Hellllllllllllllllllllllllooooooooooooooooooooooo buddies..how are you my dear swasanians??
Hope you all are fine, fit and happy….
Thanks for all the support you are giving to me and the story…..
So moving on lets proceed with the next question….
Okay so is there anyone here who is interested in cricket?? Am a really big fan of cricket… so the question is who is your FAVOURITE CRICKETER??
Well I don’t need to tell you mine..as you all know am a crazy MSDIAN…. And I love Sachin, ashwin and yuvi too…
Do tell me yours guys I will be waiting to know yours too….
Recap : swara’s breakdown…..
After a few days :
A few days had passed since that day when swara broke down completely in front of Sanskaar.
Many things had changed since that day.
Swara’s admission forms had been filled and the merit list was soon going to be released. Her college would start at least within 10 days.
SWASAN bonding was getting more n more stronger. They were becoming inseperable.
Swara also grew a strong bonding towards ap…. She felt her warm and motherly.
In these days dp allowed swara to wear salwar kammez and anarkali though it caused a few problems in the beginning.
Sujata’s dislike grew more towards swara as according to her she was spoiling the pious environment of the house…
Ap adored swara a lot..she was a really matured and soft hearted girl but when it comes to Sanskaar she becomes childish and stubborn. The other reason for which she loved swara was that she was changing Sanskaar into a better person. Though he was responsible before too but now he was becoming matured.
The environment of the house was becoming lively where everyone can feel that they are at home and can enjoy it without any restrictions.
Dining table :
Everyone were taking breakfast talking about some random things but there were 2 people completely aloof from the family talks.
Guys any guesses….. well no need to guess they are obviously our dear SWASAN……
Swara was glaring at Sanskaar with a cute pout face and Sanskaar was just eating the breakfast completely ignoring her glare.
Later swara thinked something and smirked slightly. Swara took the apple pieces kept in her plate and was going to pass them to laksh who was sitting beside her under the table but just then Sanskaar caught her wrist still looking at his place.
He just smirked to himself. Huh!!! Does she thinks he doesn’t know his princess well…..
Sanskaar : [fake angry voice] shona, if you don’t finish this apple you will not get a single chocolate and you will have to eat 2 more apples in the evening.
Swara’s eyes widened at this and she quickly began to gulp her apple pieces. While Sanskaar just smiled to himself.
Suddenly dp cleared his throat to announce something. Everyone’s attention shifted to him to hear what he wants to say.
Dp : [clearing his throat] ahhmmahhm… [looking towards everyone] well since it has been many days of swara-sanskaar and ragini-laksh’s marriage so I was thinking to send them on a honeymoon.
Everyone had different reactions on their face. Ragini was blushing hearing this, laksh had a wide smile playing on his lips.
Sujata was more then happy hearing this, she was wanting a grandson/granddaughter ASAP…
Ap didn’t knew how to react she knew that both swasan were not ready for this and she didn’t want anyone to force them.
Sanskaar was too shocked to react anything. He still hadn’t thought anything about this topic. He just wanted to make swara fall for him, to make her love him just like he does for her, to fill the empty spaces in her life not this.
He looked towards her she was looking down, staring at her plate playing with the apple pieces she was going to eat, she didn’t want anyone to see her reaction. Their marriage was clearly a forced one on her, though things changed for better afterwards but still this was a huge step to be taken and she wasn’t ready for it.
Dp : [continuing further] well, the tour is for 20 days in venice, here are the tickets. [he passes them to laksh] your flight is at tomorrow morning 4 am so start the packing now. [saying this he was about to getup but was stopped by Sanskaar]
Sanskaar : wait papa….wo..wo..actually I want to say that [taking a deep breath closing his eyes and looking towards swara] papa as you all know this marriage was a forced one for us but the things have changed for better. But still we are not ready to take this huge step now.
And then again, swara’s college is going to open within 10 days so it’s not possible for us to go for honeymoon.
Sujatha : [making faces] huh!! Now for this chori’s studies we have to compromise with our dreams of heir..and my son has to compromise with his needs.
Sanskaar was disgusted by her talks…
Sanskaar : [angrily] chachi ji I have already told you not to think such rubbish things, it’s our mutual decision or to be more specific it’s mine decision swara has not forced me for this. So please don’t start this topic again. We will go for honeymoon whenever we are ready for it. So please stop this topic now.
