HIIIIIII DEAR READERS YASHU IS BACK , VERY HAPPY THAT BOTH TWINJ AND TWIRAJ FANS READ AND COMMENTED. WISH U ALL A VERY HAPPY INDEPENDENCE DAY , PROUD TO BE INDIAN…………. LUV U ALL AND NOW LETS START WITH THE FF………………. YEHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! VERY EXCITED 1ST EPI OF 3RD FF……………. OK OK I’M STARTING AND YA AS U HAVE READ THE PROLOGUE SO AFTER THAT TWINJ’S CONFRONTATION AND AFTER TWINKLE , KUNJ , UV’S POV I’M SRATING AND YA LET ME TELL U ALL THE CHARACTERS
TWINKLE – JASMIN BHASIN
YUVI – ZAIN IMAM
KUNJ – SIDDHANT GUPTA ( plzz yrr cnt even imagine twinj without Sid , I ‘m only a twinj fan if kunj is Sid so cnt take naman so sorry if I hurt anyone’s feeling )
ANITA – EVA GROVER ( as I like only her as yuvi’s mom –ve also suits her and she has that tashan in her )
LINK FOR INTRO N PROLOGUE- Intro and Prologue
SO LETS START
EPISODE 1
Twinkle comes out of her room and sees Leela working in kitchen
Tw – maa me yha hu aur aap kaam kar rhe ho, chodo yeh sab me krti hu ( maa I’m here and u r doing work , leave it let me do………)
Leela – nhi puttar iski koi zarurat nhi he tu apna kaam kr me yeh sab kar lungi (noo puttar , no need , u do your work…….)
Tw – maa me janti hu ki aapko mujh par bharossa nhi he , aapko lgta he ki me acha khana nhi bnati (maa I understood, u don’t trust me na u think that I’ll not make good food) and shows fake anger…….
Leela – aree tu itni badi ho gyi phir bhi tera bachpana nhi gya , me maa h uteri tujhe zyada tujhe janti hu , ab band kr apna drama , aur ha aaj sharmaji k yha puja he toh me 3-4 hnte baad aoungi ( ohhooo u r so grown up, but still u have that little child in you , now stop your drama , I know u better ok I’m going to Sharmaji’s house , today there is puja there , so I’ll be back after 3-4 hours…..)
Tw – ok ok maa , u go I’ll manage
Leela leaves , twinkle is cutting vegetables but is thinking about kunj and yuvi, just then she cuts her finger and it started bleeding , and just then kunj came and kept her finger in his mouth, twinkle was looking at him they had an eye-lock……….. in the background sajna ve was playing……
Sajna ve…….. sajna ve…….. aaja ab sajna ve ruh me shamil tujhe kar lu……. Jindagi mita k rab se tujhe hasil me karlu , ishq k nor ko aankho me aa bharlo , ban jhogan me nachlu………ishq ka rang rang lu…….. ban jhogan me nach lu……. ( sorry yrrr actually remember only this much if it’s wrong then srry )
Twinkle and kunj was looking in each others eye as this was the moment for which both of them were waiting………. But it was broke as yuvi came…
Y – tw actually , (then he notice them he felt a pain in his heart but didn’t show it and lit a fake smile………) oopss, sorry bad timing …….. ( really bad….heheheh )
T – no no uv come
K – Tw tera dhyaan kaha tha , agr zyada lag jati toh (tw be careful , where was ur mind , wt if the cut was major…).
T – kunj please apna yeh jhoota concern apne paas hi rkho ( kunj please don’t show this fake concern……… I’m fine and I don’t need ur concern)
K – tw wt r u saying , I love u , and y will I show fake concern……..
T – acha mujhe pta he tum mujhse kitna pyaar krte ho , agr itna hi krte the toh kaha thaw o pyaar inn 5 saal , kha thaw o pyaar jab meri aur yuvi ki shadi ho rhi thi aur tum sab dekh rhe the , kaha thaw o pyaar jab tum mujhe badbaad krna chahte the batao mujhe kunj kaha tha wo pyaar ( I know very well how much u love me , where was ur love in these 5 years kunj , where was your love when u see me and uv marring , where was ur love when u were busy making plans , plotting for me……..tell me kunj where was your love then…….)
