Tq for the support
N guys I wrote an OS but its not uploaded on TEI section
I don’t know y
But plzz do read itheres the link
http://www.tellyupdates.com/os-divine-love-episode-1/
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Episode-5
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Episode Starts from Twinkle waiting in lobby for kunj to come by finishing his meeting..
Two of the employess come their..
and ask the reason..
She says none of ur business..
they say oky mam y r u gettting angry..we just asked
and by the way such an beautiful girl and such anger dont suite..
she just ignores them..
just then Reena comes their..
and sees twinkle..
R-maam u here..
ohh ucame to meet sir right?
and y dint u say ur name to recep’st if i was knowing its you..
T-hold on reena..i m absolutly fine..and say how was ur meeting..?
just then kunj comes down..and watches twinkle
K-twinkle..tu yaha kya kar rahi hai..
T-vo..mein..actually..
K-chall..itoky..we ll talk n my cabin..come..
He takes her from their..
he makes her drik water and makes her feel comfortable and ask the reason for comming to office with out informing him..
T-abb..pati ko surprise dene ke liye b permission..
K-smilingly..n wher r bodyguards..
T-i said them to wait outside..
K-oky..
so how did this surprise idea strike to ur head..?
T-Bcz ur wife is genoius..
K-Genious…hmmm..after memory loss i must say u became genious..
T-very funny..i m genious since i m born..
wese how was the meeting..
K-it was good..u just wait here and drik this juice..i ll cm in 5 min..then we ll have the lunch together..
T-oky..
Secne-2
Reena-what the hell rajat..
how could u pass such comments on her..
RAjat(just a employee)-are is she ur frnd..
shes so beautiful..
Rahul(another employee)-perfect ptaka..
kya mast mall hai..setting kara de if u know her..
i think shes new here as sshe was looking a bit scared..
and if shes the new emplyee..then tohh..hayyyy maarjava…
SHall i help u in making the setting?,a peak voice choked from behind..
yes ur guessing it right..
its our hero,Kunj
he gives a tight slap to rajat..first
K-first learn respecting a girl..ur working in the most reputed company and ur paid here to work not pass cheap comments on girls..
he comes towards Rahul now and slaps him hard..
K-And mr what ever u are,shes not any emplyee and yeah ..her name is not “phataka or mall” her name is Twinkle..
Twinkle Kunj Sarna..
bewi hai vo meri..
did u get that..
and Reena i want the resignation letter of both of these within 2 hrs on my table
Rajat-sir v r very sorry..
K-i said ur fired off..
means ur fired off..
Rahul-sir,u cant fire me off..i m handling a projectwhich is in its half completion state and all details are know by me in detail..
and i m sure u ll not need such big loss for ur company..
K-no,mr u r wrong..
my first priority is my wife..and i can under go 100 such loss
and ur mistaking it again..
I m ur boss and 2 steps ahead of u..
so i keep all details of each and every project assigned to anyone..
and so u dont need to worry about my company..worry about ur stake as u both have got a black mark in ur carrer..
Reena just 2 hrs not a sec less not a sec more…
hope u got that..
and leaves
Rajat-when did sir get married?
Reena-u fools insted of asking him sorry u challanged him..
and s hes married
not only married but also..
(and stops thinking what kunj told her,about not letting his personal things)
and hes married or not is not what matters but how could u disrespect a girl
(guys i took up this topic as eveteasing is the biggest problem..
if i would be in his place i would take my hokey bat and start hitting him,infact would suggest all girls to do so..)
Kunj comes back to his cabin..to his lady love..
T-hogaya tumhara kam..
K-han..
T-asa kya kamm agaya tha?
K-vo actually mujze..kuch kam tha..par chod na..
challo let have lunch..i m hungry..
T-han..
she takes out plate..and serves him and in another plate she serves for herself..
kunj tum bule toh nahi ho na?
K-kya ?
t-u promised me to take to shopping and also said u ll make me talk to ariya..
K-yeah i have not forgot about it..
i took the whole mall for ..
T-(before he could complete)Mr sadu sarna v are going in formal..
just as all husband and wife go..
we are not taking any guards with us..
K-what?No way,i said s to shopping na..then y these all
T-i dont care we are going on shopping as all couples go..hand in hand..
we shall have icecreams and panipuri and lods of fun..
K-No..i mean oky we shall have icecream ,panipuri and all stuff but bodyguards are must..
