Hey guyzzzz you know I’m back with this story… actually I know this is a love triangle but more than that this is a very beautiful story that’s why I always want to write this… I guess this is my best imagination…. I know all of u want twinj in the end… earlier there were some twiraj fans but now I guess there is none except me… yeah I’m a twiraj fan… bt I’m twinj’s fan also… moreover I’m a TwiNjRaj fan… and this is a fan-fiction of them… so I hope you all like it and please in the end tell me through your comments that should I write this further or should I end all suspense and give u a summary of the whole story… I’ll be waiting for ur comments…..
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Episode – 17
Episode starts with twinkle crying in her room…
T – maa was right I have to take a decision…. This is not only my life’s decision but kunj and yuvi’s also…..
Tomorrow I’ll tell them….
She picks her phone and calls kunj…
K – hello twinkle….
T – yes kunj….
K – twinkle is everything alright….. are u ok…
T –yes kunj m fine… actually I wanted to tell u something really important….
K gets up from his bed – yes twinkle tell me….
T – kunj umm… ummm…. I have decided that tomorrow morning I’ll tell the name of the person whom I love and want to live my life with……
K – oh… ohkkk… twinkle…. Have u told yuvi….
T – no after this I’ll tell uv…..
K – ok twinkle… so all the best and make the best decision…..
T – yeah…
Call ends…
Scene shifts…
Kunj is tensed….. he goes down to drink water… then suddenly usha come afer hearing noises…
U – kunj wt happened beta…
Kunj tells everything to usha…
U – ohhhh so it’s a good news….
K – yes maa…. But…..
U – but what beta….
K – bt maa m worried wt if twinkle chooses yuvi….
Usha laughs off – wt r u saying kunj… this can’t happen ……
K – maa y r u laughing….
U – beta…. Wt r u saying… twinkle only loves u… wt if u left…. She only loved u… don’t u know how twiraj kept secret of their fake marriage and twinkle always did karwachauth for u not for yuvi …..
K – yes mom but yuvi also loves twinkle…. And whom so ever twinkle chooses, one’s heart would break
U – beta y r u worrying about that….now go and sleep…
K – yes maa….
Scene shifts….
Y – ok twinkle…. As u wish…. And please take fair decision don’t take any wrong decision thinking that I wasted my 5 years behind u….. I didn’t ….. as because of me only kunj was not with u … so I was just doing my duty as a best friend…..
T smiles – yes yuvi … I know…. Bye…
Y – bye babydoll….
Next Morning
Twinkle is shown praying at gurudwara…
T – hey babaji please help me , give me power to take the right decision.. this is nt my life’s decision , this decision will effect 3 lives… and whosoever will be hurt from between kunj and yuvi , I have to bear the pain of losing one of them…. Please babaji give me strength….. and she closes her eyes, tears flow from her eyes…
Taneja Mansion….
Everybody yuvi, kunj , babe, usha ,manohar,leela, was waiting for twinkle….
L – God know when will this girl come…
B – calm down leela ji she must be on the way…..
Just then twinkle enters….
M – look twinkle has come…..
L stands up..- puttar are u fine…
T – yes maa I’m fine…..
U – ok so twinkle tell us whom have u chosen ?
T – ok , so I must tell u all that yesterday I thought I lot on this and then came on this decision that I want to live my life with kunj…..
Usha claps…..everyone except leela is happy… kunj looks sadly at yuvi….
K – bt twinkle….yuvi….
T – no kunj , now please don’t tell me that yuvi has done a lot for me… I know he has done a lot but what he did was because of his own mistake as his mother only wanted to kill u… so it was not our mistake and how can u forget his obsession towards me.. did u forget that what he did with u , with me , with our family…….and u never know…..
L – stop it twinkle…. It’s ok if u want to continue your life with kunj…. But please don’t question yuvi’s friendship , his love…..
Y – leela maa please, what she said is right…… and kunj songrats bro… I’m very happy for u both… so on this happy day there must be a celebration….
B – u r right yuvi , we’ll host a party tomorrow
Y – yes babe and arrangements will be done by me…..
B smiles – as u wish puttar….
Yuvi is teary eyed but tries to wipe off his tears and pretends to be happy… kunj can see this and feels very bad for him…..
Y – ok so I’ll go and prepare for the function…
L – yuvi bt….
Y – leela maa….. and calms her through his expressions..
Y – ok so bye guyzzz and congratulations twinj and twinkle I’m really genuinely very happy for u… you made the right choice…..
T – I know yuvi……
Yuvi sees twinkle with a lot of pain twinkle is also teary eyes…. Both twiraj share a very very painful eyelock…. Twinkle then wipes her tears and yuvi leaves….
Kunj is in his own thoughts….. he is very sad and feeling very bad for yuvi as he can see a true lover in him….
Precap – twinkle- leela talks…, leela meets yuvi…..
