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Episode starts
Taneja mension
Twinkle’s room
Chinki: twinkle u have to tell d truth to kunj jiju…. before it’s too late…
twinkle: chinki…. i m confused….. should i tell d truth to kunj or not..
Chinki: why…. u r waiting for smthng evil… to tell d truth to him..
Twinkle: noooo….. i mean…. chinki.. i m afraid…. if i tell d truth nd kunj will do smthng….. we knw uv vry well….
Chinki: u have to trust kunj….
Twinkle: i.. i trust him… but…. butt der is another reason also….
Chinki: wht is dat reason….
Twinkle: reason is dat i want him to tell his feelings for me….
Chinki: feelings… but how… he will tell only whn he want….
Twinkle: nooo…. see chinki abhi tk uv ne mujhe use kiya tha it’s my tym now…. now i will use him…. to knw kunj’s feelings for me….
Chinki: but how…. how will u use him
Twinkle: how how how…. chinki…. did u see kunj’s face…. even when uv’s name came…. he became red in anger…. as if he is gonna kill him….
Chinki: jealousy…. not a bad idea… feelings always came out through jealousy….
Downstairs
Usha nd kunj comes Leela greets them
Usha: leelaji koi khaas baat… hme yha bulaya…. dekhiye aap shadi ki tayario ki fikr mt kijiye… hm milkr sb handle kr lege…. (leelaji is anything important u called us here…. look u don’t worry abt marriage preparations… we together handle all diz)
Leela: ji… aapne kh diya bs bohut h… me to ye khna chahti thi ki shadi ka destination hm jaipur kr de to…. (ushaji… u said… it’s enough for me… i called u here to say dat… if we change d marriage destination to jaipur.. dn)
Kunj: jaipur… ??
Leela: ha puttar…. mujhe abhi yaad aaya twinkle ne bohut baar mujhse kha h…. uski shadi destination koi bda sa palace hona chahiye…. to mujhe lga jaipur…. (yes dear… i remember now twinkle said many tyms to me… she want her marriage destination a vry big palace so i thought… jaipur)
Kunj: maaa…. aapki ldki Mindblowing h…. kya idea h…. jaipur…. ab to shadi jaipur me hi hogi…. (looking at usha)(mom… ur girl is Mindblowing… wht an idea… now diz marriage will happen in jaipur only)
Usha: idea to acha h…. hme bhi koi prblm nhi h…. (idea is good…. we have no problm)
Leela: ji… me soch rhi thi saari rsme bhi vhi ho to…. (ji.. i was thinking dat all d rituals also done der only)
Usha: rsme shuru hone me to bs kuch hi din h…. itni jldi…. (only few days r left in starting rituals… it’s soon)
kunj interrupts
Kunj: don’t worry…. 2-3 days baad bhi hm jaipur jaayege to aaram se sb ho jayega…. bs destination hi change hui h…. guests ko call krke inform kr dege…
(Thinks- jaipur… chlo acha h us yuvraaj se bhi picha chutega)
Leela: ok phr jaipur ki tayariyaa shuru krte h…. (ok dn let’s start d preparations to jaipur)
Usha: ji….
At evening
Twinkle calls her frnds (in conference tanya, soniya) chinki is with her….
Twinkle: hlo guyies….
T,S: hleww…. twinkiii….
Chinki (to twinkle): give me d phone….
Twinkle gives…. she adds someone (ishika… another friend)… twinkle sees nd makes faces…. chinki gives her d phn again….
Twinkle: ok… guyies… listen… i didn’t get a chance to invite u all yesterday in my engagement…. so i was thinking…. aaj ki party meri trf se….
Tanya: ys treat to bnti….
Twinkle: Yupz baby….
Chinki: okay…. so now d place is Olive pub…. we will see u dr… after 1 hr…
All grls: done…. n cuts d call….
Twinkle: chinki…. kh to dia but…. maa ka kya… pta h na tujhe…. last tym jb me pub gyi thi or tum logo ne mujhe pila di thi.. (chinki… i said but wht abt mom.. u knw naa… last tym when i go to d pub… u all make drunk)
Chinki: haa or tu out of control ho gyi thi…. yaad h mujhe…. kya dance kia tha tune….. bohut cute lg rhi thi…. (yupzz nd u was out of control… i remember… wht a dance u have done…. u was looking very cute)
Twinkle: shut up…. maa nhi jane degi mujhe… us incident ki vjh se…
(Shut up… mom nvr permit me to go… bcoz of dat incident)
Chinki: but tune phle bhi drink ki h…. haa us tym thodi si strong thi… prrrrr…..(but u drink many tyms… ys dat was a lil strong…. buttt) (twinkle interrupts)
Twinkle: thodi siiiii….. (a lil)
Chinki: ok okay…. twinkle…. chill… chl baat krte h aunty se… (let’s go.. nd talk to aunty)
Twinkle nd chinki goes in Leela’s room nd sees she is reading a magzine sitting in her bed…. both r standing in d entrance…. twinkle gives chinki… leave it vala look… chinki holds her hand nd both takes one step forward…. twinkle again gives look to chinki…. but chinki pushes her lil in room…. twinkle turns immediately nd again stands at d door…. Leela looks up nd both smiles idioticly….
