Hey ppl!! I’m Aarti n I’m going to write an SS in Ishkara, d magical couple. It’s a special surprise for my dear brother Fenil Bhai.. guys, I’m very filmy n crazy, so if my filminess gets over d top, plzz ask me to control it?? N guys, I’ll be using Gujrati characters in dis SS, so if any Gujju Bhai aur behen gets offended, plzz don’t be. I’m literally a FAAAAAAAAN of Gujratis, so I would nvr mean to insult it. So jst enjoy
So let’s get started……..but, before dat, let me inform u..in dis SS, navratri has started. It’s d first day of navratri.
Shah House
A couple in their mid-forties is sitting in d living room, along wid two boys n a girl in their twenties.
Omkara: Uncle, actually….
Ridhima (interrupting him): Pappa, main aur Omkara ek dusre se pyaar krte h, aur….[Pappa, me n Omkara luv each other n….]
Ratan (Ridhima’s dad): let him speak Ridhima!!
Omkara: Uncle, main aur Ridhima ek dusre se shaadi krna chahte h. Maine apni family se hi baat krli h, unhe ye rishta manzoor h. [Uncle, me n Ridhima want to marry each other. I’ve talked to my family too n they hv approved dis relation.]
Ratan: Humein bhi ye shaadi manzoor h..[we r also ready for dis marriage..]
Rishabh: Pappa, aap aise kaise man sakte h!! [Pappa, how can u be ready!!]
Rasika: Rishabh, tumhare Pappa baat kr rhe h na. [Rishabh, your Pappa is talking na.]
Ratan: Lekin, humari ek shart h.. [but, we hv a condition]
Omkara: Kaisi shart, Uncle? [Wat condition, Uncle?]
Ratan: Hum apni beti ki shaadi, apne dost Karan Patel k bete Jigar se krwana chahte the, lekin Ridhima h ki tumse shaadi krna chahti h. To tum bas Jigar ko Garba aur Dandiya mein hara do, hum tumhari shaadi k liye man jayenge. [We wanted to get our daughter married to my friend Karan Patel’s son Jigar. But Ridhima wants to marry u. So u just hv to defeat Jigar in Garba n Dandiya, then we’ll be ready for your marriage.]
Omkara: But Uncle, rishte Garba ya Dandiya k hisab se nhi bante. [But uncle, relations r not made according to Garba or Dandiya.]
Ratan (sternly): Agar tum humari beti k liye itna bhi nhi kr sakte, to bhul jao use. Chalo Rasika. [If u can’t do even dis much for my daughter, then forget her. Come on Rasika.]
Ratan n Rasika (Ridhima’s mom) leave. Omkara looks at Ridhima n she gives him a sad look n goes to her room. Rishabh (Ridhima’s brother) smirks n places his hand on Omkara’s shoulder.
Rishabh: ab to tum meri behen ko bhul hi jao. Tum Jigar se kabhi nhi jeet paoge. [Now, u jst forget my sister. U can nvr defeat Jigar.]
Omkara: Pyaar kabhi nhi haarta. [Love nvr loses.]
Oberoi Mansion
Shivaay: Jigar Patel, businessman Karan Patel ka beta? [Jigar Patel, businessman Karan Patel’s son?]
Omkara: Haan [Yes]
Rudra: Phir to koi problem hi nhi h O. Businessmen ko dance Kahan aata h! [Then there’s no problem O. Businessmen don’t know how to dance!]
Anika: To..ab Billu ji ko hi le lo. [So..now take Billu ji’s example.]
Shivaay: wat do u mean Anika? Tum kehna kya chahti ho! [Wat do u want to say!]
Rudra: wahi jo sach h!! Kyu bhabhi!! [Which is d truth!! Right bhabhi!!]
AniRu share a hi-5. Shivaay glares at them.
Shivaay: just..just shut up both of u. Aur Anika, tum apni pregnancy ka kuch zyada hi fayda utha rhi ho. Tumhe pata h main tumpe gussa nhi kr skta!! [And Anika, you’re taking too much advantage of your pregnancy. U know I can’t shout on u!!]
Anika: to kya usme bhi meri galti!! Aap humesha mujhe hi blame krte h, Billu ji!! [Is dat my fault too!! U always blame me, Billu ji!!]
N she starts snobbing. Shivaay’s super caring side immediately comes up n he cups Anika’s cheeks.
Shivaay: shh shh..Anika, plzz stop crying. I’m sorry. Just..just stop crying plzz.