Ap : [in a soft voice] Sanskaar it’s okay if you don’t want to go for honeymoon but at least go for a small holiday in this way even swara will get fresh, after her studies starts you people will not be able to take a break.
Sanskaar thought about this for a few minutes. The idea was really good. Swara had already suffered so much, in this way she will be able to take a break to and he can know about her more too.
Sanskaar : ok then, we will choose a place and go for a 1-day picnic tomorrow.
Saying this all of them leave from there to their respective jobs just sujata stood there murmuring.
Sujata : huh!! In this age they will go for picnic instead of honeymoon. Don’t know what strange things are happening in this house. Saying this she leaves from ther…
[HEY GUYS DON’T YOU THINK OUR SWASAN ARE QUITE DIFFERENT, ON THEIR FIRST NIGHT THEY DID SWIMMING COMPETITION AND NOW INSTEAD OF HONEYMOON THEY ARE GOING ON PICNIC..HUH!!! THEY ARE THE STRANGEST, MOST DIFFERENT AND THE MOST HEAVENLY PAIR EVER… HOW MANY OF YOU THINK SO???]
Evening….
Sanskaar came back home all tired only to see the sight which flew off all his tiredness away.
His shona was lying on the bed on her tummy with her legs swinging in the air and she was looking at the tom and jerry cartoon show laughing whole heartedly….
Sanskaar was staring at her with a smile. She was looking so cute like this. He came beside her silently and sat beside her. He slowly n slowly positioned his hands on both the sides of her waist and began tickling her….
Swara was just shocked feeling the tickling sensation and then started laughing loudly…
Swara : [hardly speaking] ha ha haaa..sans..sanskaa….sanskaar just stop it..he he he sto..stop na….
Sanskaar : [finally stopping and sits on the bed comfortably folding his legs] hmmm so shona, there I was doing that boring office work and here you are enjoying alone..without me that’s not fair.[he said with a cute sad pout face]
Swara : [standing up and then sitting beside him] no Sanskaar I came just now after cooking dinner and I was waiting for you only but I was getting bored na so thought to do some time pass…
Sanskaar : hmm okay..
Swara : vaise Sanskaar where do you want to go for picnic tomorrow.
Sanskaar : [removing his blazer and tie] I have not yet thought about it shona… you tell me where you want to go..we will go wherever you want to go….
Swara : [with twinkling eyes] sachi…
Sanskaar : [smiling seeing her excitement] muchi…
Swara : [getting up going towards the cupboard and taking out his night clothes] Sanskaar, go and change fast then we have to for dinner right…
Sanskaar : arre but swara at least tell me which place do you want to go to??
Swara : [pushing him in bathroom] that I will tell you tomorrow, you go now….
Sanskaar : ok ok am going….
Next day morning:
The sun rose as usual and we can see someone sleeping on the bed covered fully in the blanket.
Who might it be?? Umm it might be swara only right.
But wait no it isn’t swara, this time it’s Sanskaar who is sleeping covering him inside the blanket and swara who is trying hard to wake him up…
Swara : [shaking him] Sanskaar…. Sanskaar please wake up naa…..today we have to go for picnic…..how can you sleep till this late….
Sanskaar : [sleepily] swara it’s just 6:00 in the morning, why are you waking me up this early?? Which place will be open at this time….
Swara : [angrily] Sanskaar it will take us time to reach there, wake up please….
Sanskaar : [woke up irritatingly] that day when we had to go for shopping you were not waking up and now you woke up this early for a simple picnic huh…[his eyes were closed till now]
Swara : [sheepishly] ha..ha wo..wo shopping is sooooo boring but this place is very nice we will enjoy there… [excitedly] now come on get ready fast we have to reach there ASAP…..
Sanskaar : okay okay am going to get ready….[opened his eyes and got shocked and mesmerized seeing swara]
He was shocked that a single word was not coming out from his mouth.
Swara : [waving her hands infront of him] oh hello!!! Mr Maheshwari come on go and get ready….[still seeing no response] [shouting] oye sanskuuuu……[sanskaar’s eyes widened hearing this] why are you staring me like I am alien go n get ready naa….
Sanskaar : [staring at her from top to bottom] swara how old are you??
