28th episode! Gonna reach 30 soon…. hope to see new comments for my new dp on the 30th episode….guys plz keep comments….writers no that there r many silent readers…..but its the comment of the readers that give us strength to continue…..if u like this ff n want it to continue than plz comment…..its request yaar….if u want u comment not forcing u…..n heres the epi….
Inside sports room
Twiraj were stuck badly. Twinkle took ball n hit yuvi.
Twinkle: found only sportroom or wat? Couldnt u get stuck in canteen kitchen…..oops….
Yuvi laughed.
Yuvi: so jangli billi is hungry……so sad i have bubbly u no…
He showed twinkle bubbly chocolate.
Yuvi: want or not?
Twinkle: give it to me!
Yuvi: never.
Yuvi ran. Twinkle chased him.
Twinkle: give my bubbly then run.
Yuvi laughed n continued to run.
20 mins later
Twiraj were tired. Twinkle was huffing n puffing.
Twinkle: my bubbly…..
Yuvi: no….never….
Words were not able to come out. Finally yuvi gave in. He gave choclate to twinkle.
Twinkle: yippee!!!
Yuvi: dont get so happy…..
Twinkle saw packet. It was empty. Twinkle fumed. She pinced yuvi.
Yuvi: ouch!!!!
Twinkle: locked in sportroom, then making others run in sportroom, now no reward for running…
Yuvi: so baby wants reward…..
He kisses her cheeks suddenly. Twinkle gets shocked. She comes back tosenses n hugs yuvi n kisses his cheeks back.
Twinkle: love u!
Yuvi: love u too!
Voice: *cough*
Twiraj turn around. It was nik n chinki who opened sportroom window to save them.
Chinki: i got ur message n came running here…..but now i think i should not have come so fast….should have taken time….
Nik n chinki laugh. Twiraj blush.
Outside
Twiraj n nik n chinki were walking.
Yuvi: couldnt u message little later….we had just began to enjoy u no…..
Twinkle: so my romeo wants more romance…..
Yuvi nods his head. Twinkle laughs.
Behind bushes abhi was hiding.
Abhi: not so long…..i will separate u two forever…..hahaha…..
At taneja house
Twinkle returned. Leela was sitting there.
Leela: so how was sports day.
Twinkle: nice.
Leela: ok…..go n fresh urself….
Twinkle felt weird at her moms reply. But she ignored n went on.
At twinkle room
Twinkle freshened up n sat there. She put her head on pillow n was staring at yuvi’s pic on her phone.
Twinkle: hotness ki dukaan…..kitna pyaar karti hoon main tujhe…..my monkey man….
N she kissed the pic. Leela who was standing near door saw this.
Leela: puttar….i dont want to separate u from yuvi….but he is anita’s son…i no i am planning all this with anita…..but somewhere i do trust u……i no u cant be wrong….but what if that munda is playing with ur feelings….i love u puttar….wish u can understand ur maa…..
She went away. Twinkle still kept staring at photo n smiled by herself. (Maybe lost in her ‘dreams’)
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17 Comments
Awesome
Thanks tannu. Hope to see more of ur comments 🙂
Nice
Thanks again Tannu.
Hey bhagwaan! ‘Ab aage aage dekho hota hai kya’ type ka kuch ho rha hai. Uff can’t wait to read ahead…
Thanks laddoo…..twist aa raha hai 😉
Nice!!!!!
Thanks manny
Risa…fab dear….awesome…..
Thanks rashi. 🙂
Amazing…..loved it….too good..
Happy to see ur episode …love u
Tq sayeeda. Good that ur loving it. 🙂
nice very nice
Thanks a lot anjvi. 🙂 plz comment like this in all my coming episode. 😉
Loved it risa.;-) fab writer. Keepwritinglikethis. Love u ★★★★★★★
I was a silent reader.but now I cant stop myself from commenting ..thanks for such good ff..pls update the next part soon..
Nice