Friends are like stars…..you can’t always see them,but you know that they are there,n they shines brightest when all seems dark…..Thank u all for being my friend n support me……
IN AANKHON SE HAR AANSU……MUJHKO CHURANA HAI!!!
U :- Maybe ,you can can help me.Have you seen him ?
L :- He????
U(controlling her laughter) :- I am searching for Yuvraj Lakshman…..have you seen him??
L ;- Why are you saying this,Mila?I am sitting here only…
U :- No..no …you are my Soumitra not that Yuvraj Lakshman whom I met in Mithila.You are not the one with whom i argued n above all,who used to smile always showing all thirty two teeth…..
L(smiling) :- Now,Am i your Lakshman???
U :- No..no…I can only see twenty two not thirty two teeth….a little brighter otherwise I have to use your sneezing trick which I don’t want to use now………it will spoil my makeup
At this , Lakshman burst out laughing and Urmila too.Urmila took his face in her hands..
U :- Soumitra,Always keep smiling like this….Even if I die!!!!
L :- Please , don’t say that…
U (smiling):- Okay,Now get ready….Maa was calling me..Don’t spoil present worrying about future . Just enjoy every moment as life is too short….None knows what happen next.
L(felt something unusual in her talks) :- You….You are right!Now go, you take time getting ready…I only need two minutes!!!
U(fumed ):- Hawwww!!You…….I take to get ready!Let me remind you , you took half an hour yesterday…
L :- Yeah …..that too because of you..
U :- I m not gonna leave you…now,you are l lying
L :- No , I m not
U :- Yes , you are
L :- No, I m not…Mirchi!!!
U:-Yes , you are …Mendak!!
They again started fighting . The same way they used to do in Mithila.These were some of the last moments of their lovelife….
Their this cute fight was interrupted by the giggle of Shatrughan.
Sh(smirking at Lakshman) :- Now you are gone,Bhai……Maa….Maaa!!!
He started shouting and ran away.Lakshman tried to stop him but in vain so he started chasing him.Their giggling sound spread in the whole palace.Shatrughan hid behind Sumitra…
Sh :- Please,Save me,Maaa!!!!Bhai is gonna kill me,today..
S(smiling):- Now,why both of you are fighting???Lakshman,tell me.
Sh:- Maa….I will tell you.He was…..
L :- Maa….He entered my chamber without knocking or seeking permission.Is this good???
S(holding shatru’s ears):- Definitely not.Shatrughan,now you are not a kid instead you have kids.What are you teaching them???
Sh:- Maa….but Bhai was…..
L(yelled) :- Ram bhaiya…..Thank god,you are here!!See,Shatrughan is troubling me….
R(smiling):- Shatrughan why are you troubling my Laksh?????
Sh(now literally screamed ):- First of all,I have not done anything n secondly no one is listening to me.He was….
L :- Bhaiya….we need to go somewhere..
R ;- Lakshman …first of all let him say .Yes Shatrughan,continue…
Sh:- He was fighting with Urmila Bhabhi again(exaggerating)Urmila Bhabhi was sitting quiet and he was continuously shouting at her..
Lakshman’s eyes widened.Ram and Sumitra held Lakshman’s ears.
L :- Maa… Bhai…Leave me. She likes me like that..
R:- Oh really!!!!Then,we like you like this .
L(pouting):- Bhaiya…you also..
Ram could not resist this face.So,he left Lakshman’s ears n told him to come soon at the court room.Lakshman whispered in Shatrughan’s ears ” I m not gonna leave u devil….see u later!!”and showed him serene eyes.Shatrughan laughed and added fuel to the fire…
Lakshman didn’t know that it was his last fight with his Mila…..Destiny had planned something drastic for them!!
HEWWWWW…………DONE
PLEASE REVIEW …….THANK U SO MUCH FOR READING
21 Comments
Wow!!!!! A cute n lovely fight btw brothers…. and Lakshmila was just fantastic as always. I just loved it to the core ?????… I was in tension bcoz of my exam.. and now this part made me feel cool… amazing one ???. The above friendship quote was just lovely ??. And can I know in which class u r studying???
Thank u so much di…..n yeah lakshmila always rock!!!i m glad that it proved to be a stress buster for you….n friends are great that is why the quote is great!!!!I m in 8th standard n you???
yeah friends are always great.. and I am in 11
Yeah..because they r like you…love u di!!!
oh! gud yr.. I really like urmilla so much… this is brilliant… thanks for this @arnasharma.
Thank you…thank u so much Avneil..i too like urmila a lot…..
bro,how sumitra is alive because in original epic ,after SITA DEATH,THE 3 MOTHERS DIED ONE AFTER THE OTHER ,kausalya died,after some time kaikeyi died,after some time sumitra died ,all died a natural death
the 3 sisters died after 11,000 years just few days before the death of 4 brothers
but nice ff,plz continue
First of all, I m not bro……n yeah please refer
http://www.tellyupdates.com/turning-bliss-horror-prologue/
it is clearly written TOTAL FICTION……by the way thank u …will update soon!!!N Surpnakha…was she not dead???
Sis, in valmiki ramayan nothing mentioned what happened to her and in later she lives with vibhishan and few years later she dies, doesn’t know when
Ok….thank u bhaiya for info
Sorry, if I made you angry
No need to say sorry n I m not angry bhaiya…if u call me sis then mean it …no need to apologise bhai!!You are making me embarrassed …..sorry if you felt that i m angry!!
Glad to see new fiction author like you………its very nice……….keep it up…………
and all of the old member thank you all for active this page after 5 month of skr end………keep it…………
Thank u so much bhaiya…..your response is overwhelming!!!Thank u so much!!!!N yes like skr will be always alive in our hearts,this page will be also….
I am still laughing Arna. Shatrughn and laxman’s fight steal the show. But love the makeup dialogue. you are an awesome writer. Please keep writing. We are all waiting
thank u
Thank u so much di…..My purpose for writing it became successful that u all liked it …..n no i m not an awesome writer its the characters which are amazing….i will update it today only….
Ya you are right but it is the writer who adds life to the character. Ok I will say that you have an awesome imagination.
Thank u so much di!!!
Arna di d epi was asum… Full of laughter… Lakshman & Shathrugan fights r always cute… But wat dus d line mean dat “Lakshman didn’t know that it was his last fight with his Mila…..Destiny had planned something drastic for them”??? Wanting 2 read d part di…
Jai Siya Ram
Di??? In which class do u study, Jayani? Thank u so much dear….n you will know very soon!!!