Twinj: The Group Of My Love #SS (teaser)
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A girl is seen sleeping when suddenly her phone starts beeping..’beep beep’ ‘beep beep’ n that disturbs her sleep..she opens her eyes to find her phone on n was continuously beeping..she opened the lock..it was her insta messages..a smile apperead in her lips..she was about to check the messages when her phone ran out of battery..She put it in charge and went to get ready.. After n hour or so she again checked her phone..as she started the phone..it asked for a pattern..she unlocked it by a ‘K’..as she unlocked,her cheecks turned slightly pink n she was smiling brightly..She then opened her insta n was smiling..she then directly opened a grp..It was titled ‘ 12 Mad Heads..’..she laughed at the grp name as it changed..she then went to the last read chat..n then read all the bullshit..but a smile crept on her face as she came to the starting of the chats where they bought her name from nowhere..she was blushing n reading.. aree they were teasing her no..that’s why
( jaanna h kya padh rahi H? Umm…I m thinking ki na batau..Acha chalo bata deti Hu…)
The teasing was started by our one n only jasmin ( me..) n then Amu n Akriti joined her.. (I m not using dii for any1 coz in this story we r all of same age..spare me..)
Amu: “Now where is twinkle yr…its almost 10..”
Akriti: “Aree so ri hogi..” (she must be sleeping)
Jas: “Haa..hamare jiju k khayalo me..” (yes..In the dreams of our brother in law)
So yes..The girl was twinkle..she read further..Amu: “Haa yrr..sone do use..we’ll chat..” (yes..let her sleep..we’ll chat)
Jas: “To hum konsa bhage jaa re h..” (we r not going to run..)
Amu: “Huh..I thought ki tu bhag jayegi..issiliye mene apne pass ek rassi rakhi h..taki tu bhage na..” (Huh..I thought that u will run away..that’s why I have kept a rope with me so that u don’t run away..)
Jas: “Haha..very funny..hasi ni aai…better luck next time..”
Amu: “Joker dikhti Hu kya tujhe..jo tujhe hasaungi?” (Do I look like a clown to u that I will make u Laugh?)
Aku: “Guys stop it..how much you will fight?”
Amu: “Oh come on aku..u know that we r not fighting in real..”
Jas: “Haa dii..We r entertaining our grp..”
Sameera: “Hey guys!!”
Amu: “Dhanya Ho bhagya hamare jo subah subah app ke darshan Ho gaye..”
Sam: “Oh!! Thank me then..”
Amu: “Soch ke bataungi..” (will think n say)
Sam: “Huh!! Whatever..so hum kaha The?” (Soo where were we?)
Jas n Amu: “Apne ghar pr..” (in our home)
Aku: “Really? I to thought ke tum dono mandir me honge..” (Really? I thought that u both would have been in the temple)
Amu: “N why do u think So?”
Aku: “Pagal navratri chal rahi h na..to I thought 9 din wahi rahoge..” (stupid navratri is going on no..so I thought that u would be staying there for 9 days)
Jas: “Aaj sab lame jokes kyu crack kr rahe Ho? Twinkle ki aadat lag gai h Kya?” (Why is every1 cracking lame jokes today? Have u got twinkle’s habit?)
Sam: “Aree twinkle se yaad aya..vo apne dream boy ke dream se abhi tak nahi uthi h?” (Aree frm twinkle I remembered..where is madam? Still in the dreams of her dream boy?)
Presha: “Ab tak aai nai h madam..of course dream me hi hogi..” (till now she hasn’t came..of course she would be in his dreams..)
Sam, Aku, Amu n Jas: “Hey presha!”
N for sometimes this teasing goes on..twinkle then came to the last part n they all were still chating..but as it was late..she quickly left downstairs..
@Sarna mansion
A boy comes frm outside..he was wearing a black vest n shorts..he had headphines in his ears n he was swesting..he came back frm the gym..slowly the camera was revolving around him..his brown orbs r shown..soo deep like an ocean..then his lips r shown..perfectly shaped forming a smile..then his body is shown..that masculine figure for which any1 can die..now his face is shown..n he is..none other than..(batane ki jaroorat h kya?) Kunj sarna..he goes upstairs to his room..puts his phone in charge..n goes to take a shower..after coming back frm the shower he was checking his phone..n there he saw a bundle of messages..it was his grp..but the thing is it was a grp with twinkle’s frnds..n in this twinkle was not included..n the one grp’s chat that twinkle was reading was without kunj..soo he too opened n started reading the chats..n here also some teasing part was going on..but whom they (twinj) loved..was not mentioned in the chats..just dream boy/girl was mentioned..kunj smiled reading the chats n went downstairs..
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Soo a quick character sketch..
Here there r many characters..
N all r college going..koi chota baccha ni h..
