Helllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllooooooooooooooooooooooooo everyone so here your Neptune is back with the next update. Thank you so much for your response and views, I was so happy seeing so many comments on TU but on wattpad I did not get a good response never mind. So guys I am really sorry for late update but now without wasting the time further let us start with the story.
Night
Maheshwari mansion:
Sanskaar arrived the mansion late at approximately 11 pm, he was so tired as the project which was to be completed after 2 weeks was to presented on this weekend, his pa cum friend had already suggested him to drop the deal but after receiving the inspirational message of HIS ANGEL from the little angel he had gained his confidence back and was working hard the whole day to gain the deal without having his dinner, if I tell that he was hungry would be an understatement. He straightly marched towards the kitchen to find something to eat.
As he took out the food from the fridge and put it into the oven to heat the food, Annapurna arrived there.
Annapurna : sanskaar why are you so late beta? Everything is alright right? [in a concerned tone]
Sanskaar smiled seeing his mother, how lucky he was to get such a caring mother.
Sanskaar : of course maa, everything is alright its just that I was working on a important project that’s why am late.
Annapurna : accha its okay, come you sit I will serve you the food.
Sanskaar just nodded and sat on the dining table while Annapurna served him the food.
As sanskaar was eating his dinner he noticed that Annapurna was fidgeting her saree pallu and was trying to say something.
Sanskaar : [while eating his dinner] what happened maa you want to say something, if so then please tell without hesitating. After all I am your son maa I will do anything you say.
Annapurna : sach beta you will do anything I say, promise.
Sanskaar : promise maa, is this a thing to ask.
Annapurna : actually beta your ALLIANCE IS FIXED with the younger daughter of mehta’s SWARA MEHTA. [told very slowly and in a low voice.]
Hearing this sanskaar was utterly shocked, he did not believe what his mom was saying. It was not like he did not want to marry or he did not trust his parent’s choice but it was just that he needed some time it was too early for him to get married and besides what about his RUIEE then. What the hell, why was he thinking of a girl he did not even know, he just saw her and why was he thinking about her when he was going to take such an important decision of his life.
Annapurna : beta what are you thinking, do you like some one else.
Durga Prasad : [coming from back and in a authoritive voice] even if he likes some one else he has to forget that girl and get married to swara only. And that is MY FINAL DECISION.
Sanskaar stood there shocked his dad has fixed everything without even asking him for a single time, without knowing his opinion, does his opinion doesn’t even matter to him? His dad has all the rights to take decisions for him, but how can he not ask him even for a single time. Oh!! Forget about asking he did not even mind him before telling that he is fixing his marriage, without him even knowing the girl. And thed one question which is popping in his mind is WHY AND HOW THE HELL DID MY MARRIAGE GOT FIXED WHEN THEY WENT FOR LAKSH’S ALLIANCE????
Sanskaar : but dad…
Dp : [interrupts him} no but wut I don’t want to hear anything this Sunday is your engagement, there is nothing left to hear in this now go to your room.
And that’s when anger raised in him, his dad was not even allowing him to speak anything how can he do this with him..
Sanskaar was just going to speak something when annapurna interrupted him.
Ap : sanskaar please beta, atleast for my sake agree for this marriage, and and y yo you have even promised me right that you will do anything I tell you to do. [in a choking voice]
Annapurna was very sad doing this, she knew that what she was doing was wrong, she was blackmailing her own son, but she had no other option. To her husband her opinion did not matter and she did not want any clash or fights in her family so this was the only thing she could do.
Having no other option sanskaar agreed for the marriage and left for his room, leaving his dinner incomplete.
Mehta house:
Swara was standing in the balcony attached to her room teary eyed. She did not have a word to describe her feelings.
Swara’s pov:
Wow!! what a life have I got, where I know where my destination is but i am not getting a path to reach there, where all the people whom I love and know are just creating hurdles for preventing me to reach there. Don’t I even have the rights to take such an important decision of my life. For godsake this is the question of my whole life, I knew that I would never be allowed to chose my life partner but still yaar for god-sake am just 17 and going to be 18 in 15 days but still its too early, I have not even thought about any relationship and MARRIAGE, its not just a commitment but a holy ritual, how can I disrespect such a pious relationship. What about my dreams now? What about my mumma’s dreams? What bout my studies? What about my goals in life?