Hey guyzz hope u liked it and ya please comment and tell me should I cont. or not… ok bye good night…. Ohhh it’s 12 :18 am … gotta go…. Bye sweethearts…..
Loads and loads of love.
From Yashu….!!!!!!!
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Ohh God…this Leela has suddenly turned towards Yuvraj…??. forgotten what Kunj had done for them…..Twinj can’t be separated because they are soulmates….
But yashu I love your ff so continue it and post next soon ???
hey she hasn’t turned against kunj it’s just that she is feeling bad for Yuvi…..
i know kunj has done a lot for them but still she’s a mother and she remembers that when kunj left her daughter it was yuvi who took care of her… and with out any reason… kunj had a reason to marry twinkle because his parents want and Alisha was cheating on him.. but Yuvi , what he did for twinkle was because he truly loved her and anita herself wanted to kill kunj for yuvi , yuvi never wanted that….. he also went to save him but all in vain…
and moreover this is not real serial it’s a FF …. so here Yuvi’s not a villian…..
Dont take me wrong i cn understand that being a twinj fan u wnt them but it’s not rgt to consider yuvi villian always….
By the way thanks….. that u love my ff i’ll post next asap
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Yes yashu…??…..but the fact that Uv was pshyco and obsessed with twinkle make me hate him…..there was a reason to care for twinkle for 5 years because he had done much harm to her…..Twinkle was also betrayed by Uv ….Twinj were soulmates who took care of each other in spite of hating each other in initial days…then their tashan converted to love….Leela cannot forget what Uv did to her daughters ..made their lives hell …tried to rape twinkle , tried to kill mahi, tried to kill Kunj several times….and also…it was because of Kunj she got her husband back , he was the one who made twinkle close to her father , he took care of twinkle in spite of her accusation towards Kunj, he didn’t simply marry her but cared for her too…Uv had realised his love when Kunj had died ..so that’s why I m not a twiraj fan…but you are so I respect you yashu and love you??….see kitna bolti hoon main??….kitna boldiya Maine…being a die-hard Twinj fan I can even debate on Twinj…sorry yashu if I hurt you…??
Andddd most importantly Leela had herself chosen Kunj for twinkle…now suddenly her mind changed…Seeing twinkle’s fight with Kunj…so what..Kunj is also a human being if twinkle would have been in is place would she not behave like this?? From beginning Uv made kunj’s life hell and seeing him marry twinkle was the biggest shock of his life.They both ( Twinj) had accepted that how much they fight their lives are connected to each other and their breaths are connected piously ..see phir ek point yaad aa Gaya??
And he hated them Because he thought he was betrayed and he is also a human being…twinkle is taking of kunj’s lack of trust on her but herself she didnt have any faith in thier love…that kunj would be alive, within two months she married Yuvraj for her baby’s sake..was their love so weak..it was twinkle’s mistake also and not Kunj alone.. whatever it is …..it was in the show….In the show, I would agree they ruined kunj’s character…..whatever it is it’s your ff yashu ..you have you decide what will you write….??
Yuvi at the end had again started separating Twinj by his activities ..
Kunj was also a human being…..he felt hurt when he saw twinkle getting married to the one one who tried to kill Kunj according to kunj….twinkle was scolding Kunj for not trusting her but did she trust in their love….she also married Uv within 2 months for her baby’s sake..couldn’t she wait for Kunj to return because clearly his body was not found…..so fault was of both Twinj and not Kunj only……but see yashuu i agree with you that they had degraded kunj’s character in the show but now it’s your ff so you decide what you will write…
no dear , m nt telling u to like twiraj or something like that , but i’m just telling u that please dnt say yuvi a villian as he not now a villian at least in my story he isn’t…..so i am not hurt at all and hope u also aren’t hurt , and see yuvi is not saying anything neither leela, they were just sad ,and look i know yuvi’s love became his obsession earlier par usko uski saza mil chuki he , so please stop accusing him , he troubled twinj and every1 for 1 year and served them all for 5 years and kunj served them for 1 year and hated them for 5 yrs…..and if yuvi was bad then he could have done anything with twinkle when he married her as she was her husband…. but he didnt.. so i think it’s not fair to screw all past of yuvi……
Aree Soo what??? Yuvi ne ek nahi bahut sarii galtiya ki…..jis tangent pe usne buraii ki shayad us tangent pe acchayi nahi ki….. True love happens only once which twinkle found in Kunj…he hated them for 5 years but did wrong with them only for 1 month or so…..But would you not agree to last point of mine?? ….batao batao ???….truee Kunj served them for 1 year but was not he hurt by what he saw ??…Yuvraj nee khaali twinkle to sambhala naki pure sarna and taneja kunve ko….And moreover he didn’t do anything wrong because he was changed …for twinkle…..but twinkle had already given her heart to Kunj ….
ooooohhhhhh shitt………kyaa yrr bachooo..
why r u bth srsly debating on did topic like srsly hahhaa……….
ohhh god it was a fictional stry dey were reel chracters..n all is over now……….
