This is the story which is from current track n I thought send to competition…………..This is first try sending in the competition hope u all like it………I ignore all outsider villains so there is no Kapoors n Randhawa family……………………N plz ignore grammatical mistakes………
Shivaay is in dilemma becoz he has to choose one lady among two……….One is his mother who gave birth to him n second his lady love who gave second birth n teach to live in the world………..He was so upset becoz THE GREAT WALL SHIVAAY SINGH OBEROI cannot find a solution of this problem……….His mom is not ready to accept Anika as DIL of Oberoi n in other hand now he cannot spend a single moment without her lady love………His is trying to get the solution using mind n heart n at last he decided to follow his heart n announced his wife Anika in front of whole world n at night he tell his feeling to his lady love……..
He tell she changed him completely he is no more old Shivaay now for him surname, blood line is not necessary but the important fact is he need her badly…..His lady love is reason of living to him, reason of smile to him n now it is not possible to spend a single moment without her, only his wish is to spend entire life with him n asked her not to leave what situation will arise………Both will deal that situation………….That night is most important night for Anika to as his husband changed his point of view n both accept husband n wife from the core of heart………
All members r happy including Tej except Pinky………..
( Becoz of Anika Tej see the real face of Swetlana, his relation with Jhaanvi get better n most important for Tej was his son Om change his point of view towards him though he did not forgive him completely)…….
Its has been a week Shivaay announced Anika as his wife n Pinky is really furious seeing all members giving more importance to Anika…………so she was trying to find out a way to throw from her house……She never miss a chance to insult Anika n her brother Sahil………Then she take a big step to get rid from her………..At evening Pinky called all members in living hall n shedding crocodile tears………
P: Now this house is no more my house…….My family, my son even my husband become stranger for me becoz of this girl pointing towards Anika………..Don’t know what black magic she has done……….The girl who have no surname, blood linage is living here like like a queen without shame………even we don’t know whose sin is she…….She is such a characterless girl………….
Hearing this Shivaay anger boil up………….S: That’s enough mom…..
P: Yeah now why would u listen to me…………
Shakti: Pinky that’s enough………Don’t behave like a kid………
P: (angrily staring to Anika) Look becoz of u my husband n my son is against me……Don’t u hav a shame……..If then immediately leave from here……….
S: Mom she’ll not go anywhere…………..U want to know who is she, who is her parents right then I’ll tell u???????
Anika try to stop but Shivaay said now it’s necessary all family have to knew the truth n sorry for breaking the promise…………
S: Mom she is not an orphan…..She belong from high family……She has a big family n she is daughter of but he cannot complete the sentences…………
P: What happen?????? Why u stop there?????If there is something so u can tell right u r just doing drama to save this middle class cheap girl………
Suddenly Shakti raise her voice It’s enough Pinky…………Anika is our daughter…..ur n my own blood……….The girl who is in front of u is none other than our daughter, elder children of Oberoi family…………..All r shocked hearing the truth………..No one can believe what they heard just now……………
Sh: Yes, Pinky she is our child………. 25 years ago when we got a deal of 1000 corer we r happy but Kapoors our rivals r angry so they tried to harm me n Tej bhai but luckily we’re saved but they found u r pregnant so they heir man to harm u n our unborn child…..They tried a lot n at last at time of delivery they get a chance…….No one family members r present in that day in hospital due to heavy rainfall…..When u gave birth to Anika I was so happy as I become a father but one nurse inform me suddenly ur condition become worse so I once see my daughter face n give her chain n bracelet which I specially made for my child n handover our child to her n rushes to see u but u were sleeping peacefully……Later I found that nurse kidnap our daughter…..When u wake up u asked our child I was going to reveal truth but doctor told me not to give stress to u as u were weak n anything can happen by this shocking news so I gave Shivaay to u….Shivaay is my friend son who gave his own life to save me n Tej bhaiya from Kapoors………..I tried a lot to find out about our daughter but I found kidnappers died in car accident n thought my daughter also………..so I hide this truth from u all………..
Then Shivaay continue………..Mom was not ready to accept Anika as my wife so I tried to find out the real parents not becoz of surname, bloodline but if someone asked about her parents she can proudly tell their name……….I tried a lot n get a clue about her……..I get to know about her orphanage…….I enquire their n found when orphanage people found Anika in the door she was newly born baby n I get her clothes, chain, bracelet which is given by dad……. while I bring all things in OM papa see this n asked me…….That day I see him happy but he didn’t tell me anything…….Later he did his n Anika DNA test but luckily doctor forwarded that report to me…….. Papa tried his best to hide it but I found the truth n same day our conversation was witness by Anika also….Two days ago we three found the truth…… I want to tell this to u all but Anika stop me by saying that mom health is not well right now n if she get this shock she will scattered so unwillingly I hide the truth……..
S: mom I’m not ur son……… 25 years which I spend luxurious life it doesn’t belong to me but ur daughter n Anika…….So don’t hate her………..She is ur own blood ……. I know it matter to u abou surname, blood line so I promise I’ll go away from u but give her same love, affection which I get from u………Saying this he leave from the hall…………….
