TUM BIN JIYA JAYE KAISE(Episode 9)
A Friend is someone who helps u up when u’re down, & if they can’t, they lay down beside u & listen….this is for all my friends who trusted me that I too have the potential to write something…….luv u a lot & thnx for supporting me throughout……A big waala jaadu ki jhappi to Mitu(Mitali), Anu, Prema, Ruwani, Anuradha, Dhruti, Anaa(Anonymousaa), Trisha, Amnaa, Ashnita, Anee, Abhilasha, Sanju, Niyaa, Jessi….thanku a lot for commenting in my previous update…..
Link for prev.episode: Episode 8
Recap: Kabir’s hallucinations & finally his encounter with Sanchi’s soul…..
Hope sees the Invisible, feels the Intangible & achieves the Impossible…….with this, I start my episode…
In my last episode I ended up with Ria saving Kabir from getting drowned by the help of the local people….
Ria: Kabir, r u fine?????
Kabir: Yes Ria I’m ok…….Ria, u know what, my Sanchi is alive……our Sanchi is alive(he said in an excited tone)….
Ria: But Kabir….how’s that possible??????(she gave a confused look)
Kabir: This is bcoz, a few minutes before I saw her…..I saw my Sanchi….
Ria(trying to pacify Kabir): Kabir, plz try & understand, its all ur hallucination…nothing more……
Kabir(in an angry tone): u don’t believe me right….then let me prove this to u……..U remember, I showed a symbol to all of u few days back….
Ria:of course I remember….but how does that prove ur words?????
Kabir: To find out the meaning of it, I went to sister Marthaa…..she said me that the wiggly cross is the map symbol for a waterfall…….now take a look at this pic…(he shows his mobile) in which Sanchi had sent her photo posing in front of the waterfall with a rainbow behind her…..
Ria:That means our Sanchi is….
Kabir(nodding his head):ALIVE……Ria was very much delighted on listening this….Kabir & Ria without wasting any more time, head towards the village……Initially they were surrounded by a gang of angry native men holding weapons……Kabir took out Sanchi’s pics & holds it up…
Kabir(questioning the men): Does anyone know her(he’s showing Sanchi’s pic)…..
Everyone present there identifies her…..of course we know her, she’s Sanchi…but who r u????…asked the men…
Kabir:Sanchi’s my wife…..I’m Kabir, her husband…& she’s Ria(pointing to Ria),Sanchi’s friend…
A native woman comes there & takes Kabir & Ria with her……Kabir & Ria were very happy as today they’re finally going to meet Sanchi, their Sanchi……the lady took them to a hut…..
Kabir:Aunty, where’s my Sanchi????
Ria:Yes aunty, plz tell us, where’s our Sanchi???
She’s no more…..came the reply of the lady……We tried our best to save her, but due to severe blood loss after the accident we couldn’t save her……Kabir & Ria were shattered on hearing this….
Kabir stood there like a statue(ek zinda laash ki tarah)(bg song Mujhe teri zaroorat hai from Ek Villain movie)….he started reminiscing all the time he spent with Sanchi….their first meet, their love confession, their marriage, all their cute nok-jhok, their romance…….he was crying badly……
Lady: Plz calm down beta………even if we couldn’t save ur Sanchi, but we somehow managed to save her soul…….Kabir & Ria were perplexed at such a statement of the lady…..She took them inside a room & there Kabir & Ria found a baby…..
Lady:Even though we lack in medical facilities, we somehow managed to save Sanchi’s child…..
Kabir at once ran there & embraces his child…………(Itne bade toofan se guzarne ke baad, finally ek halki si khushi ki umeed is something like, doobte ko tinke ka sahara…….)he starts kissing the baby’s forehead, cheeks, hands, feet, while tears kept rolling down his cheeks…He now realises that Sanchi’s spirit was trying to reach him so that he could meet their child…..Ria also became very emotional……..she went to the lady & thanked her a lot for taking care of the baby…..
Lady:Beta, Sanchi was an angel…….whatever she did for us, this(taking care of baby) is nothing in comparision to that….Duniya mein bahut kum log hote hain jo apne se pehle doosron ke bare mein sochte hain & Sanchi was one of them……….
