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Udariyaan story my way – FS Part-1

As I am so upset with ongoing track and don’t want to watch further until they realize the importance tejo ……………. Hence, I thought to share how I want the track to go …….hope u all like it.

The engagement day of jasmine and gippy

Jasmine and sweety in her room

Sweety: I told you fateh has move on in life

Jasmine: I don’t believe it …….i will wait for him till last minute ……..i did many things to prove that I still love him ………..i acted drunk to get tejo’s trust back so I can meet fateh , I got close to gippy so I can make fateh jealous……..and what not ……..i clearly saw in his eyes yesterday that he still loves me when I burned my passport.

(suddenly she hears the noise of jewelry box falling on floor and turns to see tejo standing shock at the door……….both gets shock seeing tejo)

Jasmine: tejo that ………

Sweety: I will go and see if aunty needs my help

(And she left the room)

Jasmine: tejo listen to me first

Tejo : enough jasmine ………I can’t believe you did all these …….from childhood to till now how much I did for you ……….i even married fateh

Jasmine : that’s what you did wrong …..you should not have married fateh ……u snatched him from me ……u had options either to tell me about him loosing job beforehand or you should have said no to marry him

Tejo: how many times should I tell u that I just got to know few minutes before of varmala and still I wanted to say the truth to u but papa gave me his swear …………and how much I begged u to marry him …..but u handed over chudda and asked me to marry him

Jasmine: I don’t know anything fateh was mine and will be mine

Tejo: don’t you feel ashamed of yourself u did so many things still I forgave you and you betrayed me to snatch my husband from me

Jasmine: snatch ……u snatched him from me …I just taking back what was my mine

Tejo: mami ji already warned me but still I chose to trust u ……and u…..(she goes from their crying )

( tejo cries remembering everything but stops herself after seeing everyone preparing for engagement …..she goes to her mom when she sees fateh entering the house and gets shocked as he said he won’t be able to attend ….and then suddenly remember jasmine’s words when she was talking to sweety )

Tejo: I have to talk to him

( suddenly satti comes to her and she sees fateh being restless and secretly escaping to jasmine’s room …..she tries to go behind him but satti holds her hand and takes her away somewhere)

Jasmine seeing fateh in her room

Jasmine : I knew you would come

Fateh: you won jasmine ……………yes I still love you but now it’s too late ….it’s your engagement day

Jasmine : fateh i….

He  runs away as he sees someone coming …….tejo then sees him and stops …..was  about to ask him but they suddenly hears satti shouting jasmine  and both runs to her room ……they see jasmine unconscious lying on ground and blood coming from her hand …..fateh holds jasmine and lifts her to take hospital pushing tejo (as seen in the promo ) the family members also goes behind him though they were shocked with fateh’s action but jasmine was hurt they let it go for now….in hospital doctor aids jasmine and inform family that nothing to worry she is alright ……fateh realizes his actions and search for tejo who was going after hearing that jasmine is fine …..he runs after her and stops her

Fateh : tejo….(while trying to hold her hand and she stops him from touching her )

Tejo: just answer me first fateh …..do u still love jasmine

Fateh: yes I am ..

Tejo : does that night meant nothing to you

He doesn’t answer

Tejo: I got my answer ( while whipping her tears ….fateh was about to say something but someone informs them that jasmine got conscious back and he runs leaving tejo ………….tejo cries seeing him going and leaves the hospitals …………..tejo comes back vrik mansion holding some paper in her hand which she hides after seeing mahi )

Mahi : Bhabhi you came back I thought you will stay with your family today………..i got to know about jasmine how is she now

Tejo : she is fine…I was tired so I came back ……..did everybody went to sleep

Mahi: yeah as we thought u will stay their today so everyone had dinner had slept ….i was just studying for my exams so I was up and was about to go to sleep when I heard ur noise

Tejo: u go and sleep now as it late now

Mahi: yeah but where is fateh veerji

Tejo : he ….he had some work so he said he wil come later

They both goes to their respective rooms tejo locks the door of her room keeps the paper on bed and cries standing in shower remembering everything ……..she cries for few hours like that and then changes her clothes removes chudda, mangalsutra and wirtes a note for fateh …..and leaves the mansion secretly early morning with her bags …………..later fateh comes back morning and mahi sees him

Mahi: fateh veerji you were out for whole night

Fateh: yeah I had some work ….where is tejo

Mahi : she didn’t wake up yet and I thought to let her sleep as she was looking tired

Fateh : okay

Fateh goes to his room and doesn’t see tejo but sees a note

In letter

Tejo : i don’t want to bind you in this unwanted marriage anymore so I am leaving you ……I have sign the divorce papers …..you are free to marry jasmine …..

Fateh sits down crying and seeing divorce papers, chudda and mangalsutra

Fateh : tejo why did you do this

Five  years later ( chandigarh )

Fateh on phone : yaa I have seen the place it’s good for opening our academy here …

And he collides with a lady as he was talking on the phone and was walking to his car

Lady : I am sorry …

Fateh : tejo ………..

the episode ends here i will upload next part mostly few hrs later hope u all like it .

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