Twinj: Endless love…..
Hey guys Anushka here. I m just overwhelmed by reading ur comments. I just can’t believe I got 81comments. Thank u so much Abc,mitali, Sam, akku di, crazy,baby, aakriti, Aastha, mystery, zayb_zikra, srishti, sidmin, swasan=love, Aurora, Anu Mishra, crazy, anu, twinj, twinj forever, Sofia, Sakshi,bhavya, riyaana, plz, Olivia, pavani, joker, human being, dheemahee, ishaaan, preeti, lama, earl, anu, aarti, sanam, Fiona and silent readers for silent support.
U can read my earlier stories:-
https://www.tellyupdates.com/?s=Twinj%3A+true+love+never+dies
So here it goes.
Characters- kunj, twinkle, rt and leela.
One day, a young guy named kunj and a young girl named twinkle fell in love.
But Kunj came from a poor family. So twinkle’s parents weren’t too happy.
So kunj decided not only to court the girl but to court her parents as well. In time, the parents saw that he was a good man and was worthy of their daughter’s hand.
But there was another problem:
Kunj was a soldier. Soon, war broke out and he was being sent overseas for a year.
The week before he left, Kunj knelt on his knee and asked his lady love twinkle, “Will you marry me?” She wiped a tear, said yes, and they were engaged. They agreed that when he got back in one year, they would get married.
But tragedy struck. A few days after he left, the girl had an accident. It was a head-on collision.
When twinkle woke up in the hospital, she saw her father and mother crying. Immediately, she got to know that there was something wrong.
She later found out that she suffered brain injury. The part of her brain that controlled her face muscles was damaged. Her once lovely face was now disfigured. She cried as she saw herself in the mirror. “Yesterday, I was beautiful. Today, I’m a monster.” Her body was also covered with so many ugly wounds.
Right there and then, she decided to release her fiancé from their promise. She knew he won’t love her anymore. She would have to forget about him and never see him again.
For one year, kunj wrote many letters—but she didn’t answer. He phoned her many times but she didn’t return her calls.
But after one year, leela walked into her room and announced, “He’s back from the war.”
Twinkle shouted, “No! Please don’t tell him about me. Don’t tell him I’m here!”
Leela the mother of twinkle said, “He’s getting married,” and handed her a wedding invitation.
Twinkle’s heart sank. She knew she still loved him but she had to forget him now becoz of her ugly monster face.
With great sadness, she opened the wedding invitation.
And then she saw her name “Twinkle” written on it!
Confused, she asked, “What is this?”
That was when Kunj entered her room with a bouquet of flowers. He knelt beside her and asked, “Will you marry me?”
Twinkle covered her face with her hands and said, “I’m ugly!”
Kunj said, “Without ur permission, mom sent me ur photos. When I saw them , I realized that nothing has changed. You’re still the person I fell in love. You’re still as beautiful as ever. Because I love you!”
Twinkle wid out saying anything hugged him.
They married each other and lived happily.
And twinkle’s face recovered after marriage through various surgeries.
Hope u like it.
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85 Comments
Lovely just too good
Thanq so much mahi
I loved itt
it is sooooo goood
Thanq so much ridhima
A perfect love story dear…
Awww Thanq so much Crazy
nyc piece of os….loved it
Aww Thanq dear
Lovely i luv it u rite lovely stories
Tysm baby
Awsum… Loved it…
I m glad that u liked it
Its one of the best one slot I have ever read
Omg Thanq so so so so much dear
It’s amazing
Thanq Pritika
Damn good not good very good. Outstanding…. Fantastic……. Mind blowing……
U left me speechless mitali.
U r fabulous writer yaar.
Ty ty ty ty somuch
That’s what which is called a one slot. It’s amazing piece of writing by an amazing writer.
Oh my god Thanq so much Olivia means a lot dear ……
I loved it
Love it I
It is loved by me
I m in love wid it
Just loved it………..
Thanq
Really u r a Great Writer….Beautiful Love Story….God Bless
Thanq lama for commenting
Omg u made me cry
Love u year anu♥♥♥♥♥
Love u tooo Mel. Thanks for commenting?
awesome yaar ….. loved it …..
Thanq so much panchi
Just don’t have words to describe how beautifully u have written.
U left me speechless dear. Thanks for commenting .
It was literally a heart touching story. It was just fantastic.
Thanq riyaana
Superb update next one soon…..
Yup I will surely update next one but can’t say when becoz I have my xams starting next week. Thanks for commenting.
Wow I m so so so pleased to read this one slot. It’s perfect.
Aww Thanq so much plz
Lovely episode Anushka. Looking forward to see ur another one slot. Love uhhhh and ur one slot
Thanq u for commenting Aashima but I can’t say when I will upload my next is as I have exams
Perfect love story…….
Thanq aakriti
Amazing…. Loved it
Thanq human being.
Wow it’s so interesting.
Thanq swasan=love
Ohh my ghosh….loved it so so so much
Thanq so much Aurora
Ohhhhh anu…..what to say u hav just left me speechless yaar….all I can say is I love u to the cube of infinity….keep writing dear
Akku di u left me speechless wid ur comment. I love u 2. Thanq for encouraging me and commenting. A comment of a great writer like u means alot
Awesome episode loved it hope u post like this often love u
Love u too dear. Thanks for commenting Sam.
I have read dis story earlier on facebook
But i dont wan to humilate u
M jst saying
Actually mannat i haven’t taken it from Facebook but I took ideas from Internet. And it can’t be same as more than half of the story is made up by me. In my previous os twinj: true love never dies many readers demanded not to make anyone dead and then I wasn’t getting ideas so I just checked in internet about stories and I got a story with same central idea but it was about a business man and was really too short.So I did some changes in language, concept,length, characters and off course the ending. So u can say this story is entirely diff from that story.
Lovely episode..u nailed it..
I luv it..luv u
Thank u dear. Love u too
Awww it’s the best story about a soldier man.
Awww thanq so much Sakshi. I m just reached cloud 9
It’s so beautifully written.
Thank u so much sana