TWIST IN TALE!!! #FEW SHOTS#ISHQBAAZ#DBO#FUSION!!!!!!!!
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Hi friends am Arthi with few shots based on the current track of both ishqbaaz and dbo…… sterday I felt bad for Anika….pinky she’s getting onto my nerves……and I’m fed up with Omkara…….the one who supports truth…….he found out the reason why anika married Shivay and went against his own brother but now he is failing to find the truth why Gauri ran from her wedding….. according to him she is greedy but he dint think why she ran from the marriage….he is very rude to Gauri……I really wanted to slap him(sorry guys but I hate this Omkara) I want that Omkara with cute filled innocent smile…..and coming to Rudra Im not happy with new pair so am continuing Rudy with our Saumya baby itself…….
If anyone doesn’t like this then do comment and share ur thoughts so that I will write it accordingly….
Kindly ignore typos and grammatical errors….
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This shot starts where pinky confess that she has done all this….
Pinky: yes it’s me who has done all this……(laughing evily) I brought that cheap woman into this house as your mother…..I payed her to act as your mother…….I made you a daughter of a bar dancer……..
Anika(crying) but why aunty ji???? What I did for u ???? And you you wanted to prove that chepede as my mother???
Pinky(calmy but arrogantly) because I hate you……I hate you…..it’s because of you my beta forgot me…..it’s because of you he forgot his status….it’s because of you he forgot his mom’s importance….and it’s because of you he is away from me…….
Anika: aunty ji it’s not what you think…..Shivay really loves you and he doesn’t forget….the circumstances are as such….
Pinky: circumstances…..my foot…… You middle class girl did some black magic to my son and staying here without any shame….. I really don’t know whose blood is running in you and from which khandhan u r from…….. trapping rich boys for wealth and taking all the money form him and run away……. Did u ever think about his reputation in front of his business partners what ll he tell about you or how will he introduce you…..and how ll I face the society coz I got such a girl as my bahu….. middle class road trash dirt you are…..and(before she could complete)
Mom!!!!!!!! Enough!!!!!! Not a word more!!!!!!
Pinky and Anika together: Shivay!!!!!!!!!!!
At the same time in omkaras room….
Om: I never seen such a cheap woman in my life…..the reason for ur arrival is over and why the hell u did not leave…
Gauri(with tears) Omkara ji please try to understand whenever I try to leave someone or the other stops me…..and trust me sure I ll leave and it ll take time….so pl……
Om: do what’s you want…..but don’t you dare try to stay here and play your dirty tricks with my family…..take how much money you want but stay away from my family…….
Saying so he left the room leaving Gauri crying……she started to curse her fate and her helplessness……
@meerut
Rudra stepped into the venue but as soon as he saw the Marriage atmosphere his heart stated to beat fast………all the old moments with her flashed in from of him……. The clash, the fight, the friendship, the consoling, the Marriage……..and a lone tears escaped………
I HOPE THIS WILL BE GOOD……….AND FRIENDS DO SHARE UR THOUGHTS SO THAT I CAN IMPROVE IN STORY LINE ALSO…….
Do comment both positive and negative…….
See you soon with next shot…..
Love you all…..
Keeping smiling always……
26 Comments
It’s great…pls continue
hmmm so o are back again with another series… well this story was amazing waiting for the nxt part…
Awesome yaar…. I am happy that shivaay saw his mom true nature… Excited for the next one… Post it as soon as possible…
Good starting
Waiting for the next
Interesting
Arthi it is just awesome…….Thank you for exposing Pinky……and give some brain to Om…..your opinion was correct….he found the truth about shivay’s Marriage and he even didn’t try to get the truth of Gaury…its really sad ?…..and I too love to watch Rumya….
Awesome fantastic mind blowing Waiting for the next one……
It is so intresting and Thank you for rumya here
Nice one mate, plzz do post the next update ASAP ??, really pinky is getting on to everyone’s nerves, and this omkara needs to respect girls, the one whose mom has suffered so much , he’s turned into another tej Singh oberoi
Awesome start
Hey Arthi….This Pinky is getting on my nerves as well…..and Omkara…..just a day or two ago I was talking abt the same thing with someone else….I wonder if I’ll start hating om soon now….
U gave a good example of shivika marriage…
I hope because of this new girl, rumya come more close….
Thank God that Shivaay got to know the truth….eagerly waiting to see his reaction….I hope in the show also they expose pinky soon…..
And Omri scene was also nice….
I think Rudra will meet Saumya at the wedding ( Australia se Meerut, I don’t know how)
Plz post next part soon….
Awesome fabulous mind blowing???? plz continue really in IB I hate pinky track and coming to Om seriously cv’s make our om character worst he lost his charm I’m eagerly waiting to see our old om back in ur ff eagerly waiting for next part update soon
Fab updt
Hey arthi…
Its ammazing..,,,,mindblowingg,,,fabulous….
I m liking the story line…
I m also not likinh this onkara….n continue rumya only….
Will wait for next part
Awesome. Please post next ASAP. ?
Fabulous update. Really nice story. ??
Fantastic….excellent….marvellous! Loved it… Thank god atleast in ur ff Shivaay hears anika-stupid pinky convo! Eagerly waiting for next part dear…
I too miss old Omkara! Thanks for Rumya.
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Nycc… Starting dr…
Hello arthi… Starting is too good…
I want this in real ib but that’s impossible u just fulfill my wish thank a lot dear?
Hey nice yaar…plzzz I need a favour dude. …om told guari even to drink poison and die but not to attend kulgotri puja right so let guari attempt suicide and om save her and feel guilty for his words….I am really waiting for that incident to happen yaar…atleast you put that in ur ff dude….awesome episode dude waiting for the next update. . .
Hey Arthi. The start is fabulous. I am glad that you write this well. Its super cool. Really you are correct this pinky I am not able to tolerate. Your ff is amazing. Do continue soon. Love yaa❤
Awsm Arthi ka do continue this..
Awesome…
Happy that atleast here shivaay got to know the truth.
Om don’t want to speak anything.
I also feel the same that rumya r the cutest.
Hey Arthi.. really cute and I want Rumya track ly.. and this is really amazing dr.. keep writing
Good one dear…
Are you an astrologer when I was watching the donkey ‘s (pinky) revelation scene I too wished that from somewhere shivaay would be listening all this crap but I ran out of luck…I’m so happy that we both share the same thought…hope om will soon be able to see the truth…anyway as always I loved your this writing as well aru di….