Here twinkle, kunj n their some common frnds all study in same college..i know that u all know what i know..hehe..what i m saying is that i know that u all have got to know who is twinkle’s crush n who is kunj’s..right? No? No? Ohk..no problem..yaa they r each others crush..bt they dont know that the other one likes them n secretely admires them..but here..their frnds know everything..n have seperate grps with them..they r not saying anything to them because all of them wants twinj to confess their love for each other themsleves..but twinkle is too shy n kunj thinks why to hurt her..soo they r not confessing..n this grp includes..(except twinj)
Jasmin (me)
Akriti (dii)
Amu (dii)
Aamna (dii)
Sameera (dii)
Adeeba (dii)
Presha (dii)
Ramya (dii)
Purvi (dii)
Tammana (dii)
Fatima (dii)
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Soo soo soo..how was it? It was just a teaser..n why i m posting it is because of my dare..yes..my dare..n this dare was given to me i guess 2-3 months before n i was asked to write a one shot..n that too in 2 days..n i m a lazy head..i tried to write but didn’t got any ideas..but today i realized that i have to finish my dare..n as i was not able to complete that dare..in compensation i m writing a short story..but i will continue only if i got enough comments..n if u cant comment..i saw an amazing thing yesterday..n that was that TU is also having a like and dislike option..soo if u cant comment u can atleast press any1 of them..its the best way For silent readers to give their opinions..
My another reason of coming here was this too..many writers r leaving just because they dont get enough comments in their ff’s..guys plzz..just think of if..n if i get 20+ comments or likes then only i will continue..other wise i would leave it here only..
N one more thing..i m not able to visit TU because of my exams..i have them regularly..but i started reading some of the ff’s..i know some of the writer’s names n i know only the name of same ff’s..but i will try to remember ur names too..so some ff’s that i currently read r
Kiya dii’s love ka h intezar..n believe me dii..this is one of my favourite ff..i love it..n i m waiting for ur next episode..ur ff always tests my patience level..trust me i really love ur ff yr..love ya!!
Sammy dii’s twinj rab miliya season 2..i m soo happy dii that u bought the s2 of this ff..i was loving the first one..n i m loving this too..their first night was awesome yrr..loved it..jaldi se post krna..love ya!!
Amu dii’s beast is mine..dii i m speechless..i always love ur peice of writing..be it whatever..n i loved this one too..plzz jaldi se post kr dena na..love ya!!
Fenu bhaiya’s valentine weeks posts..bhaiya aap late ho but better late than never..i loved each n every part of ur os..really bhaiya i didnt knew u write soo well..n abhi to navratri enjoy karta haiso ne? Hehe..love ya!!
Aamna dii’s main phir bhi tumko chahunga..i love ur writings too dii..loved each n every part of it..the emotions n Everything..i just loved it..plzz post next one soon..
CP dii’s Friendship -> turing into love? I know that was something written in french or something..but i know uska hindi version na..hehe..anyways..i loved ur os too..u r amazing writer dii..plzz jaldi naya os post kr do..love ya!!
Anusha dii’s mujhe haq hai..dii its amazing..though 2 parts but both were amazing..n also ur other ffs sajna ve n my love my life my everything..i love them too..plzz post the next epis as soon as possible..love ya!!
Yashasvi dii’s when a bad boy falls for an innocent girl..dii i m soo happy..finally kunj realized his love for twinki..i love ur ff too.,plzz post next epi soon..love ya!!
Nisha dii’s my destiny made me meet u..dii u episodes r fabulous..n twinkle met kunj after 2 whole years..wohooo..n yuvi is dead!! But the episode was fantabulous..love ya!!
Yashika dii’s soulmates..twinj married?? N no one knows..secret haa..anyways i love ur ff soo much dii..their nok-jhok is also awesome..plzz post next epi soon dii..love ya!!
Preshu dii’s love story..i loved ur ff very much dii..y u ended? Plzz bring up another story na..plzz..this stroy was awesome n cute n marvellous n evething that describes fantastic things..plzz post another story..love ya!!
Baby dii’s he never confessed me until..dii its a unique idea..simple yet beautiful..i dont know frm where this idea popped up in ur head n not mine..dont think i m jealous..aree behen ki tarakee me koi jealous hota h..hehe..i know pagal ho gai hu..N plzz post the next epi asap..love ya!!
I hope i have written every writers name..if not then i m extremely sry..n guys do give opinion about the story..n one more thing..this story is somewhat a love story but it has more of a message of frndshp..this story will show u the worth of the frnds u have..u will understand their impprtance..may be..because what i have thought shpuld teach a lesson about frndshp..but if i forget then jai ram ji ki ho jayega..ohk..bohot bak bak ho gai..now bye..
Take care..
Byee..
Love u all!!♥♥
36 Comments
Nice
Tyvm dii..love ya!! ♥♥
Ohhhh..