Swara : [irritated] Sanskaar…. You know am 18 but still you are asking me this…
Sanskaar : [sheepishly] nai wo kya hai na tum… tumhare dressing style dekh kar lagta nahi ki tum 18 saal ki ho…it seems as if you are in 4th standard…[saying so he burst out laughing]
Now if you all are wandering about the reason of his laugh then let me tell you he’s laughing because our dear cute shona is wearing a cute baby pink coloured t-shirt with a hello kitty print over it…
She’s wearing black coloured cotton jumper capri which comes a little below her knees.. a sports watch in her left hand.. cute pink coloured socks and black coloured sport shoes…
Her hair done in a cute side puff with a pink butterfly pin holding it and then she tied them in a medium heighted pony tail…
Too say that she was looking the epitome of CUTENESS AND BEAUTY WOULD BE AN UNDERSTATEMENT…
[guys am sorry but I cannot show you how cute she’s looking…you just have to imagine it..hope you like her this look….]
Swara : Sanskaar there’s no need to laugh okay..and am still a kid okay..
Sanskaar : [smiling and raising his one brow] a kid of 18??
Swara : [shrugging her shoulders] huh so what is it written in some book that you cannot wear these clothes when you are 18… now stop this nonsense talks and go to get ready I have already kept your clothes in dressing room…
Sanskaar just went from there smiling and shrugging off his shoulders… he just couldn’t take his eyes off her…. She was not like the other 18 year old girls.. she was SPECIAL… VERY SPECIAL…
She didn’t care what people would tell about her clothes or her dressing style…. She only sees and does things she’s comfortable with… with passing days he’s falling more n more harder for her…..
After a few minutes…..
Swara was sitting on the couch simply doing nothing just then she heard Sanskaar’s shout…
Sanskaar : [shouting] SWARAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA……
Swara sprang up from her seat with wide eyes and suppressing her laugh…
Sanskaar came out wearing a white t-shirt with mickey mouse printed on it and a light blue faded jeans….
Looking sooooooooooooooooo handsome, dashing yet soooooooooooooooooooooooooooo cute.. [haye kisi ki nazar na lage mere sanku ko]
Swara smile widely seeing him dressed in her choice of clothes..
Sanskaar : [pointing at swara] what is this swara?? [he said angrily weighing each word equally]
Swara : [smiling] offo Sanskaar you don’t know this much also..this is a t-shirt… [she said suppressing her laugh and weighing the last words eually]
Sanskaar : [sarcastically] oh really swara I didn’t knew that this a t-shirt..[taking a deep breath] see swara am not coming wearing this…..
Swara : [whining] but why sanskaaarrrrrrr….
Sanskaar : [hitting her head slightly] because am not a KIDDO like you….
Swara : [setting her butterfly pin properly] huh!! Tumne meri pin hiladi [you moved my away]…. Sanku what’s the problem in this clothes… [pulling her cheeks] you are looking soooooooooooooooooooooooo cute…..
Sanskaar : [fake anger… jerking her hand away from his cheeks] huh!!! Am not cute… don’t call me that okay…..
Swara : [jumping and shouting] no no nooooooo you are cute cute cute…. MY CUTE, SWEET LITTLE BOY….
[ haye how much I loved this scene in the show]
Sanskaar : [fake anger] swaraaaaa……
Swara : [interrupting Sanskaar… looking at her watch] oh god!!! We have to depart now or else we will be late… [holding his hand and dragging him] chalo sanku get ready fast we will gate otherwise…
She took him near the dressing table and made him wear his watch, sets his hair quickly…. All the while he was just looking at her smilingly….
How she was taking care of him….. his love for her was increasing each n every second.
He came out from his trance and quickly wore his shoes n socks…
They went out quickly…. Everyone had went to drop raglak and then will be going to temple from there directly…
Swasan had already informed them that they will depart from there directly….
They went from there and Sanskaar saw a white coloured acess standing there…[acess is a type of scooty but has more pick up and capacity then it]
Sanskaar was just sighing unbelievable… poor soul don’t know how many surprises or better say shocks he’s going to get today…
He knew that swara is quite different from others but didn’t knew she’s SOOOOOOO DIFFERENT…
They sat on the scooty with swara driving it and Sanskaar sitting quietly on her back…..
