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TUM SE MILKE (Chapter 3)

wonder3112By 9 Comments2 Mins Read

Hello people…FIRST OF ALL I’M REALLY DISAPPOINTED WITH U GUYS COZ THERE ARE A VERY FEW COMMENTS…!

IF YOU GUYS FIND THIS ONE REALLY BORING NO HESITATION…TELL ME I’LL STOP THIS ONE…
Comments help the writer to improve and give that person a new inspiration and enthusiasm to write more…i hope you get that…

Chapter 3
Memories re-winded…..

With that idea he opened the diary where his sweetest memories have been stored. His mom and dad had made sure that all the three of them write their own diaries…. it was only aarti who wrote every single event of her life in her diary while the other two thought it to be a random girly stuff…but then later on even avinash (aarthav’s big bro) and he himself wrote about some important events of their lives. Be it aarti’s first bday, his graduation, dad’s success, mom’s wishes, his first crush, bhaiya’s secrets, late night parties, first rakshabandhan, ajmer, vividha and her family, encounter with Kailash kashap, guddi’s kidnap, mom and dad’s insult in Ajmer, vividha’s betrayal, depression, mom’s effort, shanaya and her support through the tough times, plans to get settled….every important aspect of his life was in his diary all stored…..

He was searching for those pages when a sheet of paper and a photo of his so called love fell……………the memories rewinded….

AUTHOR’S NOTE: This one is really short and sorry for that and in next few chapter’s we will encounter the most awaited scenes of Ajmer….stay tuned…and ya I’ll continue the story if and only if i get the minimal no. of comments. Till then stay happy and blessed.

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9 Comments

  1. aisha on

    plssssss don’t stop it plssss I lije your ff and u do comment plssssssss and if comment are less don’t think that nobody reads maybe everyone lijes and they don’t thinj to give suggestions bcoz you are going very good I request u plsss don’t stop the ff

  2. Sandy on

    Plz don’t be disappointed yaar
    Ur ff is a variety thread of jndsd and it’s interesting also
    Hope for vitharv scenes in the coming episodes
    All d best dear keep writing
    Plz down’t stop it , Let others know ur
    talent in writing …

  7. RAOne on

    this happens sometimes bro……….. keep going continue your work………… ya awating for Shivani power role because she is my fav………..

  9. ShaSha on

    Pls don’t stop…..your story is so nice. Just because we don’t comment don’t be upset & stop writing….pls continue writing. There are some people who find it boring to comment including myself though I comment if I whenever it is possible. .. So pls don’t be disappointed if people don’t comment…..I know that sometimes it hurts if our work is not appreciated but at least think about the people who take their time to comment…I wanna say that your work is just awesome so pls continue:)