K – tw me janta hu jo mene kra wo bht galat tha par mera vishwaas kr ab me aa gya hu na , ab sab theek hojayega , meapni har galti sudhar lunga aur tw kab tak us bat k liye tu mujhe sunati rehgi kab tak mujhe mere ghunah btati rahegi ( tw I know what I did was wrong , but believe me tw now everything will be fine , I’ll make up for my every mistake and tw till when u will blame for that , till when u will remind me of my mistake………..)
T – Wahhh kunj tumhe kya lgta he inta asaan he mere liye tum par vishwaas krna , vishwaas toh mene tab bhi kiya tha jab tumne mujhse vada kiya tha kit um humesha mere saath rahoge , parkya hua uss vishwaas ka thod diya na tumne kya pta tum phir thod do ( wowww kunj do u think it’s so easy for me to believe u , I believed u then also when u promised to always be with me , what happened after that u broke my trust , what if u broke it again…….)
K– tw ab tu hi bta me kya kru joh tu mujh par bharosa kr ske me toh thak gya hu tujhe samjhate samjhte , ok acha he abhi me yha se challa hi jao , me bas tujhe aur leela maa ko btane aya tha ki aaj maa ne mere ane ki Khushi em party rkhi he toh tu aa jana ( tw now wt should I do so that u can believe me , I’m just fed up explaining u everytime , better I’m leaving I just came here to tell that today maa is keeping a party for me , so leela ma and u r invited……..) and he leaves with frustration….
T – dekho toh zara , galti khud ki he aur tashan mujhe dikha rha he (look at him it was his mistake and now showing attitude to me……)
Uv comes from upstairs with first aid box……….
Y – tw now come here , let me bandage u
T – ohhh hooo uv it’s just a minor cut……
Y – tu apna muh ban rakh , jab dekho sherni twinkle banti rehti he , chup chap aa ja vrn aleela maa ko bta dunga ( u just keep ur mouth shut , everytime u want to become tigress twinkle , just come here and let me bandage….. otherwise I’ll tell to leela maa)
T – tu kya bacha he joh har baar maa ko beech me le ata he (uv r u kid always including maa in all this)
Y – me toh bacha nhi hu par tu abhi bhi bachi he ab yha beth ja chup chap ( I’m not a kid bt u r , now come here )
Twinkle makes a cute puppy face and then comes , yuvi applies ointment on her wound , she moans in pain then uv hold her hand and comforts her and then bandages it………in the back ground the tune of bas itni si tamanna plays
Hmmmm…. Bas itni si tammana he tere rang me hi rang jao…..
( uv looks at tw lovingly while she has closed her eyes as ointment is giving irritation……)
Y – acha tujhe ek joke sonata hu ( ok tw so I’ll tell u a joke…)
T – vesse mujhe tere sad jokes me koi interest toh nhi he par bhi sunna (not interested in ur sad jokes but still then tell )
Y – theek he toh ek din teacher ek bache se puchti he ki batao humare puvaj kaun he (okk so one day teacher asks the student tell me whose our ancestors…..)
T – yeh toh asaan he Bandar aur kaun ( that’s simple , monkeys , wt’s joke in this….)
Y – ha vese toh teacher ne bhi yhi soch atha par bacha UP se that oh bola Krishna Ji , toh teacher boli nhi bewakoof Bandar the , toh bacha bola aapne mujhe mere purvaj puche apke nhi ( ya even the teacher thought the same but the as the student was from UP he said Krishna so the teacher said monkey , so the student said , mam u asked about my ancestors not urs )………. And started laughing…………….. twinkle was admiring him and smiled ( rahu na mein zara mujhme teri ho ke hi reh jao )
T – ruk tu mera mazaak toh nhi bna rha tha(were u making fun of me…….)
Y – ha babydoll wahi toh joke tha , joh tu ab samajhi ( yes , that’s the jokes u understood so late……….).
Tw glares him and takes pillow an started hitting him……….. uv then pretends to bhi hurt twinkle stops to check him then uv hits her with pillow and ran out of thehouse….