T-no no no no bodyguards
K-pulling her cheeks ,Yes
T-no
k-yes
T-no
k-yes
t-no
T-no
k-yes
t-no
T-no
k-yes
t-yes
K-no,wait i mean yes,hai it was cheeting
T-i m sorry hubby but no bodyguards..and everything is fair in love and war..
k-no way twinkle..its not possible..
T-fine,then i ll go alone and ask reena to acompany me..kunj plz try to understand and by the way all dont know me that i m the wife of the Kunj SArna..
K-fine..i ll come with u..
but tommo..and i know without any security..if u promise to not to create any siyappas
Twinkle hugs him..
They both had finished lunch..when
T-Kunj,i wanted to ask somethinng..
K-abb kya hai siyappa queen..
T-where are our families..?
K-where they should be
T-no i mean which city..
K-Amritsar..
T-what?then shall we all go their..plzzplzzzzzzzzzz
K-oky i ll think of it..
T-think of it?
anyways u said me u ll say all the things related to past..
K-(taking a deep beath),what u want to know..
T-i..
(and are interupted by knowck on the door)
K-yeah plz comein..
ohh reena u here,
r-sir,these resignations of rajat and rahul..
K-yeah keep them on table..and yeah pay them their till date dues..with the bonus if they were in the list..
i dont want their family to suffer for their doings..
reena leaves and twinkle is very happy as kunj cares for all..
K-twinkle i think v should leave..i have done all work too..so even i ll acompany u..challo lets go..
she says oky..
both lev..
all Office staff stare twinkle and have a big bright smile on their face..
she notices this..
all greet her hello mam hello mam..
she looks at kunj..but kunj just drove off fastly as he knew that twinkle is ready with questions now..he wanted to ignore all of them..
she looked at reena and said her bye..
Reena also greeted her..
and our couples left..
all office staff at once looked at Reena..
Reena gave them what look?
Twinj reached homw..
kunj sensed before only that twinkle is ready with questions..
so he huridly went off to study..
Twinkle was suspecious on him..
he went behind him slowly..
she hid beside the door..
and listened the talks of kunj..
pata nahi abb kya siyappa karegi yeh..i m sure she got many douts now and shes ready with all them and shes waiting for me as i ll b balika bakra now..
its better i be buzy full time..
and what should i do of that shopping..
han i ll purchase the whole mall for tommo and make my guards as customers ..
so no dout to twinkle and shes safe too..
wahh kunj..wah..twikle ke sath re re kar uska asar tuz par bhi dikraha hai..
good..
Twinkle (to her self)-ohh so this sadu sarna is thinking smart of himself..now c mr sadu sarna what i ll do..
she knocs the door..
Kunj i want to know about family..and want to talk to her..see her pics..
k-oky..
just a min
(to himself-its good that she just wants to know of family..and no other matters ..i l just tell her all good memories )
T-kaha kho gaye tum..
K-nothing..let me get ourmarriage album..as all family members are their….
T-Our marriage albus..
K-nahi..hamare padosiyonka marriage album.
T-so funny that i forgot to laugh..
K(get the album)-
oky so here it it..
he point to every one and starts introducing them..
She is ur mom,Leela maa
She is my mom,
he is my dada,
teri bhabhi and meri behen,mahi
bhaiyaa and bhabhi
and he is ur Brother UV..
and shes bebe
T-y is she not in our marriage..?
K-she din attened it
T-why?
K-i dont know!
T-how u dont know?
K-coz i never asked her
T-you could have asked her..
K-i din feel its necessary
T-shes eldest and she should have attend it
K-meri..maa kitna questions?thoda tho brek laga..
T-par,
K-(he cuts her)stop..i have some work..u go and take rest..
T-i m fine..i dont need any rest
K-fine..tommos program cancel..
T-what?
K-yeah…
T-you cant do it..
K-i can do it..i can coz i m Kunj sarna..
T-making a cute innocent face..
fine i ll rest..but no cancelling the program..
K-thats like my good girl..
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hope u liked the Episode..
Guys there are few strikes going on..and due to this our submissions are getting cancelled so uploading both the episodes..
i know u are bored now of reading my episodes..but bare me for few more minutes..
the next one ll be short i promise..
so heres the next episode
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Episode-6
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Twinkle is sitting alone in her room..
looking at all the albums
(she had bought up all alubms)
few questions were strinking her mind..
she saw her album and the year of their marriage was 2014..
but ariya is 5yrs old..
she started thinking and just fell off..
it had been 2 hrs ..now..
kunj was in study..
he asked one of the servnt to call twinkle..
and just then came the voice of servent letting kunj know about twinkle..
doctor was called..he examined twinkle..and said shes in stress..did she get to know anything..
