TUM BIN JIYA JAAYE KAISE(Episode 10….& my Last episode)
Good friends help u to find important things when u have lost them…..ur smile, ur hope & ur courage………u guys r one of those peoples who make my life better just by being in it….
Guys today with a heavy heart I’m going to post my last episode, ur constant support throughout this entire journey is highly commendable……..u guys can’t even imagine how much grateful I’m for getting so much(constant) support……mere iss safar mein mere Humraahi ban ne ke liye, thank u a lot……..First of all a big big THANK U & a bada waala Jaadu ki Jhappi to Anaa, Prema, Dhruti, Priyanshi, Tania, Trisha, Ashnita, Alia, Vrushti, Abhilasha, Anee, Niyaa, Mitu(Mitali), Amnaa, Divya, Jessica, Ruwani, Sanju, Anu(Anuradha)…..without the support of u all, main itna lamba safar tay nahi karsakti thi, thnx for being by my side & being so supportive…..& a big thanks to silent readers too(I hope some of my silent readers to comment too for one last time)……..without wasting any more time, lets get started….
Recap:Ruhi & Sahil have grown up…….Ruhi has won the best singer award in her college fest….
Time skip…..
Kapoor mansion is beautifully decorated, of course, for celebrating Ruhi’s success…Everyone was present there to celebrate Ruhi’s success…….apart from the Kapoor family, Jaya, Sanchi’s dadi, Isha, Pragya, Riya, Parth, Veer & their childrens were present along with Savitri, Anand, some of the hospital staffs too……….
Guys, 2 more characters entry……Parth & Pragya’s son, Pratik(played by Arijit Taneja)…..while Isha & Veer’s son, Sagar(played by Rohan Mehra)…& of course, like their parents used to be, the trio(Sahil, Pratik & Sagar) r best buddies too…..
Kabir(to everyone):Guys guys guys, I’ve an announcement to make…..we all r here to celebrate our rockstar’s success, but guess what, I’ve a surprise for u all……
Sahil:Papa, what is the surprise????
Kabir(kabir laughs):Golu……if I’ll tell u, then how can be it a surprise????U’ll have to wait for that….but I can give u a hint…apart from our family & friends, a special guest is also coming to our place….U’ll have to wait for that….till then,enjoy the party……(everyone leave, but of course, they all had just one question in their mind…what was the surprise & who was coming)
Timeskip…..A middle aged man(abt 40-45yrs)in black suit enters the Kapoor mansion…he was welcomed by Kabir….
Kabir:Hello Mr.Dhanrajgir……plz come…..so good to see u, & thnx for accepting my invitation…
Mr.Dhanrajgir:No Dr.Kabir, the pleasure is all mine……its really a great honour for me to be a part of the best doctor of our nation’s family function….(they smile…Kabir took him inside)
Kabir(to everyone):Everyone, he’s the one I was talking about….meet Mr.Vijay Dhanrajgir, owner of Musicana India ltd.,India’s leading music company…(guys its just a name came into my mind….no such music company exists)…….everyone greet him…..
Mr.Dhanrajgir:Thank u so much for inviting me….Its my pleasure to be here….
Kabir:Actually Mr.Dharajgir is here with us due to some special reason also…..
Kusum:What Kabir????
Kabir: Actually Mr.Dhanrajgir saw a video of our Ruhi while she was singing..& he wants that our Ruhi could become a part of his music company as the female lead singer……..We had a conversation regarding this matter & I was really glad but couldn’t make any decision at that moment without taking the approval of everyone, especially Ruhi…..So, what do u all have to say about this????(everyone looked very excited….)
Sanket:Its really great of u Mr.Dhanrajgir……Why won’t we disagree to such a great opportunity…But before that, I want to take Ruhi’s opinion on this…..(guys, even though both the kids were close to Priya, but Ruhi shared all her thoughts, her secrets more with her father….she loved Sanket a little more…)Sanket came near Ruhi & asked her about this….
Ruhi:I’ll do as u all wish….I know, u all know which thing is better for me, more than me…
Sanket:So, should I take it as a yes from u…Ruhi nodded & hugged Sanket….everyone were really delighted….
Sahil, Pratik, Sagar:CONGRATULATIONS DIII…..they four had a group hug……
Kusum:Mr.Dhanrajgir, u came alone….u didn’t bring ur family with u, ur wife, ur children….
