Hello friends!!!! How are you all? I m so happy by the response. Thank you all who commented!
Let me inform you all that Paavu (Ishu) will not be active on TU. She will neither comment nor post anything till 18th April because of her exams. So pray for her exams.! All the very best to you my butter cup! ???
In case if anyone missed the intro or promo, here is the link to it:
TWINJ: A MYSTERY……….
Shot 1
It is said that Love is Sweet but Revenge is too, let’s see if it is really true or just a saying.
A boy was shown on his bike. He reached the police station and started to move inside. He passes from there and the guards salute him. He started to walk inside and every police officer present there salutes him. He sat down on his chair, holds the pen and lifted his face upwards. He was none other than my hottie Kunj Sarna. He was wearing police’s uniform. (Hehehe Kunj Sarna a police officer ????) He called someone towards himself through action.
K – “Arnav, any news?”
A – “No sir, not yet! We can’t find where actually he/she is. Always changes its place. Yesterday, there was a robbery at a jeweller’s shop and this case was included in it or we say it was the one who did it alone.”
K – “Okk! But remember one thing we have to find it any cost. Now, it is my only ambition in life.”
A – “Yes sir!”
Everyone settles on their places and started their work. Just then a guy entered the station. He was wearing sunglasses. He came inside and sat down in front of Kunj. He took off his sunglasses, he was none other than Yuvraj Luthra.
K – “Tu fir yahan aagaya, bola tha na me khug aaonga!”
Y – “Ab kya karein, hamein hi aana pada. Apko apny case se fursat nhi to socha ek hafte baad khud hi milny aajaye hum.”
K – “Ohh god Yuvraj kitna dramebaaz hai tu!”
Y – “Haan bilkul Twinkle ki tarah!” he smiled
K – “Wo bhi aesy hi dramebaaz thi?”
Y – “Haan balke is se bhi zyada!” kunj smiled and holds the glass to drink water.
K – “Tu kabse us ka wait ker raha hai?”
Y – “10 saal se!” kunj spit the water from his mouth.
K – “What? 10 saal. Or tu nhi jaanta wo kahan hai kesi dikhti hai?”
Y – “Nhii!”
K – “Achha farz ker agr tujhy wo mil gayi toh tu usy pehchany ga kesy?”
Y – “Ye dil hai na, sab bata dega!”
Kunj stood up and put his hand on Yuvraj’s shoulder.
K – “Isn’t it crazy, tu 10 saal se uska wait ker raha hai or tu nhi janta wo kahan hai kesi dikhti hai. Dude, tujh mein or mujhmein ek cheez common hai. Twinkle ke liye teri junooniyat or Case 125 ke liye meri obsession.”
Yuvraj smiled. Just then Arnav came running.
A – “Sir, case 125 is in XYZ school, and this time the news is 100% correct.”
Kunj looked at Yuvraj and Yuvraj smiled. Kunj ran outisde and sat on his bike.
Next Scene –
A girl was shown dressed fully in a black leather jacket with black boots (same dressing as in promo). She was standing in front of a huge school building. She talked to herself “I should enter from the backside.” She turned to go and entered the school from backside. She moved towards the fund box. It was locked. She took out a heavy object from her bag and broke the lock. She emptied the another bag in it and the fund box got filled with money. Just then the police sirens were heard. She got alert and quickly left from there and moved towards the washroom.
Kunj came inside along with other police officers.
K – “Arnav go on left side and you all go to right.”
He saw the fund box lock on the ground and filled with money.
K – “Yeh fund box toh full hai. Case 125 you can’t hide for so long.”
He moved towards the washroom and looked here and there.
In the washroom, the girl took off her jacket and boots and threw it on the dustbin. Her locket cover fell down but she doesn’t noticed. She opened the washroom door and came out. Kunj didn’t noticed her because he was looking at another direction. She passes from there. Ae Dil Hai Mushkil Instrumental plays.