I never wanted to become a doctor to earn fame, to earn name or to earn money but I have seen people suffering, I have seen how sick people feel when they do not get required treatment just because they are poor, just because they are not able to afford the high fees of the doctor or those costly medicines or the high charges of the deluxe room in the hospitals who just provide you services when you have enough money.
[tears were flowing through her eyes all the time.]
Swara : mu mu mumma I I don’t want to marry [crying bitterly] I don’t even know that person and I am st still so young I I wa want to to study mumma, what about my dreams, what about those dreams that you saw for me, what about your justice mumma. And and what if th that per person is also li llike your husband, wh what if if even he beats me, mu mumma you know na I always wanted to be independent in my life. [ she is still crying bitterly]
She takes out a book which was a diary written by her mumma before she did suicide. In those books were written all her blessings for her little shona at each and every point of her life.
Maheshwari mansion.
Sanskaar was still standing in his balcony all lost in his thoughts. How can life change in a single moment? Like this was such an unexpected thing yaar, just in the morning he was so happy, he was living his life to fulfil his dreams and now he was getting married to a girl whom he didn’t even know and what about HIS RUIEE then. Oh god!! sanskaar sor god sake just stop it man, like seriously here your life is taken a such an importantturn and here you are just thinking of that girl whom you don’t even know. Thats what his mind said to him.
When he was thinking all this laksh came there.
Laksh : bro you are still awake??
Sanskaar : [sighing] as if you don’t know the reason.
Laksh : upset??
Sanskaar : don’t know yaar like I am not the one who tells that am not going marry ever, but still I was not expecting it to be this soon.
Laksh : confused??
Sanskaar : yeah, a lot.
Laksh who was seeing his brother in such a dilemma for the first time ever in his life was really sad. Like seriously guys he is THE SANSKAAR MAHESHWARI always ready to fight the world but seeing him in this situation where he himself didn’t knew what he was feeling was really sad for laksh being his elder brother. He knew his brother so full of life, always sure about his decisions and such a strong person, so he thought to change his mood.
Laksh : accha sanskaar tell me what type of a girl you want I mean what qualities should she have?
Sanskaar who was all lost in his thoughts smiled a little listening to this question.
Sanskaar : you know laksh, I never thought about the qualities I would like to see in my soulmate, like she would be my love, my heart, my betterhalf that means she would be a part of me so how can one decide how his body parts would be or how would they look like. I just know that whatever qualities she would have SHE WOULD PERFECTLY FIT INTO ME. Like soul mates are just like jigsaw puzzles and we both would be incomplete without each other, we both would be perfect but when we are together we would be perfect, we would complete each other, we will become each others need WE WILL BE THE BEST FOR EACH OTHER, THE BESTEST PAIR EVER, no one will be able to take each others place in our life and no one can suit the other better. I will love her till eternity and even more.
Laksh was smiling whole heartedly listening his brother, he knew that his brother meant each and every word he spoke.
Sanskaar : I don’t know what type of a girl I want but I surely know what type of a husband I want to beacome.
Mehta house:
Swara opened the old diary with tears in her eyes, this book will just be a book for someone but it is so special for her. These are her mother’s blessings, her mother’s wishes, her mother’s DREAMS for her.
She opened the page where her mother had written about her marriage and what all she wanted in her marriage.
Shomi:
Shona beta, now you have grown up this is the time for your marriage. You know from the first time I carried you in my arms till then I wanted you to see in the bridal attire, I know you will be the best bride ever, and you will get a prince charming for sure.
Your husband will support you in each and every step of your life.
Maheshwari mansion:
Sanskaar : I will support her in each and every step of life.
[ guys I will write shomi for the written things and sanskaar for when he is speaking I hope you people will understand and not get confused]
Shomi : he will never force any decision on you.
Sanskaar : I will never force my any decision on her.
Shomi : he will keep you as his first priority.
Sanskaar : I will keep her as my first priority.
Shomi : he will give you all the love you are deprived of.
Sanskaar : I will give her all the love I have.
Shomi : he will protect you and love you like a father and care for you like a mother as you have always craved for parents love.
Sanskaar : I will always love, protect and care for her.
Shomi : and the most important things all you DREAMS WILL BE HIS JUST LIKE YOU WILL BE HIS.