Mr Dhanrajgir:Maaji u can call me Vijay….actually I lost my wife in a road accident…& as far as my children r concerned, actually due to an urgent meeting, my son had to go to the office…& as far as my daughter is concerned, she’ll come with her brother…the fact is, she can’t stay a single minute away from her brother…..(Kusum smiles)….After the meeting is over, they will be here anytime…
Kusum:Same goes with our kids….Ruhi & Sahil….they both r also inseparable….isiliye toh hum Sahil ko Ruhi ki poonch kehkar chidate hain….& they both laugh….
Sometime skip….A very handsome guy & a beautiful girl, beautifully dressed, arrived at the Kapoor mansion, holding each other’s hand….& they went near Mr. Dhanrajgir & stood by his side…
Sahil, Pratik & Sagar were standing at a distance…
Pratik:Look Sahil, she’s so gorgeous…..
Sagar:Yes Pratik, u r right, never seen such a beautiful girl in my life….
Sahil(irritatingly):Shut up u both…..I think u both don’t have any work, har waqt ladki ladki ladki…..
Pratik:Pagla gaye ho kya….(oh ho, afterall he’s Pragya’s son..something he also has inculcated from his mother)….how can u say like this to such a girl who almost looks like an angel….
Sahil:U both keep on blabbering…I’m leaving……
Sagar:Ok Ok sorry……plz don’t go anywhere, we won’t talk abt her anymore….
Mr.Dhanrajgir:So guys, meet the essence of my life, my world, my children….he’s Aryan(pointing towards the guy…..character played by Ashish Kapoor) & she’s my princess, my Kavya(pointing towards the girl….played by Priyal Gor)….Aryan & Kavya touched the feet of the elders & everyone blessed them…Ruhi & Sahil were looking towards each other…both were smiling,in fact, shocked & smile at the same time….
Aryan(went towards Ruhi forwarded his hand for a handshake):Hello Ruhi……..Hello Sahil…..
Ruhi & Sahil(shaking hands with Aryan):Hello….
Aryan:Long time……
Ruhi:Hmmm….12 years…..
Mr.Dhanrajgir:Do u guys know each other????
Aryan:Yes dad….we’re in the same school before we shifted to Bengaluru….
Sahil(moving towards Kavya):So u r chipkali Kavya right……..
Kavya(angrily):Shut up u Mendak………no one could control & everybody start laughing…
Kabir(while laughing):Chipkali, mendak…..what is all this beta????
Sahil:Papa while we’re at school, we used to call each other by this name…..
Aryan:This is nothing uncle, u should have seen them at school….they just can’t stand each other… all time fighting just like cats & dogs……isn’t it Ruhi????(Ruhi gives death glares to Aryan)
Ruhi(smiling):Yes chachu…..Aryan is right…..all our efforts just goes on pacifying both of them…
Sahil(making a puppy face):Dii, u know na, everytime this Chipkali starts the argument??
Kavya:No, not at all, Mendak u r the one who initiates the argument, right bhai???
Sahil(in a disbelieving look):Hoooo…chipkali, u r such a liar….
Kavya(angrily):Shut up u liar Mendak…..
Sahil(angrily):U shut up chipkali…..& their fight continues…..everyone had put their hands on their ears….
Aryan(trying to pull Kavya backwards):Bachha, bas bas…..aaj ke liye itna kafee hai……plz calm down..
Kavya:Bhaiyya, u alwz telling me, u should instead try to close the mouth of this mendak….
Ruhi trying her best to calm down Sahil, Pratik & Sagar r also trying to calm him……Finally their arguments r settled……of course by Aryan & Ruhi….Everyone start laughing while Sahil & Kavya r still giving death glares to each other…..
Timeskip….
Ria:Guys every function is incomplete without any sort of singing & dancing….so, without wasting any more time, lets start our celebration with the dance of the best couple..Priya dii & Jiju…everyone claps for them….
Priya & Sanket dance romantically on the song Tum Ho(from movie Rockstar)…..In between their dance Kabir starts imagining that he’s dancing with Sanchi….guys, its really very very emotional one……song ends…he’s bought to present by the clapping sound by others……
Ria:Now plz put ur hands together for our beloved couples….Parth & Pragya as well as Veer & Isha….
Both the couples performed a classy ballroom dance on the song Nazdeekiyaan(from the movie Shandaar)….everyone was smiling seeing them dance so cutely…..
Ria:So, now enough of romantic dance moves…..now we want to see some masaaledaar dance performances….
Pratik & Sagar dance on the song Make some noise for the Desi Boyz…
Next they r followed by a Tashan filled dance performance, performed by Sahil & Kavya on the song Thug Le(from the movie Ladies vs Ricky Bahl)….
