Hey guys this is Anushka. I have written a story on twinj. It’s not a fan fiction. I mean I won’t upload next episodes of it. But plz throw ur comments.
In this story character used r only twinj and chinki.
Twinj: True love never dies (storyy)
I remember his dark, mysterious eyes and his wild, yet so perfect, hair. His smile lit up the room. His name was Kunj. When I was in sixth grade I had the biggest crush on him although I’d never met him. My best friend at the time, chinki, had pictures of him everywhere. Every time I would go to her house, I would sit on her bed admiring his dark gaze and knowing deep down in my heart that he was the man of my dreams and the only guy in the world that would ever be perfect for me.
Kind of a strange thing for me to be thinking, considering I had never once in my life have spoken one word to him. But I just knew.
Eventually I made it to seventh grade. I moved up into the new school with him. On the first day of school I was so anxious to meet him. Chinki introduced us and right away we hit it off. Starting that day we talked endlessly on the phone. Sometimes I wouldn’t realize what time it was and get off around 4 in the morning.
I loved talking to Kunj. I told him everything about me, and he told me everything about himself. Soon we went on a “date” and really started liking each other alot. But, with my luck, another girl came along and screwed it up.
Don’t think that we didn’t talk after that. We became BEST friends. And the greatest thing was, we always had those hidden feelings for each other no matter if one of us had another significant other or not. There was always a great passion inside me for him that nothing could take away.
A couple years later, when I was a sophomore and Kunj was a junior, something bad happened. I betrayed his trust and lied to him about something really important to him. I felt terrible but I could understand why he wasn’t talking to me. This went on for about 2 months not talking and I missed him with all my heart. I prayed everyday for the lord to bring us back together because I know we were meant to be.
One day I got a call from Kunj’s mom saying that he was hit by a drunk driver and was in critical condition. Right then my heart stopped. I didn’t want to believe it. This couldn’t be happening. I loved him too much and we had a future together.
There would be no more going to restaurants together and spitting spit wads at the waitresses, no more shoulder to cry on and no one to tell my deepest darkest secrets to, no one to call in the middle of the night to just talk because I couldn’t sleep, and no one to talk about our future plans together when we get married and are rich and have one baby boy. Worst of all, no more best friend.
That night I went up to the hospital to see him. He could barely talk at all. I looked at him and I cried. That’s all I could do. I wanted him to forgive me, I wanted him to stay. I wanted to kiss him, I wanted to pray. I wanted to laugh with him, I wanted him to live. But what I did instead was cry. Then he did something that I will never forget. He grabbed my hand and said these words: “Twinkle, I will never stop loving you. I love you with all my heart. You’re my best friend, and my first and only love.”
Then he fell asleep. “I love you too Kunj” I whispered and I slowly walked out of his room with tears streaming down my cheeks. The next morning I got another call from his mom. This time she said “I’m sorry Twinkle, Kunj has passed away”. I could hear the hurt and pain in her trembling voice. I cried, but then I remembered: True love never dies.
Hope u like it.
God bless?
Take care
Love u all
Do comment.
46 Comments
ahhh it was a sad stry…??
Yeah I too agree
Just amazing. U know I literally had a sad ? expression on my face. Just amazing. Very intense. It touched my heart
loved it. Too good Anushka
Thanq so much mitali from the bottom of my heart.
anushka dear its really very emotional and heart touching story. I got tears in my eyes
Aww I also had tears writing the last part. But Thanq so much vidushi for commenting.
Hmmmm very sad ending dear….but yes an awesome piece of writing…u r really an amazing writer
Aww it means a lot Akku di. But I m nothing in front of u. Thank u so much for commenting
Ahh so sad bt osm loved it vry emotional …….
Thanq so much zikra
Anushka! No words i have to compliment your work. I am on the verge of crying. Such an emotional story. I so loved it. You are such an amazing writer. Why did kunj die. Shit i can’t even imagine him dying. Loved it to the core.
Aww thanq so much. I also don’t know y I made him die but trust me it all came from my heart. I didn’t thought before writing but my hands were moving and story got formed. I thought u will say it is bad but u all loved it.
o dear ur just an amazing writer I can’t explain it ,it was heart touching…..loved it & love you.
Aww Thanq so much naira. I m overwhelmed reading ur comment. I love u too dear
o dear ur just an amazing writer I can’t explain it ,it was heart touching…..loved it I got tears in my eyes.
Thanq
too emotional dear luv this..
Thanq twinkle and kunj
really I am touched and feeling to cry u are an awesome writer.
I m just on cloud9 right now. Thanq so much dear.
Such an emotional one
Anushka hats off yaar
Thanq so much sissy
it was really nice dear….i am still weeping
I m glad that u liked it
this story really touched my heart. I loved it from d core of my heart. d story is awesome & emotional too.
Aww Thanq so much Sonali.
Wow beautiful story hope u write another like this
Thanks Sam and yes I’ll definitely write another one.
Best shrt story evr read..u r too good…it touchd my heart…cz its kinda of my stry too;-(
Best???? Really. Thanq so much smita from the bottom of my heart.
Hey Annu tell me yaar how do u write so good. I mean after reading it I had tears in my eyes. I just love u from the bottom of my heart. U r amazing. Plz continue it.
Thanq yaar. Honestly I didn’t thought before writing. The words were coming from my heart. I love u too dear.
Can’t express my emotions…
Reading this FF..
N let me tell u…
My cousin is a writer …
He too read this ff while I was reading
N he has suggested u to take this talent f u further ..
U can get too much success in it…
Love u buddy
Love u too buddy. Thanq so much I just loved ur comment. Reading ur comment I m on infinite cloud. Well alike Akku di writing is my passion but my dad want me to become a doctor. And I even have interest in it.
It misplaced my comment to next one not Neva mind..
Its really a sad story…………………But ur writing skills– HATS OFF TO IT………..AS ITS REALLY AMAZING…….The thing u tried to convey is absolutely right ……. TRUE LOVE NEVER DIES…….IF NOT IN THIS BIRTH IN NEXT BIRTH WE WILL SURELY GET IT…………. 🙂 🙂
Yeah this was the actual thing I wanted to convey. Thanq so much jerly for commenting and praising me. Love u dear.
Neva mind..
Dear..but ur writing skills are just amazing ..
N if at all ur mind changes contact me
Fb id? Vaishnavi Gadge
Twitter ? @vyshugadge
Insta ? vaushnavigadge
.n good luck for our future..
Soo sad n touching
Aww Thanq so much aarti
Hey annu. U know what when read this ff I had tears in my eyes. I loved it. Mark my words, maybe after 10 or 12 years. Books will be published by ur name. U can write a novel dear. U can have really good success in this career. I just love it. Please write some more stories.
I m so overwhelmed to read ur comment. Yes for sure i ‘ll write some more
It is a emotional one but still I loved it. U r amazing. I think in future u will become a writer. Then please appoint me as ur assistant.
I glad that u liked it. Thanq so much for commenting
ANUSHKA it was really heart touching story….n u convey a nyc message TRUE LOVE NEVER DIES…loved it?????????????
What is this?
Its all are rubbish.
Its all are disgussting.
Its all are bore.
Plz don’t write that and don’t spoil your time doing this rubbish.
I am sooo angry on you about this.