Hello everyone hope you are well. I am very happy with the amounts of positive comments I have received recently on both of my FF. So I have written a TS I hope you all enjoy it. (Warning it is quiet long)
Tashan-E-Ishq TWINJ=I craved for love
A girl is seen laying down on her bed thinking about her life with tears in her eyes. “Today was just a normal day like it has been for me in the last 23 years of my life. I remember when I was born my elder sister Alisha was very jealous of me, well she was 2 so I guess she would, but the jealously has still not ended. Whatever I would get as a gift she would always want it. Papa always favored Alisha more than me. Maa was there but she wouldn’t say a lot as she feared Papa. When I was 4 my younger twin sisters Mahi and Chinki were born. Also Maa forgot me when they were born. Whenever I craved for love papa would tell me that I should grow up as I was an elder sister now maa also told me to comply. For Papa his ladli was Alisha and for Maa it was Mahi and Chinki. They used to forget I exist.
I was small but I still remember everything so I decided to stand up on my own feet one day. I still haven’t reached my aspirational goal but I am working in KS industries one of the top 10 interior design place. I want to be a successful interior designer and work with international clients like my boss Kunj Sarna. Kunj sir is really nice he is always smiling. He is not like those horrible bosses who always want their employers to do over time. He is very sweet. The girl who is Twinkle falls asleep as she is thinking about her life.
Next Morning
Twinkle is sitting down on the breakfast table with her so called family. She takes the jug of orange juice and fills her glass with orange juice but her elder sister Alisha snatches it from her.
Alisha= Sorry Twinkle I am craving some orange juice
Twinkle didn’t say anything but just gave a small smile.
Alisha= Papa I need some money I am going out with my friends so
RT= Its ok bacha Leela get my cheque book please
Leela brings RT cheque book and RT signs 1 lakh money for Alisha
Alisha= Thanks Papa
RT= Anything for you my bacha
Mahi and Chinki leave for college but come back
Mahi= Mum the cars not working so the driver has taken it to the mechanic
Leela= take the rickshaw for today
Mahi/Chinki= MUM
Leela= What it’s just a matter for the day
RT= Leela how can they go in a rickshaw, Twinkle you go in a rickshaw and I will ask the other driver to take them in your car
Twinkle= But… before she could say anything she was interrupted by RT
RT= I want your car keys he said and looked at her angrily
Twinkle gives her keys and leaves to get the rickshaw.
Twinkle PoV
Baba ji why does papa always treat me differently from Alisha, Mahi and Chinki? Why does he never love me? Why does he treat me differently? Why have I never been loved?
PoV ends
Twinkle reached her office and went to her desk. She was concentrating on her work but was distracted by her co- worker who told her that her boss had called her.
Kunj Cabin
Kunj= Come in
Twinkle enters and Kunj smiles at her.
Kunj= Have a seat?
Twinkle sat down
Kunj= Twinkle could you just quickly check these designs implement on them here
Twinkle= Yes sir
Twinkle began to work on the designs whilst Kunj was admiring her
Kunj PoV
Twinkle Taneja one day I will make you Twinkle Kunj Sarna. I fell in love with you from the day you started to work. Your elegance and your beauty. But I have never seen your smile. I am sure it’s really pretty.
PoV ends. Kunj was admiring Twinkle
Twinkle= Sir
Kunj coming back to sense = Yeah
Twinkle= I have completed the designs and I have listed the things that need amending
Kunj= That’s good
Twinkle then leaves and goes back to her desk.
At the end of office time
Twinkle was waiting for a rickshaw but none of them were stopping. A black coloured Mercedes stops next to her then and opens the window. It is Kunj
Kunj= Do you need a lift?
Twinkle= No thanks I will take the taxi
Kunj= I will drop you it’s not safe
Twinkle= it’s ok sir
Kunj comes out of the car and opens the passenger seat and makes Twinkle sit. She smiles in front of Kunj for the first time and he was very pleased.
Twinkle tells him her address the journey starts. He drops her home
Twinkle= Thanks sir
Kunj= You can call me Kunj I am not your sir right now
Twinkle smiles and goes to her house and freshens up.