Bg : kuch to bata zindagi from movie bajrangi bhaijaan…
[guys please listen the song while reading it… am sure you will enjoy reading it…]
Ek Din Mohabbat Odh Kar
Ek Din Gali Ke Mod Par
Teri Hatheli Par
Likhun Mera Naam Tere Naam Par
They were going taking, laughing…with the beautiful wind touching their faces… they were enjoying a lot….
Phir Tu Taqalluf Chhod Kar
Phir Tu Jhuka Kar Ke Nazar
Rakhna Mere Kaandhe Pe Sar
Zindagi…
Kuch To Bata Zindagi
Apna Pataa Zindagi..
Kuch Toh Bataa Zindagi
Apna Pataa Zindagi..
They had light breakfast stopping at a dhaba in between… they fed each other and themselves cracking jokes and enjoying to the fullest….
Bg music stops…..
They reached the place after 1 and ½ hour of drive and Sanskaar must admit that swara was really good at driving.
They reached the place and our hero received yet another shock seeing the place where they came for their first ever DATE OR PICNIC…
Huh !!! but he smiled thinking finally swara was happy and when he’s the reason of her happiness his heart swelled with happiness.
Now you guys might be wandering what this place is then let me tell you that this place is IMAGICA…..
[ya ya you people might be thinking that imagica is in Mumbai-pune highway but for a time being think that it’s located in outskirts of Kolkata]
And to those who don’t know what’s imagica then let me tell you it’s an amusement park with many rides and a lots of fun to do]
They went inside after buying tickets.. they both were very much excited but swara was more then excited.
They sat in many rides and were enjoying a lot. Sanskaar was quite amused to see that swara was not afraid of a single ride.
Whether it was a ride which went round n round or a ride which went to a great height they say in each one.
They some many animated movies.
Played with water in tap to dance ride..
[in that ride you have to jump on various circles drawn on the ground and when you jump water comes out from.
Bg music continues….
Taaron Bhari Ek Raat Mein
Tere Khat Padhenge Saath Mein
Kora Jo Panna Reh Gaya
Ek Kaanpte Se Haath Mein
They went for a ride called deep space. It’s a roller coaster ride in a dark. We cannot see anything and the roller-coaster is really dangerous with lots of twist n turns….
Thodi Shiqaayat Karna Tu
Thodi Shiqayat Main Karun
Naraaz Bas Na Hona Tu,
Zindagi…
As they roller coaster started, both of them were jerked and sat holding each other’s hands tightly.
It was a really dangerous ride and both were continuously mumbling something.
Sanskaar : arre ye to kuch bhi nai hai…[this is nothing…]
Swara : ha ha bilkul dar nahi lag raha…[ hmm this is not scary]
Swasan : [closing their eyes and mumbling] kuch nai hoga…kuch nai hoga [nothing will happen…nothing will happen]
Kuch To Bata Zindagi
Apna Pataa Zindagi..
Kuch Toh Bataa Zindagi
Apna Pataa Zindagi..
They come out from the ride and burst out laughing remembering their antiques…
Swara : [laughing] Sanskaar you were sooooooooooo sacred he he he…
Sanskaar : [laughing] ha ha ha and what about you even you were so scared ha ha ha….
Tu Hai To Main Hoon..
Tu Hai To Main Hoon..
Tu Hai To Khuda
Tu Hai To Rab
Tu Hai Toh Falak
Tu Hai Toh Zameen X 5
Oho..
The whole day passed with them enjoying soooooooooooooo much.
Smile was never leaving their faces. They both were so much happy with each other. They needed none when they were together.
They went home after a having a light dinner at night.
Sanskaar was very tired while swara was still jumping around.
Sanskaar saw her with wide eyes and was amused seeing this little ball of energy.
They went home with Sanskaar driving this time.
It was 10:30 pm in night and everyone were in their rooms fast asleep.
Sanskaar went to fresh up first.
As he came out he saw swara sleeping on the bed without changing her dress
She was sleeping flat on her stomach. Sanskaar went near her removed her watch and freed her hair from the rubber band and pins.
He turned her straight and lay down beside her and slept taking her in her embrace with a smile never leaving from their lips…..
Precap : swara’s admission.
Huff so guys here I end this epi..really hope you liked it..
Hope it was not too long and boring… A BIG SORRY if you found it boring…..
Well TDIED is completed half and will post it till tomorrow morning.
Guys do tell me if you liked the cover pic..i made it with great hardwork…
Will meet in the next part..keep sharing your views with me till then bubye….