T – uv ke bache ruk tu , tujhe toh me baad me btati hu and smiles…. Ek taraf kunj he jo mujhe samjh hinhi rha aur dusri taraf yuvi jo mujhe har wakt hasata rehta he………. ( uv uv ! wait I’ll teach u a lesson and smiles…….One side there’s kunj who is not understanding me and on the other yuvi who always makes me smile )
Twinkle then leaves to her room and sees her frocksuit with a dori and remembers something……… she smiles and her eyes r moist………
Fb starts ( twinkle is thinking )
Twinkle wore a blue frock suit which was backless with a dori……..she is trying to tie that but is not able to just then kunj comes from behind and hugs her from behind……
K – so my siyappa queen , tujhse ek dori nhi bandh rhi koi nhi me bandh deta hun ( ohh my siyappa queen u r not able to tie a single dori ok ok let me help )
He comes near her shifts her hair to one side , tw was feeling his touch , kunj kissed her bare back and then tied the dori , he then moves his hands from her shoulders to her belly and turns her around , they both r face to face , tw is feeling butterflies in her stomach…. Kunj comes near her and tightens his grip , tw was in pain but enjoyed they both were inches apart , kunj came more close and closer tw closed her eyes , kunj was coming to her lips but then turned and kissed her check , then shoulder and whispered in her ears “ aaj kal ki ladkiyoon ko sharm hi nhi ati “( nowadays girls r not shy at all ) , tw opens her yes and pushes him………
K – sach me bilkul besharam he ( really no manners at all )
T – tum rukku ab ana tum mere paas me sikhungi tumhe manners ( u wait now come close to me I’ll teach u manners)
K aree yrrr me toh mazaak kr rha tha ( ohhooo I was just joking ) and side hugged her
T – par me nhi kr rhi ( bt I’m not doing ) and pushes her on the bed and leaves the room…….
Fb ends….
Tw – kitne ache pal the wo ….. kaash wo lambha wahi thamb jata ( how beautiful were those moments , hope time stopped at there only )
Kash who pal peda hi na ho
Jis pal me nazar tu na aye…….
Kash who pal peda hi na ho
Jis pal me nazar tu na aye…….
Agar kahi… asea pal ho
Toh iss pal me mar jaaye…..
Mar jaye….. haaaa mar jaye…….
Mar jaye…….. hoooo mar jaye………
Precap – party… twinkle shocked, yuvi n kunj rocked……
HIIII MERE PYAARE READERS HO WAS THE EPI , HOPE GAVE BOTH THE PAIR SCENE , AND LET ME TELL YOU 3RD OR 4TH EPI IS GONNA BE REALLY FUN……… AND YA TELL ME HOWZ IT , I MEAN MARK THIS EPI OUT OF 10 I KNOW IT’S TOO EARLY TO ASK BUT AS THIS IS 1ST EPI SOO VERY VERY EXCITED THATSWHY JUST TELL HOWZ THE EPI 1 AND HOW WILL U RATE THIS EPI , YA GOT A IDEA FROM NOW U ALL RATE ALL THE EPI’S SO I’LL GET TO KNOW WHICH EPI WAS THE BEST….. OK NOW BYE FEELING VERY TIRED , WROTE 2 FFS AND HAVE TO WRITE THE 3RD ONE , AND LET ME TELL U THIS MY 1ST FF WHOSE 1ST EPI IS THIS MUCH BIG , OTHERWISE I’M TOO LAZY , AND THIS IS 1ST FF IN WHICH I’M GIVING BOTHHINDI AND ENGLISH BECAUSE SOME DON’T KNOW HINDI AND SOME FIND HINDI MORE ATTRACTIVE LIKE ME SO THATWHY , SOO PLZZZ READERS HAVE SOME PITY ON ME , I’M A KID OF ONLY 12 , AND HAVE TO STUDY ALSO SOOO HAVE SOME PITY ON ME AS I’M WRITING IT IN BOTHHINDI N ENG SOOO PLEASE COMMENT AND YA LET ME TELL U ALL THAT I’M A BIG FODDIE SO THERE’S A CORNER FOR COMMENTS ALSO I’M VERY HUNGRY FOR COMMENTS TOO , SO GIV ME SWEET COMMENTS , SALTY COMMENTS , SPICY COMMENTS , SOMETIMES CAN GIVE BITTER ALSO BT SOMETIMES BUT PLZZZ GIVE ME LONG COMMENTS I LOVE TO READ LONG COMMENTS PLZZZZ LONG COMMENTS PLZZZZ AND EVERYONE WHOSE READING DO COMMENT……………………..
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hey actually i have posted it before also n it posted but didn’t came on TEI page so posting again
43 Comments
Yashasvi your sense humour is just fab??????