Aap aa gayi…
Dhanya bhagya hamare jo aap padhare…
Dare yaad tha tujhe…
Good…
Awesome intro …
Loved it…
Tu priya yani mia ko add krna bhul gayi…
Uske bina masti adhuri h…
Usse bhi add kr le…
If possible…
Love u…
Post soon
Crrcr…priii ko b add kardena jas…
Uske bina masti adhuri hai hamari
Oh!! I actually dont have that bonding with her..but will try to ad..there r many more people in this story..n tyvm for ur reviews..n haa mujhe yaad to tha but idea ni tha na..chalo byee..love ya!! ♥♥
Finally tujhe ye dare Yaad aaya pata hai mein bhi bhool gayi thi ?????… uske baare mein ….
Well I loveddddddd the idea veryyyy much …
Twinj with us umm amazing ?????…
Omg hahahhaaha chat was ???????????….
Loveddddddd it cont soon plzzz …
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Me b bhul gayi thi??
Dii aap bhul gaye the but mujhe yaad tha..n tyvm for ur reviews..love ya!! ♥♥
That was nice
I loved it
Try to post soon plzz
Waiting
Tycm dii..will try to post as my exams r going on..love ya!! ♥♥
amazing di
ur owsome
this ff is very nice and realistic as in our schools or colleges
and plz plz countinue this ff
atleast for me
and whats ur insta id
i will follow u diii
First n foremost..plzz dont call me dii..i m only 13..it sounds odd..n tyvm fr ur review..n my insta id is sidhantianyogi_0406..do tell me urs so that i can accept it n follow back..love ya!! ♥♥
Woahh…that was amazing..
Finalllyyy you r going to write..
Dare saalo k baad cmplt ho raha hai?
ut glad u r doing…
Padh kar hi..i m so excited re…
Almost the chats r same..
Add sm more masti n dhamaal as we do??
Loved it..post soon…
Love u?
Tyvm dii..n i m going to write fr a short term that would be like 1 se 2 mahine..uss se zyada tang krne ni aaungi..n saalo nai mahino baad dare complete kiya h..pata ni aapke saal me kitne mahine hote h..n mai to abhi uss grp me hu nai..to i have to imagine no..ki kya likhu..anyways.. once again tyvm..love ya!! ♥♥
When did u left the group.?
U aint in it anymore.?
Kab or kaise leave kiya?
I left it long back..u didnt knew?
No….why did u?
Awesome update….post next part soon…
Awesome
Can we be frnds…..
Yes sure..i would love to make u my frnd.. tyvm fr ur review..love ya!! ♥♥
Awesome episode
Tyvm dii..love ya!! ♥♥
Awsm
Loved it dear
Tyvm dii..love ya!! ♥♥
Oe pagli….
Yeh kya tha…???haasake maaregi kya….mere dialogues may stop fighting?? thoda suit nai huwa may khud jhagada karti hu aur may aro ko jhagafa maat karo bolti hu???…jo bhi ho itni haasi as rahi hae…fir mandir wala dialogue yeh thik wala tha….fir woh kya grp name 12 mad maana parega name choosing mag mahir nikli…..woa wow???…dream biy dream girl…?….aur yaad rakhna uv ko mera dist bana na maat bhoolna…hamare convo. tujhe kese pata aiae he pagalo jese hote hae??….lovs u yaar post asap…aur jisne bhi tujhe teh dare diya ushko dil se dhanyabaad????????…post asap lazy head…jyada lazy maat hona…
Hehehe!!but me aapko kese maar sakti hu? Koi apni behen ko maar sakta h kya? N dekha mai kisi ko vi badal sakti hu..badal diya na aapko vi..n i know ki mai name choose krne me mahir hu..to agar aapko kisi ka naam rakhvana ho to mujhe hi bulana..thik h.. (u know na what i mean? ) n aap ne agar ek baar or bola na to uv ko inculde hi ni krungi..n abhi na mere paper chal rahe h..soo will see ki kab post krungi..love ya!! ♥♥
Aye hayee Jasmin ,????
This is Fabulous ??
And Haan….Lazy head mat banna aur jaldi post karnaa ???
Bye ?
Tyvm dii..n abhi to papers h but i will surely try to post..love ya!! ♥♥
Amazing fantastic episode dear
plzzz post soon dear
Tyvm dii..wil try to post..love ya!! ♥♥
hi yashu
aur exam ki preparation kaisi chal rahi h
best of luck dear
aur mujhe cmt. krti raha kar samjhi?????
aur haan mne cheenu ke ff pr jo cmt. kiya h usko read krna ek barr
luv u bbye
Superb start.
Jas…r u sachhi mein here.?
Maja toh kri navratri ma but have bimar chu.
Tyvm bhaiya..n yes i m sachi me here..n hawww..bimar kem thai gya? Take care..love ya!! ♥♥
Awww Jasmin
Tumne mujhe bhi iss ff ka part banaya
So sweet of you
And Maine kabhi socha nahi ki koi mujhe apna ff ka hisa banaye
You gave me a really best surprise dear
And sorry for being late
Love you
Tyvm dii..n no need to say thnxx..we r a family right..soo its my duty to include u..no need to be surprised..n u know what..mujhe na jo kisi ne expect na kiya ho wo krne ka bada maza aata h..hehe..love ya!! ♥♥