The next day, Kabir & Ria thank the people & finally return with the baby & Sanchi’s asthi to their home……..Kabir takes their child home & narrates all the incidents in front of everyone….. Everyone was emotional on seeing Sanchi’s asthi…..but a little tear of joy came in everyone’s eyes bcz Sanchi apni nishaani chod gayi thi……Kanchi’s son…………..
Timeskip to 8 yrs…..
Now let me give a hint at who all r playing the role of Ruhi & our beloved Kanchi’s son….Ruhi’s role is played by Ruhanika Dhawan, while Kanchi’s son’s role played by Vansh Maheshwari…..
Kusum was shown shouting out at the top of her voice….SAHIL…………RUHI beta kahaan ho tum……….(Yes guys, Sahil is the name of Kanchi’s son)…..they were playing the game of Aankh micholi…….Kusum was about to get hit by the table when suddenly two childrens came running & pulled her back….
Dadi sambhaalke…….said Ruhi & Sahil……
Pakad liya…..said Kusum holding both the childrens in her arms……
Ruhi:Dadi, this is cheating…..
Sahil:Yes dadi, dii..is saying right……this is cheating…..
Ruhi:If u do like this then we won’t play with u….& she turns to the other side(with a fake anger expression)…
Sahil:Yes dadi, diii…is right…..if u’ll do this we won’t play with u…& he also stands near his sis, crossing his hands exactly like his dii……(guys till now u might hv understood……Sahil does everything that his dii does……somewhat like a chamcha types….)
Kusum:Bacho maaf kardo, agli baar se aisa nahi hoga…..(she says folding her hands)
Ruhi:U alwz say this, but again u forget & do cheating….
Sahil:Yes dadi…diiii is right…..(he’s stopped in the middle by Kusum)
Kusum:Samajh gayi, samajh gayi……dii ki baat bhi aur apne dii ke poonch(tail) ki bhi…..(Ruhi & Sahil give glares at Kusum)….ok baba Sorry……..PINKY PROMISE, I won’t do anymore cheating…..ok….ab khush….
Ruhi & Sahil: Bahut bahut bahut khush….& they hugged Kusum……
Some time skip…..Sanket, Priya, Kabir return home from hospital……..both the kids came running & hugged them…..Priya made both the kids sit on her lap….everyone was looking at them lovingly…..
Priya: So, how was ur school today????? Kya masti kiya….dadi ko jyada tang to nahi kiya na??
Ruhi:No mama, u know na we’re good children, we’ll not do any mischief, right Sahil…
Sahil: Yes Badi maa(Sahil calls Priya as Badi maa)….dii is right…..
Priya: Good…..now tell me what u’ll have for dinner???
Ruhi:Aaloo ka paratha…..
Sahil:Golgappa…..On hearing this, everyone got reminded of Sanchi, esp.Kabir…….actually Sahil has a lot of things in common with Sanchi…..
Kusum:Sanket, Priya, Kabir…..first go & freshen up…..then we’ll have our dinner….
Kabir(looking towards Sahil): Champ, lets go……
Sahil:Yes papa…..(Kabir carried Sahil on his shoulders & went towards his room…..hehe…)
Time-skip
The next day, Ruhi & Sahil while on their way to school, saw an injured puppy in the middle of the road….
Ruhi(to Sahil):U stay here,I’ll go & bring the puppy, else it might die if any vehicle goes over it..
Sahil:But diii……..
Ruhi:U won’t listen to ur diii…..Ok dii, I’ll stay here, said Sahil(making a puppy face)
Ruhi went as fast as she could to save the puppy…….Suddenly a car stopped in front of her….2 kids were there inside it, a boy & a girl……
Boy:Driver uncle, what happened??why did u stop…..
Driver:Nothing baba, a little girl came right at the middle of the road, so I had to stop the car…
The boy came out of the car & a smile came on his face when he saw Ruhi carrying the injured puppy in her hands, but before he could say anything Ruhi left from there with the puppy towards Sahil…..The boy came inside the car & asked driver to start the car…
Girl:What happened bhaiyya……
Boy:Nothing bachha……& finally they left….
Timeskip…..
