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Two States- Ishkara SS by Aaru {surprise for Fenil Bhai}

Hey ppl!! I’m Aarti n I’m going to write an SS in Ishkara, d magical couple. It’s a special surprise for my dear brother Fenil Bhai.. guys, I’m very filmy n crazy, so if my filminess gets over d top, plzz ask me to control it?? N guys, I’ll be using Gujrati characters in dis SS, so if any Gujju Bhai aur behen gets offended, plzz don’t be. I’m literally a FAAAAAAAAN of Gujratis, so I would nvr mean to insult it. So jst enjoy
So let’s get started……..but, before dat, let me inform u..in dis SS, navratri has started. It’s d first day of navratri.

Shah House
A couple in their mid-forties is sitting in d living room, along wid two boys n a girl in their twenties.
Omkara: Uncle, actually….
Ridhima (interrupting him): Pappa, main aur Omkara ek dusre se pyaar krte h, aur….[Pappa, me n Omkara luv each other n….]
Ratan (Ridhima’s dad): let him speak Ridhima!!

Omkara: Uncle, main aur Ridhima ek dusre se shaadi krna chahte h. Maine apni family se hi baat krli h, unhe ye rishta manzoor h. [Uncle, me n Ridhima want to marry each other. I’ve talked to my family too n they hv approved dis relation.]
Ratan: Humein bhi ye shaadi manzoor h..[we r also ready for dis marriage..]

Rishabh: Pappa, aap aise kaise man sakte h!! [Pappa, how can u be ready!!]
Rasika: Rishabh, tumhare Pappa baat kr rhe h na. [Rishabh, your Pappa is talking na.]
Ratan: Lekin, humari ek shart h.. [but, we hv a condition]
Omkara: Kaisi shart, Uncle? [Wat condition, Uncle?]

Ratan: Hum apni beti ki shaadi, apne dost Karan Patel k bete Jigar se krwana chahte the, lekin Ridhima h ki tumse shaadi krna chahti h. To tum bas Jigar ko Garba aur Dandiya mein hara do, hum tumhari shaadi k liye man jayenge. [We wanted to get our daughter married to my friend Karan Patel’s son Jigar. But Ridhima wants to marry u. So u just hv to defeat Jigar in Garba n Dandiya, then we’ll be ready for your marriage.]

Omkara: But Uncle, rishte Garba ya Dandiya k hisab se nhi bante. [But uncle, relations r not made according to Garba or Dandiya.]
Ratan (sternly): Agar tum humari beti k liye itna bhi nhi kr sakte, to bhul jao use. Chalo Rasika. [If u can’t do even dis much for my daughter, then forget her. Come on Rasika.]
Ratan n Rasika (Ridhima’s mom) leave. Omkara looks at Ridhima n she gives him a sad look n goes to her room. Rishabh (Ridhima’s brother) smirks n places his hand on Omkara’s shoulder.
Rishabh: ab to tum meri behen ko bhul hi jao. Tum Jigar se kabhi nhi jeet paoge. [Now, u jst forget my sister. U can nvr defeat Jigar.]
Omkara: Pyaar kabhi nhi haarta. [Love nvr loses.]

Oberoi Mansion
Shivaay: Jigar Patel, businessman Karan Patel ka beta? [Jigar Patel, businessman Karan Patel’s son?]
Omkara: Haan [Yes]
Rudra: Phir to koi problem hi nhi h O. Businessmen ko dance Kahan aata h! [Then there’s no problem O. Businessmen don’t know how to dance!]
Anika: To..ab Billu ji ko hi le lo. [So..now take Billu ji’s example.]
Shivaay: wat do u mean Anika? Tum kehna kya chahti ho! [Wat do u want to say!]
Rudra: wahi jo sach h!! Kyu bhabhi!! [Which is d truth!! Right bhabhi!!]
AniRu share a hi-5. Shivaay glares at them.

Shivaay: just..just shut up both of u. Aur Anika, tum apni pregnancy ka kuch zyada hi fayda utha rhi ho. Tumhe pata h main tumpe gussa nhi kr skta!! [And Anika, you’re taking too much advantage of your pregnancy. U know I can’t shout on u!!]
Anika: to kya usme bhi meri galti!! Aap humesha mujhe hi blame krte h, Billu ji!! [Is dat my fault too!! U always blame me, Billu ji!!]
N she starts snobbing. Shivaay’s super caring side immediately comes up n he cups Anika’s cheeks.
Shivaay: shh shh..Anika, plzz stop crying. I’m sorry. Just..just stop crying plzz.
Anika (sniffing): ok..to sau baat ki ek baat ye h ki Om us Jigar k bacche ko yoon yoon hara dega (clicks her fingers) [so bottom line is dat, Om will defeat dat Jigar like dis]

Saumya (seriously): aisa nhi h bhabhi!! [It’s not like dis bhabhi!!]
Rudra: wat do u mean Sumo!? O to waise bhi artist h aur dance ek ART h ART. (stressing on art) [O is an artist n dance is an ART.]
Saumya: aur wo Jigar usi ART mein mahir h!! Ye dekho.. [N dat Jigar is pro is dat ART!! Have a look..]