Next Day
It was a Sunday which meant a lazy day for everyone apart from Twinkle. Twinkle went to the Gudwara as she found peace there. Also Sarna family was there. (Sarna Family members= Usha, Manohar, Bebe, Aliya ,Maya,Niki and Anand)Kunj looked at Twinkle and smiled.
Kunj= Maa,
Bebe, Papa everyone you always ask me to get married and I promise to you I will.
Bebe= Puttar I will ask guru ji to find you a girl
Kunj= you don’t need to Bebe ummm
Aliya (Kunj sister)= Bhai have you got a girlfriend
Kunj= no there is a girl at work who I like
Usha= Kunj who is my chotti bahu?
Kunj points towards Twinkle who was giving food to the poor. They all looked at her and smiled.
Niki(Kunj Bhabhi)= nice choice devar ji
Manohar= Kunj who is she?
Kunj= Twinkle Taneja
Manohar= Ram Taneja daughter
Kunj= yeah I think so
Maya(Bebe daughter)= Kunj have you told her?
Kunj nods his head negatively
Niki= go tell her then
Manohar= No I will call RT and tell him I am coming to his house to discuss something important and then we will ask for Twinkle hand
They all smile and look Twinkle who doesn’t notice them. Twinkle came back from the Gudwara and gave everyone some Prasad. RT then informs them that Manohar is coming and ask them to prepare. Twinkle was in the kitchen helping to make some food when she heard her sister call her.
Mahi= Di can you come here please
Twinkle went upstairs and looked at how her sisters had scattered clothes everywhere.
Twinkle= What is this?
Chinki= We don’t know what to wear so help us please
Twinkle chooses a black and purple lace dress for Mahi and a navy blue and grey one for Chinki.
Mahi= Please put the clothes away in the cupboard now
Twinkle= Kalaviti will come and do it
Kalaviti comes to clean the room
Chinki= Di you can leave now
Twinkle leaves quietly and had tears in her eyes.
She goes into her small room and see how Alisha had taken some of her outfits.
Alisha= Twinkle I am going to be wearing this in the evening
Twinkle= But…
Alisha= Shall I call papa
Twinkle becomes quiet and Alisha leaves with Twinkles outfit.
Evening time
The Sarna had arrived and RT had greeted them. Soon Alisha with Mahi and Chinki came downstairs and greeted them. Alisha looked at Kunj and smiled. Twinkle came a few minutes after with a tray of water. She was shocked to see Kunj. He looked at her and smiled whilst his sisters who were sitting next to him smiled.
Manohar= RT I have come to ask for your daughters hand for my son Kunj
Everyone gets happy.
RT= this is a really good news beta Alisha come sit here
Manohar= umm not Alisha Twinkle
Twinkle was shocked to hear here name.
Manohar= Actually Kunj likes our Twinkle they both work together
Twinkle looks at Kunj who smiles at her then she looks away.
RT= Manohar I would love to get Twinkle married to Kunj but her elder sister Alisha is not married so how can I ??
Bebe= RT Bhai which century are you living in. Its your choice at the end of the day but we just came to tell you that our son would love to get married to your daughter.
RT= no its nothing like that it’s a yes from our side
Manohar= what about Twinkle?
RT= don’t worry
They all began to discuss how this marriage should happen quickly. Guru ji also arrived.
Guruji= Both of their horoscopes match perfectly. I would say to get them married in 6 days.
Everyone smile and congratulate each other whilst Kunj and Twinkle share awkward looks.
Alisha to Mahi and Chinki= at least she will be gone now. They all giggle whilst Twinkle who hears this goes away with tears in her eyes.
Leela= lagta hai sharam gai (I think she is blushing)
Everyone else smile apart from Kunj as he heard what his fiancée Twinkle sister had said. He felt bad but could not go to meet her as it would make the situation awkward and he would be teased by his siblings.
Hey guys I hope you enjoyed the first shot. I will try to post the second shot as well as my FF soon. Please comment
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