Hi everyone. …I know I am not on time so sorry….
When I met you: shot 05
Questions are still veiled!!
Once questions become clear man will be able to find the answers about things haunting him, right??
‘That was a sad story,’ twinkle said not knowing what to reply him but her words didn’t make him angry as he didn’t see concern in her voice but something else!!
‘So, you stay here?’ He asked brushing away his thoughts and staring at huge building.
‘Hmm…yeah and by the way thanks for everything today,’ she said with a heavy voice.
‘My pleasure and I too had a nice time with you today,’ He replied with same awkwardness he had when he started to travel with this stranger girl.
Were they still strangers??
Was that a adios??
Are they going to part away??
Both didn’t want to leave the place, they don’t know what held them back but all they want is to spend some more time with eachother for no particular reason.
‘Okay, I will be leaving now as my place is quite far and it will take much time if I wont leave now’ He finally said with lot many questions popping inside of him.
‘Hmm’ reply from her which she didn’t intend to say.
Both looked at eachother and smiled remembering the quality time they spent with eachother.
To turn a relationship between two people from one level to another, might be from strangers to known; known to friends; friends to lovers; lovers to couples and so on…. one of the two should take a step further so that another can also step in and further both will step together till death parts them.
This time twinkle took that step fearing about losing him for an unknown reason forgetting the facts about her haunting past.
Little did she know that her one step which she took will take her life into some other place which wasn’t her destination.
‘Kunj, how about a coffee?’ She stopped him but unknowingly they both were coffee lovers.
As the famous line is here, A LOT CAN HAPPEN OVER A CUP OF COFFEE.
‘Huh?’ Poor soul he was little confused but delighted.
‘Yeah… as you said your home is soo far, Why can’t you come stay up for now? It’s quite late,’ twinkle said convincingly pointing at her watch.
Yes it was quite late…1.30am
‘Is it okay for you?’ Kunj being a gentleman asked her before entering the lift.
‘That’s ok no problem,’ she replied.
‘Are you sure?’ He asked again as she nodded back.
The lift stopped at the middle floor and both of them headed towards her flat.
She took out her keys and tried opening the lock, forgetting the fact that she moved out of the same flat with a determined goal of ending her life.
And the person next to her was also in the same condition, who should be dead by now is going to face much more harsh realities as well as the most beautiful things together.
Happiness and sadness are the two combo packs. One you get and the other will follow you as a bonus!!
‘Come in,’ she said comforting him in her place but little did she know that welcoming this person inside had a different feeling in her which was not found before, when she welcomed (several) other people.
Is she just inviting him into her home? Or into her life?
Giving out a small smile, still feeling nervous he went inside the place. It was a nice, single bedded flat with well furnished interiors and lovely colours.
He had a look around the place but all he could see was pale walls that held something discrete.
‘Um…Your parents?’ He asked standing near the door of the kitchen.
‘They are not here,I am working so staying here,’ twinkle who was preparing a coffee replied handing him a bottle of water.
He took it with a smile and gulped in a few.
‘Nice place but are you staying here alone?’ He asked again.
‘Yeah’
‘Your workplace?’
‘Its nearby’
All his curiosity was breaking the bounds moreover her simple answers which never answered his questions made him grow more and more curious about this girl.
Once again he had a clear look at her, who was dressed in a fancy little dress and had a mask on her face which was not just hiding her identity but also many dark secrets.
He could see her frowning and getting nervous at his questions, specially about her personals. She was surely trying to hide something from him, but why?
Moreover why is he so caring about her?
Why is he trying to dig out her past?
Is he in love with her?
Does love has a reason?
Questions are veiled now but answers are more dangerous for such questions.
‘Why don’t you change? Wont you feel uneasy in these party clothes for such a longtime?’ He asked her to move and tried making coffee.
‘Yeah,’ she replied moving out of the place who was waiting for an excuse.
‘Here are the mugs’ she said and disappeared within seconds and the dark secrets of night are about to come out.
Precap: dark secrets revealed only in the darkest hours of the day
That’s all …..
How’s it??
Do share your views…
I know I am a bakwass that’s why less comments…
I cant be sure about next part posting time but will try to be back soon
Bye everyone
12 Comments
Heyy you’re not bakwas its fine if you get less comments once!! Cheer up and pls post soon.. I really wanna know their secrets and what happens to them..
awesome…
loved it
Hey it was not bakwas at all… I was waiting as i want to read it n know what’s going to happen next… So plz cheer up? loved the story n concept… Plz post soon
Plsssss don’t get sad as u r a very awsm writer and the story is fab don’t think about anything just write as we will be there to comment and support u
Amazing
Eagerly waiting for next post soon
amazing episode
post soon
Awsm episode
Totally loved it
I think kunj has fallen for twinkle.
Do post soon.
U are a very good writer.
Ur ff is awsm not bakwaas..
Keep writing for us
Love u
Rosh!! That was so amazing!!!! I can’t wait to see more dark secrets being unveiled… Twinkle had welcomed several other people? Could it be that she… Never mind!! I’ll just wait for you to take over that I guess… Coz you can do it best, and I shouldn’t be interrupting the storyline… Why was she frowning at his questions? Are there sommany things she’s hiding?? I’m really anxious to find out!!! Absolutely loved it!!! A totally out of the world kind of episode! Amazing!!!
Awesome Amazing
It’s so…. I don’t know
That many things can happen in a single night with someone
It’s so interesting
And for me you are a rockstar a
And I just love your writings
Love you
Beautiful awesome amazing fantastic fabulous mindblowing dear
bas yrrr wait nhi ho raha h plzzzz post soon dear
Sorry dear for ate comment……… exams tha
The epi was amazing