Episode bohot hatke tha right now track se n I loved it very much hope this tei cvs get some sense n bring back our sidhant back i know it’s late but still I don’t know as I have still doubt on this rocky coz that day the birthmark which was supposed to be on kunj’s chest was not found on rocky’s ………..anyways meri apni baaton ki zyadaa ho gayina bak bak pr kya karu aap hi chaahti thi long comments
But episode was fab but it won’t be good giving ratings to your ffs as u guys r just fab n I just want to encourage u through my words only coz I don’t feel that much that I judge you……..
Bbyee hope ur tummy got filled with this long one ?? otherwise here r these stuffs ????????
Bbyee
thankew sooooo much damini yups dear agr tumhe isme itna maza aya he toh age age dekho hota he kya?? ?? thanksss fr such a big comment…….. sach me ab toh breakfast krne ki zarurat hi nhi padegi?? itna sara stuff jo de dia……………..
ya even mee too , just so confused in right nows track
according to some sources they were saying that tei is talking to Sid about re-entry if Sid agrees then they will show Rocky as revant but as till now there has been no reply so the tei r showing rocky as kunj bt if Sid agrees then he’ll be our kunj again????
and luv u fr commenting ??????
damini i have posted this article again as it was not coming on TEI page so dont read if u see epi 1
Hey yashu!!
Thanks for the news hope sid comesaying back
Finger crossed
Is it a twinj ff or twiraj?
dear till now even i havent decided
It was amazing! continue soon x
Thxxxx monica !!! ya will post next asap
yashu amazing yr rula hi dia sch mein rula dia yaad aa gyi unn palo ki srsly i m nt believing dat i m crying sch mein osm twinj scenes bt wont say anythning reagarding uvraj as it cn b sen a criticism mayb yr luvd it 2 d core osm osm i read ur cmnt abv 1 n saw sid name n m so happy if srsly dis hpns i ll b mayb d most happy prsn in dis wrld meri khushi ka koi thikana nhi rhega oh my god luv u yashu fr giving gr8 news now i jst hv to wish fr dis 2 hpn i ll defibnately pray
awwww !!!!!!!! thxxxxxxxxxxxx baby fr such a lovely cmnt but so so so sorry for making u cry !!!!!!!!!! maaf kr dena mujhe and even mee tooo hope sid comes back………………….. thx fr commenting keep supporting like this only very very happy that twinj fans r also reading it
I just don’t like uvv ….but your ff is awesome q?
thankew soo much dear ………. glad that irrespective of pair u luved it
keep supporting n commenting like that
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Ho gaya tera la,ba comment? Ab chal marks deti hu….so out of 10, I give u 1……………………………………one with 7 zeroes….that means 10000000/10
Khush? Abb main epi ke baare mei kuch nhi keh rhi…isi se kaam chala?
mujhe pta tha ki aesa cmnt sirf tu hi kr skti he bdtameez………. just joking…………………… vesse srsly le skti he ur wish???? chal thnx toh nhi bol skti vrna frdshp ka rule break ho jayega aur aaj toh independence day he aaj toh rule bilkul bhi nhi thod skti?? chal luv u toh bol skti hu !!!!!!!!
luv u………………????
Very nice yashu di…loved it..plzz post next asap..n ty for the news..if sid comes back no one would be as happy as i would be..yeppieeee sid re-entry…n about the episode..honestly saying i read only half n now m commenting n after that i will read the half..hehe..but loved it..love u loads..muah!!
awwwww thanew shooo much my dear little sisie ya will surely post asap ……………..
keep loving me n cont. comenting like this dear…………
luv u 2 !!!!!!!!! muahh!!!!!!!!!!!!
very nice episode.is it true cvs are in talk with sid.from which source u get to know that.please sid apna fans ke liye agree karo.tumare bina tei lost all its charm.may be sid is waiting to complete jdj.
I am so happy to hear this great news
thanxxx dear nrk , glad u liked it and keep comenting like this and actually i got this info from twitter , tashaneishq fc
heyy yashasvi
it was fab..
and yess I m glad that kunj is our sid.
it was really awesome…
make twinj together fast..
and poat the next part ASAP..
thanxxxx fatima bt about the pairs till now i haven’t decided so cnt tell………………..
and ya will post asap
Hey that was a good one yashasvi I loved it if kunj is said then he did not undergo a plastic surgery if this was real I would be soo happy and the episode was amazing
thanxxxx thanmy………… and as i said in the intro call me yashu yrrr , yashasvi is a bit frml……………. thank u fr the cmnt
Yashu… u r killing me with ur writings..u r such a fabulous writer.. Loved both d pairs… yuvle is d best but i was never a twinj hater..theirs just a usual luv story…i luv sid 4 his looks n actn…but uv aka zain is damn too cute to be loved , whether he -ve ,pysho, hero..he nails every performance.. Agar villain ka itna sara fans ho then ofcourse he is one in a million.