Anika (sniffing): ok..to sau baat ki ek baat ye h ki Om us Jigar k bacche ko yoon yoon hara dega (clicks her fingers) [so bottom line is dat, Om will defeat dat Jigar like dis]
Saumya (seriously): aisa nhi h bhabhi!! [It’s not like dis bhabhi!!]
Rudra: wat do u mean Sumo!? O to waise bhi artist h aur dance ek ART h ART. (stressing on art) [O is an artist n dance is an ART.]
Saumya: aur wo Jigar usi ART mein mahir h!! Ye dekho.. [N dat Jigar is pro is dat ART!! Have a look..]
She shows her mobile phone to ShivIka n OmRu. Their eyes become wide, wid shock.
ShivIkaOmRu: Jigar Patel, d Garba king of Mumbai!!
Rishabh n Ridhima call ShivOmRu at a cafe. They immediately leave for d cafe.
Omkara: tumne humein yaha kyu bulaya h? [Y hv u called us here?]
Ridhima: wo actually tumhein papa ki shart k bare mein kuch batana tha. [Actually I had to tell u something abt Papa’s condition.]
Rudra: ab kya O ko Gujrati gana bhi gana pdega? Hey ji reeeeeee wala! [Will O hv to sing too, now? Dat hey ji reeeee song!]
Shivaay: shut up Rudra! Aur Ridhima, Om tumhare dad ki baat man rha h iska matlab ye nhi ki tumlog use baar baar pareshan kroge. [Ridhima, Om is agreeing to your dad’s conditions, but dat doesn’t mean you’ll disturb him again n again.]
Rishabh (rudely): tumhara Bhai agar meri behen k liye kuch krne se pareshan hota h, to rehne do. Aur is shaadi k sapne dekhna chhod do. [If your is so disturbed by doing something for my sister, so leave it. N stop dreaming abt dis wedding.]
Omkara: come to the point!! Kya batana tha? [Wat did u hv to tell?]
Ridhima: wo, tum jo Garba sikhne wale ho na, wo tumhe Ishana sikhaegi. [U were gonna learn Garba right, Ishana will teach u dat.]
Rudra: ab ye Ishana kaun h? [Now who’s dis Ishana?]
Rishabh: wo to shaam ko pata chalega. Aaj shaam 7 baje is address pe pahuch jana. [Dat u’ll know in d evening. Reach dis address by 7pm.]
He hands over a paper to Omkara, wid an evil grin. He leaves wid Ridhima.
Oberoi mansion
Shivaay(loudly): Rudra, jaldi kr na. Kitta taiyar hoga? [Rudra, make it fast. How much will u get ready?]
Saumya: Bade Bhaiya, ye crybaby kitta time le rha h? [Bade Bhaiya, dis crybaby is taking too long?]
Shivaay: itta time to Anika bhi nhi leti. [Even Anika doesn’t take dis long.]
Anika: Kya kaha aapne Billu ji? Matlab kya h aapka, main taiyar hone mein zyada time leti hu! [Wat dis u say Billu ji? Wat do u mean, I take much time in getting ready!]
Shivaay: no no Anika..I didn’t mean dat.. (before Anika could argue further) btw, tumne ye kapde kyu pehne h? [Btw, y r u wearing these clothes?]
Shivaay says looking at her, dressed up in Dandiya outfits (chaniya choli).
Anika: to ab kya main night suit pehen k jaungi Dandiya khelne? Faltu sawal krte h aap bhi. Huh!! [So will I go for playing Dandiya in a night suit? You’re asking stupid questions. Huhh!!]
Shivaay: tum nhi jaogi Anika. Itta crowd hoga wahan, it’s not good for u n baby. [U’re not going there. So much of crowd will be there, it’s not good for u n baby.]
Anika: plzz Billu ji, mujhe jana ka bohot man h. Ye to sirf chhatha mahina h. I promise main zyada dance nhi krungi. [Plzz Billu ji, I rilli want to go. It’s just d sixth month. I promise I won’t dance much.]
Shivaay (sternly): Anika, tum nhi jaogi. [Anika, u won’t go.]
Anika (stubbornly): Billu ji, main jaungi. [Billu ji, I will go.]
Shivaay: no Anika.
Anika: Maine kaha na main jaungi, matlab main jaungi. [I said I’ll go, dat means I’ll go.]
Anika quickly goes n sits inside d car. Shivaay just follows her, shaking his head in disbelief ? Rudra finally comes down n OmRuMya leave.