34 Comments
Keep rocking neptuneee and happy too see these shades of Shona .my fav cricketer is always msd(the winning captain).proud to be a mahi fan
aww thanks a lot guna dear…even am proud to be a msdian…
SUPERB..and different…cover pic is nice dear
thanks a lot sammy dear…glad you liked it…
Ammazing….dear…I love gangoli…after releasing the movie of msd I love him too…..
thanks a lot sweety dear.. well are you the same sweety who once told me to post ASAP as you were not having internet connection????
Sorry i didn’t commented on ur previous updates….But I read all updates…its awesome….
it’s okay dear you need not be sorry am glad you liked the story..
Answer for ur previous questions…I adored many couple but spcl was arshi n swasan…
he he same pinch dear..even i adored many couples but when it comes to SWASAN i become crazy..it’s the same for arshi too.. i love both of them a loooooottttttttttt…..
Loved the episode and cover pic too
thanks a lot anu dear..am glad you loved it…
Nepu di!!!!!! how r u.. i am all fine.. didu my fav cricketer is MSD.. and Yuvraj
didu the episode is wonderful and didu the cover pic is superb
loved the episode totally
waiting for the next part
take care
love you!!
hey iqu..am fine dear… he he even i love MSD and yuvi a lot..
thanks a lot for commenting dear.. am glad you liked the epi…
take care dear..
love you..
Loved it..my fav cricketer is brett Lee..
I hv a huge crush on him??
Tc..
thanks a lot kumu dear.. hmm brett lee is an awesome cricketer…love him too..
Sachu kev bov j lambu chapter hatu.
Fabulous chappy.
The way you described changes in starting was superb.
Dianing table scene, apples wala funny
Tom & Jerry is my fav so love that scene.
Clothes so cute.
Overall chappy was just awwwwweeweewwwww.
bhaiiyyyuuuuuuu…thanks a lot for commenting..am glad you liked the chappy…
he he even i love tom and jerry a lot….
Sachin is my fav ever
Awesome vala epi Neptune dear.
Loveeeeedd ittt shona is such a cutie pie. You swasan is unique and heavenly couple.
My favourite cricketer is mahi (ms dhoni) he is best captain. I m losing interest in cricket since he left his captain position. I admire Rahul David also.
Epi was too good.
Continue soon…
Take care
Love u
he he thanks a lot marsuuuu…. yup SWASAN is UNIQUE AND THE MOST HEAVENLY COUPLE….
even my favourite cricketer is mahi…. and even am losing cricket ever since he left captainship… even i admire rahul dravid….
glad you liked the epi..
love you too dear..
take care…
Hai dear how are you. The chappy was awesome dear enjoyed it a lot. I went back to my school days were we too went on tours and picnics with my friends thank u soo much for bringing back my nostalgic memories.
By the way my favorite cricketer is ganguly and dravid sorry this time we don’t match
diiiiii..am fine what about you?? thanks a lot for commenting and am glad you liked the epi…
di why are saying sorry for such a small thing…well even i admire dravid a lot…
awesome
thanks a lot dear anu
Wow….Nepu awesome chappy Yarr… And the best and unique honeymoon or trip till now and I just imagined their dress OMG our swara cuteness kii dukhan ….no words to say and ya same pinch I also likes no loves MSD and Kimble.
thanks a lot chaitu dear..am glad you liked it…
yup u r right shona is cuteness ki duaan..
he he even i love msd a lot…even kumble is awesome..
Forget to comment on cover pic nice I love mickey swasan soit contains everything I likes and ur edit is awesome
glad you liked the cover pic dear…
Awesome dear….he he he Imagica in Kolkata….
amazing
Awesome dear.. Swasan r cute ?
My fav cricketer is Sachin
Good cover pic
aww… cute and unique couple..
am loving them a lot..
but i don’t watch cricket that much..
Oh god…..it’s sooooooooooo cute chapter!! I just loved it! And Swara…….awwwwwww, she is sooooooooo cute in that dress n obviously Sanskaar is also not less than Swara. And u r right dear, SWASAN…….THEY ARE INDEED HEAVENLY COUPLE!!
Neptuuuuuu, My favourite cricketer is also MSD!!! SAME PINCH…..! I love Sachin n Ravichandran Ashwin too….