hey soo OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!! cnt imagine meri writings bhi kissi ko kill kr skti he , thanxxxx fr such a cute n lovely cmnt and mee too same with me , love sid fr his luks n actng ya dear zain is one in millions yrrrrrrrrrrrrr!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
My drama …. queeennnn ….. shooo sweert ……. both twinj and twinraj ….. and u r right I can’t imagine tei without sid …. hope kunj again goes under plastic surgery and sid gets back ……
And epi was awsome …… 10 out of 10 ….
awwwwww !!!!!!!!!!! thank u meri sanju….( hope u dnt mind ha ) haye !!!!!!!!!! aaj me mar jaungi yrrrrrrrrrrrr itne sweet cmnts pd k pkka aaj sugar level badega………..
yups mee tooo want twinj with sidmin only nt with naman
Offffffo I hope tumhe diabities na ho jaye ….. ??
mee tooo ????
Hi
It’s awesome
I’m eager to know whom tw will choose
Kya hai na jab tei dekhti hu kuch samaj me nhi aati kiske saath me imagine karu tw ko
I hope tw Will reunite wid kunj
Btw episode was super
thxxxxx dolly
cnt say anything abt the pairs…………. in my ff , serial ka toh kch samjh hi nhi a rha but mere ff k bhi pair decide nhi huye h
and keep cmntng dear n supporting me
Hey yashu.. you know what.. my sis calls me yashu too.. hehe my nickname.. and coming to ur ff.. it was too good and awesome.. I really loved it.. and I always imagine sid as Kunj.. I miss him soo much.. I really hope he comes back in TEI after winning jdj trophy.. (yeah the trophy is his only??) and being only 12 u are writing such a good ff.. hats off to you ??
ohhh wowwww we share a cmn nick name that cool……… awwwwww thank u shoooo shooo mch fr saying hats off to me !!!!!!!!!! luv u yrrrrrrrrrrrrrr !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
ya mee too wnt Sid back…………………….with jdj trophy too !!!!!!!!!!!!
Amaizngggggggggggggg
thanxxxx maanvi
keep commenting like this
Hmmmmmmmmmmm………..0 for this episode as 10 for the whole FF 😉
Wah Wah! Kya likha hai! Matlab JHAKAAS ???? Simply outstanding and I am out of words to express how good this was! Good job Yashu darling!
Keep smiling 🙂 Always 🙂
Luv u❤❤❤
-Zuha
haye……………. tu toh dara hi deti he mmujhe toh shock lg gya tha 0 dekh kr………. but now fine……….
thanxxxx meri jaan ❤❤❤❤ aree jesse hi JHAKAS dekhti hu toh samajh hi jati hu ki acha hi likha hoga mene ? ? ?
Luv u 2 Zuha !!!!! ❤❤❤
Great
thxxxxx angita
Hey yashu yashu yashu yashu yashu yashu… kya kahu yaar….maar hi daala aapne…just fab…amazing.
Kya lines thi vo…yeh pal yahi tham jaye..
Ufff..main toh mar java unn lines par…ab kuch choda hi nhi aapne bolne ke liye…no words are left for u…i am feeling so proud to have a bff like u…….matlb kya yaar jitna kahu utna kam hai….excellent outstanding awesome amazing superb damn gud yeh Saare words aap par kurbaan aaj….
And i rate u out of 10 hmmmm…..
Iss se bhi zyada milne chaiye sach me…by god…these tei writers and even other serial writers should hier u and seriously i am not joking…chalo i think isme aapka stomach full ho gaya hoga…chalo luvvvv uuuh muaaahhhh…
haye yrrrrrrr tu toh mujhe maar hi daal……………….. mera stomach overload ho gya.!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! but kaash roz hi aesa overload hta rhe……………………… luv u luv u luv u shoooooo shooooooooooooo much……………………..dil khush kr diya………………..
drma queen khush hui………………!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
luv u bff !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! muahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh………………………….
amazing fabulous cute emotional epi….hope twinj ek ho jaye….
thanxxxxxxx purnima but cnt say abt pair…………….. u have to wait n read
keep commenting n supporting me dear