Twinkle(with too much sweetness): maaaaaaa…..
Leela: kuch chahiye kya…. (u want anything)
Chinki: aunty vo…. olive…. hm jaaye….
Leela: nooo….
Twinkle(drama starts): maa… kuch din baad to meri shadi ho jayegi…. yhi to din h hsne khelne k…. enjoy krne k…. party krne k…. aap ki eklauti ldki hu me…. itna zulm mt kro naa…. jane do na plz…. plzzzz
(Mom… after smdays i became married…. diz is d days for laughing..playing.. for enjoying… for doing parties… im ur only child naa… don’t do diz with me… plz permit me to go…. plzzzz)
Leela: chl ab bnd kr apna drama…. chli jaa..(ok now stop ur drama..go)
Twinkle smiles brightly….
At Olive
Twinkle nd chinki busy in talking waiting 4 all d grls… (twinkle is wearing a black off shoulder one piece with open curled hairs nd classy makeup nd looking stunning)
Tanya nd soniya comes…. nd hugs twinkle nd chinki….
Chinki: where is ishika…. she is coming or not ??
Twinkle: it’s ok na chinki…. if she doesn’t want to come…
Chinki: i knw u don’t lyk her but we r a grup….
Tanya: chinki is right…
Soniya: i agree…
Twinkle: oookayyy…. oookkayyy….. i invite her na…. but look… she didn’t came now…. leave her… come lets enjoy d party….
Just dn sm1 comes frm her behind nd back hugs her….
Voice: hieee….. twinki….
Twinkle makes weird face nd tries to remove her hand….
Twinkle: leave me ishika….
She leaves her…. nd twinkle smiles to her….
Intro Ishika: a beautiful hot girl nd a big flirter…. fall in love no no true love every week wd new person…. (her character is like sana in student of d year sry i didn’t remember what’s her name in d movie)
Soniya(to chinki nd tanya): why always twinkle do lyk diz wd her…. makes faces n all….
Chinki: it’s nothing …. she doesn’t lyk her dats it… bcoz for twinkle love means a lotttt…. but ishika…. she falls in love many tym…. according to twinkle she is making fun of love…. bcoz every tym ishika says diz tym my love is true i will die without him nd i can do anything for him nd all nd all… bs twinkle doesn’t lyk all diz bcoz for her if u r committed dn u have to be loyal wd ur partner….
All goes in…
They r enjoying nd dancing…. dn twinkle goes to counter… she sits on chair….
Twinkle: give me a soft drink
Ishika comes nd sits beside her….
Boy: ur drink…
Twinkle takes it…. n says “diz is not soft drink…. i told u to give me soft drink…. u want me to became talli (drunken) haa…. go nd give me soft drink ”
Ishika laughs silently…. chinki comes from hearing d noise of twinkle….
Chinki: y r u shouting….
Twinkle: see diz stupid waiter…. (Interrupted by ishika)
Ishika: chinki lets do compition…. more n more shots… what say….
Twinkle(feels ignored):y only chinki
Ishika: um.. v.. n..now only u shouted at waiter na to give u drink… instead of soft drink….
Boy: ur soft drink…
Twinkle(again shouting): can’t u see i am a big girl…. i don’t want soft drink…. go nd give me drink….
Boy goes nd comes wd drink….
Compition starts btwn ishika nd twinkle…. ishika 3 twinkle 5….
Chinki: twinkle 5 k baad hmesha tujhe chadh jaati h… now leave it..
Twinkle: don’t worry… i control myself….
Chinki: i m calling aunty…. (n she calls) “hlo aunty twinkle naa”
Twinkle takes d cell…
Twinkle: maa… chinki’s parents are coming today nd told her to stay at her home today.. so i m living wd her at night…. i will come at morning….
Leela: okay…. but leave from der (pub) now….
Twinkle: yes… ofcourse.. n she cuts d call….
Chinki gives death glare…. while twinkle winks at her….
To be continue….
##episode ends##
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14 Comments
Amazing especially Twinkle’s behaviour in the pub was so funny.
Really amazing
I pity that boy,and yes nice episode
Superbbbbbbb n twinkle….????
Sho cute behavior…
Do cont asap plzzzzzzzzz. …
Amazing awesome….funny twinkle scenes…..eagerly waiting for next part….
Amazing epi twinkle rocked and the bechaara waiter shocked
Eagerly waiting for d next one
Superb shona….episode was too cute….loved it….
Oooossssmmm episode…loved it
Amazing episode Twinkle’s behaviour in the pub was so funny and while she was requesting Leela it was too sweet Waiting for the next episode
Good episode Shona..
Pub scene was sooo good nd cute …loved it ….amazing …
Thank u Shona Mona for giving regular updates …as I love to read ur ff again nd again….
Love u ….nd haan next bhi jaldi post kriyo wrna…..wrna Shona Mona se Mona hath jaega ..lolzzzz
Shona it was tooo gud
Aise hi sona likhti reh
Awesome epi..
osm shonaa wow