Aryan sings O Rabba main toh margaya(from movie Mausam…..he kept peeping at Ruhi without anyone’s notice….)…but guess what, Mr.Dhanrajgir caught him while he was trying to get a glance of Ruhi….
Final performance dedicated to Ruhi…..everyone of the Kapoor family, Ishveer, Prarth, Riya, Jaya together perform on the song Aye dil laaya hai bahaar (from the movie Kya Kehna..)….guys I really wanted to elaborate this song, but can’t coz it’ll make my plot more lengthy….
After spending some more light moments, Mr.Dhanrajgir finally left with his children thanking them for those special moments…..
Timeskip to 2 days….Mr.Dhanrajgir made a surprise visit to the Kapoor mansion…..
Mr.Dhanrajgir: Sorry, I came here without taking ur permission…
Kusum:Its fine Vijay beta….u can come here anytime….we won’t mind at all….
Mr Dhanrajgir: Thnk u so much maaji….actually I’ve came here to ask something from u…..(everyone looked puzzled)….The fact is, my son Aryan loves Ruhi & wants to make her his life-partner….for this I came to ask Ruhi’s hand for my son Aryan……..(Kusum stood up with attitude…& starts leaving)
Sanket(looking confused):Bua ji, where r u going???
Kusum:To bring sweets……(starts laughing)…Itni badi khushi ki baat mithaai ke bina kaise ho sakti hai?????(everyone was happy)……
Kabir:But maa, first we’ve to know what Ruhi feels for Aryan…….(everyone agree with Kabir)…
Priya & Kusum go to Ruhi’s room & talk about the whole matter & they came to know that Ruhi also likes Aryan……they come outside & inform everyone that Ruhi has no problem with the proposal…. Everyone started congratulating each other….all were happy……..Before leaving, Mr.Dhanrajgir handed their Khaandaani kangan as a shagun to Ruhi……..
So guys, the wedding preparations started & since panditji took out the marriage date which was after 7 days… kisiko saans lene ki bhi fursat nahi thi…..guys sorry in advance coz I can’t elaborate the wedding rituals……..First day was Tilak rasam……….this was followed by the Engagement ceremony…..followed by Sangeet & Mehendi ceremony………
Finally arrives the most awaited day….the wedding day……….Both The Kapoor Mansion & The Dhanrajgir House was very very beautifully decorated….just like a dulhan….While leaving for marriage from Dhanrajgir house, during the wedding procession, Kavya dances on the song Pyaara bhaiyya mera(from movie Kya Kehna)…nxt everyone dance on Tere dwaare pe aayi baraat(Vivah movie)……All the baraatis r whole heartedly welcomed inside…. Sahil & Kavya on seeing each other,start glaring each other….chipkali kahinki…says Sahil….Shut up u Mendak….said Kavya…….Pratik & Sagar gave a disgusted look, like tum dono kabhi nahi soodhroge types………….Finally Ruhi & Aryan’s grand wedding was taking place…(bg song Taare Hain Baraati from movie Virasat..)….during every rituals which was performed, Kabir kept reminiscing abt his marriage with Sanchi….he became very emotional, this was observed by Sahil…..Kabir left from the place & went into his room…..Sahil went after Kabir….
Kabir was holding Sanchi’s photo frame in his hands & was crying(bg song Koi Fariyaad from movie Tum Bin..)…I’m sorry Sanchi…..I was not with u when u needed me the most….I’m not at all a good husband….I’m not a good husband……..he was crying badly……Hearing some footsteps outside the room, Kabir quickly put Sanchi’s photo in his drawer & wiped his tears….
Sahil:Papa, u crying….Bidaai main toh abhi time hai na…..ya phir aap mama ko yaad kar rahe the??
Kabir:Golu, I’m not crying, something went into my eyes..thats why……
Sahil: U can’t lie to me papa….I know, seeing dii’s marriage, u got reminded of mama….& u came here so that nobody will see u crying….I’m right na???
Kabir(hugged Sahil)…It was a mixed expression of sad & happiness on Kabir’s face, sad bcz his Sanchi is no more & happy bcz she has left her soul…their Golu, who has inculcated the caring & loving nature of his mother….
Sahil:Oh ho papa, see bcz of u I’m gonna miss my dii’s wedding…..