While moving on the corridor of the school, that same boy & Ruhi came face to face……..& the boy immediately recognized Ruhi…..
Boy: Hello…. u r the same girl na who saved that injured puppy today in the road….. I’m Aryan Dhanrajgir…….& u are….(& he moved his hands forward for a handshake)
Ruhi was a little bit of introvert kind of a girl & she didn’t talk with any stranger……but Sahil was just the opposite……..when he saw Ruhi was becoming nervous, he immediately came to her.
Sahil came in the middle & starts scolding Aryan for bothering his diii….
Aryan:I was just trying to…..
Sahil:Trying to do what……don’t u dare again…….mere diii ko pareshaan kiya toh…..
Suddenly a girl came in front of Aryan & started arguing with Sahil…
Girl: How dare u talk to my brother like this????
Sahil: Shut up Chipkali……how dare ur brother bother my sister?????
Girl: How dare u….u called me chipkali…..if I’m chipkali, then u r a mendak…..u don’t know whom u’re talking with….I’m Kavya Dhanrajgir……mujhse panga lena bohat bhaari padega tumhe…
Sahil: Oh ho…I got scared….(he starts laughing loudly)…..So miss Kavya chipkali, u also don’t know to whom u r talking….I’m Sahil Kapoor & she’s my sis Ruhi Kapoor…….its better if u don’t come in our ways…….it’ll be good for u………….& they both started fighting like cats & dogs…..while Ruhi & Aryan were dragging them in opposite directions, to end their fights…..
Some days pass & by this time Ruhi & Aryan have become friends…..but Sahil & Kavya, they still r big enemies….they just can’t stand each other…..
Time skip……Aryan & Kavya’s father has got transferred to Bengaluru for which they hv to shift from Delhi to Bengaluru…….On their last day of school(Aryan & Kavya)Ruhi & Aryan tied a friendship band to each other…..
Sahil:Thank God………u r leaving(looking at Kavya)….now I can get some peace……..good bye Chipkali & I won’t miss u at all….
Kavya:same here mendak….even I won’t miss u at all……..
Everyone bid goodbye to them…..(all school friends)……
Time skip….to 12 years…..
Now guys, Ruhi & Sahil have grown up….grown up Ruhi played by Sukirti Kandpal & Sahil’s character played by Kinshuk Vaidya….
It was a Winter morning….& as u all know, Delhi ki sardi………uff………
Kabir & Sahil were jogging…..suddenly Sahil stopped in the middle…
Kabir:What happened beta????
Sahil:Just a minute papa……
Sahil walks towards an old lady who sat in the park shivering in cold……He gave his jacket to the old lady….
Lady:But beta, u gave ur coat to me…how’ll u stay in this chilling weather….u take back ur jacket…..I’ll be fine……
Sahil:No kaki……..I’m fine, u need this jacket more than me…….plz apna beta samajhkar ye rakh lijiye…….
Lady:May God bless u beta……….duniya mein bohut kum log hote hain jo apne se pehle doosron ke bare mein sochte hain….u’re one of them……
Kabir saw all this standing at a distance, smiling proudly…..
Kabir:See Sanchi, our Sahil, hamara Golu, he’s exactly like u………..he even gives priority on other’s happiness than himself………I’m really proud of my son……
Time skip…..
It was the college fest going on……..Ruhi took part in the singing competition…..she was very nervous…..Sahil came near her & tries to boost her confidence…..
Sahil:Dii…..don’t worry…….I’m there with u na,don’t worry…..my dii is the best….I know, at the end, sab aapke liye standing ovation denewaale hain…..Ruhi smiled & hugged him…hope so….
Ruhi’s name is announced as the nxt contestant….
Sahil:All the best diii…….just rock the stage……..
Ruhi went to stage…..the moment lights fall on her, she became nervous…& couldn’t utter a word……After thinking for sometime, Sahil went on the stage with his guitar & started playing the music…..Ruhi finally smiled (she closed her eyes & thinks abt her family…& opens her eyes)
Ruhi starts singing the song Main Kaun Hoon(from the movie Secret Superstar)….everyone got so involved in the song that they didn’t even notice that Ruhi’s song has already ended…..finally everyone stood up & gave Ruhi a standing ovation, even the judges appreciated Ruhi a lot…… & guess what, 1st prize in singing was bagged by Ruhi……….
