Hii guys, This is Niyu & it is first time when I am writing OS on kaamchi . This OS is dedicated to my favourite kaanchi writers Trishu di, Moonie (moonlight) di & Annie di.
I regularly read ur all ff & post but never comment on this as I was busy in my ff. So, this one OS dedicated to u all.It’s for kaanchi fans as well as sanveer fans.I inform u it’s a one side love story. Agar koi galti ho jaaye toh choti behen samajh kar maaf kar dena.
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I was sleeping like a log as I was busy in my work & awake at late night or you can say lost in her thoughts.My love ….My first & last love. Suddenly, I hear the sound of my alarm clock. It irritated me so much but I just stop it & stretched my arms.
The next second, my eyes fell on the walls of my room which are all covered by her picture. An unknown smile crept on my face. I give her a lovely glance & see the clock. It’s 8 a.m & I was late for hospital.I get up from my bed in hurry & my alarm clock is fell down & broke. I nod my head in disbelief as one more was broke. I become so irresponsible after her entering in my life or u can say in my heart. It is a usual morning of my so called life. I rushed toward the Washroom & at last I got ready in black three-piece suit. I stand infront of the mirror & look my image on it. I murmur…..Looking handsome…….Ok stop it Kabir, You are self praising. Oops sorry , i forget to introduce myself……..I am Kabir Kapoor or Khadoos Hitler as I was famous with this name in Savitri devi.I move toward the hall of my house .My mom waiting for me. I greet her “Good morning Ma”. She served me breakfast & I leave from there for savitri devi after breakfast.
At last, I reached there . It’s a same place where I met with her for first time…….like really we meet in hospital…..so boring…
She was a intern here & I was a senior doctor.Our first meeting is filmy & full with tashanbaazi.I must say God already planned meeting for lovers. Her name is Saanchi. She is also honest & truthful like her name & always fight for truth. We collide with each other & the file which is on my hand is fell down . I scold her for this as I already told u I was Khadoos . She is just different from othes. I was also Mr. Handsome & heartbeats of all female doctors. She never attracted to me. We are usually involve in arguments as our views are not same. She believe that the patient is cured by love more than medicine. I think like typical doctor as emotional connection with patients is waste. I was never attracted to any girl before her. Her honesty , simplicity, kindly nature become the reason I fall for her.
My mother is the main motive behind for our friendship. She want that she become her DIL(daughter- in-law). She ask her about this & she was confused but for my mother’s sake ,she answer in affirmative as I told u she is kind but we done only drama.I start falling for her as no one can take care of my mother from heart. All are tried to impressed her.
I decided to propose her & fulfil My Mom’s wish but destiny already planned something.
I come in present by Saanchi’s voice. “Where are u lost Dr. Kabir”. I look at her & then the vermilion which is filled on her hairline. Ya, She is married .
“Kabir u have to come in our anniversary party” request by veer. I nod & move toward my cabin. My heart was broke on that day when veer propose her & she nod her head in affirmative but I am happy in her happiness only. She make me human from heartless body.Love is a beautiful feeling . The best thing of love is when you sacrifice your happiness for your loved ones.This is my One side love story but it didn’t matter to me .I always love her.
Tune jo na kaha wo main sunta raha
khamokha bewajah khwaab bunta raha
Jaane kiski hume lag gayi hai nazar
Iss sheher mein na apna thikana raha
door chahat se apni chalta raha
Tune jo na kaha………………khwaab bunta raha.
These words are really fitted on me . I am happy with my one side love. I am happy in her happiness. Love is complete when u get the person whom u love. Love become immortal when your loved ones smile matter to u & for their haapiness you sacrifice your love. Saanchi is always in my heart. No one can snatch this right from me.
——————————————————————— I hope u guys like it. Don’t kill me after this. If i hurt anyone’s feeling, then sorry as I am not any intention to do it. Don’t be sad Kanchi fans as I only show u the power of one side love. I promise whenever I got time, I wiil definitely write happy ending kaanchi OS as I am big fan of Kaanchi not any problem with Sanveer. I know it’s just a crap…..don’t throw tomatoes & egg after this as my phone’s screen become dirty. Just kidding guys. Mujh jaisi pyaari si bacchi ko maaf kar dena agar koi galti ho gayi ho plzzzz.Positive & Negative comments welcome. Hope didis u liked it & don’t mind as I call u three by this name. Kindly Ignore grammatical & Spelling errors. Do comments & keep smiling. Be happy & stay safe.
With so much love to all kaanchi writers-
Niyu or u can say Drama queen.
Have a sweet day guys.
30 Comments
Hehe ? u know niyu u must be called drama queen instead nd the best part I like “didi’s ” ! Just kidding sweetie !
You really did very well in fact I totally agree wd whatever u write abt one sided love ! Amazing ! Fabulous! Fantastic! Superb!
Luv uh loads
Aww didu …..someone pinch me…..Itni tareef kahin mein pagal na ho jaun. Thank u so much trishu di . I am happy after seeing your comment . It really means a lot to me.Glad that u like this. Lots of love to u.
Nice story………. actually I am also a kanchi fan so I am feeling bad but this is is beautiful………… please dost next time kanchi ka story likna
Thank u anu for ur comment. Glad that u like this. I also feel bad when I write this as I am big fan of Kaanchi.I already promise u to kaanchi fans as I write an OS on Kannchi happy ending. Don’t be so sad dost as I also not feel happy when my dost become sad.
Nice one niyati…But I feel like I have read the same story and the same title was there
Thank u Neha di for ur comment. I am not done any cheating.Pinky promise but is similar to my friend sairish os which she written on Ishqbaaz with one side love of Anika.(similarity is only we bth wrote on one side love & our title on song, her title is unse mili nazar). Glad that u like this. If u know di whom writing is similar to my os then tell me , I personally say sorry to that writer. Mujhe maar nahi khaani.
