Hey hey hey guysss…..
srry for not posting yesterday…
guzzz i was just overwhelmed with comment…
i mean it wasjust an intro and i got 34 comments…
i m soooo sooo sooooo happy guys…
though their were mine also but seriously…yaar?.
ok enough of my bak bak
here i go with my first ff….
scene 1….
@taneja mansion
all 2 families r sitting together…ie..taneja and sarna…(guys i forgot to mansion that leela,anita and usha r childhood friends). All r happy.
Leela(L)-So gud na usha! Our childern’s engaged happily without any problem…..i hope marriage also happens like this….
Usha(U)-Hope so….
(Yes guys….yuhi r engaged……)
L-btw usha where is ur son….? I din saw him yet……today is his sister’s engagement….
U-He went to hospital because…..
But leela cuts her off
L- Y what happened is he all right…?
U- Yes,everything is fine….he went to his freind as he met with an accident..he went to meet him…
Scene shifts to a road….
A handsome boy with white pant and red shirt is shown from back…n he turns….he is none other than kunj….he is dancing with some children on matargashti….a child is shown sitting in wheel chairand collecting money…dance ends and everyone claps…n the boys gets enough money….
Scene shifts to taneja mansion….
Anita(A)- Leela ur daughter also dint attended this engagement…where is she….?
L- I dont know where is she…..she told she had some important work…
Just then kunk arrives….he greets usha and hugged her…and then greeted leela and anita….
They just sat and were talking and a girl comes there wearing a blue top which was having two heart in left side of light pink colour and black denim….she silently entered the house and saw leela…as leela and kunj were facing back to hdr…anita and usha saw her…the girl indicated them not to make any noise…..they nodded and were giggling inside…..then her face is shown….she is our panjabi phataka twinkle taneja….she wore a scary mask and tapped leela’s back leela turned and shouted…
L-aaaaaaaa!
Anita and usha kept hands in their ear…..kunj was busy in phone call….he was near dining table….just then twinkle removed her mask and said
T-maa its me….
L-oh twinkle…how many times i told u not to scare me…
T- maa….sorry….n btw sorry i m late…
And then twinkle sees kunj (guys kunj was facing back to twinkle…)
T- And who is he…?
L- He….he is kunj,kunj sarna…mahi’s brother…..
Just thdn kunj completes his talk and turns….and sees twinkle….
Both r shocked…..
Both says together…. “TUM”
Screen freezes….
Precap-teinj cute fight…leeshata(leela,usha and anita{guyys sorry for my new n stupid name invention})smiles seeing this….
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HI GUZZ
SORRY GOT LATE….
BUSY WITH SCHOOL STUFFS
HE U LIKE TODAYS EPI…
PLZZ PLZZ PLZZ COMMENT..
SILENT READERS TOOO…
U KNOW WAT I M TOO GREEDY FOR COMMENTS….
N IF U WANT ANYTHING TO CHANGE HERE PLZZ TELL ME THROUGH UR COMMENTS…
I WILL TRY TO DO SO..
PLZZ FORGIVE ME FOR MY MISTAKES AS I M ONLY OF 11…..
TY P,ZZ COMMENT
LOVE U ALL LOADS
KEEP READING FF’S, N WATCHING TEI…
LOVE U ALL LOADS…
MUAHH!!!!
34 Comments
Awesome
Nxt epi asap
Ty zakiii
Awesome one …… post d nxt one soon……
Tyvm panchi…
Awesome
Tyvm mitali……
It was very nice …awesome.
Tyvm sayeeda…..
Amazing epi dear loved it so much do cont asap plzzzzzzzzz plzzzzz
Tyvm zikra…..
Nice.
Tyvm ria…..
Love it
Tyvm ajita…..
amazing ??
update soon
Tyvm srija….
amazing
Tyvm ritzi…..
Guys sorry sprry its epi 1…i wrote it intro….
Heyy Jasmin i loved ur intro sry i didthere comme there 🙁 anyway ur 1st episode was amazing ! 🙂
Sorry yaar i hate auto correct i meant to say sry i didn’t comment on ur intro for the ff 🙂 forgive me 🙂
Tyvm romaish…..
Really nyc…. plz continue ♡!
Tyvm hima….
Nice…
Tyvm harna
hey are u jasmin who told me toread your ff in my ff “dilon ki dastan”
your ff is fab and i can’t believe u are only 11 even younger then me as i am12
Tyvm bhavika….
n yeah i m the 1 who told to read my ff…
n i m going to b 12…
oh plzz tell me when is your b day
Awesome beginning…. Waiting for the next…..
Tyvm sadaf khan
Its on 4th of june
Nice pls continue
Ty sam