So guys, I think if I keep writing this, u’ll start scolding me for writing such a long update…..for this, I would wrap up my episode here itself……till then, take care & plz plz plz, don’t forget to comment…..I really need ur opinion regarding this……..
With Lots & Lots of LOVE,
Priyanka(Riya)
42 Comments
Oh so what I feared has happened. Sanchi has died.
So now the love story of the kids filled with tashan. This seems very interesting.
Plz post next epi asap. And we actually love long updates. And why will we ever scold our dear Sissie Ri !!!! Luv uh a lot my dea !
Anaa dear, I was on cloud9 after reading ur comments………..u just made my day…………thnx for commenting & luv u a lot Shona…………..
So cute u r made it totally happy yaeer tq
hehe……..thnku Prema dear……..like I said, my ff will end on a happy note……….so…..btw dear, I’m really glad u liked it…….luv u sweetie………..
superb one update next one soon………….
thnku sooooooooo much Dhruti dear……….I’ll surely try to post nxt one asap………….
Ye kya behen saanchi Mar gyi??
Maine to uske aage padha hi nhi??????
so so sorry Priyanshi dear for making u cry, but dear, I already gave a hint abt Sanchi’s death right from my 1st episode by saying that its inspired from the movie Saaya……….but dear, as per my word u can see I’m heading this plot to a happy waala story…….plz thoda aage padho, I hope u won’t be dissapointed……..apni iss behen ki baat maankar ek baar padho to sahi………..uske baad plz comment….acha tha ya nahin….
Maine padha it was awesome.
Par jaisa aapne kaha ki ye saya naam ki movie se inspired h to m sorry maine movie nhi dekhi.
Par maine aage padha or ye Acha lga.
Main apne emotions control nhi kar payi kyuki thik iske pehle maine dusra ff padha “mera kabir ” or usme bhi sad ending tha. I think aapne bhi padha hoga.
hehe…….thnku so much dear for liking it…………luv u sweetieeeeee………….
I read both of the epis together and they are both beyond my vocabulary….it was spool good….i just loved it…….you are outstanding dear….and soooo sorry for not commenting in your previous because I read both of them together….and love the positive Riya….keep writing your splendid works…
…love you loads and loads ❤????❤
omg am I dreaming or what………somebody plz pinch me……..haha……….Tania dear…….u r a great writer, & getting appreciation from u…………this really means a lot to me…………& don’t worry, u commented in this post na, this matters me the most………….even though I feel that main itne tareef ke layak nahin hoon, phir bhi, I got a 100W glow on my face after reading ur comments………….thnx for commenting dear & luv u a lot Shona………..
Awwww amazing dear spell bound schiii
awwwww……….Trisha dear, ur comments bought a broad smile on my face………ur appreciation means a lot to me………thnku soooooooooooo much for commenting & luv u loads my cutie pie……
kya kahein tusi chahagya. darvaza tod khidki tod and many more it’s beyond beyond beyond beyond beyond beyond beyond beyond beyond beyond beyond beyond beyond beyond beyond beyond beyond beyond beyond beyond beyond beyond everything waiting for next part lots of huggs and kisses to u and luv u loads ????????
arey bas kar, rulaegi kya pagli…..haha……mujhe aisa lag raha hai, jaise mein hawaaon me udd rahi hoon…….are, itne ache comments sunne ke baad toh aisa hi hoga na………..u know what, I just keep waiting ki kab tumhara comments ayega….ur comments r like a power booster for me……….thnx for commenting….a big teddy hug for u & luv u dher saara………..
Amazing
thnku so much Alia dear for liking it…………..luv u a lot sweetie…………
Hey riu the episode was soooooo amazing yaar…. Sachi mai tumne toh mindblow kar diya….. I m getuping and clapping for ur such a superb episode…. Actually I also read ur previous episode but for some reason couldn’t comment soooo sorry for that and that episode was also speechless and epic… Waiting for ur next episode dear… love u?
awwwwwwwww………..tumne toh mujhe rula hi dia vrushti(khushi ke aansu)……….I mean, itna achha comments dogi, toh main to khushi se phule nahi samaungi…………ur comments mean a lot for me……….thnx for commenting…….I’ll surely try to post the nxt episode asap…hope u would like it…..a big waala teddy hug for u & luv u a lot Shona………….
