HIII GUYZZZ I’M BACK AGAIN….. SO WITHOUT WASTING YOUR TIME LET’S START WITH EPISODE 16 ………………..
LINK FOR EPI-15 – Episode 15
EPISODE 16
The episode starts with kunj taking twinkle in his arms…….
FB ends……
Twinkle is smiling and is in tears after thinking this…….
T – I wish kunj I could get those days back…… I just wish that you never became ROCKY but it happened and now no one can change it….. I know first love is first one…. And no one can forget it but when u went away yuvi held me , yuvi held our family together… if yuvi wasn’t there then I would have died then only…….. how can I forget that day……. That was the day when I lost someone but also found someone…………….
FB starts……
Bebe – doctor how is the baby , baby is healthy na…..
Yuvi – and what about twinkle how is she……….
Doc – Mrs. Twinkle is fine but………
Usha – but what doctor……
Doctor – but we couldn’t save the baby…… baby is dead………
All of them are shocked…… and usha and bebe started crying , manohar was consoling them…… yuvi was also shocked and had tears…………
Yuvi – doctor can I see twinkle……..
Doc – ya sure…..
Yuvi entered the room and was shocked…… twinkle was trying to cut her nerves……
Yuvi shouted – Twinke….!!!!! Have u gone crazy what the hell wre u doing and snatched the knife and threw it…….
Twinkle crying – then what ….. what should I do….. u only tell………. First kunj left me and now my baby also left me…………. i was only living for my and kunj’s child… but now my baby is also not with me……. it’s not with me….. and started crying……
Y was heartbroken by listening all this…. – twinkle , I know this is not easy but u have to live….. u have to live for your mom, for usha aunty , for bebe, for manohar uncle and for me…… I … I mean for your family…… you can’t brake down like this twinkle….. u have to be strong………….
T – how how can I be strong. Please leave me… please let ,me die…. I wanna die……
Y – twinkle come in your senses what r u saying , do u know what will happen of leela aunty if something happened to u…… not only u twinkle , they have also last their son and now their grandchild but they are not doing such stupid things like u……
T – okk fine and she wipes her tears….. I’ll live for my family but what about u…. u just married me because of my baby now please lets get divorced as I can never accept u as my husband…..
Y – and who wants u to accept it… I just want to be with u , and want u to be with me always like a friend…..
T was overwhelmed – thank u soo much yuvi , u gave me a reason to live today…. Thanks yrrr aand hugged him….
FB ends…..
T – on that day I loosed someone but also got someone…. That day yuvi gave me a reason to live and from that his respect in my heart was increased …….
Just then she heard a knock on her door…… she went to open the door and it was leela
T – maa u here …. At this time…..
L – yes , actually from 3-4 days i wanted to talk to u but
didn’t get time……… but now I think it’s high time to talk to u .. actually I’m here because…..
T – maa if u r here because of my decision on yunj….
L – ahh….. ye…yes twinkle….. actually…
T – maa plzz I’m in no mood to talk about that …..
L shouts – but u have to twinkle.. it’s not only about your life … it’s about their life also….. u have to think….. they will also face the consequence of your decision…….. they are not telling to as they don’t want to pressurize u but u have to think about them …..
T angrily – maa but why are u shouting on me…l what’s my fault its not easy for me also….. do u know its soo difficult for me to choose one of them….. but instead of supporting me u are shouting on me… I didn’t accepted this from u……
L angrily – twinkle u r just worried about yourself what about yunj , I have seen them…. They are in so much stress…. U do u know….. did u understood their problem … no na…..
T shouts – maa please…. I’m requesting u to go … please leave……
L – okk fine…. I’m going….. and she left angrily…..
Twinkle locked the room…. And started crying…………
T – god what is this all happening……………. Why ….. why with me ………………. And she is crying………..
Precap – leela is shown sitting on her bed…. L – I know twinkle today I was very rude but I don’t want u to suffer what I have suffered … I know how important does a good partner has in life….. and she also cries…..
HEY….. HOPE THIS ONE WAS OKK… ACTUALLY U ALL KNOW NA I’M NOT GOOD AT WRITING….. AND U HAVE TO BEAR THIS BORING STORY….. SO DO COMMENT AND LOVE U LOADS…..
15 Comments
Hey Yahsu,
As alway, this episode was amazing as well! Loved it completely! Hope you post the next one soon 🙂
Lovess! xx
I am overwhelmed yrrr….no words for u…u r just brilliant at writing….i ws just mesmerized by reading this ff and stunned also because u write soo beautifully…i just want to give u a tight huggggg…….thats alll and toooo your ff , loads and loads of love??????????????
Hey yashu,
sorry intro dena bhul gayi.I am twinj/aaku/aakriti.16 yrs.B-day June 30.I am the new writer.Posted 4 OS till now.The latest post,’She is the one god made for me(OS)’ Sorry kyu ki tumne mujhe mera nam pucha aur may ne apni bio de diya sry.
The epi was fab plus cute aur kisne kaha ki tum ek achi writer nahi ho, u r a very gud writer.I was not at all bored.Luved it.Waiting for the next one.Post asap.
Lots of luv,
twinj
Yaar sachi bolu tho story mere sar k uper se ja rahi hai ? plz make all the things clear do continue
Hey don’t take that seriously i was teasing you and ya it was good but make all the things clear bye
Hey don’t take that seriously i was just teasing? you and ya it was good but make all the things clear bye
It quite emotional scene and I feel sad for twinkle who she will choose but hope twinkle chooses kunj because twinj we made for each other and do post next episode ASAP. CANT WAIT TO READ THIS FF FURTHER. Overal ???? brilint episode today.
Awesome epi.. hope twinkle’s dilemma ends soon.. very eager to know whom she will choose.. Leela twinkle part was too good loved it.. and dear u r a brilliant writer.. I love your writing ??.. eagerly waiting for the next ❤
Awesome episode hope twinkle will choose ssonly plsss asap dear
Yashu di !!!!!!!
Pahle to big wala sorry for not commenting on the previous one..Chalo to ek do thappad Mar lo….
Well happy that u r back… welcome back
Now pahle advamc
Hnn to advance me hpy bday….see I remember it.. actually pata ni mai us din onn houngi ki ni….so hpy bday again….
Well loved the episode….it was damn gud….lovely…
Hope u post the next one soon….
Love u
How Loved it But feeling sad for Leela and Twinkle
Loved it 🙂 Post soon can’t wait 🙂
Love you 🙂
Woaah awesome ??but very emotional episode.
Post next soon
Love u?
Hai,Yashu yaar.I think you became happy bcz of seeing my name.Bcz 1st time I’am comenting here.The block had gone.I miss u so much.Kahan thi tum?Your eps are awsome.Waiting for next eps.I hope you’ll post story about Yuvle soon. Waiting for it.Keep writing.
awesome emotional epi