Udaan 16th July 2018 Written Episode, Written Update on TellyUpdates.com
The Episode starts with Colonel recalling Suraj. He asks Naina is he the same guy about whom she told him. Naina says yes. Suraj says I have to say something. Chakor says we have to go and stop Suraj. Vivaan stops her. Suraj says Naina, I love you. She smiles. Chakor looks on and cries. Suraj says I really love you, I didn’t get a chance to say this before. Geeta compliments them. Everyone claps. Colonel says you wanted to stay here, you can take your time, I m glad to meet Suraj. He hugs Suraj and says meet me tomorrow. He goes. Udaan hai….plays….
Naina says you surprised me. Suraj holds her hand. Chakor gets back. Mahiya…..plays….. Suraj says I told you I m different. Vivaan says wow Chakor, Suraj is a charmer. He sees Chakor gone. Chakor goes out in road and cries thinking of Suraj. She thinks for the nation and salutes. Udaan hai…..plays….. Suraj says we reached your home. Naina asks did you know my dad. He says I meet him often for work. She asks did you know he is my dad. He says no. She says this night will be memorable. He says for me too, go now, else your dad won’t leave me. She says we shall meet tomorrow. He gives her a flying kiss. She smiles and goes.
He says where is Chakor. Abhay sits in car and says Chakor went home, you did good work, you will meet Colonel tomorrow and have to get the proof. Suraj says I will do my best. Naina thinks of Suraj and smiles. She switches on lights and gets shocked seeing Colonel. He says you didn’t tell me about Suraj. She says we were just friends, I didn’t know what he thinks about me. He says he confessed love in front of everyone, what do you think, tell me, answer me. She cries and says I also love him. He gets shocked and leaves. Suraj comes to Chakor and asks are you sleeping, hug me, love me, I did a big thing today, I showed courage and proposed Naina, you are sleeping, I thought you will hug me, fine, I will celebrate my win, I m the cool Suraj now, Saanvi did you hear I can make anyone mad in my love, good night. He goes to sleep.
Chakor opens eyes. Its morning, Suraj asks for towel. Chakor hands over. She asks him not to waste time, you have to get ready, have imported things, Colonel will get impressed. He says I love you. She smiles. She sees Naina and cries. Naina says I love you too Suraj and hugs him. Chakor looks on. Her day dreaming ends. Suraj says what happened, you are lost. He calls Abhay and says Chakor is lost, she shouldn’t accompany us today. Abhay says she already told me that she won’t come. Suraj asks what. He asks Chakor why isn’t she coming. She says I have supported you till here, now you have manage this alone. He says fine, you don’t care for me, take care of Saanvi and yourself, we shall meet if I survive.
Precap:
Suraj meets Colonel. Chakor joins Abhay. Colonel asks Suraj to kill a stranger. Suraj sees Chakor.
Update Credit to: Amena
4 Comments
The best thing about the episode was the precap. The episode lacked sensitivity. I would’ve preferred if Suraj and Chakor had a talk and Suraj reassured her of his love, but instead we have this unnecessary gap. I know it won’t lead to any problem but why have it there in the first place. The anxiety about Suraj blowing his cover is more than enough, there is no need for jealousy.
-I think the scene just before Suraj leaves would’ve been better if Suraj was really worried about his safety, instead I felt he was emotionally blackmailing Chakor.
-I feel the new script writer doesn’t use Sukor bond correctly and isn’t using the plot to make it grow, same happened in the 5 day challenge.
-I thought the party scene should’ve focused about how Suraj faced the colonel to save Chakor and his worry about her safety instead of Chakor’s jealousy.
-There is no need for romantic music in Naina’s scenes, it makes the transition to mission scenes jarring.
-Whoever is responsible for the background score is acting as a novice.
The more I think of Sukor scene, the more I get disappointed.
-Why did Chakor pull away from Suraj’s hug, it felt like she thinks he’s cheating on her and lying to her.
-Why wasn’t Suraj angry that Chakor left the mission, he specifically told her he needs her with him to succeed and now she’s abandoning him at the most dangerous stage.
-What’s the need to have Sukor apart instead of supporting each other? Sukor hugging and Chakor telling him to return safely to her, making some excuse on why she isn’t coming and telling him that she’ll be with him with her heart. Suraj worrying about her safety and telling her she shouldn’t have come to the party, some bonding.
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Now it seems Chakor is suffering and Suraj is on 7th heaven, hello it’s Suraj who may die in the mission but all your focus is on the 3rd angle that everyone, even Chakor knows won’t happen.
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The worst thing about this track is how narrow minded it is, everything is about Chakor’s jealousy. Chakor didn’t react this way when Suraj was claiming to be the father of Imli’s child and staying with her in the same room. Yesterday she overreacted big time.
It’s like suraj really loving naina. Chakor’s love for nation lost her love