Kabir:Oye Golu, Ruhi tumhari dii baad mein, pehle woh meri niece hai…..(both laugh)
After some time, both father & son went downstairs……
Panditji:Dulha Dulhan..get up for the pheras…..(guys Taare hain baraati song again resumed..hehe)
Aryan & Ruhi do the 7 pheras….& finally sit down…
Panditji:Now fill Bride’s hairline with vermillion & tie this nupitial chain around her neck….
Aryan fills Ruhi’s hairline & ties the nupitial chain…..
Panditji:Aaj se aap dono vidhi vadh pati patni hai….Apne pariwaar ke saare badon ka aashirvaad le lein…
Aryan & Ruhi take blessings of Mr.Dhanrajgir, Kusum, Anand, Savitri, Jaya, Sanchi’s dadi, Sanket, Priya, Kabir, Riya, Isha, Pragya, Parth, Veer….Kavya hugs Aryan & Ruhi….Pratik,Sagar hug Ruhi & Aryan…..Sahil became emotional when Ruhi hugged him….
Sahil:Dii, what will I do if u will go away, main toh aapka poonch hoon na…..how can I live without u???
Ruhi(smiling):Paagal, don’t worry, u can come to meet me anytime u want to….Aryan will surely have no problem with that…Am I saying right Aryan???…..
Aryan:Of course Sahil, u can come anytime to meet ur sis……
Sahil(taking Ruhi away from Aryan):Dii…I’ve an idea….why not we keep Jiju as ghar jamaai…..u won’t have to go anywhere nor will I be sad of getting away from u……..On hearing this, Kavya came near them….
Kavya(angrily):Oye Mendak, how dare u even think of making my bro as ghar jamaai????
Sahil(irritatingly):Shut up u chipkali….its between me & my dii….u don’t interfere……
Kavya:Of course I’ll interfere, u r talking abt my bro, & moreover, ur dii is my bhabhi now…..
Ruhi:Now will u 2 stop arguing…now, put fingers on ur lips….they did as Ruhi said…(looking at Sahil)look Sahil…..what u r saying isn’t possible…..I’ve to go to Aryan’s house….can u bear if anyone will taunt ur dii that her husband is a ghar jamaai….Sahil nodded his head negatively….
Sahil:I understood diii, but u tell Jiju, I’ve more rights on u than him….Ruhi smiled & hugged him…
Timeskip…
now it was time for family photograph……everyone posed for the photos with the wedding couple….after some photos, finally the photographer made Sahil & Kavya stand behind Ruhi & Aryan for the pics….
Sahil:Photograph, that too with this chipkali…no ways…..
Kavya:What a co-incidence…..I also don’t want any pics of mine with this Mendak…..
Sahil:Shut up u chipkali…..
Kavya:Shut up u Mendak…….
Both Aryan & Ruhi said them to be quiet & stop arguing….Sahil & Kavya gave death glares to each other & finally they turned their faces in opposite directions……guess what, a photo was clicked in this pose…..hehe…………..During this time, Kabir imagined Sanchi’s soul was standing there & was smiling….Kabir also had a little smile on his face……
Finally everyone came there for their group pic with the newly wedded couple….starting from Sanchi’s dadi, Jaya, Kusum, Anand, Savitri, Mr.Dhanrajgir, Sanket, Priya, Kabir, Riya, Pragya, Isha, Veer, Parth, Pratik, Sagar & not to forget Kavya & Sahil………& their photo was clicked…….
THE END…..
So guys, this was my story…..starting with one marriage(Kabir & Sanchi) & ending up with another (Aryan & Ruhi)….I just hope u would have liked my journey throughout………Thnx for all ur love, ur support, ur motivations without which I couldn’t have imagined to write….
My final song dedicated to u guys….Hum Rahe Yaa Na Rahe Kal…..(by KK)
So guys, with a heavy heart, I’ve these lines for u………
Your towering presence, was alwz inspiring…..
Your reassuring words, were stress busting….
Your constant support, was highly motivating….
Farewell to all my friends, whom I’ll be dearly missing………..
LOVE YOU ALL……………….
55 Comments
Firstly a big sorry for being an irregular commenter. I stay so busy that I can barely get 2 hours of sleep. I have been always reading ur ff and ur plot was so unique. The shift of couples was so special and seeing the last episode gave me a shock. And why are u saying bye and stuff??? I am not going to leave Kaanchi so easily. Ur little sis is not requesting but ordering u to come back with a new one. U have to write again!!! Pls pls. Now coming back to the episode it was stupendous and so magical. Loved every bit of it. I would be very sad to bid a goodbye but I want to see another one… I really loved being a part of this sweet journey. Thanks for writing such a beautiful ff for us. I will miss it a lot.. Waiting for your comeback.. Love u loads ?
