while on the other side, Pragya was suffering from viral fever……(this was noticed by Sanchi & she became sad for not being able to help Anand)….everyone went to resume their duties…. Sanchi couldn’t be able to focus on her work…..so, after thinking for a while she went towards Kabir’s cabin…..
Sanchi: Kabir, I want something from u……..
Kabir: Ice-cream, Golgappa, Coffee, Pickle(& he gives a big list of food items)……what do u want??????
Sanchi: No, I don’t want these…..
Kabir: So now I get, u want to go on a long drive or want to watch a movie or u want to meet Jaya maa????
Sanchi:Arey no baba, I don’t want any of these…..
Kabir: Then what do u want????
Sanchi:Permission…(Kabir was confused)……Permission to go to that place & help the natives of the place in curing influenza, especially kids….
Kabir: (angrily)Are u out of ur mind……..do u even realize what u r saying????
Sanchi(Sanchi was looking helplessly at Kabir(bg song Agar tum saath ho from Tamasha movie))..Kabir plz try to understand…..(& she was cut in the middle of her line by Kabir)
Kabir: (angrily)Apne dimaag se ye faltu khayal nikalo & resume ur duty……(Sanchi again tried to explain him)…Don’t u get what I’m saying…..Just go & resume ur duty…..(Sanchi finally went from his cabin without saying anymore…..
Ishveer & Parth were really worried after witnessing their talk, misunderstandings actually…..)
Veer: I can’t see them like this, I’m going to solve this issues…….(Isha stops Veer)
Isha: No Veer, we can’t say anything….they’re a couple & its their personal matter…..we can’t interfere in this…..& above all I know my Sanchi very well, woh koi na koi raasta nikaal legi Kabir ko manane ke liye…..
Parth: r u sure coz I know Kabir, once he has decided something, no matter what, he will stick to that…
Isha:Don’t worry……Sanchi will surely convince him & if not she can take the help of Kusum Aunty also…
Veer: U r right…….So I think we should also resume our duties….(Ishveer & Parth move on their duties)
Timeskip…..Kanchi, Priya, Sanket reach home(Kapoor Mansion)…..Kabir as usual hugs Kusum & without saying a word, goes into his room…..Kusum was shocked bcz she never saw Kabir in such a bad mood….
Kusum: Sanchi beta, everything is fine na between u two????(when she saw Sanchi sad & quiet, she again asked Sanchi what happened ……. Sanchi said all the incidents to Kusum)…
Kusum: But Sanchi, I think this time Kabir’s right…….just look at urself, u r pregnant ….how can u travel in this condition?????this may be risky for ur & ur baby’s life……
Sanchi:But maa, agar situation buri nahi hoti, I won’t hv said this….. Pragya can’t go as she’s suffering from viral fever, so the only person left is me….& maa, being a doctor, my first priority will alwz be my patients……kaise main apne farz se peeche hatsakti hoon????(after a lot a efforts, sanchi was finally able to convince Kusum)
Kusum:Sanchi beta, u don’t worry, I’ll talk to Kabir……..its already late, u all hv ur dinner, I’ll try to convince Kabir in the morning…..Thank u maa for understanding…said Sanchi & hugged Kusum…
In Kanchi’s room…
Sanchi’s pov:Let me try once more to try to convince Kabir….
Sanchi:Kabir…..
Before saying anything further, she saw Kabir switching off the lights & went to sleep(actually he was pretending to sleep)Sanchi was really hurt by this gesture of Kabir(bg music Bhare Naina…from Ra One movie) finally Sanchi also went for sleeping(infact she was crying reminiscing all the incidents that happened between them some times before….)after sometime both slept…..
In the morning when Sanchi woke up, she didn’t find Kabir in the room……when she went downstairs, she saw Kusum trying to convince Kabir regarding this matter….after a lot of trials, finally Kabir agreed… Sanchi was very very happy that finally Kabir has agreed, she came down & hugged Kabir & Kusum….. now Kusum left from there….
Kabir: Don’t get so much excited….even though I’ve agreed, but still u can go there only if u will work according to my conditions…
Sanchi:Yes KK(she said smiling)…(Kabir glares at her)…..ok ok sorry I won’t call u KK….now tell me what r ur conditions??????????
Kabir:My first condition, u’ve to call me atleast thrice in a day, next u’ve to take care of my golu & her mother, take ur medicines in time, take less stress,……& promise me to return asap…&……Kabir was stopped in the middle by Sanchi…
Sanchi: Arey bas bas……tumhe nahi lagta tumhare instructions ka list kuch jyada hi bada hai???? (Kabir glares her)….ok baba, don’t become mr.angry young man again….I will follow all ur instructions…ok…. (both smile & hug each other)& I promise I’ll take complete care of our golu….