ladna hai toh sidmin or suraj ke liye lado na hahhahahahaaaaaaaaaaa……..
ohhhh common girls u debated itna lamba vaisiiee chaho toh mein bhi entery le skti hun hhahhahaaa……. 😉
yashu♥
loved I thank god kunj was chosen by her vaisiiee toh I knew it still n look guys in d serial twinkle regreted n she walked on fire………..
or merko koi shikayat nhi jaldi post kriyo yashu yrrr mujhse intezaaar nahi ho rha…….♥
loved it………♥
kinda emotional ♥
or dekho saari galti pallavi ki thi nahi voh kya jo bhi tha haan naman ka cher deti nahi sid jata or nahi revanth stry mei aata nahi serial wale sid ko out krte or nahi jhalak invite krte..hahaa
CONFUSED????? toh baithee raho naa chill guys don’t put ur brains here naaa…….♥
love urs baby…..♥ n guys serial ko bhi over hue we naa kaafi time ho gaya hai sooo I srsly miss d fyts n d chats n 300rds of msgs we use to hv on TU written updates hahahahhaa………..♥
chalo ab mein chalti hun………..♥ duaon mein yaad rakhna …..♥
or uske aage meko yaad nhi aa rha……..hahhaa……..♥
Please Yashu make it TWIRAJ FF no twinj and why were you not posting for many days I was missing youuuuu
hey maanvi …. i missed u a lot dear…..
got a Twiraj fan….
Maanvi i cnt promise u anythng but m sure you’ll love it….
actually b’coz of studies n all i was nt able to post even i have opened TU after 5 months
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Same even I have come here after a long time pls do post soon
Yashuuu
Awesome Amazing
I’m so happy u have decided kunj for twinkle I’m really so happy
Now can u plsss bring mahi for uv
I really love their Jodi if u won’t mind
I’m die hard fan of twinj and yuhi
Loved their chemistry
N BTW I felt bad for uv he even deserve happiness
N I want u to continue else I won’t talk
White mailing hai
Love you keep smiling
Truee…..Mahi and Yuvraj were not divorced…..so they need a second chance…..if leela takes Uv’s side ..I am gonna slap her literally ???……
please dnt slap her as she’s nt doing it by her own, i’m telling her to do as m the writer and director…
u cn slap me… ??
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Hey Ramya…. baby there many more surprises….
U never know anything can change….
This FF is nt predictable…. hahahh
Hey as per my story i dnt require mahi n frankly i used to hate her….
i mean Yuvi and Mahi was smthng undigestable fr me….
ya he deserves to be happy n he will… dont worry…..
ya dear i’ll cont. it…. dnt wrry
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nice epi
plzzzzz continue
thanks maha…
will post soon
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Nice episode
And yashu I’m also a twiraj fan ur not alone
Post soon
thank Sohi… oh wow another Twiraj Fan …
look like people also like twiraj bt as this TEI is of more Twinj fans they were nt visible….
but i’m happy
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Marvellous episode
Post soon
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thank u Zoya dear,..
I’m really very happy tht u read all my posts….
thanks buddy…
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Awesome yashuuu amazing loved it and yeah I was a twiraj fan too I wanted twiraj in tei but then started loving kunj ,??…and became twinj but but but I am also a twinirajfan ??????…
Plzz continue soon ..
hey Sameera i’m really happy that u liked it…. same was with me… even i wanted twiraj bt the serial wntd twinj…..
hifi dear we r same….
after all sistas love…..
hhaaahhh…
will post soon
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Hey yashu i know u dont know me but i was a silent reader of ur all stories..
I really enjoy ur writings.. nd tysm fr posting this ff..it’s one of my fav nd yahh u have to continue ut at anyhow..
About this episode it’s fab i m in love with it..
So one thing more i want to tell i visited ur account nd saw some of ur pics bd they r really beautiful.. u look so sweet jUST like sugar?????
So i m bzy these days.. so bieee
Love u infinity..
If u r in insta do tell me..
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hiii dear… ohhhh m really very happy that u love this ff soo much…
m happy that silent readers r also commenting…
thanks dear,… this was the most special comment….\\
awww itti tareef bhi mat kro meri …..
kahi nazar na lag jaye… hehehehee…..
kahi sugar hi na jo jaye……
vesse i love when people call me beautiful… thank u shoo much….
m sorry m not on insta dear…
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Hey yashuuuuuu!!!!!!!! I am on cloud 90000000000000000??????? that u continued my most favourite ff ..u dont know how much i missed this ff..everyday i craved for this ff….??????????????? and u fulfilled my wish….love u jaan!!?????????????? this episode was really a killer…???? PAISA WASOOL EPISODE….SACH ME!!!! U potrayed twinjraj emotions soooo beautifully!!!!! Really!!!!???? FABULOUS!!!!??? CHALO BYEE…AND DO CONT. And i am going tomorrow to nainital so won’t be able to contact u for 3 days ..ok byee
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