Annie dear….I was really missing ur comments throughout my plots…….u know what, I even felt that u might not be liking my plot for which u were not commenting….but sweety, I’m really relieved after reading ur comments………& dear, I had to end this here itself bcz I’ve my exams next month & I won’t be able to give sufficient time to writing…..I hope u understand………..btw, I’m really glad to get appreciation from one of my favorite authors……….it really means a lot for me…………thnx for commenting sweety…..a big teddy hug for u..& luv u a lot………….
& dear actually I’ve my exams nxt month so I’ll be unable to write anything for abt a month….so I had to end it here itself………..Luv u a lot sweetieeee…….
Hi Riya.It’s amazing,Superb dear.And my sister Riya became a great author now…I am so happy for u riya.Really it’s too good.Sorry i couldn’t comment due to my busy schedule.
And come back dear with many more wonderful updates.
UR WELL WISHER/BHAI,
SAKASH…
Keep smiling have a good day.
GOD BLESS U
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Bhai, u literally made me cry(happy waala) with ur comments…….I’m really glad that u liked my plot…..don’t at all feel sorry for not commenting… u commented now & this matters the most for me……….a big big big THANK U for liking my plot & commenting…have a good day……….
It was soooo emotional episode. Aankhe bhar aaye hain.
I am still feeling so bad for Kabir.
Hey I expected Sahil and Kavya’s marriage too. But it didn’t take place 🙁
Ur ff ended so soon.Plz come up with new ff. I will miss u Ri.
So sorry for making u cry dear…………Sahil ka wedding!!!!!!!!!dear, woh toh abhi apne career pe focus karega naa………..shaadi mein toh bahut time baaki hai……….haha……….just kidding………even I thought that, but dear, I wanted it to end differently….so I preferred to keep Sahil & Kavya as jaani dushman so as to get some humerous part from them…….Shaadi karlega, toh bechara fas hi jayega na……thoda toh usse uska bachelorhood enjoy karne do……..haha……thnx dear for being a regular reader & commenter…….a big waala teddy hug for u & luv u a lot Shona………
So so beautiful happy ending
thnx a lot Anu dear……….thnx for commenting & luv u a lot sweetieeeee………
Riya first of all CONGRATULATIONS on completing 10 episodes as well as a very beautiful story…yeah i missed sanchi in it but i enjoyed all the characters present in it. Truely dear u r a gr8 writer..GBU.
Hope u will carry on ur writings and entertain us like this.. loved ur series very much. ??? lots of love dear.
Mitu dear……….u were a great supporter & power booster for me throughout my journey………..actually I’ve my exams nxt month for which I had to end this plot here itself………a big waala thnku for being a regular reader & commenter………a big waala jaadu ki jhappi for u & luv u a lot Shona………….
All the best priyanka for ur coming exams..hope we get to read ur articles soon as possible.. enjoy studies but never forget us ???
Mitu dear, main bohut gucch hun tumche….how can u even think that I’ll forget my lovely friends, bro & sis…….never…..never ever……& dear, thanks a lot for ur wishes…….Luv u a lot cutie pie…….
Awesome episode siso.
U rocked it. U r truly anamazing writer dear.
Agar tumlog aise hi likhte rhe to mai guarantee deti, hoon tmlog agar novel likhoge to super duper hit hogi.
Exams ke baad phir nayi story le kar aana.
I hope show me kaanchi pair ho jaaye.
I think next month tak ye final ho jayega or tmhara exams bhi.
Agar kaanchi pair honge to I will be on 9 clouds or nhi hue to phir tum logo ke imaginary ffs padh ke khus ho jaaya karenge.
Ok all the best for your exams sweetie.
TC nd return soon with another dhamakedar ff
awwwww…….I was just doing bhangra dance after reading ur comments……..I’ve a question, kya tum din bhar sirf sweets hi khaati ho…..I mean itna sweet, itna cute comments……..& dear, thnx for ur best wishes…actually exams khatam hone mein almost 1 month lag jaega…for which I won’t be able to write anything for a long time……..&&& dear, main bhi wish karti hoon cvs kanchi ko pair up karein…..hope so… & never to forget…..thnx Priyanshi dear for being a regular reader, commenter & supporter…….luv u a lot Shona….