Time skip…….It was the day Sanchi was leaving Kapoor Mansion & was going to Manipur….everyone was present there,Jaya, Sanchi’s dadi, Riya, Ishveer, Parth, Savitri, Anand, even Pragya, even though she felt weak, still she came to see-off her bestie…..Kusum did aarti of Sanchi….Sanchi hugged everyone & finally she left(Sanchi kept on waving her hands looking backwards…..it was an emotional scene….I don’t have words to describe…. It was as if woh akhri baar uske saare apnon ko,I mean family, friends, & his beloved husband Kabir…in sabko dekh rahi ho)… (timeskip)….
Finally Sanchi(who’s now 7 months pregnant) reached to help the Thangal Naga tribes of the Senapathi district in the state of Manipur….. The tribes don’t have any idea about the modern medical techniques…they followed their traditional methods…..no doctor was able to convince them, finally it was through Sanchi’s efforts that they finally agreed…So the treatment got started….
So, as per the instructions of Kabir, Sanchi regularly used to call him & she also shared some pics of her along with the people, the tribes…..Kanchi used to reminisce the time they spent together(bg music.Laagi naa choote from A Gentleman movie) Sanchi with her caring & loving nature had made a special place in the heart of the people of the tribe….The people on knowing that Sanchi’s pregnant, still she came for their help, they in turn started to take care of Sanchi, like their own child…….everything was going on smoothly… finally, it was the day Sanchi would return back to her home…..everyone got very sad coz they had emotionally attached with Sanchi, still knowing the fact that Sanchi would one day return back to her home after everyone’s health has recovered……So on that day, every people of the tribe came to see off their Sanchi(with tears in their eyes)….. Sanchi left from there…..While on her way, Sanchi decided to call Kabir & inform him that she was returning home…so she called Kabir & they had a sweet conversation(muted)…
Kabir:I love u Sanchi….
Sanchi: I love u more…..& take care of urself………Luv u bye…….
Kabir:Bye, take care…….& they switched off their phones….
While on their way, suddenly it started raining very heavily…..The bus in which Sanchi was present, hits landslide & plunges into the river below(guys u remember Uttarakhand incident…not to such a high level, but u can imagine something of that sort)…….the bus drowned in the river….. after getting the news, the local authorities sent their search team so that they could help anyone who got survived in the accident….but they couldn’t found any one living…..every person in the bus was either dead or those missing were also treated as dead, bcz paani ka bahaaw itna tha ki kisika bachpana was impossible…….. So, the local authorities declared every passenger dead…….
On the other side, on getting the accident news, everyone in Kapoor Mansion, Jaya, Sanchi’s dadi, Ishveer, Prarth, Riya, Savitri……everyone was shattered…..IshPraRiya hugged each other while crying(bg music Allah waariyaan from Yaariyaan movie)……Everyone was crying except for Kabir, who still believed that his Sanchi can’t leave him & go….& afterall she promised him to return back……..
Kabir went to his room & holding Sanchi’s pics in his hands started talking with it….(bg music Kab aaoge from Jab Tum Kaho movie)…..I know Sanchi, u’ll surely return back & prove everyone that I was right in saying that my Sanchi can never leave me & go……..(he started reminiscing all the cute moments he spend with Sanchi……from their first meet to all the happenings till date)…..& he slept holding Sanchi’s pic, rather hugged Sanchi’s photo frame & slept……
The next morning, he returns to work….At SDCH, everyone was shocked to see Kabir as they thought Kabir would be grieving on Sanchi’s death….when Kabir glares everyone, all left the place to resume their work…….Some days passes….Kabir now starts to have paranormal experiences & he feels that Sanchi wants to communicate with him….Kabir now starts visiting Sanchi’s patients at the pediatric unit in the hospital…One day, a child(who happened to be Sanchi’s Sanchi’s patients) is brought in an unconscious state….Kabir hears the child calling his name & follows the staff who’re trying to revive him without success- the child’s heart flatlines….As Kabir approached the child, suddenly the heart begins beating again….The following afternoon when Kabir returns to the child to meet him,
Child: U r Sanchi’s Kabir right???
Kabir(in a shocked tone):Yes….But how did u identify me!!!!we’re meeting eachother for the first time, how did u recognize me????