She stood at the gate of school and looked at the sky. She was none other than Twinkle Taneja. Kunj looked at her direction but couldn’t saw her face because her back was facing him. She left from there.
Kunj entered in the washroom. He saw the jacket and boots in the dustbin.
K – “That means case 125 is around.”
He was about to leave from there when something caught his attention. He bent down and picked the locket cover from the floor. He looked at it closely and kept it in his pocket. He left from there.
Next Scene –
Twinkle was shown standing at a bridge over a river. She jad tears in her eyes.
T – “Twinkle Taneja, jis ka koi wajood nhi tha, jis ka koi naam nhi tha, jiski koi pehchan nhi thi. Aj wo hi twinkle taneja lauti hai apna badla leny. Aj usy ek nayi pehchan mili hai.”
She closes her eyes and reminisces someone aiming the gun at her when she was little and shoot it. She opened her eyes with a jerk and placed her hand on her heart.
T – “Mujhy aj bhi yaad hai. Jahan apne Twinkle Taneja ka anth kita tha aj wahin se apka anth shuru hota hai! Me aarahi hun apka anth kerny. Ab waqt aagaya hai ke apki sachayi duniya ke saamne aajaye. Jasmin Bhasin, meri nayi pehchaan jis se me apko khatam ker dungi!”
She cleared her tears.
Screen freezes.
TO BE CONTINUED………..
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Pic credit: Thanmy ❤
Guys, how was it! Was it boring? I think so. Well tell me your views about it. Do you find it boring or just a copy of Naamkaran. I just took the idea from it, whole story is mine just wait for sometime. I m not copying Naamkaran.
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With all my love ???????❤❤❤?
17 Comments
It was nice and you are naamkaran fan also
Loved it …. I know its the plot of Naamkaran … and I am sure you would add many twist and turns into this story …
Love you Post soon 🙂
and Ishu all the best from my side 🙂
Woah it was out of the world
Great story line yaar
Liking this mysterious Trac
Do continue
Amazing awesome fabulous..Interesting
Hey sweetepi awesome yaar just loved it…
Too good..
Post soon..
Love u… Nd all the best to ishu.. ☺
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Omggg purviiii,, my vanilla..??
U portrayed everything justtt Awesomely yarrrrr,,????????????..
It’s sooo intense yet emotional which I love it to the most,,????????..
Well just feeling and imaging it real,,???.. And washroom scean u showed that twinj passing by eachother n that time ADHM instrumental play’s i just love des scean,,❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤… And don wry yrr It’s not like namkaran,,???.. though u copy only just ideas but it’s look like intersting story so keep it up,,☺☺☺..
Or plzzzz apna ff bhi post karde,,???.. M waiting 4 it,,???..
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LOAD’S OF LOVE 2 U,,?❤?❤?❤?❤?.. MUAaaaaaAaHhhh,,??????..
Uf uff ???falling in love with your ff ..,…????…..A very good start ??Twinj ?ufff really excited to see…No read? what happens next?
Post next soon ??
Hey purvi jaan my 2nd soutan..hehe..
Yrr..tune toh kamal kar diya bht hi emotional episode tha yrr…just amazing fabulous…
Post soon..
Luv u..
Bye..
Purvi it was nice and twinkle mystery will open soon and exited how will twinj fall for each other or meet uv dialogue was nice
not expected from you plzzz dont copy any serial s plot
Really superb episode yaar
Liked twinkles mysterious character
Do continue
Fantastic episode
Who shot twinkle with bullet
Do continue
Track is awesome
Twinj character is killer
Keep writing
Mysterious purvi I loved it
awsm..start..post..soon
Awesome amazing purvi
N so intrestin
N plsss send my best wishes to ishu
Love u keep smiling
Ohhhhhhh god purvi…. 🙂
Amazing marvellous speechless dear…..wat an episode ……muaahhh….jst luvd it soooo mch 🙂
Too adorable too cute kunj …emotional……twinkle too mch….
Love u lods…. 🙂