Marion Garden
ShivOmRuAniMya reach the venue n see Rishabh n Ridhima standing in front of a counter. They see d Oberois n come to them. Ridhima greets them wid a smile while Rishabh, as usual, smirks.
Rishabh: so, ready Omkara? Btw, meet him, Jigar Patel.
A guy wearing Dandiya costume comes forward n stands next to Ridhima.
Jigar: hi Mr Oberoi. Nice to meet u.
Omkara: nice to meet u too.
Jigar: it’ll be fun defeating u.
Shivaay n Rudra’s anger raises hearing dis.
Omkara: wo to waqt hi bataega. [Time will tell dat.]
Rudra: btw, wo Ishana kahan h? [Btw, where’s Ishana?]
Rishabh: there she comes.
All turn their faces towards d entrance. A jeep drives in, wid a girl sitting on it’s bonnet. She’s wearing a white chaniya choli wid Dandiya in her hands n goggles adding to her swag ✌ D jeep finally stops n Ishana gets down d bonnet. She rotates d Dandiya wid her fingers n passes by d Oberois n Shahs. A girl shouts “Ishana didi avi gyi”. Ishana goes n hugs her.
Ishana: Mona..Shu decoration che!! [Mona..wat a decoration!!]
D Oberois r still looking at her wid shocked eyes. Rudra’s mouth is left open, seeing her swag.
Saumya (closing his mouth): muh band kro crybaby. [Close your mouth crybaby.]
Anika: Kya dhinchak style tha na iska. Aur kya entry mari h. Ekdum khidkitod! [Wat a dhinchak style she has. N wat an entry. Full on khidkitod!]
D host of d show, who is Ishana’s sister Mona, plays d DJ for d night. As it’s navratri, first they do Durga Ji’s aarti n then start Garba n Dandiya. Ishana dances wid so much of energy n enthusiasm dat all r left speechless.
Rudra: Chalo na Bhaiya, hum bhi dance krte h. Bohot maza ayega. [Let’s go Bhaiya, we’ll also dance. It’ll be fun.]
Anika: Haan Haan. Aur Billu ji, humein Ishana se Om ko dance sikhane k bare mein baat bhi to krni h. Chaliye. [Yes yes. N Billu ji, we hv to talk to Ishana abt teaching Om too. Let’s go.]
They go towards Ishana. She’s dancing. Saumya goes to her n calls her aside for a while.
Saumya: sorry to disturb u Ishana di, but humein aapse kuch baat krni h. [Sorry to disturb u Ishana di, but we need to talk to u.]
Ishana: boliye. [Say.]
Anika: actually baat ye h ki.. [actually thing is dat..]
Ishana: just a minute..
She goes somewhere.
Omkara: how rude!! Bhabhi kuch bol rhi thi na, wo aise kaise ja sakti h?? [Bhabhi was saying something na, how can she leave like dat??]
Anika: it’s ok Om.
Omkara: no bhabhi, it isn’t!! Swag ki jagah thode manners sikh leti to kya ho jata. [Instead of swag, she should have learnt manners.]
Ishana comes back wid a chair n keeps it near Anika.
Ishana: aapko dekh k pata chal rha h ki aap pregnant h, to aap plzz baith jaiye. [By seeing u, I can know dat u’re pregnant. So plzz be seated.]
Anika smiled at her n sat on d chair.
Anika: actually kya aap mere devar ko Dandiya aur Garba sikha dengi? [Can u teach my devar Garba n Dandiya?]
Ishana: dekhiye, I’m sorry. Lekin main dance sikhati nhi hu. Aur bado ko to bilkul bhi nhi. [See, I’m sorry. But I don’t teach dance, especially to adults.]
Rudra: arey, O ki sirf shakl non-dancers jaisi h, warna to wo bohot accha dance krte h. Kyu Bhaiya? [Arey, O’s face is like dat of non-dancers, otherwise he’s a superb dancer. Right Bhaiya?]
Rudra nudges Shivaay n he jst nods.
Omkara: dekhiye, main aapse jhoot nhi bolna chahta. Mujhe dance bilkul bhi nhi aata. Mere dance sikhne k piche ek wajah h.. [see, I don’t want to lie to u. I don’t know how to dance. There’s a reason behind me learning dance..]
He tells her d entire Ridhima n Jigar thing n her father’s condition.
Rudra (dramatically): love ka mamla h. Do pyaar krne walo ko milana bohot bada punya hota h. [It’s matter of love. Uniting two lovers is a very good thing.]