All family members r socked hearing the truth……No one can speak a single word………They r trying to figuer out what happened just now n after some time Tej gather a courage
T: once u save ur family when I was in wrong path n now also only u can save this plz do something (while his eye was full of tear)……….No one can change his decision even me, dadi, OmRu but u can………..So do for ur father……….
Om came forward n hug Anika tightly……….I don’t know what to express………..I should be happy that I have one big sis or should get angry on Shivaay that he consider himself as outsider n break the hug………..After that our cry baby hug Anika………He said I don’t know what is happening here but I want my superman n superwomen in front of my eyes…….U r my super woman do something only u can do this n break the hug………
A:( caress his one cheek) Relation r made from heart n one piece of paper can’t break it…..n the fact no one can change is Shivaay is the eldest son of Oberoi family n I’m her wife…………..No matter what is written in that stupid report the fact never change that I’m only Anika n he is THE GREAT WALL of this family SHIVAAY SINGH OBEROI………ur stupid, idiot, egoistic, Hitler brother n my baagad billa n smile……..Her one smile was so real all family members r feeling proud to her…….
All r thinking same thing in mind…………..
People r ready to kill own blood for parnts but the girl in front of them is different………..Though she know she belong from rich family she deny to accept the truth…..For her the real life is which she spend n now also she is not daughter but daughter in law of this family………….All came out of thinking world when their eyes saw Shivaay……….Shivaay came with one small bag having some few clothes n ready to leave OM………..While he was leaving someone hug him from behind n he knew who was the person…………
A: Shivaay I know u got all information about my past……..I spend my life in orphanage so u also knew that I was adopted by Sahil parents…..Shivaay nod in yes……
A: I though after that I would know the meaning of family, the bonding, meaning of love but before I knew the meaning they also left me n again i became orphan……..I have only Sahil in the name of family…………….After few years u came in my life though our first meeting was not memorable later we became each other important part…………U once again give me a family which I thought it was impossible for me………Ur family give me love, care……….U give me two more brothers n one sis……..I can share my happiness n sadness with them……….Being with them I can irritate u, tease u, fight with u…….If u leave this house then again I became orphan n I don’t want it……….Plz don’t leave ur family…………
S: It’s ur family n u know living with me is full of pain for u………
A: Shivaay first thing u r eldest son of this family no one can change it neither u nor me………… Second if living with u is pain then I’m ready to bear it…………In that pain also I find satisfaction, happiness n more important thing is ur love, affection, care n its enough for me to spend whole life with u…………So plz don’t leave me I’ll die but Shivaay put his hand in mouth before he could complete the sentences………..
A: U accept me as ur wife in front of whole world now ur punishment is u can never leave me even u want…………U BELONG TO ME ONLY………Shivaay is happy seeing his wife immense love towards him…..
S: I promise I’ll never leave u………..
All family members r happy seeing Anika cleverness making Shivaay agree not to leave them…………All eyes now fill with happiness tears………….Rudra who hate even happiness tear try to lighten up the mood………..
R: Look this kanji aakho wala bagad billa…………..The reason he is trying to leave family is he doesn’t want to cook food anymore so we cannot taste delicious food anymore……..Other reason is he is he want to flirt with girl but living with billi its impossible so trying to go out from here u naughty boy saying he hug Shivaay……….All notice Rudra eye is full of tear except Shivaay n get that he only want to divert the topic…….Anika then asked all to go their respective room………
That night all members r thinking about Anika greatness only in their respective room where as Shivika r spending their night in each other arms…………
Next day Pinky who was in guilt ask forgiveness to Anika n she forgive her…………..Dadi called Pandit so she can do Shivika marriage again…………Pandit pick the day after two weeks………..In this two weeks Shakti n Pinky spend more of the time with Anika so that they can fulfill their parents duty towards their daughter………Tej also spend most of time with Anika as she is angel to her………Om reveal he is in love with Gauri (as Gauri is employee in his art gallery) n Rudra also reveal his feeling toward Soumya……….
Tej n Jhanvi accept both of them as their DIL……..In these two weeks again their life became as usual………Rudra n Anika who r crime partner never miss a chance to tease Shivaay, Om, Soumya n Prinku also support them…………Shivaay start to show his taadi again like before………All family members r happy………….Shivika, RiKara n Rumya married in same day n start their new journey…………….
14 Comments
Superb
Great story
superb …….
loved it!!!!!!!!
Thank God my Brother’s tadi is safe in your OS. I was worried for that ha ha..
Happy for Annika and Oberoi family. Rudra seems more worried for Soumya and delicious food.
Though Shivaay is not an Oberoi hurt me still the relation from heart is a real love so I am adjusting here(wink wink)..
Very good piece of One shot dear.
Superb episode ? different point of view, no one could have thought that she’s the eldest oberoi
superb?
Fantastic….Really enjoyed….Can’t explain through words….It’s toooooo loooovvveeellyyyy??????
It’s was an awesome super duper OS dear .I like It.
Wonderful
Nice one dear…
Amazing , Anika being eldest daughter of oberio was unexpected and totally a different thing . I loved it dear ??
Nice story line dr and after knowing the truth also Anika is still Anika and I hope something happens in real ib her real parents she be revealed and her sister too….And superb os dr….
Nice OS and a very different one too…
i agree with what Astha has written…..Shivaay not being an Oberoi pierces very deep in heart……but no qualms for that
Superb ??