K-no,infact nothing such..she talked me 3hrs ago..
then i asked her to rest..infact she was resting and i was in study..
i asked servent to calll her for dinner and then..
Doc-dont worry..i made her go in mild coma for 48hrs..so that she can rest..u take care..
Kunj was in tears..he held twinkles hand and was crying..
he was happy as atlest twinkle is with him now..
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Guys now i ll start the older story..
so plz dont get confused with past and present..
and hope u enjoy the tour.. 🙂
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An airport is seen,a girl comes hushing and rushing..with huge bags with her..having a small glass piece with her..in one hand..her hair is tied up in apony..
and then something happened..
what happened..?
read this to know->
a boy dasked her..
and that glass piece broke..
she went furious..
the boy is revelead to be kunj..
K-i’m really very sorry..
plzz i din know u could come hussing in this manner..
Girl-what sorry han
K-kaha na yar,sorry
Girl- sorry se yeah yeah tik ho ga kya?
do u know how valuable was that..
K-ohh..i can pay it for u..
Girl-to whom are u showing the power of money..to me..?
K-it was also ur mistake..but i said u sorry..and when i m saying it..u are bursting on me..?..i said na i m ready to pay
T-fine pay me the love..
K-what
Girl-i bought it with love can u pay me?no na
K-but..
i said u sorry t=n thats more than enough
aur if i m mistaken even u were the one to strike me..
tumhari akeehn hai ya button..?
Girl-it was ur mistake..u striked me..this girft fell..
and ur bursting like volcano on me only
K-yeah i m so what ll u do
Girl-chill u
K-what..?
girl-wait here..
she goes and gets the chilled water and pores it on his head..
now become cool..and never ever try to come infront of my face..
the girl is revealed to be twinkle
she walks off..
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hope u liked it..
30 Comments
Great epi crazy about the baby I just hope that is really twinjs biological baby and not of the other person please
Twists are waiting..
N I can’t release them now..
Do just wait n watch
That’s all is what can I say ?
Loved plzzz finsih dis track as soon as possible i want tw n kunj to b happy in dis track dey r happy bt nt happy too n dont make ur ff parts short write long i lov reading long parts plzzzz
Nyc episode
Thanku
Amazing , pls post the next episode as soon as possible
Sure dear
crazy as i was a bit ill so i couldnt read ur epis first but today i read all ur epis as i found it interesting like anything….. keep up the fab work and i hope these riots are over or get over soon so u can upload ur epis. regularly as i cant wait for it now
Awww ritzi thankuu so much
amazing.outstanding.owsome super owsom.and love it.when twinkw ould b in danger as you told in yesterdats epi.post atleast or plz
Awesome next episode ASAP
awesome …… post d nxt one soon…..
My favourite fan fiction ? Please upload regularly
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u r fabulous writer. crazy u really made me crazy. ur ff is so so so so osm. can’t wait for next
Thanks aton
it was awesome as always
u have make me your greatest fan
and if possible please post next episode ASAP
Sure ll try my best
Its too good dear and I love ur ff and can read it whole day
Means a lot
It ws jus amazing epi dear loved it so sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo much do cont soon plzzzzz luv u
Thanks a lot
Crazy u r my favorite…. Just luv u soooooo much
Awww
Love u!
Hey u r really awesome….. But I have a small suggestion to u.. Plzzzzzz do add a recap of ur previous episode.. It will be easy to recollect what happened earlier and can continue reading the new episode without any confusion.. If possible Plzzzzzzzz add it… Ur story line is really amazing,,,
Sure dear thanku so much for suggestion
N from next one
It ll happen for sure
amazing….u have brought really a very interesting suspense…ur ff is just fab….l loved u n ur ff…
Hii crazy ur ff s woooooooooowwwwww dr superbbbbb…eagerly waiting fr nxt episode plz post it asap dr…n don’t worry v r nt bored of ur ff…I want ur nxt episode to b more longer dan dis one…eagerly waiting to knw past of twinj n d present story s als jst awesome n unique frm other ffs dr
very very nice ??✌
back to back two updates
wow
next one asap
Amazing yrr