Child: I came to know about u from Sanchi…..The boy tells about his near death experience that how he saw a light & Sanchi showing him Kabir’s image & he saw a curvy cross symbol at the end of the rainbow…
Kabir: Curvy cross….Could u show me by drawing it……..(the child made the symbol & showed Kabir)…could u tell me what this symbol means…..
Child: I don’t know the meaning, bas itna keh sakta hoon..u must go to the rainbow….(Kabir left)
Later while passing another child’s room, Kabir saw the same symbol & this time too the child identifies Kabir & asks him to go to that place……Kabir discusses the entire matter with his gang, Ishveer, Prarth……everyone on listening to Kabir try to convince Kabir that Sanchi’s no more & he has to accept this reality….& he was just hallucinating….Kabir was adamant & he paid no heed to them & left the place leaving everyone shocked…..Now Kabir has decided to visit sister Martha, a controversial nun who investigated near-death experiences….Sister Martha advises Kabir that Sanchi is indeed trying to contact him from the other world….Kabir returns back to his home determined to go to the place where Sanchi was found last……..Kabir went to Ria inorder to convince her to help him in finding Sanchi coz she was a news reporter & this could be a great help for Kabir’s mission of finding Sanchi….even though reluctant, but finally Ria agrees….
Timeskip…..Ria by the help of her sources is successful in finding the location where the bus fell into the river….Kabir & Ria went to that cliff……Kabir sees the bus far down below in the water…Kabir jumps into the river & enters the semi-flooded bus, causing the bus to shift & becoming completely submerged…. Kabir is trapped inside & starts to panic but calms down when a bright glow fills the bus & Sanchi appears in front of him, reaching his hands….The events of her final hours flash before him, showing she survived the initial accident & was pulled to safety by the nearby Thangal Naga tribes…….Kabir is then rescued by the local people whom Ria had asked for help to save Kabir from drowning………
So guys, what do u think Sanchi’s alive or she’s trying to say something else to Kabir which Kabir isn’t getting to understand as of now………..keep guessing……….Friends, I end up my episode her itself……hope u would have liked this episode(rather, a loooooong episode)…….eagerly waiting for all sorts of comments….good or bad ones……fingers crossed…….
With Lots & Lots of LOVE,
Priyanka(Riya)
36 Comments
Wow priyanka…amazing story dear ..i never saw Saaya movie..so i am enjoyung ur story in a whole new fresh way.. amazing writing.. uts just like a movie i am watching.. i feel bad for kabir but hope so sanchi is alive.. and baby too…
Superb one dear
thank u sooooooooooooo much Mitu dear……………I’m really glad u liked it………..thnx dear for being a regular reader……….& ur appreciation means a lot to me…………….luv u Shona……….
Sorry friend muje kuch samaj nahi aya……..iss story ko par kar mera mon bhot kharap ho chuki…….I am so sorry riya please don’t mind………but iss story parlar mere ankh me asu a gae…..please riya clear the story i don’t understand the last part o this story………
oops sorry Anu dear……..ok I’ll try to clear ur misunderstanding…………….actually, after the accident incident, Kabir started hallucinating, & he started feeling as if Sanchi was trying to communicate with him……..& after his encounters with Sanchi’s patients, he decided to go to that accident spot to know what exactly happened……in this process, he reached that spot & when he saw down the cliff, he found the drowned bus in which Sanchi was present…..so to find out more, he decided to go inside the bus,& as he entered the bus, the bus got locked from outside & then Sanchi’s soul(image) appeared in front of him……the moment Sanchi held Kabir’s hand, Kabir started to have glimpses of all the happenings after the accident took place, how Sanchi got saved by the people,…..& rest u can know what happened in my nxt episode………….now I hope, I could be able to clear ur confusions…………luv u dear & thanks dear for commenting…………..
Wowww Dr what a surprising gift of love hats off to u and tq for the awesome ff….pls come back soon with another one
thanks a lot Prema dear…………a broad smile appeared on my face on reading ur comments………..I’m really glad that u liked it………….thnx for commenting & luv u a lot sweetieeeeeeeee………….