This plot was really going in my mind as the present track is going like this and future would be like this…. Coming to os u described everything beautifully……. U r amazing as a writer and should continue it!!
Thank u so much Abhilasha di. It really means a lot to me.Sorry didu as I snatch ur plot. I am a mindreader u know.just kidding.Itni tareef mere hi liye hai na ….I don’t believe as i think it’s just a crap .Ya di , I am trying to write ff if I have some time because I already write a ff on ishqbaaz. I promise i try to write os on every weekend.
I mean why not u start a ff on kanchi again!!!
Niyati dear, it was a splendid update……….but feel really bad for kabir……..anyways, keep writing & eagerly waiting for ur nxt one……..
Aww thank u so much di.It really means a lot to me. Glad to know u liked it. I also feel crying for our kabir. I promise that next one os is happy ending kaanchi. If i have time, I am tried to write ff but I promise an OS to every weekend.
I mean another os or ff dear……luv u loads……..
Luv u too & good night .Bye tc.
This is amaz niyu…frankly i belive in one sided love power but i don’t want it happen in real seriel too(seeing current track)… Nd yes drama queen m throw some kisses for u … Ur such a sweet and naughty girl and ur os is short but powerfull … Post nxt os with happy ending..tc
Aww,thank u so much didu. Glad to know you also believe in one sided love . It really means a lot to me that u like this.I also don’t want this in real serial.Inni saari tareef mere liye h kahi galti se toh type nahi kar diya didu. I think i am dreaming. Lots of love & kisses to u.Post next one soon.tc bye. Gn & sweet dreamz.
wowwww it’s amazing mindblowing outstanding awesome and sorry for late comment
Hii sweetie no sorry & thank u in frienship. Comments is your choice. Thank u for so much tareef.Good night & take care. Agli baar mujhe sorry na bolna main naraaz ho jaungi.Have sweet dreamz.
Yaar this is really heartbreaking is hats of to u BT I am sad that this was sanveer pair not kanchi…ohhb my god…
Thanks sweetie for ur comment. I am sorry if i hurt u but I have no intentions like that. Hope u forgive me . If u don’t forgive me toh TU mein baad aa jayegi meri aansuon ki phir aap janna . Gm. Have a sweet day. I promise that I write an Os on happy ending kaanchi as I am big fan of kaanchi.
Di, your OS left me speechless….it was super Good, awesome , excellent, splendid…
You are an amazing writer…but felt bad for Kabir but you are right….we don’t always get our love….i enjoyed it a lot…..please write another OS but happy ending…i don’t want to cry again…i will be waiting…love you sweetie…keep up the good work…???
Awww, Moonie glad that u like this. That’s really sweet of u. It really means a lot to me sweetie. Thanks for ur comment & i also feel bad while writing. Inni saari tareef mere liye , I am still deaming. I already promise to u whenever i got time I write an OS happy emgding as I am big fan of kaanchi. Gm .Have a sweet day.
Awesome yaar.. I had no idea that u have written it Niyati.. Anyways, it is really really amazing.. And this kind of topic really interests me.. Loved it a lot….
Hii my friend. How are u? Aww, thank u so much. Glad that u like this.It really means a lot to me sweetie.I promise as I am coming back with an happy ending OS of kaanchi. Gm ,Have a sweet day.
Sweetie it was seriously amazing… Mind blowing… Fabulous… Outstanding… Loved the idea and eagerly waiting to read further… One sided love has great power and it would be really interesting to read the one sided love story of our handsome Dr khadoos ?… Eagerly waiting for you to continue it… Love you..
Aww,thank u so much dearie for ur comment as well as support. Glad that u found it amazing. Ya, one sided love is always sacred & pure bcoz it id started from sacrifice .giving so much gyan.don’t mind ha. Ya, sweetie I am back with ur handsome khadoos & saanchi os which is happy ending.Gm, have a sweet day.Lots of love to u.
Ur OS is awesome fabulous mind blowing dear
Aww, thank u so much inni saari tareef .Glad that u like this. ya, I am post another OS whenever i got time.
OMG Niyu. Ur praises is such an honour for me. And now after this OS I have become a very big fan of urs. And don’t call this beautiful masterpiece crap.. Or else I have to take a flight to where you live and tell how excellent u are!!! U can call me di if u want but I am just 14. Even if u call me Annie I have no problem. Now coming to the OS.. It was so magical!!! Firstly I loved the pact that POV of the story is from kabir. Ur scenes were depicted really beautiful. I loved the part when he said he will keep loving her. That was an awesome dialogue. And don’t doubt ur skills. Its amazing and this was a stupendous ff. We will just throw out love and admiration for you. And congratulations for ur first OS on kaanchi.. *confetti falls*. I would await more OS’s from you. Keep writing and keep rocking. Love u loads ?
Aww,thank u so much annie for ur comment and for ur support.It really means a lot to me because ur views matter to me as this one OS is dedicacated to u. I live in India & from kanpur.Glad that u like this. Sorry to calling u di as I don’t know about ur age & u can’t fight me because no one can win in arguments with me.just kiding sweetie pie. Ya,i am back with another happy ending kaanchi os whenever i got time. Lots of love to u btw Gm. Have a sweet day.
oops sorry, i misunderstood flight , i think it’s a fight don’t mind ha. Such a stupid girl I am. Your ff is also amazing . Thank u for calling this a masterpiece as I think everyone throw tomatoes on me after this. Ya, i also want to meet u.
With s much love,
Drama queen(niyu).