Saumya: to kya aap Bade Baal Wale Bhaiya ki help krengi? [So will u help Bade Baal Wale Bhaiya?]
Ishana: to kal subah 10 baje ready rehna.
She turns around n leaves flicking her hair in d air. ShivIka n RuMya get very happy knowing dat she accepted.
Precap- first day of Garba n Dandiya training at Oberoi mansion.
Ok ok, I know it wasn’t upto d mark. There were less dialogues of Omkara. But d real fun will start from d next update. Till then, byee!!
21 Comments
Wo awwwwwew.
Jalso padi gayo all the time i m blushing hard Aaru what a chappy.
I’m speechless.Su dhashu entry kari Ishana ni tame bhai moj pado gayi and all gujaratis name cherry on cake.su bolo mari pase sabd nathi li.aa idea mane kem na avyo jyare i know ki Ishu’s character is gujarati..
Aflatoon idea.
Love you aRu. Hun toh prem ma padi gayo.
Thanx Bhai
First comment tame kryo..hu to comment padhi ne garden garden hovi gyi?? hu Sochi vi nathi je tamne etlo saras lagche (my Gujrati ?lol)
Thanx again Bhai
Aarti!! Glad to see you writing on ishkara…. Great start, dear…. Looking forward for upcoming chapters… Update soon and take care…
Thanx Ishana24
I hv been planning it since July..but waited for my admissions n all to get over..n of course a build up of bhai’s surprise ?
OMG……. Supeb…mind blowing…..splendid…..khidki thod…awesome….. I really luved it. Woaaaooow hamri Ishu ne kya SWAG mari. She is sooo adorable. Anika is sooo cute. Luved RuMya..ShivIka…ShivOmRu. So Riddima is da cupid…great. I m really excited. Plz post soon.
Thank Mahi
I’ve always imagined Vrushika/Ishana in dis swag avatar..so gave dat to her character..
I can’t actually call Ridhima cupid..but yeah she will be a factor of realisation!!
AWESOME CUTE FANTASTIC FUNNY???INTERSTING PERFECT SUPERB??????
Dear Aarti
ShiOmRu AniYa Scene ShivIka Talk??ShivIka Talk Anika Behaves??Ishana Entry?AniSou OmRu Talk With Ishana Rudy Drama King??It’s Fantastic Chapter??????
Keep It Up?
Take Care And Stay Safe?
Thanx UF
I rilli like your style of commenting?I’ve tried keeping d Oberoi feels intact, hope I can maintain it further too
AWESOME CUTE FANTASTIC INTERSTING PERFECT SUPERB??????
Dear Aarti
ShiOmRu Talk ShivIka Scene??Ishana Entry?Anika RuMya Talk With Ishana?It’s Fantastic Chapter??????
Keep It Up?
Take Care And Stay Safe?
SORRY SORRY FOR THE DOUBLE COMMENT.I THOUGHT FIRST COMMENT IS NOT PUBLISH THAT WHY IAM COMMENT SECOND TIME SOO SORRY?
No problem..u don’t hv to be sorry?
Aaru di it was awesome . You wrie on ishkara . loved it completely . Waiting for ur next one . Luv u di.
Thank u dear..m glad u liked it
It is awesome dear.. Superb dear
Thanx Nikita
yaar bhai its awesome cute plz update asap
Wait a minute..Bhai!!?
Main behen hu?
Anyways thanx for commenting?
Aree wahh bee see Tu itna acha likhti hai merko to pata hi nahi tha…???… Su Gujarati boli chokri moj avi gai???… And te aa garba vadu laine to char chanda mama lagavi didha yaar… hayyyy junior sso is on the way wowwww??????… Sapnu puru Kari didhu te to??????… Acha have listen Jo bijo part lakhvama thodu pan late Mara thi sahan nahi Thai aetle Jo thodu pan late karyu chene to I will not spare u… Aetle bijo part jaldiiiiii post karje… ?????
Shu vaat chhe janu..etlo moto comment..vi bhi Gujrati ma..majja avi gya..luv u yaar
Great start.. Awesome… Superb… Fantastic… Mind blowing n what not.. . Maja padi gai.. Wah su jordar entry kari chhe tame ishana ni jalso padi gayo.. ??? Navratri Celebration khub j saras vichar… Really really soory for late comment.. Ishkara… ??
Thank u Ankita..no problem of late comment, I’m glad u did..
Now I’ve one more gujju friend?