Yup u guessed right mujhe sweets bohot pasand h. Mere parents mujhse pareshan rehte h kyuki mujhe har 2 3 din pr sweets khane ki craving ho jaati h ??? ? ? ? ? ? ?
hehe…..u’re so adorable sweety…….I’m so glad that friends don’t come with price tag else I could never afford the wonderful friends I’ve got…………luv u dear…………
Hey riu it was a beautiful story yaar and a very perfect ending…. Loved it to the core of my heart…. Baas ittna kehna chah ti hoon….
Dosti ka shukriya kuch iss tharah aad karu….
Aap bhul bhi jao toh main yaad karu…..
Dosti ne bas ittna sikhaya hai mujhe
Ke khud se pehle aap ke liye dua karu…..
Dost ek aachisi story leka phir lootna please…..
Love u loads dear and thanku for such a great story with great ending…..
awwww……Vrushti dear, this one’s for u……Aye dost teri dosti ke liye duniya chhod denge, teri taraf aaye tufaan ko mod denge, Lekin tune agar saath chhoda, kasam se teri Haddiyaan tod denge………..haha……. thnk u so much dear for ur amazing words…..a big waala jaadu ki jhappi for u…….Luv u a lot Shona……
Uuufff kya shayari hai…. Dil khush ho gaya….. Riu di u r really amazing… No one has till now replied me in this way…. U r really unique!!!! And a big jaadu ki jhappi from me too and love u too till the end of universe ???
And also apple mango cheery jam best of luck for ur exam…. Hehe… Actually I too have my semesters from next month so I m too busy!!! And also a tubelight so wishing soooo late…. Hope understand ur bholi lil sis?
hehe….all the best to u too dear………yeh exams bhi na, hum sabke sirr pe tandav karne ke liye hote hain……suraj chahe purab ki jagah paschim se nikal jaaye, lekin ye exams…uff……kabhi hamara peecha nahi chodnewaale…kash ek din aisa aaye ki hum sabko exam diye bina hi degree mil jaaye…..haha…..luv u a lot Sweetie….
Wonderful riya… Today I m feeling very sad… Please kabhi alvida na Kehna…tum sirf meri dost hi nahi meri jiwan ka bohut important hissa ho… Tumhari likhi gayee har story se Maine bohut kuch sikha…. Aaj toh tumne mujhe rula diya yaar…. Please please keep posting new ff… I understand u have your exams but kabhi bhi agar time Miley toh ish dost ko yaad jarur rakhna…. Miss u yaar n love u a lot….
awwwww Anu dear, I was on cloud9 after reading ur comments…..Anu dear, this is for u……I may not be the most important person in ur life, I just hope that when u hear my name…U smile & say, THAT’S MY FRIEND…….thnx for being a great reader & commenter……..& thnx for ur wishes………Luv u a lot Shona……
Riya dear, I had a best friend in school… Her name was priyanka dey… We both studied in same school but after class 5 , she went to other state for studying… Whenever I see your name it reminds me of my school days…. Now, I don’t have friends…..i only have two best friends ” my mithu” and ” my moti”… I love them very much… Insano se jyada samajdar aur emandaar hote hai.. Sorry it’s my tragedy… Tumhe suna kar dukhi kar diya… Please forgive me…
Anu dear, I want to say something in Pragya style……..abeo ye formality, shormality hamare paas mat dikhana, apna dukhda apne dost ke saath share nahi karogi toh kya padosiyon ke saath karogi???…hehe……u must be thinking, kitni kamini hai ye….dekh yaar, I just feel..Jo dost kaminey nahi hote, woh kaminey dost hi nahi hote……luv u sweetie…….
OMG OMG sweetie it’s outstandinggggggggggggggggg amazingggggggggggggggggggg awesomenessssssssssssssßssss historic lovelyyyyyyyyyyyyyy ravishing mindblowing fantastic marvelous fabulous again nailed it. it’s beyond beyond beyond beyond beyond beyond beyond beyond beyond beyond beyond beyond beyond beyond beyond beyond beyond everything. congrats for completing ur ff. Tum ne toh mujhe rula diya. chalo koi Baat nhi. tum kush ho mein bhi kuch hu tumare liye but u r going. Par ha kabhi alvida na kehna. Milte rehna break ke baad. I will miss ur ff. Lots of huggs and kisses to u and luv loads ?????
Ashu dear, tumne toh mujhe emotional kar dia……..I’m speechless……..A Friend is like a Pitaara, in which we can store our Vichaar-dhaara, when life becomes Khataara, even then friends r a great Sahaara….. so, take care my Yaara…………miss u too…….a big waala teddy hug for u & Luv u a lot Shona……….