She shows her mobile phone to ShivIka n OmRu. Their eyes become wide, wid shock.
ShivIkaOmRu: Jigar Patel, d Garba king of Mumbai!!

Rishabh n Ridhima call ShivOmRu at a cafe. They immediately leave for d cafe.
Omkara: tumne humein yaha kyu bulaya h? [Y hv u called us here?]
Ridhima: wo actually tumhein papa ki shart k bare mein kuch batana tha. [Actually I had to tell u something abt Papa’s condition.]
Rudra: ab kya O ko Gujrati gana bhi gana pdega? Hey ji reeeeeee wala! [Will O hv to sing too, now? Dat hey ji reeeee song!]
Shivaay: shut up Rudra! Aur Ridhima, Om tumhare dad ki baat man rha h iska matlab ye nhi ki tumlog use baar baar pareshan kroge. [Ridhima, Om is agreeing to your dad’s conditions, but dat doesn’t mean you’ll disturb him again n again.]

Rishabh (rudely): tumhara Bhai agar meri behen k liye kuch krne se pareshan hota h, to rehne do. Aur is shaadi k sapne dekhna chhod do. [If your is so disturbed by doing something for my sister, so leave it. N stop dreaming abt dis wedding.]
Omkara: come to the point!! Kya batana tha? [Wat did u hv to tell?]
Ridhima: wo, tum jo Garba sikhne wale ho na, wo tumhe Ishana sikhaegi. [U were gonna learn Garba right, Ishana will teach u dat.]
Rudra: ab ye Ishana kaun h? [Now who’s dis Ishana?]

Rishabh: wo to shaam ko pata chalega. Aaj shaam 7 baje is address pe pahuch jana. [Dat u’ll know in d evening. Reach dis address by 7pm.]
He hands over a paper to Omkara, wid an evil grin. He leaves wid Ridhima.

Oberoi mansion
Shivaay(loudly): Rudra, jaldi kr na. Kitta taiyar hoga? [Rudra, make it fast. How much will u get ready?]
Saumya: Bade Bhaiya, ye crybaby kitta time le rha h? [Bade Bhaiya, dis crybaby is taking too long?]
Shivaay: itta time to Anika bhi nhi leti. [Even Anika doesn’t take dis long.]
Anika: Kya kaha aapne Billu ji? Matlab kya h aapka, main taiyar hone mein zyada time leti hu! [Wat dis u say Billu ji? Wat do u mean, I take much time in getting ready!]
Shivaay: no no Anika..I didn’t mean dat.. (before Anika could argue further) btw, tumne ye kapde kyu pehne h? [Btw, y r u wearing these clothes?]

Shivaay says looking at her, dressed up in Dandiya outfits (chaniya choli).
Anika: to ab kya main night suit pehen k jaungi Dandiya khelne? Faltu sawal krte h aap bhi. Huh!! [So will I go for playing Dandiya in a night suit? You’re asking stupid questions. Huhh!!]
Shivaay: tum nhi jaogi Anika. Itta crowd hoga wahan, it’s not good for u n baby. [U’re not going there. So much of crowd will be there, it’s not good for u n baby.]
Anika: plzz Billu ji, mujhe jana ka bohot man h. Ye to sirf chhatha mahina h. I promise main zyada dance nhi krungi. [Plzz Billu ji, I rilli want to go. It’s just d sixth month. I promise I won’t dance much.]

Shivaay (sternly): Anika, tum nhi jaogi. [Anika, u won’t go.]
Anika (stubbornly): Billu ji, main jaungi. [Billu ji, I will go.]
Shivaay: no Anika.
Anika: Maine kaha na main jaungi, matlab main jaungi. [I said I’ll go, dat means I’ll go.]
Anika quickly goes n sits inside d car. Shivaay just follows her, shaking his head in disbelief ? Rudra finally comes down n OmRuMya leave.

Marion Garden
ShivOmRuAniMya reach the venue n see Rishabh n Ridhima standing in front of a counter. They see d Oberois n come to them. Ridhima greets them wid a smile while Rishabh, as usual, smirks.
Rishabh: so, ready Omkara? Btw, meet him, Jigar Patel.
A guy wearing Dandiya costume comes forward n stands next to Ridhima.
Jigar: hi Mr Oberoi. Nice to meet u.
Omkara: nice to meet u too.
Jigar: it’ll be fun defeating u.