Sanskaar : and the most important thing, AS SHE WILL BE MINE, ALL HER DREAMS WILL BE MINE. I will fulfil all her dreams.
Sanskaar was saying all this with a light smile on his face.
Mehta house:
Swara finished reading all this with a smile on her face while tears were there in her eyes how much she wished to have her mom right besides her in this most important phase of her life.
Now one thing is clear to her, whatever will be her future she will accept it whole heartedly and with fight with all the problems with a smile on her face.
[Guys swasan are speaking all these things together and like they are talking to each other, I hope you understand their conversation.]
Swara : who ever you are I don’t know,
Sanskaar : where ever you are I don’t know,
Swara : how ever you are I don’t know,
Sanskaar : your likes-dislikes I don’t know,
Swasan together : but I know one thing for sure that U R MINE AND I PROMISE YOU TO LOVE YOU TILL ETERNITY.
Screen freezes on both their faces.
After a few days :
Some days have been passed with the preparations of engagement going on. And now it was finally the day of our both the couple’s engagement.
Here ragini and laksh were very happy with the new turn in their life.
Sanskaar was having neutral feelings for this marriage while he was still determined to give his whole life to his wife and love her lways.
Swara was still not happy with this marriage as she didn’t knew what her future would be and what would be the destination of her dreams.
Swara ‘s room.
Swara was pacing to and fro in the room and was tensed about something.
While all the kids were also sitting there in tension and were thinking something deeply.
Dev : offo di what are you still thinking there is no other way you can check your neet result you have to go the nearby cyber cafe and check your result because no one of us is having mobile and daadi she will not even allow you to step out of this room.
Swara : then how will I go to the cyber cafe that too without leeting any one else go, do one thing you people go and find out my result then tell me.
All the kids together: nooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo.
Swara : sssshhhh shhhh stop screaming yaar if daadi listens you all screaming na then to I am gone.
Heer : exactly swara di you have to go only to the cyber cafe we all know this is your life’s biggest exam’s result and you are the first person who deserves to see the result first not us.
Dev : ha so you only have to go.
Swara [almost in a crying tone] : but hoooooowwwwwwww.
Navya : [ clapping her hands } idea.
All : what.
Navya : chimple [simple] you tie a rope on the balcony and then get down and go to the cyber cafe and then when you will come we all will pull you up.
All were shocked for a moment then narrowed their eyes while navu who was seeing all their expressions thought that they didn’t like her idea and was going to cry any moment when all of them hugged her together appreciating for her idea.
While swara was also smiling and laughing with them.
Swara : sssssshhhhhhhh don’t make noise yaar.
And with that they tied a rope and she went down to the ground hiding from everyone and went to the cyber cafe.
After half an hour:
The maheshwari’s had arrived and were moving into the house.
Swara arrived there hiding from everyone and caught the rope that the kids threw for her.
She held that tightly while all the kids were pulling her with all their might, here at the other hand sanskaar came out for answering a call he was standing exactly below swara, while she was seeing him with wide eyes in the fear of being caught.
Suddenly the kids lost their balance and the rope went off their hands and here swara was falling down and she fell straight on sanskaar.
Sanskaar who was talking on phone suddenly felt some weight on him followed by the shreik of a girl in melodious voice and there an angel beautifully claded in a light purple patiala dress landed straight in his arms.
Background : sanskaar’s music. [ guys please play it in the background only then you will get the feel]
All that both of them could see was each other’s eyes, they were all lost in each other with a beautiful eyelock between them.
Screen freezes on them and their eyelock.
Huff so guys here I end today’s epi. I really really really hope it was not BORING and it was worth reading. I hope I did not bore you all and if I did them am really SORRY.
Now please answer some of my questions honestly.
Did you all like swasan meet ?? was it tooooooooo long? Did I describe their feelings in a proper way??
Guys if you like it then please vote and comment and don’t comment in one word tell me what you like about the epi and what not so that I can improve my writing.
If anyone is there on wattpad please follow me my id is @neptunezz.
Meet you all in the next part till then bubbye….