??? this is such a tremendous ending lil sisy ??? starting with a wedding and ending with a wedding!!! Awesome…… And don’t even think to say bye ??? after you’re done with your exams you SHOULD write something and that’s FINAL!!! ??? so good luck for your exams sweetie, do your best ???
Ruwani dear, our Friendship is imprinted in my heart, that will never be diminished by time & distance………thnx for being a regular reader, supporter & a big power booster throughout my journey….thnx for ur wishes & dear,my exams r gonna last for 1 month!!! can’t write anything till its completion……a big waala teddy hug for u & LUV U A LOT sweetieeeeeee……..
Riya…………Amazing Dear..Mindblowing….Meri tih aankhon main aansun hi aagyae…Khushi ke Baba….You tooo Kabhi Alvida na kehna…….Wapis se zaroor likhna…..Main toh boht miss karne wali hun iss story ko….But dear I know Jo cheez shru hota hai usse toh khatam hona hota hai….I’m happy that you complete your first journey…..but Come back With another tremandeous Story like this…………….you introduced all my fav Actors except Rohan mehra…i don’t like him….Sorry….tum toh
pata hain na main tumen Apna sab se accha dost man’ti hun issi liye jo man main aaraha hai keh rahi hun….tum pak toh nahi rahi ho meri bak bak se…u know mera dil chaha raha hain Anee likhti jaa…but..ok main tumen zaada nahi pakaungi…par plz write something else soon..luv you swettie.
Anee dear, tumhare comments badhkar mera dil garden garden ho gaya…..& dear, if u didn’t like Rohan, then u can imagine Ruslaan Mumtaz in place of Rohan Mehra…..now is it fine????…. btw, this one’s for u….Friendship ke baad Love ho sakta hai, lekin Love ke baad Friendship impossible hai…kyunki, dawaai marne se pehle kaam aati hai, marne ke baad kuch nahi ho sakta……….haha……thnx for ur constant support throughout my journey…….A big waala jaadu ki jhappi for u…….Luv u a lot Shona……….
Riya dear first of all a standing ovation to u for this beautiful… Lovely…
.wonderful story…..mai tumhari story she utna pyar krti hu aur karungi jitni pi ki value h ……samundra me pani h…….asman me taretare…….means infinity of infinity….. Loved this lots!!
And madam u cant backout exam khtm hote hi wapas aana h !!
And really happy and see i m good observer na….who observe the writing talent in u by reading ur cmnts!! Little bit credit to me….hehe…just kidding whole credit goes to only u and u r an awesome and really creative author….glad to read ur story and comeback soon!!
Hum hain raahi pyaar k phir milenge chalte chalte ….kabhi alvida na khna!!
Keep smiling!! Love u loads!! Lots of hugs and kisses to u!!
All the best for ur exams and i think its becoming like letter so lets end it here and will miss ur story so much!!
Riya plz jldi aana kuki tum bin jiya jaye kese!!
With these words enough of my bak bak actually dil k emotions itte sare h ki hath ni rukre!! Luv uh sweetie!!:???????
awwwwww Abhilasha dear, koi sambhaalo mujhe, kahin mein khushi se paagal na ho jaun….apne guru se itne tareef milna…aisa lagta hai jaise mein exams main top karliya ho….& thanks a lot for ur wishes….actually exams khatam hote hote 1 month lag jaega…can’t write anything till completion of my exams & sorry for that….what can I say, u just left me speechless…..I just have some lines for u…Dil se dil kabhi judaa nahi hote, Yunhi hum kisipe fidaa nahi hote, Mohabbat se badhkar toh dosti ka rishta hai, kyunki dosti kabhi bhi bewafa nahi hoti………a big waala teddy hug for u & LUV U A LOT Shona…….
Luv uh too sweetie and rock on exams and then comeback with another dhamakedar story!!