Aye haye riya aj to tumne khidki-darwaza tod hi nahi deewar tod update dia ………Sanchi k liye feeling really bad but koi in Ji zondagi air mat me fark sirf saanso ka h(aivayi Nana dala dialogue) PR sach me jhakkkaaasss!!
Abhilasha dear, ur comments bought a broad smile on my face………..u just made my day…………I’m really glad that u liked this episode…..this means a lot to me……………luv u a lot Shona & a big waala teddy hug for u……………..
Ri….You use introduced all my fav actors….dear….amazing….superbbbb….mindblowing…………….saare words kum hain…..you left me speechlesss……keep rock.
awwwww………thnku sooooooooo much Anee dear………….thnx for being a regular reader & commenter……… a big teddy hug for u & luv u a lot Shona…………
Amaz prinku but sad for kabir ab no kanchi lovv story ab unke bachcho ki chalegi per loi nahi m enjoy it a loads post nxt asap…
thnku sooooooo much Niyaa dear, I’m really glad to know u liked it……….I’ll surely try to post my nxt update asap…………thnx for commenting & luv u a lot sweetieeeee………
Wowwww dear… no words vmcan describe how much i am happy to read ur article.. u r amazing. And why would we scold u? U r our little sis dear…
First i felt that…after sanchi’s death.. u will bring a hamshakal of her to fill kabir’s lonely life…but the twist of urs was much better than this… u just nailed it dear…
Mitu dear, I was on cloud9 after reading ur comments, ur comments bought a 100W glow on my face…..thnx for being my bournvita(no milk as I hate it)…….hehe……….I mean power booster throughout all my episodes……………luv u a lot Shona………….
I too hate milk dear.. but i love Bournvita more?? and lots of love to u dear..
hehe………luv u more…….& a big waala teddy hug for u………
Its written so beautifully…. Their son is the perfect reflection of Saanchi…..amazing…. Loved it very much
thanku so so much Amnaa dear………I’m glad u liked this & luv u a lot sweetieeeeeeee…………
Awesome super fabulous fantastic mind blowing soo cute update soon can’t be
omg, rulaogi kya pagli????itne saare tareef wo bhi ek saath…………luv u a lot sweetie………….
Fantastic.. Amazing… Mind blowing… Awesome… Fabulous… Ravishing…. And emotional at the same time.. Loved it…
Jessi dear, I was on cloud9 after reading ur comments………..thnx for being a regular reader & luv u a lot sweetieeeeeeeee…………
??? nooooo Sanchi died ??? it was my second guess ??? but Sahil…… Soooo cute ??? always think dii is right ??? awesome dear!! Waiting for the next part ???
sorry Ruwani dear for making u cry………..& dear, ur guess was right………but I was very very very happyyyy that u liked this episode……………thnx for being a regular reader……..a big waala teddy hug for u & luv u dher saara…………
Greaaaaatttt priyu u jzt rocked it jzt like ruhi rock the stage luv u loads sweetieee
thnk u soooooooo much Sanju dear……..ur comments bought a 100W glow on my face………..thnx for commenting & luv u a lot sweetieeeeee………
Riya dear…10000times standing ovation wala episode…. Bilkul fadoo tha…one line for u… Kya karu hayein riya k ff se kuch kuch hota hai…. Seer jhukaye main baithi hu please keep your hands ….arey yaar aashirwaad toh do ki main bhi tumhari Tarah likh pau…. Jaldi se dena I m waiting…..
koi plz mujhe pinch karo, kahin main koi sapna toh nahi dekh rahi hoon…………but Anu dear seriously, I don’t think main itne tareef paane ke laayak ban payi hoon…….but dear, u r a great writer & getting appreciation from u, this really means a lot for me……..thanku thanku thanku soooooo much for such lovely comments……a big teddy hug for u & luv u a lot Shona……….