Hey Riya this epi is awesome ??? and sad ??? at the same time. I have two ideas on this story. 1) Sanchi isn’t dead and in a coma, her spirit trying to make Kabir come to her. 2) Sanchi was saved but she had her dilivery and she died, she wants Kabir to come to take the baby with him. I don’t know these are just crazy guesses but really hope Sanchi somehow survived ???
thank u so so much Ruwani dear for liking it…..& yes, one of ur guesses is right, but which one, I won’t reveal now……u’ll have to wait for this till the nxt episode…….thnx for commenting & luv u a lot sweetieeeee………
Wow riya! U reminded me of the movie “saaya” where Tara Sharma was drowned and John Abraham witnessing paranormal activities…. Great yaar… I must say excellent n mind-blowing job…
thank u soooooooooo much Anu dear for liking it…………….I was really glad to get appreciation from an amazing writer like u………..this means a lot to me……….luv u a lot sweetieeeeeeee…………
Sweetie aisa keh kar mujhe sharminda mat Karo… U r an amazing writer aur tumhari storyline kisi Bollywood k dhamekedaar film se bhi upar hai… ? u dear…
ab rulaegi kya pagli……..itne tareef karogi, to yahaan to main toh khushi se paagal hi hojaoongi………..luv u a lot Shona………..
Sad tha but story is wonderful riya…… please riya write some another ff…… I miss u riya????
thanku so much Anu dear for liking this…………luv u a lot dear………….
ff is nice but little sad but it’s ok now i m curious what about sanchi and kabir ?
keep writing and update next one soon…………….
Dhruti dear, a big waala thanx for liking this…….I was really glad u liked it………..I’ll try to post nxt episode soon…….luv u a lot sweetieeeeeee…………
I agree with Ruwani I prefer idea 1 though I feel idea 2 may be more relevant.
Feeling soo sad for Kabir.
Post next epi asap I can’t wait to know the authorized meaning of the indications.
Anaa dear, thnx a lot for commenting………..& dear u’ll know abt this in my nxt update…….& dear, thnx for liking it & luv u a lot sweetieeeeeeee………..
Omg that was so good pls post next episode soon I am madly in love wd ur plot yr
Luv uh loads
omg Trisha, I was on cloud9 after reading ur comments………..ur appreciation means a lot to me……..a big waala thnx for liking it…………..luv u a lot cutie pie………..
Its so amazing….. Update the next part soon
thnk u so so much Amnaa dear for liking this………..I’ll surely try to post nxt one asap……..luv u a lot sweetie………..
sweetie this is better than saya movie. wat to say sweetie eveytime u stole my words eveytime it’s beyond everything and now it’s beyond beyond beyond beyond everything a great great great great great great grand salute to u and lots of huggs and kisses to u and luv u so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so much
awwwwwwwww Ashnita dear, itne achhe comments…….rulaogi kya pagli………..hehe……….u r a great writer, & getting appreciation from a writer like u is a very big thing for me………….I’m really glad u liked this………..a big waala teddy hug from my side for u…………..luv u a lot Shona………..
OMG……………..Ri………………………..You amaz me ……………………..I was totally..totally…………………lost in it………………I never saw Saaya Movie………..but dear…..Now i want to see movie …………and dear your story nothing less than Movie………….I Don’t know wat happen next plz Update sooon…..Luv you swwettie……………….
rulaegi kya pagli…………..itne tareef ke kaabil nahi hoon main………..Anee dear, u r a great writer & ur appreciations brought a 100W glow on my face………I just couldn’t stop myself from smiling………luv u loads Shona………..
Oh god yr what a twist …..today’s episode was the best but sad for sanchi but its OK ….and u r marvelous yr….mtlb darwazatod episode!! Loved it!! Love u shona!! Teddy hug for u!!
Abhilasha dear, thnku soooooooooooo much for commenting………….I just keep looking forward to ur comments………..ur appreciation means a lot for me………..a big waala jaadu ki jhappi from my side for u & luv u a lot Shona………..
Wowowwww priyuuuu what an episode yaarrr a lil bit sad but nevermind afterall every story have a twist in it itself but u jzt rocked it dear
Ppst next part asap
Lotssss of kississs and a biiigggg wlaaaa hug for u
T.c dear
thnx a lot Sanju dear…………I’m really glad u liked it…..ur words bought a big smile on my face…….a big waala jaadu ki jhappi for u & luv u a lot Shona……….
Amaz mindblowing epi prinku plzzzz post nxt asap maine saaya movie dekhi h fir bhi ye janne ke liye betaab hun ki kya tumhare ff bhi me bhi wahi hoga ya kuch or m curious to know what happened nxt….
Thnx Niyu dear for commenting………& dear, u’ll get ur answers in my nxt update……….till then, keep smiling & luv u a lot Shona………
Fantastic amazing loved it… Hope Sanchi is alive and the baby is fine too.. Plz try to update asap
Jessi dear, I’m really so so glad that u liked my episode…..hope u keep liking this in my upcoming post……..luv u a lot sweetie……….
Sorry for the late reply episode was awesome super mind blowing fantastic
its ok Divya dear………..I’m glad u liked it….thnx for commenting………luv u a lot sweetie………..