62 Comments
loved it
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i loved ur ff…..please update soon…..eagarly waiting for that..:-)
Thanks dear will post ASAP…
Awesome….that scen remind me jeevika n viren’s meeting in yek hazaro me….that scene was nice….n kids part was cute….loved it…want to c the reaction of san whe he gets to no that swara is his ruiee….loved it….pls update soon dont make us vait pls
Hey sweety ya that scene is somewhat similar to virika’s meeting. Glad you liked it will post ASAP….
Loved this update
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Loved it
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awesome update next part soon
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Too love but lovely
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Its was just fabulous and pllzzzzz post rge next part soon coz itna intezar karana acha nhu hota
Thanks saima will try to post…..
Amazing. Just loved it dear.I read all parts together.eagerly waiting for swasan meet .continue soon.
Thanks Mars will post ASAP….
Loved it..loved swasan meet..I’m on wattpad and I followed u..
continue soon..tc..
Thanks for following me dear and thanks for your comment too…
tooo good dear , really becoming interesting
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Nice
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oh my god neptune di you are such a fab writer i am in love with your way of writing
the episode was simply awesome
and it rocked and you nailed it!!
waiting for the next part
Take care
keep writing and smiling
love you loads
bye bye
Hey iqu glad you liked it… Thanks for your comment will try to post ASAP….
awesome nepu..!!! omggg SwaSan meet i loved it dear..!! nd i cant be active in tu like before..!! nd yeah eagerly waiting for SwaSan engagement..!! nd I ll come online only in weekends..!! nd nepu about my fs KOI MIL GAYE i have to complete it coz of my studies..!! i know i m wraping it up soon..!! but i need to..!! sry nepu..!!
It’s OK dear you can be online whenever you are free, and ha don’t end koi mil gaya keep it on hold you are an awesome writer and can frame swasan story in a really good way else it’s your wish. You don’t need to be sry dear. Will be waiting for you and ha all the best for your studies…..
nice
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You rocked????????
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Awesome dear. I loved Swasan’s meet. Ur writing style is also good dear. Eagerly waiting for next part.
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Loved it
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Superb dear. Loved swasan’s encounter. That was filmy yet beautiful. Not at all long. Infact i love lengthy chapters. ? yup you described their feelings properly.
Continue soon.
thanks dear. even i felt it was a bit filmy will surely try to improve.
nice
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Neptune “!!!!!! its above awesome yaar I really loved it to the core
Swara’s dream are really high
and you described it really well so hi5 to u
swasan meet was so good
all the very best for. next chappy
come soon
Glad you liked it dear hi5!!!!!!
superb
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hey neptune…don’t waste ur precious time on some ppl’s ffs..u know na…some ppl are seriously hilarious??so let them write whatever they wanna write..!according to them swara is characterless as she loved once laksh…n her sister who tried to kill swara is so great?and she is the one who forced swara to fall in love laksh??lol??they feel their fav. character got unjustice..so atleast like this they r happy..let them live in that..we will live in our’s …!i too feel swara character didnt get justice in one way..!that is…how easily she forgived her murderer sister?i hope u will write something which makes her so called sister a big punishment by swara?
p.s-swara is characterless as she fell in love twice n she is close to laksh acc. to them?
then wat abt ragini who accused her BHAI for fake molestation?i bet they will say,she is more than characterless as they described swara like that…pure souls???n dont comment in more than characterless girl ffs(acc. to them?)
Thank you so much for your support seebu i was really feeling quite upset reading that how they blame swara for raglak seperation when she never tried to go near laksh in fact she tried to stay away from him but no according to them it was always due to swara that ragini suffered while it was vice versa but let it be according to them ragini is a real character while swara is unreal they while that is vice versa. But let it be we can’t change anyone’s mentality right. But thank you so much for sharing my thoughts and making me feel better you are a true friend dear. Thanks for understanding dear…..
yes..but it is their favourite’s ff dear..
so we r having no right to involve..pic is also abt their fav. so y to go to their ffs..!pls don’t comment in that nag ffs…let it be…!concentrate on swasan ffs..!i think u r there in wattpad too..!read swasan ffs there also?now a days…we all r doing that n i’m not coming to tu much..as some ppl always seek attention..!we no need to give them damn..don’t comment on any ff of their favourite..better to us n them..!
sure will always remember it thanks for your advice but why are you stooping your visit to tu don’t bother much about them and please do visit tu as ore n more swasan fans are shifting to wattpad the number of swasan fans here is decreasing….