Shivaay n Rudra’s anger raises hearing dis.
Omkara: wo to waqt hi bataega. [Time will tell dat.]
Rudra: btw, wo Ishana kahan h? [Btw, where’s Ishana?]
Rishabh: there she comes.

All turn their faces towards d entrance. A jeep drives in, wid a girl sitting on it’s bonnet. She’s wearing a white chaniya choli wid Dandiya in her hands n goggles adding to her swag ✌ D jeep finally stops n Ishana gets down d bonnet. She rotates d Dandiya wid her fingers n passes by d Oberois n Shahs. A girl shouts “Ishana didi avi gyi”. Ishana goes n hugs her.
Ishana: Mona..Shu decoration che!! [Mona..wat a decoration!!]

D Oberois r still looking at her wid shocked eyes. Rudra’s mouth is left open, seeing her swag.
Saumya (closing his mouth): muh band kro crybaby. [Close your mouth crybaby.]
Anika: Kya dhinchak style tha na iska. Aur kya entry mari h. Ekdum khidkitod! [Wat a dhinchak style she has. N wat an entry. Full on khidkitod!]

D host of d show, who is Ishana’s sister Mona, plays d DJ for d night. As it’s navratri, first they do Durga Ji’s aarti n then start Garba n Dandiya. Ishana dances wid so much of energy n enthusiasm dat all r left speechless.
Rudra: Chalo na Bhaiya, hum bhi dance krte h. Bohot maza ayega. [Let’s go Bhaiya, we’ll also dance. It’ll be fun.]

Anika: Haan Haan. Aur Billu ji, humein Ishana se Om ko dance sikhane k bare mein baat bhi to krni h. Chaliye. [Yes yes. N Billu ji, we hv to talk to Ishana abt teaching Om too. Let’s go.]
They go towards Ishana. She’s dancing. Saumya goes to her n calls her aside for a while.
Saumya: sorry to disturb u Ishana di, but humein aapse kuch baat krni h. [Sorry to disturb u Ishana di, but we need to talk to u.]
Ishana: boliye. [Say.]
Anika: actually baat ye h ki.. [actually thing is dat..]
Ishana: just a minute..

She goes somewhere.
Omkara: how rude!! Bhabhi kuch bol rhi thi na, wo aise kaise ja sakti h?? [Bhabhi was saying something na, how can she leave like dat??]
Anika: it’s ok Om.
Omkara: no bhabhi, it isn’t!! Swag ki jagah thode manners sikh leti to kya ho jata. [Instead of swag, she should have learnt manners.]
Ishana comes back wid a chair n keeps it near Anika.
Ishana: aapko dekh k pata chal rha h ki aap pregnant h, to aap plzz baith jaiye. [By seeing u, I can know dat u’re pregnant. So plzz be seated.]

Anika smiled at her n sat on d chair.
Anika: actually kya aap mere devar ko Dandiya aur Garba sikha dengi? [Can u teach my devar Garba n Dandiya?]
Ishana: dekhiye, I’m sorry. Lekin main dance sikhati nhi hu. Aur bado ko to bilkul bhi nhi. [See, I’m sorry. But I don’t teach dance, especially to adults.]
Rudra: arey, O ki sirf shakl non-dancers jaisi h, warna to wo bohot accha dance krte h. Kyu Bhaiya? [Arey, O’s face is like dat of non-dancers, otherwise he’s a superb dancer. Right Bhaiya?]
Rudra nudges Shivaay n he jst nods.
Omkara: dekhiye, main aapse jhoot nhi bolna chahta. Mujhe dance bilkul bhi nhi aata. Mere dance sikhne k piche ek wajah h.. [see, I don’t want to lie to u. I don’t know how to dance. There’s a reason behind me learning dance..]

He tells her d entire Ridhima n Jigar thing n her father’s condition.
Rudra (dramatically): love ka mamla h. Do pyaar krne walo ko milana bohot bada punya hota h. [It’s matter of love. Uniting two lovers is a very good thing.]
Saumya: to kya aap Bade Baal Wale Bhaiya ki help krengi? [So will u help Bade Baal Wale Bhaiya?]
Ishana: to kal subah 10 baje ready rehna.
She turns around n leaves flicking her hair in d air. ShivIka n RuMya get very happy knowing dat she accepted.

Precap- first day of Garba n Dandiya training at Oberoi mansion.

Ok ok, I know it wasn’t upto d mark. There were less dialogues of Omkara. But d real fun will start from d next update. Till then, byee!!

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