Thank u so much everyone for showing excitement in my fic n liking it!!!Aman bhaiya sorry but in my story sumitra is alive….Here is the next part….
AAJ JAANE KI ZID NA KARO……
Sumitra:- Putriyon,today we will go to Gauri Temple.After one week,there is Holi.So,we will not get time then.Right???
U:- Yes maa,I was thinking the same.Let’s go !!I also have to distribute sweets n clothes among poor..
Sumitra smiled at this concerned nature of her daughter. Urmila was her daughter -in-law but she always felt that she was her own daughter.During 14 years of exile also she was the one who never let them break n always encouraged them…Shatrughan overheard it n came in.
Sh(making a pout face ):- Maa,what are you saying?Just you ladies are going…we all will come together no??
M(teasing):- Oh!!really…why devar ji??
Sh:- Be…because I m concerned about your safety.
M:- Really?Or because you can’t stay away from Shruti??
Everyone started laughing making Shatrughan’s cheeks beetroot red . Shatrughan ran away and reached the court room…
Sh(yelling n panting):- Bhai…..Bhai…..
L:- Yup Shatrughan,what happened??Everything is fine.Right???
Sh:- No bhai..nothing is fine.Urmila Bhabhi(again started panting)Urmila Bhabhi…..
Lakshman recalled the dream.Tears started brimming in his ears.
L(super tensed):- What happened to Urmila???
R;- Lakshman,calm down.Nothing will happen to her.
Sh:- Yes,absolutely..bhabhi is fine. I was saying that Urmila bhabhi , mandavi bhabhi n shruti are going to gauri temple with maa.
R:- So,let them Shatru….
Sh:- But Bhai, one of us should be with them,no??
Lakshman was just thinking about his dream.He started sweating…his mila was going.Will she ever come??He didn’t go unnoticed by Rama.Lakshman excused n ran out of the room to stop Urmila..to not to let her go….when he was running ,he saw Urmila keeping the worship materials into the chariot n held Urmila’s hand.
U(little shocked):- What happened ,Swami??
L:- Urmila,I am coming with you.
U:- What?No …you can’t .Maa didn’t allow Shatrughan n she will not allow you as well..n mandavi di…that rakshasi will tease me a lot so u r not coming
L:- Mila,I m telling u na…you don’t have to go anywhere alone.I m coming with u .
U:- I m not alone,I have maa,di n shruti with me.
Urmila could see a kind of fear in his eyes,which was uncommon.Even his face looked tired.
U:- What happened,swami??Are u alright???You are looking tired.
L:- I m fine Urmila,but….I don’t want you to go without me ..Take me with u ..
She realised something was wrong with her husband today.She took Lakshman to their chambers n made him sit next to her.Cupping her hand on his cheek ,she said
Wanna know what??????????Then read the next part…..pls review n guide…….jai shree ram!!!
11 Comments
it’s okay sis, plz don’t feel sorry, ff is superb please continue
Okay bhaiya……n thank u so much!!!!Will update soon
super sister. mindblowing continue
Thank u bhai!!!Will update soon….
Its awesome Arna. The emotions of Laxman for Urmila were described wonderfully. Update soon
Thanks a ton di….will update soon
Can’t wait 2 know wat wudhappen 2 urmi… Is lakshman’s guess correct???
Thank u so much dear….you will know soon
Ur welcum di
Amazing dear!!!! Mindblowing one…
Thank u so much di…..i m really sorry i m late but my net was giving problem…. i m glad u liked it???