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When I met you (shot 02)
Kunj started observing her more cautiously. A girl who was sitting right next to him dressed up elegantly in a party wear enjoying her cup of coffee to the eternity had an amzing power of attracting anyone to her but he felt that she concealed her realities infront of this fake world.
‘Hey…look there’ she screamed out harder bringing him out of his thoughts about analysing her and pointed to a bike which was actually his, parked under the old demolished bridge.
‘Hey you…!!! Stop!!’ Kunj screamed on top his lungs to scare away the man who was probably the one who took away his bike. The thief started running turning his backs and disappeared in the darkness on night.
‘Hmm…Finally happy?’ the girl whose presences was unnoticed spoke.
‘Yeah!! Very much,’He replied with a huge smile. ‘Come, I wil give you a ride,’ He added.
The journey of the two Souls started who were about to end their lives but their paths came together uniting them to a different path of love and care.
‘I should thank you coz of you I got my favourite bike back,’ He said during a drive and still the hapiness was in air.
True though!! In this huge city of dense population there are no chances of finding the things which you lose, it might be materialistic or non- materialistic. But in the present fact, he forgot that he lost one of his non-materialistic basic necessity called love.
‘I am kinda luck for you right?’ She praised herself as he let out a smile in agreement.
The night was still on and held back all its realities and youth waiting for the appropriate time to take it out as it does everytime. It might be the life of love or pleasures or fakeness or struggle or abuse.
‘Hey, What are you upto?’ He gasped as her cold face touched his shoulder. ‘Are you fine?’ He asked again not getting a reply from her.
He stopped his bike and slowly he could feel her releasing her clutches on his shoulder and within no time she feel down from the bike. Thankfully, the bike was at rest.
Terrified by this sudden shock he immediately took her to the hospital.
He paced to and fro infront of the OT with a sense of sadness and anxiety within himself which made him forget the main reason for his night out.
The one who wanted to take his life off is now struggling for someone unknown’s life. Why? Is love trying to tell something?
He isn’t aware of the facts but all his thoughts were around that pretty girl who is struggling for her life inside.
A hour passed,
He was still restless and finally took a quick sigh as he saw the doctor coming out.
‘No need to worry, she is out of danger,’ Doctor said.’Please come with me,’ He took him to a cabin carrying few reports in his hands.
‘Is she your girlfriend?’ He asked as kunj was seated infront of him.
‘No doctor, she is just my friend’ kunj said still not sure about his relationship with the stranger girl.
‘Do you know what’s the reason behind her suicide attempt?’ Doctor asked suspiciously as ground under kunj’s feet shook for once.
‘What!!’ He was shocked.
‘Yeah!! She poisoned herself,’ Doctor said going through the reports. ‘She is quite immune to the toxic so she escaped death and completly fine, you can take her to home but make sure to take good care of her,’ Doctor gave him a leave.
With lot many questiones he moved out of the cabin and headed to the ward room where she was shifted. He sat next to her as she was still unconscious. She carried the same charm on her face but veiled some dark secrets which he felt through his heart and wanted to confront her but who was he to her? They are just a mere strangers!!!
But still this poor unconscious soul lying infront of him had a great effect on him. The one who wanted to kill himself ended saving another life, which was quite similar to him.
‘Sir, payment and discharge summaries are ready,’ a voice disturbed his thoughts. He nodded and was about to go out for the payment but he realised that he had no money.
‘Here it is,’ a faint voice was heard.
Yes!! It’s her….
‘You can take it from my bag, no need to feel bad as I know you don’t have money with you right now and moreover it’s for me only right!! I can pay off my expenses so please take it,’ twinkle said trying to get up from her bed. She looked well but somewhere she felt dizzy and weak.
Kunj hesitatingly took money from her and paid off.
‘What made you save me?’ Twinkle asked sharply as he entered.
‘Why you wanted to kill yourself?’ He questioned back instead of answering.
‘That’s not the answer’ she wanted to know the reason.
‘Same goes with you as well,’ He too was adamant.
Sometimes questions are answered back with questions only….but here there was no anger or stubbornness. It was suspicion, care and LOVE.
Recap: The darkness of the one night sky continues
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18 Comments
Superb !!
Loved it !!
Thank you
It was really amazing…really wanna read wat happens next…:)
Also if u can plz post love fate or marriage epi also…really eager to read that as well 🙂
Thank you SSK
My exams are going on so can’t make time for both at a time
I will post soon
Amazing dear pls post soon
Thank you hima
Its beautifully beautiful with its concept and language……Its feeling the air without seeing it………fallling in love without realising
Thank you Ria. ..
❤
Awesome
Loved it
Thank you presha
superb
post the next part soon
and plz post ur other ff cant wait for it plz
My exams na so no time. .
I will post it soon
Thank you
Superb…
Totally loved it
Nice episode!
awesome epi yr !luved it
waiting for next part
plz post ur other ff also
luv u
Awesome Amazing rockstar
Even twinkle committed suicide
Don’t know what’s the reason
Left in suspense
Waiting
Post soon
Fantastic mindblowing episode dear
Waiting for next episode
plzzzz post soon dear
luvvv u dear
Hey Rosh!! Sorry I’m really late yaar…
Damn! I thought Twinkle was consuming some drug or something!! Why does she want to die?? It was really nice reading the way Kunj could smile and be genuinely happy in Twinkle’s company… But looks like you have different plans in mind for them… Amazing!!! Beautifully written!! Absolutely loved it…