Hey prinku sorry sweetie actually kab se commnt krne ki kosis kar rahi hun per error show kar raha tha to mane reply k through krne ki sochi i don’t know ye kaam karega…btw sweetie amaz mindblowing ending but still i feel bad for my hottie i mean kabir…hehe…or ek baat mujhe laga ki sahil kavya ki shadi bhi hogi per aisa nahi hua koi nahi usse apne carrier pe focus krne do nd agar unki shadi ho jati ek mendak or dusri chipkali toh bachche kya hote…hahahaa…sorry i know bad joke…came bck sweetie with new ff but with a kanchi happy ending …tc nd all the best for ur exam…
Niyaa dear, u’re sooooo adorable yaar……..thnx dear for being a regular reader & supporter throughout my entire journey……..this one’s for u……..Friends r like balloons..if u let them go, u can’t get them back..So I’m gonna tie u to my heart, so I’ll never lose u..hehe………LUV U A LOT Shona…………
Abhi dear, thnx a lot for ur wishes…….LUV U A LOT Sweetieee…………
Awwwww I have no words yr u did really well os even perfect! I live to read from you ! This was spell bound so continue soon dnsome new ideas nd a big sorry for not being able to comment whole heartedly bcz of busy schedule
Trisha dear, kabhi sorry nahi bolne ka…..haha…..actually I’ve my exams nxt month for which I ended it here itself…..sorry for this…..hope u can understand……btw dear, I’ve some lines for u…..Ae dost jo tu chahe wo tera ho, roshan raatein aur khoobsoorat subah ho, judi rahe hamari dosti ka ye silsila, kamyaab har manzil..par dost mera ho………haha……….luv u a lot cutie pie……
Beautiful episode…. Not much words to describe it…. Comeback eith something new
Amnaa dear, first of all..a big waala thank u for being a regular reader & supporter throughout my journey…I’ve something for u….friendship is like a precious flower..ready to bloom every hour, it may stop growing or keep on flowing..but u still have it forever……Luv u a lot Sweetie………….
Di , why u end this . This one is amazing,super se upar di . plzz write something else as u are great writer & come back soon with another one ff. Love it to the coree……Lots of love & a big hug to u.
Thank u soooooo much Niyati dear………but dear, I have my exams next month for which I had to end this story here itself…..so sorry for this……& dear, thnx for being a regular reader & a big supporter throughout my journey……I’ve something to say….Ek achha dost medicine ki tarah hota hai, lekin hamaare jaisa group(Kanchi group), poore medical store ki tarah hota hai………..hehe……..LUV U A LOT Shona……….
dear why u end this ? but congress for your 10 ff super duper dear please come back with your new your os/ff .love you my core of heart.and a big wala hug for you come back soon…
Dhruti dear, thnx a lot for being a regular reader & supporter throughout my entire journey…..& sorry dear for ending it in this way…actually I’ve my exams nxt month for which I had to end this plot here itself……& dear, I’ve something for u….A friend is someone who knows the song in your heart & sings it back to u when u have forgotten the words……..A big waala teddy hug for u & LUV U A LOT Shona……….
aww that’s so adorable and yaa love you dear…..come back soon
i have also exam after week and next month also so ALL THE BEST FOR YOUR EXAM
All the best to u too dear……….luv u loads………
RU DI….I AM SO SORRY FOR COMMENTING LATE…I JUST CAME FROM DANCE CLASSES AND I AM EXTREMELY TIRED BUT AFTER READING YOUR FF ALL MY TIREDNESS WENT AWAY…WHAT CAN I SAY…IT WAS SUCH A AWESOME, EXCELLENT, SUPERB SE UPAR WE IPAD WALA UPDATE…..AND PLEASE COME UP WITH ANOTHER FF OR ELSE I WILL EAT YOU HAHA JUST KIDDING…GOOD LUCK WITH YOUR EXAMS….LOVE YOU LOADS ????❤❤❤❤
Tania dear, I was really glad after reading ur comments & very very happy that u liked it………..& dear, thnx a lot for ur wishes…….I’ve something for u………Anyone can make u smile, many people can make u cry, but it takes someone really special to make u smile with tears in ur eyes….& dear, u’re one of them……….LUV U A LOT Sweetie……………
You left me in tears sweetie.. It was full of emotions.. Amazing… Truly fantastic.. What a beautiful ending.. But why is it ending ??.. Would love to read further.. It was such a brilliant concept.. Will miss you and your ff.. Plz come back with a new beautiful ideas of your.. Tc sweetie.. Love you…
Jessi dear, thanku sooooooooooo much for commenting…..I was on cloud9 after reading ur comments……..& dear sorry for ending it in this way…actually I’ve my exams nxt month(I mean Oct) for which I had to end this plot here itself……I’ve some lines for u……I may not be the most important person in ur life, I just hope that when u hear my name…U smile & say, THAT’S MY FRIEND…….thnx for being a great reader & supporter throughout my journey……..luv u a lot sweetieeeeeeeee……
Love you more and very very best if luck for your exams.. May you get the first two in your class and have a great future ahead.. ❤❤
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thnku soooooooooo much Jessi dear…………..luv u dherrrrrr saara…………..