Tejo: no he has some work so he will go now but I promise if you want to meet him you can call him
Jeet: no mumma I have met him for first time today other’s father stays with them but why can’t he stay with me
Tejo: jeet please …..if he could stay he would have na …..i am saying na you can meet him later
Fateh: I will stay with you
And he lifts jeet and looks at tejo making a please expression
Fateh: so what you want to eat tell me now we will go their first
Jeet: yehhh…..i want to eat burger
Tejo: no burger…….. no outside food for week did you forgot
Fateh: but why …..
Jeet : mum and I have rule that I can have outside food once in a week and according to it I had yesterday noodles so I can’t …………but mumma papa came after so long na…..so can I have burger …I promise I won’t eat outside food for two weeks …..
Fateh and jeet : please (making a cute little puppy face )
Tejo : okay fine
Then trio sit in a park and have food……. later jeet plays and tejo and fateh talk while looking at him
Tejo: since you got to know the truth you can meet jeet whenever you want
Fateh: but I want you guys back in my life
Tejo: that’s not possible …….you didn’t married jasmine out of guilt towards me which you say is love …….i don’t want to go through all over hardships again as at that time if it weren’t for jeet I don’t know how would I live till now …..and this time jeet will get involved too …..i don’t want my kid to go through all those things which I went
Fateh: tejo you are thinking wrong ………. I really do love you …….i just didn’t realize as jasmine kept coming in front of me making me confuse ……….at that time I started feeling for you but jasmine always came to me that she still loves me …….and it affected me which is why I got confuse about my feelings towards you …….whenever I was with you I used to not remember her but as she kept coming it disturb me maybe because she insulted my love for her in front of everyone ……….and my mistake was thinking those effect as love ………..that’s why when you asked me that I still love jasmine at the hospital I said yes but that didn’t mean I wanted to end my marriage with you ……..i just meant that I stil love her but I know she doesn’t and I really wanted to try hard to move on ………… I got clear idea of my feelings when you left me ………but why did you left without meeting once and you didn’t even come back after having jeet ………I know I did lots of bad things but I had the right to know about him
Tejo: when I asked you about that night ……you had regret in your eyes so how could you expect me to say that I am pregnant with your child ………..most importantly I never wanted you to take me or our relationship as burden nor ever said that our child was a mis…..
Fateh after hearing keeps his hand on her mouth
Fateh: don’t ….i could never think that …………nor I regretted that moment ….i had that expression because that morning I saw the pendent of jasmine which I gave to her and those thoughts made me think I had that moment with you when I didn’t realize my love for you nor was with you whole heartedly which was so wrong with you …………I just had that guilt
They have an eye lock which later gets disturb by jeet
Jeet: mumma will papa stay with us tonight
Tejo and fateh both look at each other
Fateh: yes tonight I will stay with you …
Jeet: yehhhh
The trio reach the house
Jeet: come papa I’ll show you my toys
Tejo : jeet first …
Jeet: first hand wash and change the clothes then show the toys to papa …..i know you mumma
Tejo : oh really ….go
He goes to change clothes
Tejo: fateh you also get freshen up and change ……..oh what will you wear …..
Fateh: clothes I have in my car ……since I had some work here ….i will go and bring from car
Later they had dinner
Jeet: papa you will sleep with me and mumma in our room today
Fateh: ofc……
Tejo: no he will sleep in sofa here
Fateh and jeet: why ….
Tejo: he snores
Fateh: lie I never
Tejo: he also moves a lot in bed if he kick you then …
Fateh: lie I never kicked you at least
Jeet: mumma please ….
Tejo: you go and brush your teeth first
He goes to brush his teeth
Tejo: fateh why are you insisting
Fateh: why means …..it’s my child and my wife ….why can’t I sleep with you
Tejo: I am not your wife I gave you divorce
Fateh: oh really then why do you still put sindoor in your forehead plus you didn’t give me divorce just gave me divorce paper which I didn’t sign and by the way since when did you thought jut signing papers means the couple are divorced it has some procedure okay
Tejo : oh so u didn’t marry jasmine because of it
Fateh: tejo please don’t misinterpret and misunderstand me …..i really love you that’s why I didn’t sign …… but I hoped atleast to give me divorce you would turn up in front of me but you never came back
Tejo : when I left I didn’t want to go to my house so I went to gurudwara where I saw some ladies going to chandigarh gurudwara as they were having some pandal and needed help …….. I thought since last time I went to gurudwara so anyone can find me and I wanted some time alone ………where after few days I found I’m pregnant …..then I didn’t want to return for forever ………but my heart didn’t gave permission to not put sindoor as we are still married so …….
Fateh: I am so….
Jeet : mumma I done with my brush so please can u let papa sleep with me …….
Tejo: alright …..i will join you guys after I am done with my work okay
Jeet :okay
He then takes fateh with him to the room …..later tejo enters the room finding both fateh and jeet sleeping in same posture she laughs with teary eyes and covers them with blanket and takes a pic of them sleeping ….she then goes to sleep when fateh unknowingly puts his hand on her hand .
31 Comments
This way of story is good if this continues we will continue to watch udariyaan or eles its over.
Who ever is written this FS PARTS WILL THE STIRY CONTINUE THOS WAY OR IT WAS YOUR IMAGINATION
This is all my imagination
I like this please continue this story… otherwise we will stop watching udaariyaan… please continue I want to c fateh and tejo together…
It’s my imagination please don’t get confuse and it will be short as I don’t have much time in my daily routine …..I chose to write as I couldn’t bear the pain seeing the promo and wanted to give peace of mind to all fatejo fans as well as Tejo fans
I am enjoying your story line very much 😄😄😄. Thank you for giving hope to all the Fatejo fans.🙏🙏🙏
thank you
Deffo the bit of positivity we FaTejo fans needed. I know that people are keen for the actual story to have Tejo getting pregnant but I would really like Fateh to accept / realise his love for Tejo, no strings attached. I want FaTejo to give us couple goals.
thank you
Me too. I don’t want her to get pregnant so soon either.
Next?
i have submitted should get upload soon …………sorry for late update
Good story
thank you
I am feeling bad for tejo …. hoping that ahead fateh and tejo be together always,,,,and jaismeen just get lost from their life….
hope my story gives you satisfaction
Plz post next episode i liked very much plz plz plz …..
thank you and i have submitted next part it will be uploaded soon sorry for late update
Iam feeling bad for tejo. Tejo will get heartbroken by jasfa. I really wanted to fateh to realize the difference between Tejo and Jasmin and also his love for tejo.Fateh will surely regret hurting tejo’s heart. I really enjoyed ur story line. Pls post next episode.
thank you
Actually I enjoyed this story more than the original one, they can get the storyline form this also, If the story goes this then I will be more excited to watch the Udariyan
me tooo
Its so amazing.. Please don’t stop writing and also your ishq par zor nahi fs are amazing…
Kaash tv par ye track ata.. 🥰
thank you and by the way i didn’t write any fs of ishq par zor nhi ……..you may be got confuse or their is someone else with the same id
Hi
hey
Awesome,It’s incredible,
Excellent thinking ,the story should go as same ,but it should also show Fateh’s struggle in finding and searching tejo then it will be Chartbursting…
thank you
Loved it. Tejo is marvelous.
Thank you
Omg I love your version!!! Please keep writing 😭❤❤
Thank you